Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Badhiya update bus ka kaam dhang se chal raha hai..rubi ko pyar hai abhi se pakka hai abhi dono gussa hain dekhte aage kya hota hai

shukriya rahul yara

 

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Bahut badhya ja rahe ho bhai.
Jabardast update hai.
Ek mahina beet gaya aur ab Abhi ko lagta hai kaam der mahine mein pura ho jaega aur ussko darr hai k wo Ruhi se dil ki baat nah keh paaye.
Shool ki chhutiyan, bache ghar par aur ab Abhi Ruhi mein cold war bhi shuru ho gayi
Ye kia ho gaya bhai?
Ruhi Abhi k naraz hone par khud naraz ho gayi aur Abhi k saamne nahin ayi jab wo ghar ja raha tha.
Abhi peene chala gaya. Lo aashik sharaabi banne chala.
Mast update tha bhai.

bhot shukriya Husein bhai

 

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Woooooo good update....
As always well written and described.....

Mostly Ruhi's escape.......and abhi got stuck.......beautiful.....

Wese to ye wala purana update.....ak simple line me chal raha tha.....bina kisi ups and down ke......
Jisme ki hamesha ki tarah abhi subah uthta hai.....ak nayi ummid or naye josh ke saath (Ruhi ko milne ki).....Alkham par jata hai......OR phir wanah Ruhi ko dekhne ki koshish.....uski ak jhalak paane ki kaamna.....
OR din bhar iss aas me nikalna ki Ruhi se ....kanhi thodi baat ho jaaye.....

Lekin aaj wo thoda jyada curious ya excited.....Jo bhi kahe wo tha....kyoki uski chot ke baare me shaayad Ruhi ko pata chal gaya hoga.....OR wo aaj uski care dikhayegi.....us se thoda jyada baat karegi....ya khayaal karegi......
Aisa uska sochna tha.....lekin aisa nahi hua......

Ha baat kare us scene ki jab Ruhi ghar se taiyar ho kar nikli thi or abhi use dekh kar shock ho gaya tha......
Ye scene apne aap me ak reality tha.....OR bahut hee beautifully acted or described tha......
Kyoki......jab koi banda kisi se itna doob kar pyar kare.....OR jiski ak jhalak hee use deewana banane ke liye kaafi ho....
Jo ki apne pyar ko aaj tak sirf simple sa dekh kar bhi gaayab ho jata ho.....agar wo use makeup me.....ya Yu kahe ki saj sawal kar apni or aata dekhe.....uske liye to ye kisi stroke se kam nahi hoga.....
Kyoki jiske normally dekh kar hee wo paagal ho jata ho.....wo aise uske saamne aayegi to......can't describe
Lekin aap samajh gaye honge.....

Dil or dimaag dono kaabil me nahi rahta....na aadmi kuch soch pata hai.....na kuch samajh pata hai.....
Us situation me bolna ya kuch karna to bahut door ki baat hoti hai....

Aisa lagta hai.....jaise ki life bas hamesha ke liye yanhi thama jaaye....OR ye jo nazara dikhata hai wo jannat se badh kar or khudai se upar lagta hai.....


Ab baat kare Saeed ki.....to jaisa wo act kar raha hai....use kah sakte hai.....BADA BAN NE KI ICHCH......ha lekin ise lalach nahi kah sakte.....
Ha lekin khud bade ban ne ke chakkar me agar aap kisi or ko niche giraate ho to....aapki upar ki position bhi aapke pass jyada der tak nahi rahegi.....
Saeed bhi khud bada ban na chahta hai.....ho to ye bhi sakta hai ki uske man me chor ho.....
Paise wala nahi.....ladki wala.....

OR wo ladki koi bhi ho sakti hai.....

Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....

Anyways .....
Very brilliant update .....
Thanks.....

iss anmol review ke liye tehe dil se aap ka shukriya vikram bhai
aap ne har ek baat ko bilkool hi sahi se judge kiye hein
dhanyawaad vikram bhai

 

