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Kaam hote hi story khtm hai dost...ab bolo kya chahte ho ki story jaldi khtm ho...

Thnks parkas

Thank u...mother son ki jb likhugi tb likhugi abhi filhal ise pdhiye...isme b mja aayega apko...

Thnks for coment frnd...wese jeet kisi ki bhi ho jeet rahul ki hi hone hai bss ya to thoda jaldi ya late...pr inhe pta nhi hai ki..neha nhi janti ki rahul use ku bhejna chahta...rahul n janta ki neha ku nhi jaa rha...or krega kya...neha ka kidnap krega...bola to usne...shekhar ka dekhte hai kya...

Pahle update me uska link hai.

Are suno...jo apne ye story likhi thi uske pagle no 101 par last update hai.. ap pls use edit krke wha is story ka link daal dijiye...or ek link apki story ke last me. Plss

Update 3Shweta andar jaa chuki thi...lekin bahar neha ne rahul ka lund chaat chaar kr pura saaf kr diya...or akhir me rahul ke supade pr 2 kiss krke neha uthti hai..Rahul-neha...tere honto pr lga hai wo... Neha mobile ka camera on krke dekhti hai...neha ke honto pr rahul ke virya ka kuch...

Thnks dost...apka hi intjar tha bs...mai apka naam yad kr rhi thi...mene apko kaha tha msg me ki start krugi to apko btaugi pr nam yad n aarha tha..ap aagya achha lga...kosis krugi story ko achhe se likhne ki...

UodUpdate to ready hai...chahu to ab dedu...chek krke bs post krna hai...pr soch rhi hu thoda or mirch masala daalkr hi post kru

Thnks sir....apko nirasha nhi hogi is bar bhi kahani se

Thnks sir... Mujhe khushi hui jankr ki ap jaise or bhi writer abhi tk hai is story ke.. hm bhi apke fan ho gye a sir ji.isi trh support krte rahiyega..suggestion dena bbi glt nhi hai ho skta hai koi suggestion achha ho to use story me add kr skte h...fir bhi apko bht bht dhyanwad...story pdhte...

Thnks golu ji...kosis to achha hi likhne ki hai...baki dekhte hai kya hota.h

Thnnks

Ji...dhyan rkhugi

Abbi difrnt krna mushkil hai sir...kuki story to wha bhi lgbhg puri hi ho chuki thi...sakay mila to nyi story hogi tb sb difrtnt hoga

Raat tk

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Thnks dost...thoda time mila to ise pure krne ki kosis ki bs..

Thnks katappa ji...apka support chahiye story ko.or batter bnane ki kosis krugu

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