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Ab tak Anita ahista ahista apni sharafat ko tyag karne lag gayi thi aur voh bhi Kavya ki jhanse me bharpur aa chuki thi!Kavya : kyon aage badhni hai ki nahi?Anita kuch kahi nahi, lekin hont dabaye sharma zaroor rahi thi.Is khushi ki mauke pe Kavya ab Pratap ke kacche ko bhi niche kar deti...

Pratap agle hi pal bistar se ek jhatke, me chaadar ko baju sarkake uth jaata hain aur seedhe khada ho jaata hain. Unhe ekdam normal dekhke Anita hairan ho gayi aur aankhen ekdam badi badi..."Aaaap to ekdam thik....hh...hai.."Anita ki khargosh jaisi masoom bhav dekhke dono Kavya aur Pratap...

Update 23Agar ghar me mayusi ka aalam tha, to vaha hospital me mahol hi nirali thi!Ab kareeb raat ke 11 baj rahe the aur Kavya is baar ward ke darwaze pe dastak de hi deti hain aur foran Anita darwaze ko kholke, muskurake use dekhti hain.Anita : are Kavyaji, aap ghar nahi gayi ab tak...

Main sehmat hoon aapse bro.

Bilkul bhi bura nahi maana maine, sabhi points logical hain aur ek reader analysis se lekhak aur bhi encouraged mehsoos karta hain :)

Agle update par kaam chal raha hai aur jald prastuti lega.Bane rahiye saath!

Aapke sabhi points satyavachan hai aur apne ne jis khubsurti se analysis kiye hain, uske liye dil se shukriya aapko!In sabhi points ko madhe nazar rakhte huye main kahani ko zaroor aage badhunga :)

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Vaha ghar me :"Rakesh??? Nalini, Neelima?? Chalo aajao dinner tayyar hai!"Lekin tabhi seediyon se Karuna keval Neelima ko niche aate huye dekhti hain. Karuna hairani se kuch sochne lagi aur phir keh uthi..Karuna : are apni behn aur bhayiya ko bhi bula le, kahan hai dono?Neelima : Nalini...

Update 22"Shit.... sorry bhayiya!"Nalini ki mooh se yeh baat aise nikal jaati hain, jise Rakesh bade asani se sun leta hain aur apne huliya ko thik karne me lag jaata hain. Lekin Nalini ki nazron se voh harkat bhale hi gum ho gayi ho, par uski mann se nahin jaa payi.Lekin jab Rakesh ko...

Doston, aap sabka dil se shurkiya is kahani ko itna sneh dene ke liye.Ek gusthaki ki maafi chahunga aap sab se, kyonki kahani incest ke alava thoda bahut yaha vaha bhatak sakta hain, lekin haan sab kuch context ke anusar hoga!Khair, agla update bahut jald!

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Update 21"Maan gaye babuji aapko!" Kavya ek kaatil ada ke saath kehne lagi, lekin phir ek sawal uske mann me aayi.Kavya : vaise babuji aapne doctor ko kaise pataya?Pratap : are yeh doctor bhi ek purana dost hai! Saara natak use bhi malum hai bahu.Kavya : hmmmmm, kya yeh sab aapne..ummmm...

Doston, kahani incest pe hi focussed rahega aur adultery ki zyada tar koi gunjaish hi nahi hogi.Agla update jald prastuti lega!Har kisam ke reviews paake main bahut khush hoon!

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Kamre ki taapmaan ka asar yeh tha ke dono ke chehre ek dusre ke nazdeek aane lage aur honton ke jode ek dusre se bad kuch hi doori pe the ke tabhi..."Payal meri jadoo jagati hain, tujhko bulati hain oye oye main kya karoon! Zoom zoom zoom"Neelima ki ringtone aaise samay baj uthi ke dono hosh...

Vapas vartmaan me :Raghuvir : hmmmm (beti ki peeth sehlate huye) vaise galat baat hai! Apne sasur ko to tune apne pitah se upar darja de diya! (krodhit hone ka natak karte huye)Kavya : are mere pujniya pitaji! Kya karoon... Ab jaidaat paane ke liye unhe sar pe chadhani to paregi! Vaise...

Update 20Nalini ki dil tezi se dhadak uthi, use apni hi kaano me yakeen hi nahi hui.."Maa kya keh rahi hai aap?? Pappa kaise aur kahaan hai abhi??"Karuna bas udasi ke saath kehne lagi.."Unka dhakila abhi ek acche se hospital me ho gaya hain, main to nikal rahi hoon Neelima ke saath, tu...

Aap sabko teh dil se shurkiya!Agla update jald prastuti lega...

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