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Recent content by dododo

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    Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

    Weh to theek hai, waise health wagehra kaisi hai. Family ki taraf se sab kushal-mangal hai.
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    Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

    This is extremely unusual. Sandeep ji, Hope everything is fine. Story can continue later, just inform about your wellbeing and of your family.
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    Adultery Chor (A journey of a thief )

    Do baatein note kerne ki hai. 1. Jis jagah Shalini ko maarne ki koshish ki hai, weh Desouza ka ilaka hai. Kahin yahin se gang war na shuru ho jaye. Waise mujhe nahi lagta isme Desouza ka koi haath hai. Shalini Rocky ko keval weh jagah dikhane le gayi thi jahan par Rocky ki dadi ki maut huyi...
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    Adultery Chor (A journey of a thief )

    Great update. Nicky ke role se comedy, Lavanya ke role me uski extreme dark side, Aadhya ke saath mulakat bhi kafi comical thi, aur phir Shalini ke saath emotional bonding, aur chaupati ka scene to out of the world tha. 1. Pehle Nicky ka apni client se chedkhan karna, aur aashcharya ki baat...
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    Adultery Chor (A journey of a thief )

    Ohhh... To yeh wahi Ravi Verma hai jo Sympathy me Ananya ka naya friend bana tha, Hotels ka business tha aur uski aadh me ladkiyon ki taskari. Fighter bhi accha tha, lekin bahut hi gira hua insan. Ananya ke saath weh Kiyara aur Adya ke bhi peeche laga hua tha.
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    Adultery Chor (A journey of a thief )

    Yeh Horror genre ki kahani hai. Bas shuru me Bangle me horror dokha, uske baad Rocky ke ghar aur phir ship me Sirisha ke roop me. Mujhe lagta hai ab asli horror story me aane wala hai.
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    Adultery Chor (A journey of a thief )

    <Moko : mai kisi ko marunga nahi bas yahan le aaunga aap maar dena unhe...> Moko ka character yahan accha dikhaya hai. Ab pehle Anya ki baat kareien. Kahan to weh Rakshin ko hate karti thi, kahan usi ke saath khul kar sex kar rahi hai. Rocky ke usko dekh lene ke baad bhi weh usko besharmi se...
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    Adultery Chor (A journey of a thief )

    Excellent review.
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    Adultery Chor (A journey of a thief )

    Jaise story original sochi thi, waise hi likhein, na usase chhota na hi usase bada. Mujhe laga tha ki aur adhuri stories, Arya wali Sympathy, Salil/ Rolex/ Rolex2 wali Cheater Wife aur Moko wali, sab isme milkar apne end tak pahunchengi. Abhi tak isme Sympathy ke Arya aur Akshi dikhe hain, aur...
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    Adultery Chor (A journey of a thief )

    1. Great update. 2. Rocky ka apni family ke prati vyavhaar dekh kar dukh hua. Aisa lagta hai ki weh apni saari flustration, uske saath huye hua durvyavhar, apne pita ke diye huye usulon ka khoon hota dekh kar ek rebellian ban gaya hai. Shalini ko to usme apna pota dikhta hai jisko ghar se...
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    Adultery Chor (A journey of a thief )

    Hain to sab ki sab, lekin mere hisab se Lavanya, Ahana aur Aarvi nahi hain. Waise Lavanya ka role bahut important hai., ho sakta hai baad me Aarvi ka bhi develop ho jaaye. Ahana keval side-heroin hi rahegi. Main character Anya ka hai, ab weh heroin ke roop me rahe ya phir didi ke protective...
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    Adultery Chor (A journey of a thief )

    Oh... I stand corrected. Yeh to yaad tha ki kaise Shalini aur Jackson ek business meeting me mile, lagta hai maine assume kar liya ki un dono ne shadi kar li hai. Waise bhi Jackson ka Saanvi ke ghar par aane ke baad Shalini ka koi scene nahi aaya.
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    Adultery Chor (A journey of a thief )

    Ab Shalini ne Jackson se shadi ki hai jo use underworld me laya. Saanvi Shalini (Granny) ki ladki hai. Us hisab se to Jackson hi Saanvi ka pita hua.
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    Adultery Chor (A journey of a thief )

    1. Anya ko ek taraf guilt hai ki usne apne bhai ko nahi pehchana jiske liye weh tadapti rahi aur usi se shadi kar li, wahin dusri taraf life me pehli baar kisi ko sache dil se pyar kiya, weh bhi apne bhai se. Weh to Rocky ka instinct tha ya kuch aur, un dono ne sex nahi kiya, bass uper-uper se...
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    Adultery Chor (A journey of a thief )

    Another great update. Story to taj raftaar se daudne lagi hai. Pehhle to Rocky ke asli pariwar walon ka pyar dekh kar kafi emotional ho gaya. Ganny ka to pata tha, lekin jis tarah se Saanvi ne Rocky par pyar lutaya, padh kar accha laga. Beech-beech me flashback me Rocky ke bachpan ki yaadein...
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