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Fantasy Manhoos - Part 2 (completed)

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Lovingheart

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Intro


To Dosto m a new writer on xf xp ka purana writer hu xp gayi baat gayi
Yeh sirf meri ek koshish hai to plz sath dena aasha karta hu apko pasand ayegi yeh story
Ismein thoda sa powers ka use hoga thoda sa romance aur incest bhi ho sakta hai
to plz kisi ki agar incest vajha se bhavnao ko thes pohanchti ho plz ignore kar dena story ko
Iss kahani ke sare patar kalpnik hai agar kisi se mel khate hai to kripya panic mat hona woh sab ek itefak hai

Main Pehle kisi vajha se is story ko pura nahi kar paya pura karne ki Koshish karunga

Iss kahani mein sex bagera ko shayad hi mahatab diya jaye to yeh baat bhi note kar lena
Ek aur baat story shayad kisi aur story se thoda bohat matching ho sakti hai to plz isse pehle padhna fir us bare mein baat karna
Note:- updates ka locha rahega week mein 3 updates shayad daily bhi ho jaye so plz be co-orporative
Ur Heartless urf Loving Heart
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Update 16

Update a16


Badhte waqt ke sath Kishan ki dhadkne badhti ja rahi thi reh reh ke usko bohat bechaini ho rahi thi woh apni raftaar se age badhta ya raha tha gadi kuch jyada hi raftaar mein bhag rahi thi


Kuch hi der mein woh us city mein pohanch gya raste mein ek yagha kafi crowed tha na jane pata nahi kyu Kishan dil vahan rukne ko hua

Aur woh gadi rok ek dam se nikal ke crowed ki taraf bhaga aur bheed ko chirte hue ander jane laga

Aur sahmne ka manzar dekh ke uske kadam apne aap tham gaye woh ek murat si ban gya uske piche piche hi Pihu Ritu aur Esha the

Sahmne dekhke unki ankhon se rulayi fut padi aur teeno ek hi name leke chillayi

"Mmeeeerrrrraaaaa"

Ji han yahan bheed Meera ki dead body ke aas pass jama hui thi Kishan bas ek tak Meera ki body ko dekhra tha ansu uski ankhon se tapak rahe rhe aur ek dam se woh bhag ke Meera ke pass gya aur uska sar utha ke apni goad mein rakh liya aur rone laga


Kishan - Gudiya aeee gudiya uth dekh tera bhai tere pass hai aaeee guduya ankhein khol na apni dekh na tera bhai tere pass baitha hai Meeru uth na


Aur yeh bolte hue woh rone laga aur ek dam se usne dahaad mari "Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhh" "Meeeerrrraaaaa"

Aur woh Meera ke mathe se matha jod ke rone laga Pihu Esha aur Ritu bhi uske pass aake Meera ki body pe sar rakh ke rone lagi

Par abhi bhi uski bechaini thami nahi thi fir achanak se Kishan ko kuch yaad aya aur usne jaldi se Meera ki body ko uthaya aur gadi mein rakha aur un teeno ko gadi mein baitha ke gaadi ghar ki aur badha li

Aur 5 min mein hi ghar pohanch gya
Aur bhag ke ander ghusa ander ka nazara dekh uski ruh kamp gayi kyu aaj uska pura parivaar duniya chod chuka tha

Abhay aur Avantika ek sath farash pe pade the aur ek side Megha ka jisam pada tha aur uske pass kuch likha hua tha

Kishan woh padhen laga


"Megha - Bhai mujhe maaf karna main tumse maafi mange bina hi iss duniya se ya rahi hu bohat koshish ki maine ki main tumhe face karu aur tumse maafi mang lu iss liye kayi bar tumhe unknown no se call bhi kiya par kuch bol na payi bohat koshish kari ki tumhe sahmne se face karu par har bar mere kadam tham jate the kyu ki himmat hi nahi hoti thi bohat bar tumhare shehar ayi par tumhe face na kar payi bhai apni iss behan ko maaf karna manti hu galti bohat badi thi meri par meri akhri icha samjh ke hi puri kar dena isse meri atma ko shanti milegi"


