Fantasy Manhoos - Part 2 (completed)

[Lovingheart]

Intro


To Dosto m a new writer on xf xp ka purana writer hu xp gayi baat gayi
Yeh sirf meri ek koshish hai to plz sath dena aasha karta hu apko pasand ayegi yeh story
Ismein thoda sa powers ka use hoga thoda sa romance aur incest bhi ho sakta hai
to plz kisi ki agar incest vajha se bhavnao ko thes pohanchti ho plz ignore kar dena story ko
Iss kahani ke sare patar kalpnik hai agar kisi se mel khate hai to kripya panic mat hona woh sab ek itefak hai

Main Pehle kisi vajha se is story ko pura nahi kar paya pura karne ki Koshish karunga

Iss kahani mein sex bagera ko shayad hi mahatab diya jaye to yeh baat bhi note kar lena
Ek aur baat story shayad kisi aur story se thoda bohat matching ho sakti hai to plz isse pehle padhna fir us bare mein baat karna
Note:- updates ka locha rahega week mein 3 updates shayad daily bhi ho jaye so plz be co-orporative
Ur Heartless urf Loving Heart
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Update 10

Kahani Kishan ki jabani



"Some hours later......"

Ham sabhi is waqt khade the Mahi ke gaon mein abi tak koi bhi car se nahi utra tha mere sath Esha Pihu Ritu aur Mahi the

Mahi is waqt behosh thi use nahi malum tha ki iss waqt hum uske gao mein hai vahi Arun aur Nitin dusri car mein the

Fir maine car gaon ke ander ki taraf leli kuch der baad ham log ek chote se ghar ke sahmne ruke yeh ghar tha Mahi ke mata pita ka hum log Mahi ke ghar ke age ruke turant Mahi ko hosh aa gya jab usne ankhen malte hue hue bahar dekha to use shock laga

Kyu ki iss waqt woh apne gaon mein thi aur usne expect bhi nahi kiya tha khair ab to gya jo hona tha gaadi ki awaz sun ke Mahi ke mata pita bahar aa gaye

Apne Mata pita ko dekh ke Mahi khush ho gayi aur turant car se nikal kar bhaag gayi aur apni maa kr gale lag gayi uski maa bhi usse lipat gayi un teeno ki ankhen nam the meri esha aur meri dono di ki bhi akhen pani barsane lagi un ka milan dekh ke

Mm(mahi's mom) - kesi hai meri beti bohat din baad dekha tujhe

Mf (mahi's father) - han beti kyu ayi tu vapis yahan tujhe malum hai na kitni mushkil se 3 saal pehle tumhe yahan se nikala tha uss se bacha ke

Mahi - maa babu ji mujhe bhi nahi pata ki main yahan kese ayi main to so rahi thi apne kamre mein jab aankh khuli to aap dono ko apne sahmne paya

Mm aur mf ek sath bole - kya?

Fir Mahi ne piche mud ke dekha to vahan hame paya aur use samajh aya ki woh yahan kese ayi

Mm - beti yeh log kon hai

Mahi - maa yeh mere college ke friends hai yahi log mujhe utha ke laye hai

Mf - (hum sab se) beta tum log jaldi se vapis chale jao aur isse bhi apne sath le jao verna woh thakur tumhari jaan le lega

Pihu - uncle aap hamari chinta chodh dijiye hame kuch nahi hoga aur vese bhi ham aap sab ki madat ke liye aye hai

Mm - lekin beta

Ritu - lekin vekin kuch nahi aunty aap aram se ander jayiye aur nashte ko garam kariye badi joro ki bhukh lagi hai

Ritu ne unhe ek bag pakdate hue bola

Main - aap sab log ander chaliye main Nitin aur Arun abi aa rahe hai

Mf - lekin beta tum log kaha ja rahe ho yeh yagha surakshit nahi hai

Main - uncle ji aap chinta mat kariye hume kuch nahi hoga aap log ab ander jayiye

Main apni gaddi mein baith gaya aur sath mein Arun aur Nitin bhi aa gaye maine car age badha di thodi door jane ke baad main Arun se bola

Main - are Arun aaj tera sapna pura hoga

Arun aur Nitin shock hue meri baat sun ke

Arun - kesa sapna?:shock:

