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Fantasy त्रिकाल हरण Trikal Haran (१९५८)

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neel_devil

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Trikal Haran (1958)
ये कहानी पूरी काल्पनिक नहीं है ! गीतांजलि के जीवनको इस कहांनी में लीखा गया है ! कुछ पात्र कहांनी के लिए जोड़े गाए है ! आशा करता हूं आपको कहांनी पसंद आएगी !
 
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Aaj meriat hotel pura bhara hua tha.....parking full thi hotel ke naukar har mehmaan ka dhyan rakh rahe the.....pure sheher ke bade bade log jani mani hastiya maujed the is shandar party me.....har koi Mr. Dev ki tarakki ki tareef kar raha tha....kai log to bas Mr. Dev ke khatir aaye the....party ka hissa banane ke liye kai log aaye the.

Ye party koi aam party nahi thi bahot khas vajah thi......Mr. Dev Prakash Thakur ke karobar ki tarakki ki party thi.....jisme shamil hona hi ek garva ki baat thi.....party me shamil uske dost dushman sab maujud the.

Stage par sheher ke chuninda bade baithe the.....baki sab stage ke aage bade hall me apni apni khursiyo par baith kar davat ka maza lut rahe the.

Dev sabko apni tarakki ki kahani bata raha tha.....uski kahani thi hi vaisi 10 saal pehle apne pita ki maut ke baad dev apni maa ke sath is sheher me aaya tha khali haat.....apni mehnat or lagan se usne in 10 salo me aasman ko chu liya tha.

Party me maujood har vo shaks dev ki wahwa kar raha tha.....or sharab ke saath sath davat me mashgul the.

Dev ke sath sath uski patni Geeta bhi sab mehmano se milkar shukriya ada kar rahi thi.....itni shano shaukath party me sabka dhyaan Geetanjali ki khubsurati par tha....behad haseen khubsurat dikh rahi thi aaj Geetanjali....vaha maujood ameer khandaan ki kai ladkiya Dev Ko chahati thi unhe to Geeta se jalan ho rahi thi.

Dev ne Kala suit pehna tha vahi Geetanjali ne Lal rang ka ghagra choli or upar pardarshi pallu odhe kalai me chudiya gale me mangalsutra latakata hua....mathe pe Dev ke Naam ka sindur uski khubsurati or badha rahi thi....Reshmi baal hava ke zhoke ke sath zulate huye uske Kano me pehna hua zhumka chamak Raha tha.

Dev jaise aakarshak vyakti Ke sath Geetanjali mohak lag rahi thi.....jaise dono ek duje ke liye bane ho.

Dev ki umra 25 saal ki thi vahi Geeta 23 saal ki...dev ki shadi ke liye to sheher se bahot bade khandano se rishte aate the....par usne gitanjali se shadi ki.....vo to ek hatta katta khubsurat raees mard hone ke bavjood behad hoshiyar he.....khud ke balbute par itni tarakki dev ke siva koi kar nahi pata.

Kone ke ek table par ek shaksh Mr. Pratap khatri lagatar daru pita hua dev ko ghur raha tha.....dev ki tarakki se vo shaks jalta tha.....gusse se vo lagatar daru ka gilas khatam karta or firse bottle se daru gilas me bhar raha tha.....tabhi ek aadmi nashe me zhulta hua samne khali khursi par baith gaya or gilas me daru dalate huye bola.

"Lagta he akele ho tum kya me yaha baitht sakta hu"

Pratap ne us insaan ko dekha to vo bahot nashe me tha...uski juban fisal rahi thi.

Mr. Pratap - janab aap baithne ke baad puch rahe ho ! ....us insaan ne daru ka pura gilas khali kar diya or apne daat nikal kar hasane laga.....uske huliye se pratap ko tajub hua.....kyunki itni badi party he or ye kon mamoli shaks he kaise ise andar aane diya.

Mr. Pratap - janab aapne bahot pi rakhi he vaise kya naam he aapka !

Vo insaan firse apna gilas me sharab ki puri bottle khali kar di or bola.

"naam me kya Rakha he saab"

Pratap zhuta muskuraya or apna gilas hoton ko laga kar sharab pine laga.....uski nazar dev par hi thi uski tarakki se Pratap ka kaleja chir Raha tha....tabhi samne wala insaan bola.

aadmi - sala kam bakhat sharab khatam hui gava me lekar aavat he bottle tab tak meri khursi par kisiko baithane mat deyo ! .....pratap uski harkato se hairan hua....vo insaan ladkhadata hua chala gaya......pratap ek 45 saal ka insaan tha dev se 20 saal bada or unka to pukhto se chala hua karobar dev jaisa hi tha par dev ke mukable Mr. Pratab ka karobar kum par Raha tha.....unki tarakke bhi utni nahi thi.

Tabhi unke table ke samne Mr. Dev thakur aaye.

Mr. Dev - Hello Pratap ji yaha aane ke liye bahot bahot shukriya ! ......mr. pratap khada hua....usne apna haat dev ke badhaye huye haat se milaya.

Mr. Pratap - dev tune invite jo kiya tha aana hi pada ! ......Mr. pratap chehre par zhuti muskurahat faila ke baat karne lage.

Dev - matlab nyota nahi bhejta to aap aate n
 
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Dev - matlab nyota nahi bhejta to aap aate nahi !

Mr. Pratap - tab to jarur aata !

