Romance प्रेम और अहसास
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Update 1
World me ek khubsurat desh hai bharat or bharat me ek place hai jiska nam hai Palampur waise to ye ek chhota sa kasba hai par aadhunik chije yha mil jati hai bas ek kami hai or wo hai education ki.
Is sahar me ek ladka rahta hai jiska nam hai Karan. Wo apne pure family ke sath rahta hai iski family joint family hai jisme iske uncle-aunt , cousin bhai and bhabhi Iski maa or iske pitaji ka dehant ho chuka jo army me the or kargil war me sahid ho chuke hai. Karan ka ek dost bhi hai jiska nam hai Raushan.
Kisi ghar k kamre me baithe do log gahri chinta me dube hue hai or ek dusre se kuchh bate kar rahe hai, ye or koi nhi Karan or Raushan hai or ye ghar hai Karan ka .
Lagta hai is bar ham phas chuke hai ab to kuchh umeed nahi hai Karan bola.
Raushan : Umeed pe duniya kayam hai or tu usi ko chhod diya ,ye bat raushan ne haste hue bola.
Karan bahut Gusse se use dekhta hai or bolta hai: itna philosophy agar padhai me lagai hoti to aaj ye din na dekhna padta.
Tabhi ek ladki ki awaj sunai deti hai jo kahti hai: Ab kya fayda jab chidiya chug gai khet. Ye ladki hai Karan k bhabhi ki bahan jiska nam hai Amulya or waise ye Karan ki classmate bhi hai.
Wo dono bahut gusse bhare najro se use dekhte hai phir Karan bolta hai : musibat me fase hone pe hasne walo ki bat kya kare,
Amu: wo mr mai has nhi rahi balki sabak de rahi hu ,waise kuchh help chahiye to mang sakte ho mai mna nhi karungi.
Raushan Karan se dhire se bolta hai : hame is se programming sikh leni chahiye hme to bas isime problem bhi hai exam k liye.
Karan kuchh sochta hai or phir bolta hai: Thick hai Tum hame ek din ka full time me hame commands sikha sakti ho .
Amu : Yes I will
Karan: phir kal pura din mujhe de sakti ho apna mujhe sikhane me
Amu man me ( main to apni puri jindgi tumhe de di hai ye ek din kya hai )
Karan use hilata hai or : wo madam kha kho gai
Phir Amu hosh me ate hue: yeah sure kal se suru karte hai.
World me ek khubsurat desh hai bharat or bharat me ek place hai jiska nam hai Palampur waise to ye ek chhota sa kasba hai par aadhunik chije yha mil jati hai bas ek kami hai or wo hai education ki.
Is sahar me ek ladka rahta hai jiska nam hai Karan. Wo apne pure family ke sath rahta hai iski family joint family hai jisme iske uncle-aunt , cousin bhai and bhabhi Iski maa or iske pitaji ka dehant ho chuka jo army me the or kargil war me sahid ho chuke hai. Karan ka ek dost bhi hai jiska nam hai Raushan.
Kisi ghar k kamre me baithe do log gahri chinta me dube hue hai or ek dusre se kuchh bate kar rahe hai, ye or koi nhi Karan or Raushan hai or ye ghar hai Karan ka .
Lagta hai is bar ham phas chuke hai ab to kuchh umeed nahi hai Karan bola.
Raushan : Umeed pe duniya kayam hai or tu usi ko chhod diya ,ye bat raushan ne haste hue bola.
Karan bahut Gusse se use dekhta hai or bolta hai: itna philosophy agar padhai me lagai hoti to aaj ye din na dekhna padta.
Tabhi ek ladki ki awaj sunai deti hai jo kahti hai: Ab kya fayda jab chidiya chug gai khet. Ye ladki hai Karan k bhabhi ki bahan jiska nam hai Amulya or waise ye Karan ki classmate bhi hai.
Wo dono bahut gusse bhare najro se use dekhte hai phir Karan bolta hai : musibat me fase hone pe hasne walo ki bat kya kare,
Amu: wo mr mai has nhi rahi balki sabak de rahi hu ,waise kuchh help chahiye to mang sakte ho mai mna nhi karungi.
