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@Mr. Magnificent Story thriller genre par based hai Story ki sabse khaas baat hai ki wah engaging hai aur flow kabhi break nahi hota hai . Pakad bohat achi hai story kiLanguage ko achi tarah present Kiya hai aapne. Suspense dhere dhere open ho ta hai kya ho raha hai, kyu ho raha hai, kis...

@Riky007 धन्यवाद आपका एक सुंदर review के लिए। Flow अच्छा था स्टोरी का पर भाषा शैली में शायद बोहोत mistake करी है मैने। यह concept मेरे दिल के एक कोने बसा था जिसे मैंने एक स्टोरी के माध्यम से सबके सामने प्रस्तुत किया है। मुझे भी ending satisfactory लगी वो motivation का concept बोहोत help किया...

Thank you for your beautiful review 1 . Yes god wale seen majedaar the 2. Match ko engaging banakar ek achhi ending dena main motive tha ki ending achi honi chahiye 3.motivation wala point pehle mere consideration mein nahi tha par ending mein ek mazedar twist ki jarurat thi toh ye likha1...

@BLACK writer खूबसूरत खूबसूरत क्या बात है एक पिता और बेटे की कहानी पर एक अलग ही तरह से लिखी गई है ।Plot - कहानी के मुख्य किरदार अर्जुन अमन और अंकित है। पहले अर्जुन के का पूरा point of view लिखा है फिर सुधा का और अंकित का point of view है।सरल कहानी को थोड़ा अलग लिखा है अर्जुन को अपने छोटे से...

Sabse pehle toh aap ki health achi rahe yahi Kamna hai bhagwan seAb aate hai review par Starting ka major portion sushant aur evil mother sprite par based hai . aur phir aate hai avinash wo mother sprite ko defeat karte hai aur waha se demon slayer astitva mein aati haiPhir aata hai aarav...

Kon offend ho gaya aapke review se jara uss person Ka naam bataiye baat karte hai usse bhai seMera toh hamesha se manna hai Agar koi aap ko praise karta toh aap easily accept karte ho But criticise kare toh offend This is wrong way Every Coin has two sidesAgar mein koi story likh ta hu wo...

Wow AP riya ke sath time spent kar Raha hai(Main-Kitane percent GST waale popcorn lun..Riya-Matlab??Main-Kuch ni samjhne waale samjh gaye honge.. Main leke aata hun..)Samjh gaye bhaiAaaj AP ke funny side dikhai gayiBhabhi to Riya aur AP ki shadi ki jaldi kara dengi bohat samay...

@arib Writer- aribStory incest relation par based hai Story ka point of view main character ki taraf se hai First ek incest story hai aapki jiske ander main character kunal hai aur uski badi maa hai Kunal aur uski badi maa ke bech relation banta aur ending haiPostive point - xes scene...

Born Again For The Cup

@Laila Ali Khan Ek choti lekin impact full story .Liala ek shadhi suda mahila aur ram ek 22 year ka jawan yuvak Dono ka ek alag alag background Laila mein ek tarah vasana dabi thi jo ki bhaahar aa rahi Ram ek sidha sada ladka par fir bhi wo control kho baitha aur akhir mein dono aage badh...

@Rajizexy Writer Aapki story achi hai hinglish mein likha hone ke bawjud story mein spelling ki mistake nahi haiaapne story ka presentation acha nahi diya I mean thode coma full stop isse sentence Read karne mein easy rehte haiBich mein jab para change hua tab read karne mein dikhat hui...

@CChor Writer Sabse pehle toh aapki laikhan shaili achi ye ek iska postive point haiSpelling (wartani)mistake bhi nahi haiEk choti story hai ek modern mahila aur uske husband ki kahani hai ki kaise wo ek apne ghar ke event mein wo intention body parts ke curves show karti hai aur ek...

@LONELYCHAHAK Its a typical x forum story story mein koi build up nahi ,koi twist nahi , koi uniqueness nahi, Story read karte kuch toh feel hota hai but isme kuch feel nahi hu Sab kuch predictableSpelling mistakes haiIts a below average Rating 2/10

@LionHeart007Story ki starting kuch pasand nahi aayi todhi Ajeeb thi Hira ki freind se ladai hogai aur realisation hone par wo chhat se kood gayi iss aap kuch aur way main likh sakte theStory slow starter lagi mujhe, jab faizan aur zabir ka zikar aaya tab laga ki kuch intresting hua waha...

@Raj_sharma Story bohat hi achi hai. starting ki wo tap tap tap se lekar aakhir mein happy ending bohat badhiya tha.Story ka flow ek number tha kahin bore feel na hota starting se lekar ending tak ki pakad achi thi .Jis tarah ka twist aaya story mein ki wo ladki prabhas ki fiance thi aur...