Dev - hahaha muze maloom he ye meri patni geetanjali he ! ......mr. pratap ne apni nazare dev ke baju me khadi ladki par dali or apna haat aage badhaya.....geetanjali ne bhi muskurake mr. Pratap se haat milaya.

Geetanjali - aapse milkar accha laga Pratap ji ! ....pratap uski khubsurati dekh or uske haton ka naram ehsaas se hi pagal ho gaya....Pratap ji ki Nazar Geeta ke jism par ghumane lagi....geetanjali ke gulabi hont ubhare huye mumme uski khubasurati or badha rahi thi

Mr. Pratap - muze bhi aapse milkar khushi hui miss geetanjali ji ! .....dono vaha se chale gaye....pratap vahi khada unhe jata hua dekhta raha.....uski lachakati kamsin chikni kamar matakati hui gaand dekh kar Mr. Pratap ko nasha sa hone laga.....bas dekh hi sakta tha pratap uske dusham ki khubsurat patni ko pratap or jalne laga dev se.

Tabhi vo insaan daru ki bottle lekar vapas aaya....usne dekha to pratap ki bhi sharab khatam ho chuki he....usne apni bottle se sharab pratap ke gilas me dali....par pratap kahi kho gaya tha....usne pratap ki nazaro ka picha kiya to muskurake bola.

aadmi - aapke beti ke umar ki he ! .....ramesh ki baton se pratap hosh me aaya.....or hadbadate huye bola.

Mr. Pratap - ky ky kya matlab...... me to.... ! .....usne daat nikalke hasate huye pura gilas khatam kar diya.....pratap apni galti chipane ki koshish karte huye sharab pine laga.

aadmi - mast maal he na Dev ki patni ! .....pratap ke pasine chutne lage agar kisine sun liya to bahot bura hoga.

Mr. Pratap - kya bol rahe ho tum koi sun lega ! .....aadmi ne jeb se cigrett nikali or jalate huye apni nigaho se pratap ko ishare se Dev ki patni ki taraf dekhne ko kaha.

aadmi - yaha to sab Nashe me he fokat ki sharab jo Mili he koi nahi sunega dekho Saab sali kya mast maal he ekdum kamsin Kali chalte waqt gaand to aise lachak rahi he jaise abtak gaand nahi marvai ! .....ye sunkar pratap ji ke to hosh hi ud Gaye....unhone Apne aas pass nazare ferai.....to koi sunane wala nahi tha.....firse unki nazare Apne aap samne kisise baat Karti hui Geetanjali Dev Thakur par gai.

waah sach me kayamat kamsin nangi kamar......or halki si ubhari hui gaand dekh Pratap ji ka land harkat me aa Gaya....aaahhh kitni Mulayam gori gaand hogi Geetanjali ki.....sach me gaand nahi chodi hogi isliye fuli nahi.

Mr. Pratap - Han sahi keh Raha he tu !

aadmi - Saab kya irada he ! .....uski batein sun Pratap ji hadbadaye.

Mr. Pratap - k k kyaa matlab kya irada mera koi irada nahi he ! ......Mr. Pratap ji ke mathe pe pasina chalakne laga.....us aadmi ne hasate huye sharab ka gilas khatam kar diya.

aadmi - bahot Purana dost lagta he aapka dev ! ......pratap ne is baar ek hi zhatke me pura gilas khali kar diya.

Mr. Pratap - dushman he mera dev ! .....ramesh ne firse dono ke gilas sharab se bhar diye.

aadmi - to isliye uski patni ko ghur rahe the vaise dekhiye kaisi mast maal he ! .....pratap ne apni nazare ghumai.....tab dev or geetanjali kisise batein kar rahe the......pratap ki aankhon me bas geetanjali ka hi jism tha.....kisise baat Karti hui Gitanjali ki kamsin kamariya or halke ubhare matakate kulhe firse unhe garam karne lage.

Mr. Pratap - bahot mast kacchi Kali he kash mere niche ek baar aajaye to sari kasar nikalunga !

aadmi - hahaha aapki umar dekhiye uski dekhiye kaha vo kamsin kali or kaha aap jaisa budha uske liye to dev hi accha he ! ......pratap ne firse gilas bhar liya.....or pite huye gusse me bola.

Mr. Pratap - umar par mat ja ek baar ye mil jaye na to puri raat aise thokunga ki dusare din chal bhi na payegi isko bistar par sulane ke liye to me kitni bhi keemat de sakta hu !

aadmi - itni pasand aai kya tumhare dushman dev ki biwi aapko saab!

Mr. Pratap - han badi kamsin khubsurat kali he par afsos dushman ki biwi he vo ! .....us ke haat se cigrett lekar Pratap ji pine laga.

aadmi - hahaha to ye asli baat he ek or jaam ho jaye is baat par ! ......pratap muskuraya....or us ne sharab se gilas bhar
 
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aadmi - hahaha to ye asli baat he ek or jaam ho jaye is baat par ! ......pratap muskuraya....or us ne sharab se gilas bhar diye.

Udhar Dev sabse apni patni ko milva raha tha....har koi dev ko tarakki ki badhai de rahe the.....aaj ki party me geetanjali to sabse haseen or khubsurat aurat lag rahi thi.....uski or dev ki shadi ko ek saal bhi pura nahi hua tha....mehmamo me aaye huye log un dono ki jodi ko dekh khush the.

Ek haseen jashna manati hui aaj ki sham dhal rahi thi.

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