Raushan Karan se dhire se bolta hai : hame is se programming sikh leni chahiye hme to bas isime problem bhi hai exam k liye.
Karan kuchh sochta hai or phir bolta hai: Thick hai Tum hame ek din ka full time me hame commands sikha sakti ho .
Amu : Yes I will
Karan: phir kal pura din mujhe de sakti ho apna mujhe sikhane me
Amu man me ( main to apni puri jindgi tumhe de di hai ye ek din kya hai )
Karan use hilata hai or : wo madam kha kho gai
Phir Amu hosh me ate hue: yeah sure kal se suru karte hai.
UPDATE 2
Tumse achha to mai kisi bachhe ko padhati or use bhi jaldi sikha deti gusse me Amulya ne Karan ko bola. Is bat pe haste hue Karan bolta hai: sorry Amulya madam.
Amu : kitni bar bola hai mujhe amu bolo Amulya nhi.
Karan : isme thoda time lagega madam .
Isi tarah majedar kahasuni k sath Karan or Raushan Amulya se commands sikhte hai.
Phir ata hai exam ka din jiske liye Karan or Raushan ne ek sal se mehnat ki thi.
Subah subah uthkar dono jaldi se exam center jate hai or exam dete hai.
Center se bahar ate hue Karan raushan se bolta hai ki wo mandir ja raha hai tum ghar k liye nikal lo.
Idhar Karan mandir me pahunch kar bhagwan se exam me qualified hone ke liye prarthana karta hai or phir wha se wo nikal rha hota hai ki dekhta hai ki
Ek bahut hi Khubsurat ladki bhagwan k murti k samne ghutno pe baithkar bol rahi thi: please god is bar kisi tarah se qualify kara do mai promise karti hu ki next time se pakka mehnat karungi. Apne dad ka har kahna manugi please god save me.
Karan to bas uski chehre me kho sa gya tha us ladki ko dekhkar use or kuchh hosh hi nhi tha ek awaj se uski Dhyan bhang hota hai: are beta kaha tha tu kitni bar bola hai main us jabutre pe milungi na ki mandir k compound me .
Ye awaj thi Karan k chachi ki jo har sham mandir ati hai or Karan unko pic karne aya tha .
Karan : sorry chachi wo bhagwan k darshan karne lga tha to udhar nhi aya abhi aahi rha tha.
Chachi : maine dekha tu kis bhagwan ka darshan kar rha tha.
Karan : are chachi aap bhi chhodiye chaliye ghar mujhe bhi late ho rha hai.
Karan phir chachi ko lekar ghar aa jata hai,ghar ane k bad bhi wo us ladki k bare me sochta rahta hai wo to is kadar kho chuka tha ki use ye bhi nhi pta chalta ki uski bhabhi kab uske kamre aa chuki thi jab tak bhabhi use nhi pukarti use to hosh hi nhi tha
Bhabhi : lagta hai kisi jadu kar diya hai aapke upar warna jo ladka ek min shant nhi rahta wo itna der se kis khyalo me khoya hai.
Karan : nhi bhabhi aisi koi bat nhi hai wo bas
Bhabhi : rahne dijiye devar ji mujhe lagta hai kisi jogan ne jog lga diya hai ,warna aisi harkat wo bhi aap
Karan : kya bhabhi aap bhi kuchh nhi hai aisa.
Bhabhi : mujhe to lagta tha ki main bhabhi kam or best friend jyada hu lekin khair aap nhi batana chahte to
Ye bolkar bhabhi ne Karan ko imotional blackmail karna suru kar diya phir Karan bolta hai
Karan: bhabhi aisi koi bat nhi hai aapko to pta hi hai mujhe abhi kis chij ki tension jyda hai
Karan ye bolkar tal jata hai phir bhabhi use khane k liye lekar chali jati hai.
Table par use uske samne bilkul Amulya baithi thi jo uske ane k bad us se puchhti hai: kaisa gya mere students ka exam koi apne teacher ko bhi batao.
Ispe Karan bolta hai: Bahut achha gya Amulya madam,
Amu : kitni bar kaha hai mujhe amu bolo na ki Amulya
Karan : isme thoda time lagega madam.
Karan ye bolkar apne kamre me bhag jata hai.
