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Ya mera is story py pehly comment ha story bhot he shandar ha. Maza aa gya parh k.Aur ya Jo sub log madhu k bary Mein keh rahy hain wo agr such mein story mein koi twist lay ga to bh ap ko sath sath ni likhna chaiy tha.Beshak ap ny kaha k is story Mein koi hero ya heroine ni ha lakin Phr...

Nice update. Lakin Nafrat krny aur khatm krny ki Jo wajha btai ha wo sahi ni lagi ujy to.

Waaah maza aa gya parh k to Avi ko sub kuch pta chal gya ha Soniya k bary mein bh aur apny paariwar k past k bary mein bh lakin Rajni ko kuch ni btaya. Ab deakhty hain k agy kiya kiya hota ha Abi k sath. Lakin is update mein Poooja ka zikar ni huwa.

Bs mery dimag mein dusri story ka naam tha to is "aur" ko bh mein "ya" he parhta raha.

Maza aa gya. Although is update mein kuch khas ni huwa lakin kabi kabi asa bh krna parta ha. Ab deakhna ho ga k Prince kiya krta ha aur us k sath kiya hota ha.

Ohhhh😔 matlb mein start sy he ghalt parh raha tha.

Ohhh by the way kiya ab tak ki story ka spoiler mily ga. Wo ap ki story kafi lambi ho gai ha to kuch characters jhen sy nikal gy k wo zinda hain ya Mary gy ya Phr kidr hain abi.

Nice update. Wasy Devil bhai story ka naam pehly bh yahi tha ya ab change huwa ha. Mujy laga pehly naam "Hawas ya Badla" tha.

Bhai kitny vote chaiy mein la dyta hu bs start kryn.

😂😂 Ya bh sahi ha lakin har cheez to readers ko pasand ni ati na to hum logon ko Jo cheez na pasand ay wo btana to hota he ha na. Wasy us "karan" ki koi he dy dyn.

Bhai ab mein ap k updates any k bd bh response nh any k bary mein kiya kahu. Ap ko shaid yad ho k meiny 2 sy 3 din pehly aik comment kiya tha k story k writer mein ap ka naam deakhty he log story chor dyty hain ku k I think ab tak ap ki koi bh story complete ni ha. Kuch din pehly ap ny "branded...

Lajawab update thi maza aa gya. Lakin such to ya ha k madhu mujy jaggu k sath pasand ni ayi aur veer/tapan/tiger k sath achi lagti ha. In k bech wo Jo Thora bhot pyar tha wohe acha lagta tha lakin chalo sex kr bh Liya lakin mangalsutra bh utar diya. Any way nice update. Ab deakhty hain k agy...

Bhai maza aa gya update parh kr bs ap ny last wala scene incomplete chor diya usy complete krna chaiy tha.

Bhai buri na manna lakin ap ki sari stories incomplete he hain. Ab to mein story k writer mein ap ka naam deakhty he usy chor dyta hu k ya bh incomplete he ho gi😂😂

Ahhhh Bhai shandar update. Sorry bhai k meiny itny Dino bd comment kr raha hu. Aur bhai story mein religious touch Thora digey ga.

Bhai nh mily lakin adhi jori to bn gai na

Dy do Yr update

Bhai ya kasa end tha. Kajal itna suspence bana k Lai aur end py sub bekar kr diya.

Bhai mujy lagta ha Rishi Natasha ko like krta ha. 😂 😂 Wasy bh deakha Jay to sirf ya dono he reh gy hain single ku ap ki wording sy laga k Kajal Dipaak ko like krta ha.

Bhai maza aa gya to ab avi ko apni maa k bary mein thoda sa shak ho gya Billu ki kahi bt sy. Avi ny John aur Tony ko bh sabk sikha diya aur apny family ko bacha liya. Pooja ka ya sub sochna bh aik tarh sy ghalt ni ha k ya sub Avi ki wajha sy huwa ha. Aur sath he Ritika py humla huwa ha aur wo...