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Update 11 Kuch din yun hi beet gaye, jaise waqt apne aap ko dheere-dheere thaka raha ho. Avani ka ghar ab ek sannate ka makaan ban gaya tha—Chamanlal ke bina avani ki subah ek khali si kahani lagti thi, chahe uski shaitani se woh kitna hi tang kyun na hoti thi. Kuchh din chhotu aur...

Update 11 Kuch din yun hi beet gaye, jaise waqt apne aap ko dheere-dheere thaka raha ho. Avani ka ghar ab ek sannate ka makaan ban gaya tha—Chamanlal ke bina avani ki subah ek khali si kahani lagti thi, chahe uski shaitani se woh kitna hi tang kyun na hoti thi. Kuchh din chhotu aur...

I'll update tonight I know I've been busy but ab se regular updates aayenge

Aree nahi bhai Kuchh zaruri kaam se bahar gya tha story likhne ka time hi nahi Mila...aaj 3-4 update likh Diye hain I'll post it tonight.

Update 10 Avani, Chamanlal, aur Chhotu mall ke thande AC wale mahol mein dakhil ho jate hain. Mall chhota sa tha, par gaon ke hisaab se kaafi modern—do manzil pe faila hua, neeche kapdon ki dukanen aur upar ek chhota sa food court. Andar ki thandi hawa Avani ke chehre pe ek rahat si laati...

Update 9 Fasal ab poori tarah se tut chuki thi, aur khet mein tamatar ke paudhe khali aur sookhe se dikh rahe the. Truck wala apna khet se tamatar lekar jaa chuka tha, aur Chamanlal aur Chhotu ke haathon mein kuchh paise aaye the, par unka dil abhi bhi Avani ke aas-paas mandra raha tha...

Bhai story mein maine chhotu ko kuchh sochkar hi add Kiya hai aur raamu ko hataya tha....chhotu ka bhi role aayega but late hoga thoda(kaafi updated ke baad) I hope AAP samajh gye honge.

Chotu is a character jisse bachkr avni chamanlal ko maze degi, kahin pakdi na jaye....chhotu ko avi toh kuchh nhi milega.

Thanks bro ab fasal Tut chuki hai....guess Karo ab story mein kya hoskta hai....?

Update 8 Dopahar ki garmi ab apne charam par thi, aur khet mein ek sannata sa chhaya hua tha—bas tamatar ke paudhon ke beech Chamanlal aur Chhotu ke haathon ki chhoti-chhoti awaazein goonj rahi thi. Avani ghar wapas ja chuki thi, par uska wapas jaana Chamanlal aur Chhotu ke dilo-dimag mein ek...