Main - jaldi hi pata chalega tujhe aur han Nitin tujh se aaj kuch cheen liya jayega so be ready

Arun se jyada ab Nitin shocked tha kyu ki maine kaha hi itne serious way mein tha

Nitin - kya cheen liya jayega

Main - Esha

Ab Nitin ki halat bigad chuki thi Esha ka naam vich mein ane se

Nitin - lekin kyu meri galti kya hai

Uski baat maine Arun aur Nitin ki taraf gusse se dekha

Main - kuch hi dair mein bata dunga tum dono ko ki tumhari galti kya hai ab chup chaap baitho yahan pe ham log manzil pe pohanchne wale hai

Meri baat sun ke dono ki halat patli thi kyu ki dono ko mere gusse ke bare mein pata tha

Khair maine car ki spees badha di aur car ko command di kyu ki yeh meri khud se tyar ki gayi car thi

Main - (car se) sweety haweli ka gate break kar do

Aur issi ke sath car ki side se do chote chote bomb nikle aur speed se jakar gate pe laga aur gate blast

Pehle to jo log haweli mein the woh shock hue par phir sabhi pehre daro ne apni apni position le li

(TP - abe ruk thoda yahan inko yeh to bata ki kon c haweli kiski haweli bina bataye hi haweli ko khandhar bana dega kya

Kishan - are sorry bhai bhul gya abi bata deta hu

TP - bhopni ke tera sale har bar ka yahi hai scene ki gand mar leta hai pehle first fight scene ki gand mari ab iss fight scnene ki gand mar raha hai chutiya ab sahi se bata

Kishan - bata raha hu bhadak kaye ko raha hai tu ja abi yahan se)

Han to aap logo ko main bata du ki yeh haweli hai thakur Bhanupartap ki jo ki ek ghatiya kisam ka thakur hai iska ek pota hai Rakesh jo ki iss se bhi ghatiya hai ek number ka hawasi gaon ki na jane kitni aurto aur ladkio ki bebasi ka fyada utha chuka hai jani ki unki izzat ke sath khilwaad kar chuka hai

Ab ata hu iss point pe ki iska Mahi se kya len den hai to Rakesh ki gandi nazar Mahi pe thi iska pata Mahi ke maa baap ko chal gya aur unho ne Mahi ko bahar bhej diya uske mama ke pass jo ki MLA hai woh bhi Mahi ki help nahi kar paye the kyu ki Thakur ki pohanch kafi upar tak thi issi par unho ne Mahi ko anch tak na ane di

Mahi ne apne maa baap ko bachane ke liye mera shara lena chaha issi liye Mahi ne mere sath jhoothe pyar ka natak karna chaha tha jab use meri power ka pata chala tha ki mere pass Thakur se bhi jyada paisa hai aur bade bade neta mujh se darte hai bas fir kya tha bana liya plan

Aur Yahan Rakesh aur Arun se juda hua ek truth aur hai jo ki thode time baad khulega

Yeh sab mujhe Mahi ke bare mein pata karne ke baad pata chala

## Ab ate hai kahani pe

Maine car ko bola

Main - sweet abi sab goli chalane walo ki bandook pe nishana lagao

Car ne vesa hi kiya kuch hi seconds mein sabhi ki guns niche padi thi itne mein Thakur aur Rakesh haweli ke andruni gate pe aa gaye unke sath Thakur ka ek paltu kutta Tha jiska name the kallan

Itne mein ham log haweli ke ander jake ruke aur main car se bahar nikla Thakur ke gundo ne mere pe dhava bol diya

Jo sab se pehle aa raha tha maine uske gale pe war kiya jis se uske gale ki haddi tut gayi aur woh niche gir pada

Use dekh sabhi vahi ke vahi ruk gaye

Rakesh - kon hai be tu aur teri himmat kesi hui yeh sab karne ki

Main - meri himmat to iss se bhi jyada tabahi karne ki hai kahe to haweli uda du teri par main esa karunga nahi yeh kisi ki amanat hai aur ek baat tera sach bhi bahar ayega aaj

