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Bahut hi behtareen kahani thi anand bhai aur bahut hi khubsurat aapki lekhni thi. Really outstanding,,,,भाग 21

Main Sanju bhaiya se puri tarah sahmat hu ki kahani ko thoda jaldi samaapt kar diya aapne. Kuch cheezo par thoda aur detail me batane ki zarurat thi lekin khair jo bhi hai wo bhi apne aap me ek lajawaab hai,,,

Riya par hi sabse zyada shak tha kyoki motive of murder usi ke paas tha, halaaki aapne is tareeke se likha ki kayi logo ko suspect ke roop me dekhne lage the hum log. Jaise ki raja...uske paas bhi apne bade bhai ko maarne ka motive tha. Khair jorawar ka charitra yakeenan behad hi ghranit tha aur uske charitra ko aur bhi zyada ghranit banane wali rajni hi thi jisne kamsin ladkiyo ko uski hawas ka shikaar banane ka beeda sa utha rakha tha. Riya ne jorawar ke sath sath apni maa ko bhi maar kar bilkul bhi galat nahi kiya,,,,

Outstanding story bhai, ummid karta hu aage bhi aisi behtareen story aapke dwara padhne ko milti rahengi,,,,
