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Dhire hai assi hai. Ap apki flow me likhte rahiye good luck

Update badia tha. Waisa apka update hamashia assa hota hai. I enjoyed the part ki rahul and shweta payer kar raha he ar dar bhi raha he kahi deviya na paker le kuki mujhe khullam khullah se jada aysa payer hi assi lagti he jesme romance bhi hota hay excitement hota hay or dar bhi. Mai wait kar...

Nice update. U deserve a special thanks ki ap itne muskilo me vi readers k liye likh rahe ho. E story bohot assa ja rahi the. Esia end ho jayage jase ki apne kaha parke bura lagi but sab assi chij ka to end hota hi he. But also excited for your upcoming story. Waise apki upcoming story ki name...

Koi bat nehi bhai. Sotti update hi sahi par story to challu rehegi. Sorry for your loss. Take ur time. Hum intejar karenge

Congrats bro??

agree with u bro. We should understand ankita ji problem or manik ji ne to accha hi likh raha he to ankita ji ko pherse e story ko likhne ka request karna sayed thik nehi though o likhte to sayed alag hi hota bcz har ek ka najaria alag hi hota ha. But good job manik ji and like to request...

This story is good. But could be far better according to me. You just left choti chachi after creating good chemistry between hero and chachi. And there was also a scope to explore more with ruhi didi and purvi. It seem to me that u are in a hurry to finish this story. But overall its a good one.

Apa jitna v update do kam hi lagta hai. Koi bat nehi update was nice. Waiting for next

Nice story. Dekhte he age kay hota hai.

Bhai time nikalke update dia karo. Apki kahani bahot khubsurat hai but update na dene pe maja kharab ho raha hai. Please bhai.

Happy independence Day To all?? ??????????????

Koi bat nei dost. U know it has become a habit to read ur update daily. Waiting eagerly. ?

I also agree. Kuiki is kahani esi bajayse auro sex kahaniyo se alag he. Full of emotions, drama and off course sex with detail. Good work. ?Waiting for next.

Gteat story. But der se update dene se maza kharab hota he. Bhai try korna ki har do ya tin din me e update de sako. Like the love angle of sonam and avi.

Nice update. But guessing upcoming update will be much more naughty. ???. Waiting for next

Baria hai. Apki us story ka bi intezar rehagi. Lagti hai bohot sundar and romanchak hogi. Par gujarish rehegi ki ap es story AAAHHH…SISAK JAWANI KI (WITH MANIK)(THIRD PART) ko ek assichi si end dey.

Bhai ap apki tarah lekhae jao. E to bas meri bichar thi. You know as i said my previous comment ki ye story mere dil ke karib he to agar kuch b thosa alag lage to comment kar deti hu. Agar apko bura laga ho to me pherse sorry kehe rahi hu.

Me pehelye sorry bol leti hun e mere bichar hai ki sab kuch jaldi khul gaya. Es se pehele rahul or shweta ghar opas ana or neha ke change of behavior dikha ja chakta tha. Ap bol reheho neha ke behavior me badlaov ayega jo avi thk dikha nehi but umid he ayge aiaga. abto sab khullam khula ho gaya...

Bhai update kab tak aiaga? Waiting eagerly.

Awesome but feeling sad for neha. Thank u so much again ki ap her din update dete ho. Apke update ka mujhe intejar reheti hai. Waiting for next update.