Rakesh - konsa such aur kiski amanat sale tu hai kon

Main - mera nama pata janne tak tu jinda na rahega to behtar hai ki tu puch hi mat

Rakesh - salo khade khade mera muh kya tak rahe ho mare sale ko badi badi fhenk raha hai

Uski baat sun ke jo gunde ruk gaye the savhi fir se meri taraf badhe maine fir se sab se age ane wale ko ek flying kick di jis se woh piche gira aur sath mein 3 4 logo ko lekar gira

Main - (Arun Nitin se) salo mahurat nikalwau kya niklo bahar aur lado

Iski baad woh dono ne bhi car se nikal kar ek ek ko pakad liya aur dhone lage bakki ko main sambhalne laga woh log lagbhag ginti mein 20 the aur ham teen 2 ko Nitin aur Arun ne pakad liya 18 se ab main akela nipatne wala tha maine jaldi se sab ke chehre padhe unmein se sirf 5 pariwar wale the

Bakki ke 13 ek no ke gunde the fir main apni car ko point out marke goli chalne ko bola ab sirf woh 5 aur Thakur aur Rakesh aur kallan bache the

Fir maine un pancho se bola

Main - tum pancho jao aab yahan se pariwar wale aur jake apna pariwar palo niklo yahan se

Mera itna kehna tha woh sabhi bhag gaye maine car ki diggi se rassi nikali aur Arun aur Nitin se bola

Main - tum dono car mein baitho

Mere itna kehte hi woh car mein baith gaye fir main bhi car mein ghus gya aur gadi ki chat open kiya aur khada ho gya fir rassi ka fanda banaya aur Rakesh ki taraf fhenk diya

Aur thoda magic use kiya taki agar Rakesh thoda bohat idhar udhar ho to fir bhi fanda jake usi ke gale mein pade aur hua bhi vese hi

Main - let's go sweety

Aur iski sath ham log haweli se nikal liye aur Rakesh ko ghaseete hue lajane lage woh fande se niklne ki koshish bhi kar raha tha aur chilla bhi raha tha

Udhar Thakur aur kallan bhi jeep mein piche piche aa rahe the main Rakesh ko Mahi ke ghar ke age lekar aa gya aur uske ghar ke bilkul sahmne ek bargad ka paid tha use uspe latka diya uske gale ki haddi tutti aur ho gya uska ram name satya

Uski mundi ese na tutne wali thi bhaiya woh to apun ne magicwa se todi thi sala magic use karne mein maza awat hai

Main - (kutil muskan liye hue bola) kyu re pagle maine bola tha na ki mera naam pata batane se pehle tu mar jayega

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[John Cena]

Update 10

Kahani Kishan ki jabani



"Some hours later......"

Ham sabhi is waqt khade the Mahi ke gaon mein abi tak koi bhi car se nahi utra tha mere sath Esha Pihu Ritu aur Mahi the

Mahi is waqt behosh thi use nahi malum tha ki iss waqt hum uske gao mein hai vahi Arun aur Nitin dusri car mein the

Fir maine car gaon ke ander ki taraf leli kuch der baad ham log ek chote se ghar ke sahmne ruke yeh ghar tha Mahi ke mata pita ka hum log Mahi ke ghar ke age ruke turant Mahi ko hosh aa gya jab usne ankhen malte hue hue bahar dekha to use shock laga

Kyu ki iss waqt woh apne gaon mein thi aur usne expect bhi nahi kiya tha khair ab to gya jo hona tha gaadi ki awaz sun ke Mahi ke mata pita bahar aa gaye

Apne Mata pita ko dekh ke Mahi khush ho gayi aur turant car se nikal kar bhaag gayi aur apni maa kr gale lag gayi uski maa bhi usse lipat gayi un teeno ki ankhen nam the meri esha aur meri dono di ki bhi akhen pani barsane lagi un ka milan dekh ke

Mm(mahi's mom) - kesi hai meri beti bohat din baad dekha tujhe

Mf (mahi's father) - han beti kyu ayi tu vapis yahan tujhe malum hai na kitni mushkil se 3 saal pehle tumhe yahan se nikala tha uss se bacha ke

Mahi - maa babu ji mujhe bhi nahi pata ki main yahan kese ayi main to so rahi thi apne kamre mein jab aankh khuli to aap dono ko apne sahmne paya

Mm aur mf ek sath bole - kya?

