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UPDATE 1
"Fir kya hua mummy ?" Avni ne shayad sauvi bar apni maa se pucha.
"Fir! Cyndrella ne jaldi se apna hath chhudaya or apne prince charming ke mahal se bahar aa gayi. Kyu ki uski fery godmother(pari) ne aadhi rat ka hi samay jo diya tha...
Avni ek 11 sal ki sundar si bachhi thi jo apni maa ka hath pakde uchal kudd karti hui school se apne ghar ja rahi thi usne ek gulabi se gherdar jali wali dress pahan rakhi thi, or bilkul kisi pari ki tarah dikh rahi thi. Uske ek hath mai chhoti si trophy thi. Uske school mai aaj fancy dress competition tha jisme usne first prize jeeta tha.
" Ferry godmother hamesha cyndrella ki madad karti thi.... Hai na mummy avni chahkti hui si boli.
Mummy meri ferry godmother kon hai ? Priya didi hai na? Usne jaldi se apni maa se pucha ?
Priya usi kasbe ki 26 sal ki ek sundar ladki thi. Jo haal hi mai beautician ka course karke wapas lauti thi usne hi avni ko fancy dress competition k liye tayyar kiya tha.
Chal badi aayi cyndrella, avni ki maa use pyar se dant te huye boli.
Avni chalte chalte kuch sochkar ruk gyi usne fir apni maa se pucha,
Maa prince charming ka mahal kitna bada hoga hamare alanor cottage jitna bada to hoga na? Avni ki maa ne hairani se avni ko dekha jiski kalpnaye vadhti hi ja rahi thi.
Alanor cottage jheelon or pahadon se ghiri hui jagah hai. Haryali se ghire unche niche raste, or asman chhute ped or bhi manoram drishya banate hai. Wahan thand mai thodi barfbari hoti rahti ha. Kyu ki wo tourist place hai to wahan jyada vikas ka koi kaam nhi kiya gaya kyu ki wahan jyadatar tourist aate hai.. isi wajah se wahan chhote mote hotlon ki bharmaar hai.
Lekin touriston ki pahli pasand tha pahadon ki unchayi par bana alanor cottage. Jo kafi purani or bhavya imarat thi. Wo imarat ek mahal thi. Uske ek hisse mai uska vartman ka malik, CHOUDHURY ka parivar rahta tha or baki ka hissa videshi touriston ko de diya gaya tha. Jo ki ek resourt tha.
Avni apni maa ka hath pakadkar chali ja rahi thi or mud mud kar " alanor cottage" ko dekhti chali ja rahi thi. Use poore kasbe mai kahin se bhi dekha ja sakta tha kyu ki wo imarat sabse unchayi par bani hui thi.
"Ab chalo avni papa ko trophy bhi to dikhani hai" avni ki ma ne avni se kaha
Yahi to hota hai bade bachon ka man bahlane ke liye pari kathayein sunate hai par kuch bachhon ke liye ye kahaniya sab kuch ban jati hai. Jaise ki avni uski maa ko to patq bhi nahi tha ki avni ne apni kahani ka teesra bhi kahin bandh diya tha.
Apni kahani ki duniya mai wo khud cyndrella thi. Or priya didi uski " ferry godmother" or abhi abhi usne wpne prince charming ka mahal bhi dhundh liya tha jo ki tha .
ALANOR COTTAGE
Aakhir aisa kya tha us alanor cottage mai jan ne ki liye wait karen next update ka. Agar update pasand aaya ho to batana agar nhi bhi pasand aaye to bhi batana mai ye kahani band kar doonga ..
"Fir kya hua mummy ?" Avni ne shayad sauvi bar apni maa se pucha.
"Fir! Cyndrella ne jaldi se apna hath chhudaya or apne prince charming ke mahal se bahar aa gayi. Kyu ki uski fery godmother(pari) ne aadhi rat ka hi samay jo diya tha...
Avni ek 11 sal ki sundar si bachhi thi jo apni maa ka hath pakde uchal kudd karti hui school se apne ghar ja rahi thi usne ek gulabi se gherdar jali wali dress pahan rakhi thi, or bilkul kisi pari ki tarah dikh rahi thi. Uske ek hath mai chhoti si trophy thi. Uske school mai aaj fancy dress competition tha jisme usne first prize jeeta tha.