Isi tarah 15 din bit jate hai or exam ka result aa jata hai or Karan and Raushan dono qualify kar jate hai phir un dono ko councelling k liye bulaya jata hai or uske bad undono Shimla me ek college me admission mil jata hai.
Uske bad wo dono wha jane ki taiyari me lag jate hai. Or wo din bhi aa jata hai jab undono ko jana hota hai.
Tumse achha to mai kisi bachhe ko padhati or use bhi jaldi sikha deti gusse me Amulya ne Karan ko bola. Is bat pe haste hue Karan bolta hai: sorry Amulya madam.
Amu : kitni bar bola hai mujhe amu bolo Amulya nhi.
Karan : isme thoda time lagega madam .
Isi tarah majedar kahasuni k sath Karan or Raushan Amulya se commands sikhte hai.
Phir ata hai exam ka din jiske liye Karan or Raushan ne ek sal se mehnat ki thi.
Subah subah uthkar dono jaldi se exam center jate hai or exam dete hai.
Center se bahar ate hue Karan raushan se bolta hai ki wo mandir ja raha hai tum ghar k liye nikal lo.
Idhar Karan mandir me pahunch kar bhagwan se exam me qualified hone ke liye prarthana karta hai or phir wha se wo nikal rha hota hai ki dekhta hai ki
Ek bahut hi Khubsurat ladki bhagwan k murti k samne ghutno pe baithkar bol rahi thi: please god is bar kisi tarah se qualify kara do mai promise karti hu ki next time se pakka mehnat karungi. Apne dad ka har kahna manugi please god save me.
Karan to bas uski chehre me kho sa gya tha us ladki ko dekhkar use or kuchh hosh hi nhi tha ek awaj se uski Dhyan bhang hota hai: are beta kaha tha tu kitni bar bola hai main us jabutre pe milungi na ki mandir k compound me .
Ye awaj thi Karan k chachi ki jo har sham mandir ati hai or Karan unko pic karne aya tha .
Karan : sorry chachi wo bhagwan k darshan karne lga tha to udhar nhi aya abhi aahi rha tha.
Chachi : maine dekha tu kis bhagwan ka darshan kar rha tha.
Karan : are chachi aap bhi chhodiye chaliye ghar mujhe bhi late ho rha hai.
Karan phir chachi ko lekar ghar aa jata hai,ghar ane k bad bhi wo us ladki k bare me sochta rahta hai wo to is kadar kho chuka tha ki use ye bhi nhi pta chalta ki uski bhabhi kab uske kamre aa chuki thi jab tak bhabhi use nhi pukarti use to hosh hi nhi tha
Bhabhi : lagta hai kisi jadu kar diya hai aapke upar warna jo ladka ek min shant nhi rahta wo itna der se kis khyalo me khoya hai.
Karan : nhi bhabhi aisi koi bat nhi hai wo bas
Bhabhi : rahne dijiye devar ji mujhe lagta hai kisi jogan ne jog lga diya hai ,warna aisi harkat wo bhi aap
Karan : kya bhabhi aap bhi kuchh nhi hai aisa.
Bhabhi : mujhe to lagta tha ki main bhabhi kam or best friend jyada hu lekin khair aap nhi batana chahte to
Ye bolkar bhabhi ne Karan ko imotional blackmail karna suru kar diya phir Karan bolta hai
Karan: bhabhi aisi koi bat nhi hai aapko to pta hi hai mujhe abhi kis chij ki tension jyda hai
Karan ye bolkar tal jata hai phir bhabhi use khane k liye lekar chali jati hai.
Table par use uske samne bilkul Amulya baithi thi jo uske ane k bad us se puchhti hai: kaisa gya mere students ka exam koi apne teacher ko bhi batao.
Ispe Karan bolta hai: Bahut achha gya Amulya madam,
Amu : kitni bar kaha hai mujhe amu bolo na ki Amulya
Karan : isme thoda time lagega madam.
Karan ye bolkar apne kamre me bhag jata hai.
Isi tarah 15 din bit jate hai or exam ka result aa jata hai or Karan and Raushan dono qualify kar jate hai phir un dono ko councelling k liye bulaya jata hai or uske bad undono Shimla me ek college me admission mil jata hai.
