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Menu lagda tusi mera comment padhya nahi changi tarah. I said "awesome start... kudos for a different flavour" and last te fer tareef kiti. Meri oh aadat nahi ke sirf nuks hi kadha kise story vich. I know ek writer layi appreciation di ehmiyat hundi aa. Last update was also very good. Keep on...

Awesome start.. Kudos for a different flavor.I agree that part was little odd when she talked to her mother in law and maasi about sex.Another thing I want to say, bhave story short hi si par je zoya de dialogue ohdi asal zubaan vich hunde tan story hor jyada realistic lagdi. Urdu zubaan...

I have explained my situation in introduction. Thanks for appreciation.

"Dhadammmmmmmmmm....." ohde toofani gahsseya karke mera santulan vigad geya te meri shalwar aje vi mere pairan vich payi honn karke raddi kagaza te dabbeya te dher te jaa diggi. Ohda lun "ptukk" di awaaz naal meri fuddi cho bahar aa gya. Injh laggya jive koi supna tutteya hove."Bhaine...

Badiya thodia galtian labhia. Main te socheya si vahwa labhngia lol. Kyuki nobody is perfect. Anyways thanks for the feedback. Sad to see that you didnt even said few good words about the story. No worries.Hun ehna loopholes bare: 1. Sade weleya ch white kameez te grey ya blue shalwar kayia...

Benaam KhatSaria kitaban kadh ke apne bag nu jhaadna har aitwaar da nem se mera. Fer kaapian kitaban nu dina mutabik pauna ke kehri kis din padhayi jani hai te kehri kis din. Kitaban kadhke bag jhaadeya hi ke ohde vicho ik rukka thalle diggeya."Eh ki hai?" Mann vich sochdi ne oh kagaz jo...

Jee Aayea Nu Dosto,Main ek mini kahania di ladhi di shuruwaat karn ja rahi haan. Jis de vich koshish eh rahugi ke story ek ya do updates vich complete kar diti jave. Mera eh kahania likhan da maksad eh ke lammi kahani likhan vich kuch chir picho story likhan vich interest mar janda hai te...