" Ferry godmother hamesha cyndrella ki madad karti thi.... Hai na mummy avni chahkti hui si boli.
Mummy meri ferry godmother kon hai ? Priya didi hai na? Usne jaldi se apni maa se pucha ?
Priya usi kasbe ki 26 sal ki ek sundar ladki thi. Jo haal hi mai beautician ka course karke wapas lauti thi usne hi avni ko fancy dress competition k liye tayyar kiya tha.
Chal badi aayi cyndrella, avni ki maa use pyar se dant te huye boli.
Avni chalte chalte kuch sochkar ruk gyi usne fir apni maa se pucha,
Maa prince charming ka mahal kitna bada hoga hamare alanor cottage jitna bada to hoga na? Avni ki maa ne hairani se avni ko dekha jiski kalpnaye vadhti hi ja rahi thi.
Alanor cottage jheelon or pahadon se ghiri hui jagah hai. Haryali se ghire unche niche raste, or asman chhute ped or bhi manoram drishya banate hai. Wahan thand mai thodi barfbari hoti rahti ha. Kyu ki wo tourist place hai to wahan jyada vikas ka koi kaam nhi kiya gaya kyu ki wahan jyadatar tourist aate hai.. isi wajah se wahan chhote mote hotlon ki bharmaar hai.
Lekin touriston ki pahli pasand tha pahadon ki unchayi par bana alanor cottage. Jo kafi purani or bhavya imarat thi. Wo imarat ek mahal thi. Uske ek hisse mai uska vartman ka malik, CHOUDHURY ka parivar rahta tha or baki ka hissa videshi touriston ko de diya gaya tha. Jo ki ek resourt tha.
Avni apni maa ka hath pakadkar chali ja rahi thi or mud mud kar " alanor cottage" ko dekhti chali ja rahi thi. Use poore kasbe mai kahin se bhi dekha ja sakta tha kyu ki wo imarat sabse unchayi par bani hui thi.
"Ab chalo avni papa ko trophy bhi to dikhani hai" avni ki ma ne avni se kaha
Yahi to hota hai bade bachon ka man bahlane ke liye pari kathayein sunate hai par kuch bachhon ke liye ye kahaniya sab kuch ban jati hai. Jaise ki avni uski maa ko to patq bhi nahi tha ki avni ne apni kahani ka teesra bhi kahin bandh diya tha.
Apni kahani ki duniya mai wo khud cyndrella thi. Or priya didi uski " ferry godmother" or abhi abhi usne wpne prince charming ka mahal bhi dhundh liya tha jo ki tha .
ALANOR COTTAGE
Aakhir aisa kya tha us alanor cottage mai jan ne ki liye wait karen next update ka. Agar update pasand aaya ho to batana agar nhi bhi pasand aaye to bhi batana mai ye kahani band kar doonga ..
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UPDATE NO 2 .
13 saal baad-
Wo samundra ke kinare bana ek shandar resort tha. Aaj wahan bahut shor sharaba or shandar ronak thi. Koi party chal rahi thi waise mahanagron mai "destination wedding" ka chalan joron par tha. Ye samaroh bhi kuch usi tarah ka tha jahan rishtedar to kam hote hai, or hotel staff, coriograffer, makeup artist, photographer jaise logon ki bhid jyada hoti hai.
" Bahut der ho rahi hai ring ceremony start karte hai" ladke ki maa ne kaha. Ladka jiska nam gorav tha wo kisi ka intjar kar raha tha . Uske bagal mai khadi ashima bhi saheliyon k sath chidh rahi thi ir chidhe kyu na dulhan thi akhir wo.
"Tumhe nahi lagta ki tum hamara special day spoil kar rahe ho" ashima ne gusse mai kaha.
" Are yaar! aadhe ghante mai kya bigad jayega.."
Gorav ne bolna shuru kiya.
"Ham pichle dhedh ghante se wait kar rahe hai" uski bat kat te huye ashima boli" agar wo itna gair jimmedar hai to........
Baki batein uske muhh mai hi rah gayi. Bahar party hall mai shor sharaba hone laga or sabhi us or dekhne lage party hall mai ek naye mehman ne kadam rakha tha or ek ladka muskrata unki hi taraf chala aa raha tha.
Uske baal bikhre the, chehre par ek lambe safar ki thakan thi usne ek purani denim ki jeans or jhol jhal si t-shirt or niche sport shoes dal rakhe the. Uske kandhe par ek kala bag or gale mai ek professional camera dal rakha tha.uska huliya kisi bhi tarike se party mai shamil hone jaisa nhi lag rha tha.
