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agla update parso sham tak ajayega (edit)

bhailogo maine phele bhi kaha hai apke suggestions acha ya bura jo bhi uska pura swagat hai lekin mere message box mai yaha par kripya kar ke kahani par comment kare mujhe ye mat bataiye ki kya likhna hai kaise likhna hai. bura mane wali bat nahi hai lekin bhot demotivate hota hai. apko pata...

bhai jaldbaji nahi kar raha hu mujhe jaise ata hai mai waisa hi likhunga. sayad yeh kahani fir tumhare liye nahi haikoi bat nahi bhot sari kahani iss forum mai mil jayegi jo bhi pasand aye padh lo aur bhai rahi bat likhne ki toh tumne khud ek bhi kahani nahi likhi aur mujhe sikha rahe ho.

mega update given

*** aise hi din pai din nikalte chale gaye ab rathore aur somya jaise do jism ek jan the dono din ke sarey kam nahane sai lekar khana khaney tak, sone sai lekar uthne tak, tv dekhne sai lekar exercise karne tak, sath hi kartey ab unhe alag karna namoomkin tha jaise yin n yang ho gaye ho. rathore...

aj rat tak final update ajayegaindex bhi update kardunga

ab agey *** rathore aur somya abhi bhi ek dusre sai chiptey huye sofe pai bilkul nange pade huye the dono ki sanse tej thi aur abhi bhi rathore ka soya hua lund somya ki chut mai dhasha hua tha dono jhadne ke bad bhi alag hone ke liye tayar nahi the. itne mai waha subham ajata hai "malik khana...

aj rat karta hu kuch din sai busy tha novel padhra tha ek

ab agey ... "sun bed sheet badlane ke bad living room mai drinks dejana" "ji malik" rathore sofe pai betha hua tha aur uski beti uski jhango par waise toh ek bar ko ye sunne mai kitna masoom lag ra hoga lekin apko toh pata hi hai somya koi choti bachi nahi bhare badan ki jawan aurat hai. aur...

*** ab agey rathore chudayi ke bad bed pe somya ke sath nasta kar ke uth ke apni daily exercise karne nikal jata hai somya abhi bhi bed pai hi padi thi rathore nai usse kaha bhi tha uth jao subham office jane sai phele gandi bed sheet aur room wagerah saf kar dega lekin somya sai bed pai sai...

भाई आपतो BEST WRITER हो.. इतनी जल्दी END मत करो, अभी तो STORY शुरु भी नहीं हुई है और आप एन्ड कर रहो अभी तो स्टोरी बहुत आगे जा सकती है BEST WRITER को आईडिया किया दिया जाए...... फिर भी अगर फिनिश करके नई स्टोरी स्टार्ट करो तो यही theam रखना मतलब Married Daughter & Father Love affair,lust,and...

agla update kal ayega bhaiyo pata hai late hai ab is story ka end bhi hone wala hai sayad agle update mai nahi but uske ek adh update bad kyuki mai iss story ko faltu mai khich ke repetitive nahi banana chahta iske bad ek do aur story ideas hai mere dimag mai issi domination theme ke unhe bad...

Thanks

Thanks everyone for the support!cheers

update kar diya enjoy

ab agey *** agli subah tak subham kursi par bandha hua tha aur use abhi bus thodi der phele hi jake thodi nind ayi thi kyuki puri raat toh kamra uske sasur ji aur biwi ki chudai ki awazo sai gunz raha tha subah ke karib 5 baje the aur rathore ki ankh khul jati hai rathore nai aj pure rat apni...

back to back teen updates dediye enjoy

Rathore wapas sai bed pai let jata hai somya bhi kampte pero sai piche piche bed par wapas chali jati hai "somya pls nahi ye galat hai" rathore wapas sai bed pai sai utar ke ek thapad khich ke aur usme laga deta hai "TU TOH CHUPI REH GANDU SAHI GALAT MAT SIKHA HUME" subham nai apni puri life...

Somya apne bed pai bethi hui lal saree mai ghunghat liye apne pitaji ka intezaar kar rahi thi Darashal usse iss bat ka Matlab bhi nahi pata tha Ki ghunghat odh kar kiska aur kyu intejar kiye jata Hai lekin pita ji nai kaha tha toh unka hukum kaise tal deapni suhagrat mai toh woh apne pati ke...

bonus update thodi der mai aj rat hi post karta hu