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Kya kahani ka end ho gaya hai? Jo abhi se aap title ko judge kar rahe ho? Kya Priya aur Aarush ne sex kar liya aur fir ek doosre se alag ho gaye jo usse aap hawas keh rahe ho? Let the story get completed aur tab pata chal jaayega ke ye Love story hai ya lust story?Don't get offended, but...

Your comment is a true reflection of your mentality. Pehli baat to Lekhak kuchh bhi likhe ye uski marzi hai kyonki tum writer ko paise nahi de rahe aur agar zyada knowledge hai to khud ek story likh lo achhe se title ke saath.Doosri baat, agar tumhe randipan aur pyaar mein fark nahi pata to...

Achha likh rahe ho dost bas request hai ke Rihan ki sagi behno ko baahar matt sex karwana. Good going 👍.

Kahani ka tag change karwao moderator se bolke. Ye Incest nahi Adultery story hai.

Chipka diya hai bhai. Uss post ke neeche Report par jaake mods ko Comment Pin karne ko bol do. Har page par sabse oopar index hi dikhega.

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Iss kahani ki main villain Dev Ki Maa hi hai. Uske liye Dev ko chhodkar sabhi Ram jaise hain aur Dev Raavan. Do baar usne Unn teenon kameene bhaiyon ko maaf kiya tha ye jaante huye bhi ke un logon ne Dev ke andar Cancer ki beemari paida ki thi. Saloni aur Pari ki izzat lootna chahte the wo...

Abbe saala, ye to ajab bakchodi ho gayi. Matlab present mein jo Samar Coma mein leta hua hai wo 10 maheene baad ka Scene hai. Ek nayi choot ka bhi intezaam hone hi waala hai joki koyi aur nahi balki Geeta Mami khud hai. Ye saala Madan Mama, bahute kameena nikla, matlab Geeta ka murder karwa dena...

Bas yahi kahunga ke Riya chahe jitno se bhi chude par at least Anuj ko sab sach pata chalna hi chahiye ke uski biwi kitni badi Randi hai. Anuj ke baare mein baat par jiss tarah Riya ne react kiya aur oopar se Anuj ne maafi bhi maangi, uss hisaab se Anuj ko bhi poora hakk hai jaan ne ka ke Riya...

Bhai ek nayi story fir shuru kar di aapne? Sach kahun to mujhe laga hi tha ke aap pichli stories ko complete nahi karenge, but aapne kaha bhi tha ke aap iss baar sabhi stories ko ant tak zaroor pahunchayenga. Khair, Gyan nahi pelunga kyonki writer aap hain to aapki marzi but bhai aapka likhne ka...

Achha laga aapne story restart ki. Ab original writer jaisa to koyi likh hi nahi sakta. Umeed hai iss baar aap story complete karoge.Baaki ye samajh nahi aaya ke Samar hospital kaise pahuncha. Wo to Miles ko maarne ke baad sadak par khada Auto dhoond raha tha naa. Khair, jiss ladki ne Samar ke...

Superb Story @komalkh ji... Keep writing!!

To Vijay Kothe se bhaag chuka hai. Ab dekhna hai ke wo aage apni zindagi ko kaise sahi track par laata hai Kyonki uska safar aasan nahi hone waala. Wahin te koyi aur hi aadmi enter hua hai kahani mein joki main villain dikhayi padta hai. Lagta hai isiki wajah se Shweta Kothe par hai. Bas umeed...

Bahot shandar update bhai. Aap kuchh logon ke comments se niraash hokar story band naa kre. Mujhe nahi lagta aap jaise experience writer ko mujhe kuchh kehne ki zaroorat hai. Aap pehle bhi kaafi shaandar kahaniyan likhte rahe hain. Bas ussiko continue kijiye. By the way iske complete hone ke...

Saloni aur Shikha milkar Dev ki gend maarkar hi rahengi. Abhi to Sona aur Richa ka koyi ata pata nahi hai. Zaroor wo dono bhi kuchh na kuchh dhamaka zaroor karengi, specially Richa ka mujhe lag raha hai ke zaroor koyi panga hoga. Khair, Masoom to lage ki :sex: iss cheez ki ichha rakhti hai. Aur...

Awesome Update Bhai.

Bhai please story ko continue karo, chaahe update derr se dena but itni shaandar story incomplete nahi rehni chahiye.

You're writing a wonderful story brother. The description is amazing with superb narration. Either its the character of main lead Wolf or Siya or even the auto driver. You've narrated everything so nicely that the story looks amazing. Just try to increase the frequency of updates, everything...

Bohot badiya update bhai. Par kahin K Dev ko chhoot dekar Dev ne galti to nahi kardi. Ab wo paagal saand pata nahi kis kis ke khet mein aatank machayega :laugh:. Chalo badiya hai ke Amit aur uske bhaiyon ka sach sabke saamne aa gaya. Waise iss baar agar Dev ki Maa ne un teeno bhaiyon ko maaf...

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