Recent content by Achayan100

Bhai.. Shayad Mushkil hoga..lekin ho sake to at least 1 tagda update har week de dijiye.. Weekend par zyaada intezar rehta hai.. Ho sake weekend par kar de dijiye... Weekend complete hi jate hai aapke khatarnak update se...🙂

bhai.. I agree with your POV. Like story messy or confused ho sakti hai.. Ek follow up sawaal hai.. Kalak jungle main jaane ka ek udesh thaa.. Jahaan tak mujhe yaad hai.. Shalu. Prema sab ko pregnant hone ka upaay (Solution) is ls yatra main thaa.. Toh mujhe laga ghar wale hi pregnant kar...

Thanks for all the replies. Achaa laga aapse sun kar..

Bhaiii ji.. Kya likhte ho.. Amazing writing bro.. U r master story teller and mujhe nahi lagta koi bhi writer orgy scenes aise detail main likh sakta hai with situational dialogues. D way you narrated Udayveer aur chanchal ka scena bhai.. Mazaa aa gaya.. Baap beti ki chudai.. Uff.. All scenes...

Kya bhai, aap sirf humare comments ignore kar rahe ho.. Hum bhi aapke purane readers hai.. Koi galti ho gayi toh maafi.

Mast update bhai.. Aapki writing number 1 toh hai.. Lekin aap jo yeh orgy scenes excute karte ho with dialogues for every characters are extremely difficult to do for a writer.. Bahut soch lagti hogi.. Amazing writing bhai.. Really.. Acha lagta hai jab aap bhi time nikaal ke regular updates de...

Bahut hi kaamuk update bhai.. Jo dialogues the between characters bhai behen ke.. Dirty talk jo unki past bachpan ke khel ki baatein sab ekdum asli lage.. Jise chudai aur bhi kaamuk hi gayi. .. Ek dum mast the.. One of the best updates in long time. It was very similar to rim jab apne baap...

Humare priye Bhai aur dost ji, Aapko maloom na ho, par main aapke sab se initial readers main se ek hoon.. Aapki pehle update 2020 aayi thi aur aise hi meri nazar aapki lekhni par padhi.. Uss waqt mera account dusre naam se tha aur maine comment kiya tha ki "Aapki lekhni bilkul makhan hai aur...

Hot update bhai.. But eagerly waiting for a mega update .. bhaang ke rang kya kya karwayenge.. Request for a mega update on weekend 🙂

Thanks for the response bhai.. aaj ka update bhi mast Raha.. Sarju aur karma ke detailed scene main jo vartaalaap (conversation) usse yaad aaya.. Sabya aur Nilesh ka bhi ek kaamuk vartaalaap adhura reh Gaya hai.. jahaan dono Pati patni khul ke apni apni fantasies share karne ke vaada kiye...

Bhai.. Mast lolikhe ho.. Pichle kuch updates se aapke lekhni phir se mazedaar aur rochak bante jaa rahe hai.. In between I felt aap busy ho jaonge toh story incomplete rah jayegi.. Thanks for efforts woh bhi itne saale se.. Coming back to story.. Story ekdum exciting mode par hai.. Kuch...

Great update.... Aage ka intezaar.. Lekin writer updates slow ho Gaye hai.. we hope you are fine. Ur updates were mostly regular...par ab jab story Apne Sabse ache mod par hai.. aapke updates bahut irregular ho Gaye hai.. am sure koi reason honge.. try to atleast keep the readers updated kab...

but d delays are now longer and updates shorter 😒

Great going bro.. the part of Mamta n sabhya s well written..but too small for a weekly update. Tbh since n just before diwali.. updates have been underwhelming.. specially after the episodes where all characters are back home.. U r one writer who s reaching GOAT level with your this...

Bhai..Sahi kehe ho.. Please let the story flow as you have decided.. I agree with ur pov...All characters are important.. and the story is the hero...I am sure ur writing main kuch toh sahi hai dat it has become one of the best stories on this forum. I can only imagine the number of silent...