Aur yahi cheez likh ke Megha ne apni akhri saans li

Kishan yeh sab padh ke rone laga aaj uska sab much lut chuka tha Pihu use sambhalne lagi uska rona sun ke mohalle wale bhi aa gaye aur un logo ko sambhalne lage
Issi vich do log apni mann mein kuch karne ka soch rahe the

1st - yahi sahi moka hai Kishan tut chuka hai ab apni chaal chalne ka sahi moka hai bs thoda sa mokka mil jaye hahahaha... Fir sari daulat meri hahahhaha

2nd - Kishan puri tarha se tut chuka hai ab bas bari hai mere war ki ..... Dekhti hu Kishan kese tu bachta hai... Tere marte hi tere sari power meri.... Hahahhahah....
Uske baad sari duniya pe mera raa hoga.. hahahahahha. .....


Yeh dono log dikhane ke liye to magarmach ke ansu ro rahe the par ander hi ander bohat khush the

Sabhi logo ne un chaaron ke daah sanskar ki sari tyari ki fir unko shamshan le ke jaya gyA aur dha sanskar kiya gya
Pihu ab tak Kishan ke sath thi woh puri koshish kar rahi thi Kishan ko sambhalne ki

kyu ki usko pata tha is waqt kitna dukh ho raha hoga kyu ki usne bhi apne mata pata ki maut dekhi thi tab Kishan uska sahara bana tha aur Aaj woh uska sahara ban rahi thi

Unka charo ka dah sanskar kar ke baki sabhi to chale gaye par vahan Kishan Esha Pihu aur Ritu reh gaye

Kishan abhi Pihu ke kandhe pe sar rakh ke ansu baha raha tha ki pata nahi ek dam se kese Kishan behosh ho gya

Pihu - bhai kya hua utho bhai Ritu jaldi pani laa bhai lagta hai behosh ho gya hai jaldi se pani la

Pihu ne itna hi bola tha uske chehre pe ek rumal aya jispe chlorofom laga hua tha aur woh bhi behosh ho gayi


Esha - welldone Ritu ab tum esa karo Pihu ko le jao iska jo kuch karna ho tumhari marzi main apne shikar ko leke ja rahi hu

Aur Tabhi vahan do log aye aur Pihu ko utha ke le gaye idhar Esha ne ek chutki bajayi aur woh aur Kishan vahan se gayab hoke ek guffa mein pohanch gaye

Esha - Ab mera iss duniya pe raaj karne ka sapna pura hoga kal ki sham mein Kishan ki bali dungi aur iski sari shakti meri hogi bohat intezar kiya hai maine iss moke ka ab aur nahi hahahahahaha
Kishan bohat tadpaya hai tumne


Aur ek bar fir us guffa mein esha ki hassi ghunjh gayi hahahahahahahaha


Idhar Kishan Behoshi ki halat mein bhi hosh mein tha par woh uth nahi pa raha tha aur na hi apni powers use kar pa raha tha


Idhar Ritu Pihu ko leke ek farm house mein chali gayi aur use ek room mein bandh diya

Aur dusre room mein ghus gayi


Ritu - bohat intezar kar liya Pihu maine bs kal ki raat tak ka intezar fir teri sari daulat meri... Khair Daulat bhi kutti cheez hai teri hi jaan ki dushman ban gayi.... Hahahahahaha


Usne ek peg banaya ho ek hi ghunt mein gatak gayi
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Aaj ke liye itna hi age ki kadi janne ke liye sath bane rahe

 

rakku

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Bhai jab kishan apne power se thakur ki puri janamkundali Jan gaya, gundo m kon family wala hai wo Jan gaya, dono dosto m kon kya karega kon nahi ye Jan gaya, to ritu or esha ke bare m kyn nahi Jan paya....or Megha ne marte marte itna bara letter kaha likh diya...
Bhai bura mat manana but ye point age clear kr dena please...
 
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