Fir Mahi ne piche mud ke dekha to vahan hame paya aur use samajh aya ki woh yahan kese ayi

Mm - beti yeh log kon hai

Mahi - maa yeh mere college ke friends hai yahi log mujhe utha ke laye hai

Mf - (hum sab se) beta tum log jaldi se vapis chale jao aur isse bhi apne sath le jao verna woh thakur tumhari jaan le lega

Pihu - uncle aap hamari chinta chodh dijiye hame kuch nahi hoga aur vese bhi ham aap sab ki madat ke liye aye hai

Mm - lekin beta

Ritu - lekin vekin kuch nahi aunty aap aram se ander jayiye aur nashte ko garam kariye badi joro ki bhukh lagi hai

Ritu ne unhe ek bag pakdate hue bola

Main - aap sab log ander chaliye main Nitin aur Arun abi aa rahe hai

Mf - lekin beta tum log kaha ja rahe ho yeh yagha surakshit nahi hai

Main - uncle ji aap chinta mat kariye hume kuch nahi hoga aap log ab ander jayiye

Main apni gaddi mein baith gaya aur sath mein Arun aur Nitin bhi aa gaye maine car age badha di thodi door jane ke baad main Arun se bola

Main - are Arun aaj tera sapna pura hoga

Arun aur Nitin shock hue meri baat sun ke

Arun - kesa sapna?:shock:

Main - jaldi hi pata chalega tujhe aur han Nitin tujh se aaj kuch cheen liya jayega so be ready

Arun se jyada ab Nitin shocked tha kyu ki maine kaha hi itne serious way mein tha

Nitin - kya cheen liya jayega

Main - Esha

Ab Nitin ki halat bigad chuki thi Esha ka naam vich mein ane se

Nitin - lekin kyu meri galti kya hai

Uski baat maine Arun aur Nitin ki taraf gusse se dekha

Main - kuch hi dair mein bata dunga tum dono ko ki tumhari galti kya hai ab chup chaap baitho yahan pe ham log manzil pe pohanchne wale hai

Meri baat sun ke dono ki halat patli thi kyu ki dono ko mere gusse ke bare mein pata tha

Khair maine car ki spees badha di aur car ko command di kyu ki yeh meri khud se tyar ki gayi car thi

Main - (car se) sweety haweli ka gate break kar do

Aur issi ke sath car ki side se do chote chote bomb nikle aur speed se jakar gate pe laga aur gate blast

Pehle to jo log haweli mein the woh shock hue par phir sabhi pehre daro ne apni apni position le li

(TP - abe ruk thoda yahan inko yeh to bata ki kon c haweli kiski haweli bina bataye hi haweli ko khandhar bana dega kya

Kishan - are sorry bhai bhul gya abi bata deta hu

TP - bhopni ke tera sale har bar ka yahi hai scene ki gand mar leta hai pehle first fight scene ki gand mari ab iss fight scnene ki gand mar raha hai chutiya ab sahi se bata

Kishan - bata raha hu bhadak kaye ko raha hai tu ja abi yahan se)

Han to aap logo ko main bata du ki yeh haweli hai thakur Bhanupartap ki jo ki ek ghatiya kisam ka thakur hai iska ek pota hai Rakesh jo ki iss se bhi ghatiya hai ek number ka hawasi gaon ki na jane kitni aurto aur ladkio ki bebasi ka fyada utha chuka hai jani ki unki izzat ke sath khilwaad kar chuka hai

Ab ata hu iss point pe ki iska Mahi se kya len den hai to Rakesh ki gandi nazar Mahi pe thi iska pata Mahi ke maa baap ko chal gya aur unho ne Mahi ko bahar bhej diya uske mama ke pass jo ki MLA hai woh bhi Mahi ki help nahi kar paye the kyu ki Thakur ki pohanch kafi upar tak thi issi par unho ne Mahi ko anch tak na ane di