Uske bad wo dono wha jane ki taiyari me lag jate hai. Or wo din bhi aa jata hai jab undono ko jana hota hai.
UPDATE 3
Aaj bahut gahma gahmi najar aa rahi hai kya baat hai sir, ek professor ne dusre professor se puchha.
Dusra professor: - aaj first year ki admission suru Hui hai na.
Sare ladke gutham gutha ho chuke hai line me bahut bhid ho rakhi hai sab apni bari ka besabri se intejar kar rahe the koi kisi se pichhe rahne ko taiyar nhi hai ki tabhi ek bahut tej awaj ati hai :- Tumhe pta tha ki main aa rahi hu phir bhi tum logo ne mujhe line me lga diya tumahari himmat kaise hui kha hai principal .
(Ye kisi ladki ki awaj thi or ye ladki koi or nhi balki wahi ladki thi jo Karan ko mandir me mili thi )
Sare log chup chap us ladki ko dekh rahe hote hai phir principal bahar ate hai or use shant karate hai or kisi se phone pe bat kar rahe hote hai ,
Uske kuchh der bad hi ek badi si gadi aakar rukti hai or usme se ek aadmi utarta hai or bolta hai:- maf kijiye mujhe uski is harkat k liye main sharminda hu principal sahab main uski jagah line me lag jata hu koi bat nhi hogi,
Ispe principal bolta hai - kya kar rahe hai aap aapko to maine bola hi tha ki use bhi ane ki jarurat nahi hai admission main de dunga but aapne kha tha ki wo bhi aam students ki tarah admission legi .
Wo aadmi- kya kahu sir main chahta hu wo jo kare khud se kare mere nam lekar nhi lekin shayad mujhme hi koi kami rah gai thi iski maa nhi hai or sari jimmedari main nhi nibha saka.
Principal phir request karke us aadmi ko le jata hai or phir baki sare students k admission suru ho jata hai in sab me Karan or Raushan ka sara din nikal jata hai sham ko apne room pe aa jate hai jisko unlogo ne kiraye pe liya tha.wo dono phir jaldi so bhi jate hai kyonki kal subah se hi unka class suru hone wala tha
Aaj bahut gahma gahmi najar aa rahi hai kya baat hai sir, ek professor ne dusre professor se puchha.
Dusra professor: - aaj first year ki admission suru Hui hai na.
Sare ladke gutham gutha ho chuke hai line me bahut bhid ho rakhi hai sab apni bari ka besabri se intejar kar rahe the koi kisi se pichhe rahne ko taiyar nhi hai ki tabhi ek bahut tej awaj ati hai :- Tumhe pta tha ki main aa rahi hu phir bhi tum logo ne mujhe line me lga diya tumahari himmat kaise hui kha hai principal .
(Ye kisi ladki ki awaj thi or ye ladki koi or nhi balki wahi ladki thi jo Karan ko mandir me mili thi )
Sare log chup chap us ladki ko dekh rahe hote hai phir principal bahar ate hai or use shant karate hai or kisi se phone pe bat kar rahe hote hai ,
Uske kuchh der bad hi ek badi si gadi aakar rukti hai or usme se ek aadmi utarta hai or bolta hai:- maf kijiye mujhe uski is harkat k liye main sharminda hu principal sahab main uski jagah line me lag jata hu koi bat nhi hogi,
Ispe principal bolta hai - kya kar rahe hai aap aapko to maine bola hi tha ki use bhi ane ki jarurat nahi hai admission main de dunga but aapne kha tha ki wo bhi aam students ki tarah admission legi .
Wo aadmi- kya kahu sir main chahta hu wo jo kare khud se kare mere nam lekar nhi lekin shayad mujhme hi koi kami rah gai thi iski maa nhi hai or sari jimmedari main nhi nibha saka.
