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Sir kuch hi behtreen stories h jo mai pdta hu... Unme se ye 1 h ... Start mai lga ki ye karma series ki copy h... Par writer ke bare mai kya khu unhone story esi ghumai ki story ki puri rup-rekha hi karma series se ulti ghuma di... Hates of writer ko

Sir thanks to aap ko..... Itni achi story likhne ke liye

Sir ji apka bhut bada wala fan hu mai Or apki story attitude ka to deewana hu.... Apko shyad jhut lge pr apki story 2 baar pad chuka hu.... Or 3 baar pad rha hu.... Apki writing skill hi esi h jisse kuch sikhne ko milta h

Sir apki story to achi h.... Lekin late update ke kaaran concentration bna nhi rhta isliye apko lg rha h ki comments kam aa rhe h.... Or isme hum readere ki bhi koi galti nhi h... Kyuki story ko pdne ka maza ek flow mai hi aata h... Flow tuta to story ka maza bhi nhi aata.... Apse ye nhi kah...

Sir, story mai 1 hi heroin rkhna ho ske to.... Jyada heroin hone pr story esi ho jati h jaise hero hero na hokr kamdev ho..... Or story ki line bigad jati h esa mera manna h... Or apki story fantabulous chal rhi h... Plz ye hi ek request h ki heroin ka 1 hi rkhe . .. Story ko incest ya...

Sir ji ab to update bnta h... Kyuki india final mai phuch hi gyi.... Or mrinal ke kuch dialog jrur rkhna ache wale agr ho ske to.... Baki to apke haath se hilane pr depend krta h... Kalam ko

Sir ji maza aa gya kya baat khi h... Ye bhi bilkul ek update jaisa lga.... Or apka vo dialog loda hilane mai or kalam hilane mai bhut fark hota h. .... Maza aa gya

Sir update nhi aaya abhi tk...

Bhai hindi mai translate krke upload kr do...

Sir .... zeeshan 2 bhi h kya apke pass.... Agr h to upload kr dijiye

Bhai story achi h.... Lekin update bhut chote h.... Pdna start krte hi end hi jata h

Thanks sir

Bhai kisi ko pta h ki chikta chiraag kaisi story h.... Means adultry h ya incest h ya fantasy h ya thriller h

Sir ramzaan ke baad agni varsha series.... Intezaar rhega apka

Sir ji super hit story h.... Aaj morning mai pdna start kiya.. Ab jakr khatam hui h... Office mai pura din yhi pdta rha mai.... Is pr to movie banani chahiye 7 part to normaly ban jayenge... Apki story chamatkar ka to fan tha hi. .. Ab to apka bhi fan ho gya hu.... Hats off u sir

Thanks sir

Sir, bhukh hadtaal pr jana hi padega kya ab..... Humari maange puri nhi hi rhi h..... Sir agni varsha series ka bhi kuch kare..

Thanks sir

Mam bura mat manna.... Pr story mai ab kuch maza nhi aa rha ..... Esa lg rha h ki story ek hi jagah pr ruk gyi h.... Aage hi nhi bad rhi h.....na kuch action, na hi suspense, na hi thrill or na hi comedy.... Esa lag rha hi ki aap ek hi baat ko lamba khichte ja rhe ho.... Apki story ka plot bhut...

((Meri maang puri kro ..... Meri maang puri kro.... )) Sir agni varsha series ka kya hua.... Kuch meri maango pr bhi gor kro..... Agr maang puri nhi hue to mai BHUK HADTAAL pr baith jaunga...... Just joking sir.... time mile to uska bhi kuch krna....