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Option 4 all the way

You had mentioned in the first post that his parents had passed away but they have been included in the later updates. Try to keep consistency between updates. I also suggest that you include greater detail in the sex scenes.

Excellent update. Keep them coming.

Interesting buildup. Go on.

Good update. Take rest and come back with a banger of an episode.

Nice update but mousa ko maar dena chahiye tha.

Welcome back. Its a good start and I am looking forward to the next update.

Chand should irritate Idris with his chatter about banging that neighbourhood bhabhi. Maybe she is walking around in the park with her husband and Chand makes Idris distract the hubby while he takes the bhabhi aside for some sexytime. When they are done and depart, Chand hints that Akash is upto...

Nice update. Ammi kitnee behsaram hoti jaa rahi he. Wonderful to read. It would be funny if Imran informs Satyam about the situation, with perhaps a somewhat sanitized version of events and they start to conspire together. Maybe when Rahul goes to his home then they hire a young hooker (or...

Heera ko is ghar se door he rekho. Ghar me naya stud he.

I wonder what's so concerning on her phone. It would be good if you could somehow recap what happened in the hospital during all the other days.

Keep going dude. Interest tends to be low during the buildup stage. Gotta hook the readers with a banging scene.

Nice update. Keep up the good work.

ooh, what an update. So interested in seeing this story develop.