Principal phir request karke us aadmi ko le jata hai or phir baki sare students k admission suru ho jata hai in sab me Karan or Raushan ka sara din nikal jata hai sham ko apne room pe aa jate hai jisko unlogo ne kiraye pe liya tha.wo dono phir jaldi so bhi jate hai kyonki kal subah se hi unka class suru hone wala tha
UPDATE 4
" Pls maintain silence otherwise I through out all the students from class" ye bat ek professor ne gusse me pure class ko boli
( Ye class thi graduation k 1st year ki jiske students the Karan or Raushan )
Sabhi students ye sun ne k bad attentive mode me aa jate hai , is class me koi aisa bhi tha jo bilkul hi alag duniya me tha sabse alag khoya sa
Tabhi us student k chehre par aake ek sketch pen lagti hai or wo student idhar dekhta hai or kuchh bolta us se pahle " agar Dhyan yoga karna hai to yoga camp me baitho yhan nhi ye mera class hai "
Student " sorry sir next time se nhi hoga " uski awaj bilkul hi ruasi ho gayi thi is pahle ki professor kuchh bolte lunch bell baj jati hai sare students compound ki taraf bhag jate hai.
Idhar class me do ladkiya baithe bate kar rahi hai ,
Pahli ladki- Priya pls yar ab to chup ho ja kitna bar bola hai tu kyon us bat ke liye apne dil dukhati hai agar nhi chup hui na tu to main uncle ko phone kar dungi.
Dusri ladki- no Shruti pls aisa mat kar wo aksar mujhe leke paresan rahte hai ,dekh I am ok and fine.
Uske baad wo dono whan se nikal k canteen ki or chal deti hai or ek table pe baith jati or kuchh snacks order deti hai ki pichhe se kuchh ladke " kya mal hai yar kya gajab lag rahi hai, "
Ye bat un dono ko bhi sunai deti hai lekin wo ise ignore kar apne khane pe dhyan deti hai lekin unme se ek ladka aakar k Shruti ka hath pakad leta hai or bolta hai" ye hamari hath se bhi kha lo janeman zindagi ka maza dugna ho jayega"
Is se pahle wo kuchh bolta us ke gal pe karara thappad ake padta hai or dekhta hai to wo ek ladki thi " maza to tera ab main dugna karne wali hun ,itna maza dungi ki aaj k bad tu maza k liye rota phirega " uske bad wo ladki us ladke ko apne cricket bat se marne lagti hai wo ladka bhagne lagta hai tabhi uske sare dost bhi uski madad ko age ane lagte hai jo charo taraf se us ladki ko gher lete hai jise dekh wo ladki dar jati hai .
Tabhi unsabhi ladko me se ek ladka abhi age badh hi rha tha ki ek awaj pichhe se ati hai" are ye to na insafi hai tumlog 4 or wo 1 aise kaise hoga " ( ye awaj kisi or ki nhi balki Karan ki thi)
Ye sunkar unme se ek ladka bolta hai " to aaja tere sath bhi insaf kar deta hu , bahut dino se hatho me khujli ho rahi thi aaj dur ho jayegi"
Karan - thick hai bhai dur kar lena main itch-guard lakar de dunga lekin abhi ka bolo
Dusra ladka- abhi to ya to tu reng k jayega ya let kar
Karan: dekho dosto main koi fighter to hu nhi ki ek sath tumlogo ko mar saku lekin tumlogo rokne ilaj hai mere pass wo dekho
Karan k ishare wale jagah pe jab wo dekhte hai unki dhua nikal jati hai kyoki samne raushan baithkar video bna rha tha jise dekh kar wo wha se bhag nikalne me hi apni bhalai samjhte hai.
Karan wha se jane lagta hai ki ek awaj uske kadmo ko rok deti hai " thanks for the support"
Karan jab pichhe mudkar dekhta hai to wo bilkul hi hairan ho jata hai ye or koi wahi ladki thi Karan jise Mandir me dekha tha ( or ye ladki hai Priya jo Shruti ki friend hai or jab wo washroom jati hai tabhi wo ladke use chhed rahe the)
Karan - it's ok ( hadbadate hue)
Priya :- not it's ok , welcome bola jata hai but anyway I am Priya
( Hath milane k liye hath age karte hue)
Karan:- I am Karan ( hath milate hue)
Priya :- tum bhi 1st year ho na
Karan :- ha tum bhi ( questions mode me)
Priya:- yeah of course by the way is se milo ye meri friend Shruti
( Karan Shruti uske bad ik dusre ko hi hello karte hai iske sath hi Karan raushan ka bhi sabse intro karata hai)
" Pls maintain silence otherwise I through out all the students from class" ye bat ek professor ne gusse me pure class ko boli
( Ye class thi graduation k 1st year ki jiske students the Karan or Raushan )
Sabhi students ye sun ne k bad attentive mode me aa jate hai , is class me koi aisa bhi tha jo bilkul hi alag duniya me tha sabse alag khoya sa
Tabhi us student k chehre par aake ek sketch pen lagti hai or wo student idhar dekhta hai or kuchh bolta us se pahle " agar Dhyan yoga karna hai to yoga camp me baitho yhan nhi ye mera class hai "
Student " sorry sir next time se nhi hoga " uski awaj bilkul hi ruasi ho gayi thi is pahle ki professor kuchh bolte lunch bell baj jati hai sare students compound ki taraf bhag jate hai.