Wo seedhe gya or dulhe yani ki gorav ko kas kar gale laga liya.
" Sale! tu nhi sudhrega! Kabhi to time par aa jaya kar..."
" Kya karu yar! tune itni urgency mai phone kiya tha... Time to lagna hi tha" wo ladka bola
" Are ab sari batein yahin puri hongi!" Koi jhunjhlaya " ek to shubh muhurt waise hi nikla ja raha hai ...."
Jaldi jaldi ring pahnane ki rashm puri hui or pura hall tali ki awazon se bhar gaya.
Us ladke ka asli naam Krish tha ye uska asli nam tha ye to koi nhi janta, bas sab use isi nam se bulate the. Wo ek mashoor photographer tha or ek banjara type ka ladka tha. Uska ghar kahan tha, ya uska koi ghar bhi tha ye bhi koi nhi janta. Use Facebook or WhatsApp jaisi adtein bhi nhi thi use sab dunia k sath chalne ko bolte the par wo apni dunia mai mast rahne wala banda tha.
Usko party mai dekhkar buddhon ne muhh fer liya or ladkiyon mai khi khi badh gayi kyu ki wo apne fatichar huliye k bawjood bhi bahut smart lag raha tha.
13 saal baad-
Wo samundra ke kinare bana ek shandar resort tha. Aaj wahan bahut shor sharaba or shandar ronak thi. Koi party chal rahi thi waise mahanagron mai "destination wedding" ka chalan joron par tha. Ye samaroh bhi kuch usi tarah ka tha jahan rishtedar to kam hote hai, or hotel staff, coriograffer, makeup artist, photographer jaise logon ki bhid jyada hoti hai.
" Bahut der ho rahi hai ring ceremony start karte hai" ladke ki maa ne kaha. Ladka jiska nam gorav tha wo kisi ka intjar kar raha tha . Uske bagal mai khadi ashima bhi saheliyon k sath chidh rahi thi ir chidhe kyu na dulhan thi akhir wo.
"Tumhe nahi lagta ki tum hamara special day spoil kar rahe ho" ashima ne gusse mai kaha.
" Are yaar! aadhe ghante mai kya bigad jayega.."
Gorav ne bolna shuru kiya.
"Ham pichle dhedh ghante se wait kar rahe hai" uski bat kat te huye ashima boli" agar wo itna gair jimmedar hai to........
Baki batein uske muhh mai hi rah gayi. Bahar party hall mai shor sharaba hone laga or sabhi us or dekhne lage party hall mai ek naye mehman ne kadam rakha tha or ek ladka muskrata unki hi taraf chala aa raha tha.
Uske baal bikhre the, chehre par ek lambe safar ki thakan thi usne ek purani denim ki jeans or jhol jhal si t-shirt or niche sport shoes dal rakhe the. Uske kandhe par ek kala bag or gale mai ek professional camera dal rakha tha.uska huliya kisi bhi tarike se party mai shamil hone jaisa nhi lag rha tha.
Wo seedhe gya or dulhe yani ki gorav ko kas kar gale laga liya.
" Sale! tu nhi sudhrega! Kabhi to time par aa jaya kar..."
" Kya karu yar! tune itni urgency mai phone kiya tha... Time to lagna hi tha" wo ladka bola
" Are ab sari batein yahin puri hongi!" Koi jhunjhlaya " ek to shubh muhurt waise hi nikla ja raha hai ...."
Jaldi jaldi ring pahnane ki rashm puri hui or pura hall tali ki awazon se bhar gaya.
Us ladke ka asli naam Krish tha ye uska asli nam tha ye to koi nhi janta, bas sab use isi nam se bulate the. Wo ek mashoor photographer tha or ek banjara type ka ladka tha. Uska ghar kahan tha, ya uska koi ghar bhi tha ye bhi koi nhi janta. Use Facebook or WhatsApp jaisi adtein bhi nhi thi use sab dunia k sath chalne ko bolte the par wo apni dunia mai mast rahne wala banda tha.
Usko party mai dekhkar buddhon ne muhh fer liya or ladkiyon mai khi khi badh gayi kyu ki wo apne fatichar huliye k bawjood bhi bahut smart lag raha tha.
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