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Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

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shahnaz123 said:
I Totally agree with u
Hero ka matlab hota hai Nayak
Aur nayak vo hota hai jiske aachran dusro ke liye adarsh ho
Jinhe dekh kar log un achran ko apne life me utarne ki koshish kare
Hero samaj ke liye prerna srot hota hai
Hero ka matlab rutba dikhane wala ya attitude bilkul nahi hota hai
Hero vo hai jo apne achche kamo se har kisi ke dil me raaz kare
Jisse atyachari log dare magar pyar karne walo par uska koi khauf na ho
Takat,rutba, ye sab jawani khatam hote hi khatam ho jayegi uski jagah dusra aa jayega
kintu jo ek baar kisi ke dil me raaz kar liya uske liye age koi factor nahi rah jata...that's hero
Just like...Adii is a real hero
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anandsngh12 said:
UPDATE *66​

Jaise hi mai class me enter hua to meri nazar samne ki table par baithi aliza par chali gayi….usko dekh kar mere chehre par mushkan aa gayi…mai jakar aliza ke bagal me baith gaya

Ab vo mujhe dekh to sakti nahi thi to maine uske sath kuch shararat karne ki sochne laga…..maine apna ek hath uski kamar me daal diya jisse vo sakpaka gayi

Usne apne aaju baju dekha to koi nahi tha uske paas…to vo phir se samne teacher ke lecture par dhyan dene lagi… ab ki baar maine use dhire se ek jadu ki jhapki de di

Aliza poori tarah se is baar chounk gaya ki abhi kya hua….vo soch me pad gayi ki kya usne khuli ankho se koyi sapna to nahi dekha….?

Aliza (mann me)—ye kya ho raha hai mere sath aaj….? Aisa to pahle kabhi nahi hua tha…..lagta hai mai us kamine adi se kuch jyada hi darne lagi hu jiske karan mere mann me aise ulte sidhe vaham panap rahe hain

Abhi vo soch me doobi hi huyi thi ki maine uska ek kaan pakad ke khich diya….vo apna kaan sahlate huye turant khadi hokar apne charo taraf hairani se dekhne lagi

Professor—kya hua aliza….? Tum khadi kyo ho….? Any question……?

Aliza—no sir…

Professor—ok..sit down

Aliza jaise hi baithne ko huyi maine khisak kar uski jagah par aa gaya……jaise hi vo baithi aur turant hi uchhal kar khadi ho gayi

Professor—phir se khadi ho gayi….? Are you ok….?

Aliza (mann me)—ye sab kya ho raha hai mere sath….baar baar vaham nahi ho sakta….koun kar raha hai ye shararat…..? aur abhi to baithne par pata nahi kya tha aisa laha ki mai kisi khoonte par baith gayi thi….agar jaldi se khadi na hoti to pakka meri izzat abhi lut hi gayi thi.....lagta hai meri tabiyat theek nahi hai

Professor—alizaaaa……are u ok…..? ye kya tamasha laga rakha hai…ye class hai tumhara ghar nahi…do u understand

Aliza—mujhe ghar jana hai…..meri tabiyat theek nahi hai

Professor—ok…you may go now

Aliza fatafat class se nikal ke chhu mantar ho gayi…mujhe bada bura laga…lekin na jane kyo main aaj baar baar bahak raha tha….shayad munish ki us goli ke asar ki vajah se

Adi (mann me)—ye theek nahi hua….bechari ke sath….is professor ne usko daanta….isko sabak sikhana chahiye thoda

Ye soch kar mai professor ke paas jakar khada ho gaya….lecture khatam hone ke baad vo jaise hi baithne ko hua to maine chair piche khich li…natiza vo dhadam se niche gir gaya….poori class me hasi ke jor dar thahake goonjne lage

Vo sak paka kar jaldi se khada hua aur apni books table se utha kar bahar jane laga to maine uske aage pair ada diya…ek baar phir se vo niche gir pada aur class me hasi ka patra ban gaya….mai vaha se chup chap khisak liya

Idhar ghar me subah se dopar aur dophar se shaam ho gayi lekin mera koi pata nahi chala to sab pareshan ho gaye…khaskar shree aur mummy

Shree—pata nahi ye adi kaha chala gaya hai…..kya hua usko…kuch pata nahi chal raha…

Sona—vo meri abhi kuch der pahle baat huyi thi unse..vo do din ke liye bahar gaye hain

Urmila—kyo gaya bahar….?

Sona—pata nahi ye nahi bataya….phone cut kar diya

Urmila—tu sach kah rahi hai….?

Sona—haa….mai apse kabhi jhuth bolungi bhala

Shree—to bata kar nahi ja sakta tha….?