Mahi ne apne maa baap ko bachane ke liye mera shara lena chaha issi liye Mahi ne mere sath jhoothe pyar ka natak karna chaha tha jab use meri power ka pata chala tha ki mere pass Thakur se bhi jyada paisa hai aur bade bade neta mujh se darte hai bas fir kya tha bana liya plan

Aur Yahan Rakesh aur Arun se juda hua ek truth aur hai jo ki thode time baad khulega

Yeh sab mujhe Mahi ke bare mein pata karne ke baad pata chala

## Ab ate hai kahani pe

Maine car ko bola

Main - sweet abi sab goli chalane walo ki bandook pe nishana lagao

Car ne vesa hi kiya kuch hi seconds mein sabhi ki guns niche padi thi itne mein Thakur aur Rakesh haweli ke andruni gate pe aa gaye unke sath Thakur ka ek paltu kutta Tha jiska name the kallan

Itne mein ham log haweli ke ander jake ruke aur main car se bahar nikla Thakur ke gundo ne mere pe dhava bol diya

Jo sab se pehle aa raha tha maine uske gale pe war kiya jis se uske gale ki haddi tut gayi aur woh niche gir pada

Use dekh sabhi vahi ke vahi ruk gaye

Rakesh - kon hai be tu aur teri himmat kesi hui yeh sab karne ki

Main - meri himmat to iss se bhi jyada tabahi karne ki hai kahe to haweli uda du teri par main esa karunga nahi yeh kisi ki amanat hai aur ek baat tera sach bhi bahar ayega aaj

Rakesh - konsa such aur kiski amanat sale tu hai kon

Main - mera nama pata janne tak tu jinda na rahega to behtar hai ki tu puch hi mat

Rakesh - salo khade khade mera muh kya tak rahe ho mare sale ko badi badi fhenk raha hai

Uski baat sun ke jo gunde ruk gaye the savhi fir se meri taraf badhe maine fir se sab se age ane wale ko ek flying kick di jis se woh piche gira aur sath mein 3 4 logo ko lekar gira

Main - (Arun Nitin se) salo mahurat nikalwau kya niklo bahar aur lado

Iski baad woh dono ne bhi car se nikal kar ek ek ko pakad liya aur dhone lage bakki ko main sambhalne laga woh log lagbhag ginti mein 20 the aur ham teen 2 ko Nitin aur Arun ne pakad liya 18 se ab main akela nipatne wala tha maine jaldi se sab ke chehre padhe unmein se sirf 5 pariwar wale the

Bakki ke 13 ek no ke gunde the fir main apni car ko point out marke goli chalne ko bola ab sirf woh 5 aur Thakur aur Rakesh aur kallan bache the

Fir maine un pancho se bola

Main - tum pancho jao aab yahan se pariwar wale aur jake apna pariwar palo niklo yahan se

Mera itna kehna tha woh sabhi bhag gaye maine car ki diggi se rassi nikali aur Arun aur Nitin se bola

Main - tum dono car mein baitho

Mere itna kehte hi woh car mein baith gaye fir main bhi car mein ghus gya aur gadi ki chat open kiya aur khada ho gya fir rassi ka fanda banaya aur Rakesh ki taraf fhenk diya

Aur thoda magic use kiya taki agar Rakesh thoda bohat idhar udhar ho to fir bhi fanda jake usi ke gale mein pade aur hua bhi vese hi

Main - let's go sweety

Aur iski sath ham log haweli se nikal liye aur Rakesh ko ghaseete hue lajane lage woh fande se niklne ki koshish bhi kar raha tha aur chilla bhi raha tha

Udhar Thakur aur kallan bhi jeep mein piche piche aa rahe the main Rakesh ko Mahi ke ghar ke age lekar aa gya aur uske ghar ke bilkul sahmne ek bargad ka paid tha use uspe latka diya uske gale ki haddi tutti aur ho gya uska ram name satya

Uski mundi ese na tutne wali thi bhaiya woh to apun ne magicwa se todi thi sala magic use karne mein maza awat hai

Main - (kutil muskan liye hue bola) kyu re pagle maine bola tha na ki mera naam pata batane se pehle tu mar jayega

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Aaj ke liye itna hi bakki kal

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[Lovingheart]

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Bajani hi thi bhai

 

[Asif khan]

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[Lovingheart]

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