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Great update with the bang...der aaye par durusht aaye...heartly welcome bro...good to see u back...

Bro aap apni thread(story) ke left hand side se "incest" ka report please hata do...aur "full adultery" ka report laga do...toh yeh story faadu hogi...apke XP se bhi jyada views milege...kyunki yeh story yeh bata rahi hai ke incest kam excited hai aur adultery jyada...All the best...

Heavenly love...:kiss1::yourock:

Relax brothers...sabar ka phal hamesha meetha hota hai...aakar story jabardast hai...toh agla update bhi der se hi sahi lekin jabardast aayega....let us except and make space for it...Nnnnjjjooy...:drummer:

If you take critic as an inspiration...then is a great pedigree in you as a writer...All the best...:asw1:

It's not about emotional quotient bro...story is good...but outer elements are making the story out of the context...If numbers do matters for you...then your story is more than the great...chill bro...It was just my personal opinion...don't want to hurt anybody...Nnjoy. ..

Bhaiya ji...Aap ki story main emotions aur feelings bilkul nahin hai...ishe fantasy bhi nahin kaha jaa sakta...sirf aur sirf maze le ne aur dene ki story hai...no interfaith sex only hawas...vasna...kanjar...that's it...then also people like it...it's xforum...but not true to its spirit...

Such main yaar...Yeh puri fantasy hai...nahi adultery...nahi incest...ek roller coaster ride...so don't apply brains...just enjoy...nice...

Ghar ki murgi daal barabar...yahan Rohit hero ke naam pe "Sirf ghar ki Daal hai"...Maa aur Bahnen sirf masaledar Murgi hai...baharwalo ke liye...

Bhai saheb...ish kahani main kahani jo bhi post kar raha hai...woh bas readers ki maze le raha hai...kyunki kahani inki nahi hai...sirf copy and paste hai...so don't blame the story...enjoy it as fantasy...nothing more...

Great beginning to a erotic story...superb.

Bhai logo...ish kahani main hero jaisa kuch nahi...Yeh naa hi Adultery hai...naa hi Incest...sirf aur sirf Fantasy hai...so enjoy as a Joy Ride...that's it...

Great going bro...love is getting its meaning...very good...

Yeh hui na baat bhaijaan...faadu update diya hai...pehli baar apna hero behka hai...lekin situation demands that..der aaye durusht aaye...Welcome back...

Yeh kahani ekdum alag aur hatke hai...pyar...gyan...seekh...anubhav...samarpan...ka behtareen misharan hai...please continue bro...sirf sex story hi nahi...ek sache aur nischal prem ka sagam...pyar...ek baar...pyar...100 baar..:grouphug:

Enigma bhai...take your time...sometimes good and better update take its needed time...no worries...nanihal had given us "Bigdail Ghodi", the best is about to come...Take care...All the best...:angel4:

Chalo apne hero ko consolation prize toh mila...good...very good...

Great tuning...pyar ke sath main action...thrill...aur maza..mast hai bhai.

Congrats bro...:toohappy:

Manisha ki kuvari gaand uncle ne apne 10 inch lund se mar le...saumya ki badi gaand bahut dino badh dono police walon ne apne 10 inch lund se mar le...toh apna hero matlab Gandu apne 8 ya 9 inch lund se sirf muth marega. ..Yehi hero ka role hai...kyunki abh hero toh apne chote lund yahi dusre ke...