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Shaandaar, lajawaab, jabardast update bhai. Wah kia update hai. Kahani kaafi aage badh gayi achaanak se.
Ek mahine baad ki baat hone lage. Aap be kyun itni jalsdi kar diye main samjha nahin.
Anyway. Kia kahun iss update k baare mein. Full superfantastic hai. Bahut kuch keh diya gaya hai iss mein bhi magar aaj first time Ruhi aur Abhi k bich ek ladaayi jaisa situation bhi agaya. Mujhe thoda hanssi bhi ata padh kar. Kua Ruhi ki ego problem bhi hai kia? Usska aashik ghussa hua to ussko sorry kehne ki bajae wo khud naraz ho gayi
Ego lagta hai Abhi ki bhi hai. Wo lunch mein Ruhi k paas jaa sakta tha magar nahin gaya hab bechari usska wait kar rahi thi. Shayad maafi mangti apne kahe hue words k liye. Kabhi juban se kuch words bina soche nikal jati hai waisa hi hua hoga Ruhi se jab ussne kaha k bala tal jaegi. Aur Abhi ne uss baat ko dil pe le liya.
Ab jaana pada nah wapas bina Ruhi se mile.
Superb update bhai. Badhya se bad kar likha hai aap ne.
Agle update ka besabri se intejar rahega bhai.

appreciation ke liye bahot shukriya Indian bhai

 

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Woooooowww very good update
As always.....brilliantly dedcribed and well written.....

Ye wale update ko padhkar mujhe 2 tarah ki feeling aayi.....
1 kitna pyar he dono mai......
2 itna pyar kyo hai dono mai....OR saath me Ruhi ki family me.....


To ab ham baat karte hai first point ki.....to Ruhi ka abhay se baat karna.....even garden me bhi....janha pichle 2 bar usne abhi ko ignore kar diya tha.....aaj baat ki....

OR phir Abhi ki baato ka reply bhi diya.....OR saath hee sath...apni adaao...nazara...OR sharmilee hasi se abhi ko gaayab bhi kiya....
Ye sab dekh kar Ruhi ka pyar abhi ke liye kitna strong hai....ye pata chalta hai....

OR apna abhi to waise hee latte hai.....to uske baare me to kuch kahna....aise ho ga jaise ki sooraj ko roshni dikhana....

But dono ki bonding.....Jo ki dhire dhire mazbut ho rahi hai....use kaafi achche se dikhaya hai....


Ab baat kare 2 point ki.....

To mujhe strong feeling isi baat ki thi.....KI ye sab kuch jyada hee jaldi nahi hi raha.....

Jaldi ke saath sath....bahut jyada hee SMOOTHLY bhi......matlab love relationship chalta hai.....lekin itna bhi jyada free tarike se......

OR sabse main baat.....Ruhi ke sabhi ghar waale sab dekh kar bhi.....kyo undekha kar rahe hai......
Jabki us ZAMAANE me ladki ko kisi paraaye se baat karne par bhi pabandiya hoti thi.....OR yanha to sab khulla chal raha hai.....
Yanha tak ki Ruhi ki kaamna ne us se ye kaha KI MEHBOOB KI MAUJOODGI ME BAAT MAT KARNA.....BAJAYE ISKE KI AB SE ABHI SE BAAT MAT KARNA.....iska yo ye matlab hua ki......jab Mehboob na ho tab baat kar sakti hai....koi dikkat nahi hai.....

OR uska bhai.....Jo abhi ko uski bahan ko ishaare karte hue dekh raha hai or uska jawab dete hue.....apni bahan ko bhi.....

OR phir bhi has kar ja raha hai......ye sab mujhe to thik nahi lag raha.....

Ak line me kahu to......AAJ WALA UPDATE MUJHE ROMANTIC SE JYADA THRILLING LAGA.....

Jisme ki sab milkar abhi ko fansa rahe hai.....OR iska reason kya he ye to waqt hee batayega........


Ab baat kare baaki ke update ki to......
Abhi......Manoj se photographs......may be wo unhe future me apne business ko extende karne me use kare.....

Abhi or Ruhi ki conversation kaafi achchi thi.......

Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai......
Anyways
Fantastic update.....
Thanks.......




YES ONE MORE THING.......
US TIME ME THODA JALDI ME THA TO AAPKA PURA COMMENT NAHI PADH PAYA THA.....
ABHI MAINE USE PURA DEKHA......OR USKI KUCH LINES........