Sona—maine pucha tha to bol rahe the ki agar bata deta to aap dono unhe jane nahi dete

Shree—aane do usko tange tod dungi uski main…..mousi aap beech me bilkul mat bolna

Adi (bahar aakar)—jo bhi hua galat hua…..ye sab us kamine munish ke karan hai….sala ek baar mujhe kahi mil bhar jaye aaj to tarike se band bajaunga uski

‘’kya baat hai mitra…mujhe yaad kiya tumne’’…

Adi (mann me)—lo shaitan ka naam liya aur shaitan hajir

Adi—ye koun si goli thi…..? isne to mera kalyan hi kar diya

Munish—dekha maine kaha tha na isse sab pareshani door ho jayengi tumhari

Adi—maine pucha ye koun si goli thi….?

Munish—ye devlok ki powerful viyagra goli hai

Adi—kyaaaaa….viyagra…..?

Munish—haaa….main hamesha isko apne paas rakhta hu…kya pata kab aur kaha jarurat pad jaye…..?

Adi (gusse me)—teri aisi taisi…..viyagra ki….mujhe kyo di ye khane ko….?

Munish—jisse tum chinta mukt ho jao aur meri tarah jeevan ka sukhad anubhav karo

Adi (gusse me)—jaldi se iska asar khatam karo

Munish—ab ye 48 ghante tak sambhav nahi hai….itne samay tak to asar rahega hi…abhi to iska asar chadhna chalu hua hai

Adi—ab mai kaha jau…..?

Munish—tumhari itni biwiya hain ...iski to tumhe nitant avashyakta hai....lo ek aur kha lo jaldi se

Adi (gusse me)—bhag yaha se....nahi chahiye mujhe

Munish—tum mujhe galat samajh rahe ho dost...mai to tumhare hi kalyan ke vishay me soch raha tha

Adi—haan…tabhi to jabse tum meri jindagi me aaye ho mera kalyan hi kalyan ho raha hai

Munish—tum to mujhe sharminda kar rahe ho…ye to mera farz hai….akhir dost kaha hai tumhe

Adi—badhiya dosti nibhayi tumne….akhir kyo khilayi mujhe ye goli jab mujhe iski koi jarurat hi nahi thi

Munish—tumhe iski bahut jyada jarurat thi

Adi—kaise…..?

Munish—sambhog srasti ka ek anivarya ang hai…..sambhog ke bina srasti ki kalpana bhi nahi ho sakti hai aur tum usse dur bhagne ki koshish karte ho yahi tumhari pareshani ka karan hai dost…agar tum aise hi isse dur bhagte rahe to tumhari saat patniyo ke anmol prem ke sath anyay karoge tum

Adi—to apke kahne ka matlab hai ki mujhe sabke sath sambhog karna chahiye…..hai na,,,,,?

Munish—nahi…mai sirf tumhare andar ka darr nikalna chahta hu jiski vajah se tum unse bhagne ki koshish karte ho…unhe ek bojh samajhte ho….main tumhe ye ehsaas dilana chahta hu ki aurat is srasti nirman me kitni upyogi hai aur tum usi aurat ka baar baar apman karte ho…unke prem ka samman karne ki jagah unse dur bhagte ho

Adi—to mujhe sambhog karna chahiye kisi se…?

Munish—jarur...lekin kisi se bhi nahi balki jo tumse karna chahe...isse tumhare andar ka darr door ho jayega aur tumhe aurat ki jarurat mahsus hone lagegi jisse tum unka samman karna sikh jaoge dur bhagne ki jagah... jab tum unke pyar ko mahatva dene lagoge to vo bhi tumhe pareshan karna chhod dengi

Adi—kiske sath karu.... ?

Munish—ye tumhara apna kaam hai....is goli ki vajah se tumhe aurat ki jarurat mahsus hogi aur tum sambhog karne ke liye tadpoge aur jab kar loge to sab theek ho jayega...ab main chalta hu

Main usko rukne ko kahta raha lekin vo mujh ko ulta sidha gyan dekar bhag gaya phir se....mai uski baato par vichar karne laga

Adi (mann me)—‘’munish ne jo kaha kya vo mujhe karna chahiye...kahi kisi nayi musibat me na phans jau... ? par agarapni samasya batau bhi to kisko batau....sona ke sath baat kar leta hu..usko jyada jaldi hai is kaam ki’’

Adi (kuch der soch kar)—‘’nahi....nahi...sona to bilkul nahi....agar galti se usko maine hath bhi laga diya to kya bharosa uska..... subah hi vo mummy ke hath me judwa bachche pakda degi aur kah degi ki ye adi ke hain... mummy ko mujhe jawab dena mushkil ho jayega’’

Adi—margret.....ha...margret theek rahegi….usse hi baat kar ke dekhta hu

Ye soch kar main margret ke ghar pahuch gaya…..lekin uske ghar me light off hone ke karan kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha

Mai jaise hi uske ghar pahucha to ek kamre me ghus gaya jaha koi leti huyi thi…mai bhi uske bagal me jakar let gaya aur bina koi baat kiye usko apni baho me jakad liya aur apne hoth uske hotho par rakh kar chumne laga
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devlok ki vigara goli ka asar dekhte isko le dubta hai :laugging:

Aleez ke sahi maze liye :hehe:
 
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