Idhar class me do ladkiya baithe bate kar rahi hai ,
Pahli ladki- Priya pls yar ab to chup ho ja kitna bar bola hai tu kyon us bat ke liye apne dil dukhati hai agar nhi chup hui na tu to main uncle ko phone kar dungi.
Dusri ladki- no Shruti pls aisa mat kar wo aksar mujhe leke paresan rahte hai ,dekh I am ok and fine.
Uske baad wo dono whan se nikal k canteen ki or chal deti hai or ek table pe baith jati or kuchh snacks order deti hai ki pichhe se kuchh ladke " kya mal hai yar kya gajab lag rahi hai, "
Ye bat un dono ko bhi sunai deti hai lekin wo ise ignore kar apne khane pe dhyan deti hai lekin unme se ek ladka aakar k Shruti ka hath pakad leta hai or bolta hai" ye hamari hath se bhi kha lo janeman zindagi ka maza dugna ho jayega"
Is se pahle wo kuchh bolta us ke gal pe karara thappad ake padta hai or dekhta hai to wo ek ladki thi " maza to tera ab main dugna karne wali hun ,itna maza dungi ki aaj k bad tu maza k liye rota phirega " uske bad wo ladki us ladke ko apne cricket bat se marne lagti hai wo ladka bhagne lagta hai tabhi uske sare dost bhi uski madad ko age ane lagte hai jo charo taraf se us ladki ko gher lete hai jise dekh wo ladki dar jati hai .
Tabhi unsabhi ladko me se ek ladka abhi age badh hi rha tha ki ek awaj pichhe se ati hai" are ye to na insafi hai tumlog 4 or wo 1 aise kaise hoga " ( ye awaj kisi or ki nhi balki Karan ki thi)
Ye sunkar unme se ek ladka bolta hai " to aaja tere sath bhi insaf kar deta hu , bahut dino se hatho me khujli ho rahi thi aaj dur ho jayegi"
Karan - thick hai bhai dur kar lena main itch-guard lakar de dunga lekin abhi ka bolo
Dusra ladka- abhi to ya to tu reng k jayega ya let kar
Karan: dekho dosto main koi fighter to hu nhi ki ek sath tumlogo ko mar saku lekin tumlogo rokne ilaj hai mere pass wo dekho
Karan k ishare wale jagah pe jab wo dekhte hai unki dhua nikal jati hai kyoki samne raushan baithkar video bna rha tha jise dekh kar wo wha se bhag nikalne me hi apni bhalai samjhte hai.
Karan wha se jane lagta hai ki ek awaj uske kadmo ko rok deti hai " thanks for the support"
Karan jab pichhe mudkar dekhta hai to wo bilkul hi hairan ho jata hai ye or koi wahi ladki thi Karan jise Mandir me dekha tha ( or ye ladki hai Priya jo Shruti ki friend hai or jab wo washroom jati hai tabhi wo ladke use chhed rahe the)
Karan - it's ok ( hadbadate hue)
Priya :- not it's ok , welcome bola jata hai but anyway I am Priya
( Hath milane k liye hath age karte hue)
Karan:- I am Karan ( hath milate hue)
Priya :- tum bhi 1st year ho na
Karan :- ha tum bhi ( questions mode me)
Priya:- yeah of course by the way is se milo ye meri friend Shruti
( Karan Shruti uske bad ik dusre ko hi hello karte hai iske sath hi Karan raushan ka bhi sabse intro karata hai)