Agar Ruhi k baare mein pehle se bata diya gaya to Abhi ka role feeka ho jaega aur Ruhi will win the show where as the hero is the main character of the story....
Aur bhai ye Ruhi wo wala Ruhi nahin jo Ruhi Abhi ki pehla pyar tha...... hope aap ne shuru se thik se read kiya hai

AAPKA LAST WALI LINE THIK NAHI HAI.....
MAINE YE ISLIYE HA KYOKI BHALE HEE YE RUHI DUSRI WAALI RUHI HAI.....
BUT AT THE TIME.....YE ABHI KE LIYE SAB KUCH HAI.....
WO ISE BHI UTNI HEE SHIDDAT SE CHAHTA HAI JITNA PAHLI WAALI RUHI KO.....OR YE BAAT USKE HAAV BHAAV.....USKI FEELINGS.....EMOTIONS ME BHI DIKHAI DETI HAI......

WO BAAT ALAG HAI KI BAAD ME JAB....YE DONO KISI KAARAN SE ALAG HO.....TAB AK BAR ABHI KE MAN ME YE KHAYAAL AA JAAYE KI.....
YE USKI PAHLI WAALI RUHI NAHI THI.....AGAR WO HOTI TO USKE SAATH AISA NA KARTI.....YA USE AKELA NA CHHODTI....WO BAD KI BAAT HAI....

LEKIN ISS TIME ABHI OR USKE DIL DIMAAG KE LIYE YE HEE RUHI HAI.....

TO ABHI ISS BAAT SE KOI FARAK NAHI PADTA KI WO NUMBER 1 HAI YA SECOND.....

OR RAHI BAAT MERE STORY KO STARTING SE DHYAAN SE PADHNE KI.....TO WO MAINE KAAFI ACHCHE SE READ KIYA HAI......
TAB HEE ISS TARAH KE COMMENTS KAR PAA RAHA HU......

WARNA SIRF.....-nice update......--good update.......LIKHNA MUJHE BHI AATA HAI.....

I HOPE YOU UNDERSTAND THIS......
THANKS

bahot bahot shukriya itni achchi review ke liye Vikram bhai
bhai sorry agar main ne kuch ghalat keh diya ho aap ko last comment mein to
mera wo irada bilkool nahin tha

 

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Sir ji aaj bhi halat kuch waise hi hai bs thode bht changes aye hai

hmm magar utna nahin jaise 1980's mein hua karta tha

 

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Aap ke story ki ek bhi update miss nhi hote h sir ji

thanks magar comments ke replies de diya magar update par reviews nahin aaye abhi tak Kirti dear mujhe intezaar hai

 

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Fantastic update casi bhai. Wonderful.
Pata hai main kal hi soch raha tha k mobile hota to Abhi ne kitne photos le liye hote Ruhi ki khass kar jab wo Saturdays ko saj ke nikalti hai. Aur aaj aap ne photo wali baat kar diye update mein. Superb. Haan bhai aaj yehi kahani repeat hoti to day 1 se Abhi ne 100 se jiada pics le liya hota Ruhi ki aur donon watsap par video call karke raat bhar baatein bhi karte.
Afsos k unn dinon ko ye facility nahin tha.
Update jhakaas hai bhai.
To aaj pehli baar donon mein kuch mann mutav hua magar aakhir mein jeet to Ruhi ki hui hahaha ussne Abhi ko tanha, maayuss ghar lauttne diya. Sab kuch Ruhi k haath mein hai wo chaahe to Abhi ko kaise bhi nacha sakti hai. Haal to yehi dikh raha hai kyunke Abhi Ruhinka diwana bana hua hai.
Kaam bahut teji se badh raha hai aur school ki chhutiyan hai to aas paas k saare bache uss aangan mein bhare honge agle der mahine tak, to kia Abhi aur Ruhi ki baat pure mohalle mein feyl nahin jaegi?
Bahut badhya update hai bhai.
Dekhte hein kal donon kaise firse paas aate hein , wo moment jarur majedaar hoga. Usska besabri se intejar rahega bhai.

tehe dil se shukriya appreciation ke liye Nayan bhai

 

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Awesome update casi bhai,
behad hi shandaar aur lajawab update hai bhai,
ab lagta hai ki jald hi inke bichhadne ka samay aane wala hai,
chhoti si baat ko abhi ne khinchakar itna bada bana diya hai,
ab kahi unke beach ke iss baat ka koi teesra fayada na utha le,
dekhte hain ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

bahot shukriya Aman bhai, aap ka aisa khayal hai ke yeh ab bichadne wale hein?
aaj ki update zaroor padhna Aman bhai

 

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dobara bhai... too good story yaar, fantastic

thanks very much bhai dobara papdhne ke liye