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Romance 70 saal ka bona buddha.

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Yeh kahani kalpanik hai kiska vastavikta se koi lena dena nahi.

kahani ka main character :- (1) Guddu. Age 70 years black old man. Retired master. Height 110 cm. Madhya Pradesh ke Dhaam gaon mein rehta hai aur pension mein 6000 rupees. Ek hi kamre mein rehta hai.

(2) Sania Khan. Age 26 years. 19 saal ki umar mein nikah hua lekin shohar ka accident se maut aur usme 4 saal ka beta bhi mar chuka tha. Waise woh ek mental doctor hai. Dhaam gaon ke paas Abbas gaon mein rehti hai. Sania behad khubsoorat aur doodh sa rang. Height 170 cm. Slim aur fit body.

(3) Gangu. Age 80 years. Guddu ka bada bhai. (Waqt aane par ise laaya jaayega.)

Dhaam aur Abbas gaon bilkul nazdik ka gaon hai. Dono gaon jyadatar jungle ke beech mein hi hai. City yaha se 70 kilometer door. Dhaam gaon mein Guddu naam ka bona buddha rehta hai. Wause Guddu dil ka bahut hi saaf aur nek insaan. Lekin woh kehte hai na ki nek insaan ke saath humesha acha nahi hota. Bona hone ki wajah se kai log uska majak udate hai. Lekin doosri taraf bade umar ke log uski ijjat bhi karte hai. Chote chote bachche Guddu ka majak udate hai. Guddu ab bahut buddha ho chuka hai isiliye is umar mein choti si baat bhi dil mein ghar kar jaati hai.

Abbas gaon jo ek jamane Mughal ka adda tha lekin ab is gaon mein mushkil se kuch parivaar hi rehtehai jabki jyadatar log kamane ki wajah se palayan kar gaye. Ab sawal yeh hai ki is gareeb gaon mein yeh bade qualified doctor Sania Khan kaise. Waise aapko bata doon Sania ek vidhwa aurat hai. Private mental hospital mein kaam karti hai. Yaha uska transfer hua hai. Waise hoapital yaha se 3 kilometer door hai.

Ek waqt ki baat hai jab Sania apne ghar laptop pe kaam kar rahi thi to ek mail aaya jisme ek mareej ki profile aayi. Us mareej ka naam Guddu hai aur woh mental nahi lekin mental problem use ho aakti hai. Thoda udas rehta hai. Koi aas paas na hone se mansik thak chuka hai. Sania ko is case ko handle karne ka kaam diya. Sania ne socha ki jab iska ghar nazdik hai to acha hai is bahane kaam aram se ho jaayega.

Ab dekhte hai ki kaise yeh kaam ho paayega. Is kahani ko jald khatam bhi kar diya jaayega.
 
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Sania jo Guddu ke report ko padh rahi thi uske man mein Guddu ke liye bahut hamdardi bhi ho rahi thi kyonki is budhape mein jab logo ko aram aur shaanti zindagi ki ummid karte hai waha Guddu bechara akela aur aas paas logo ke majak ki wajah.

Subah 9 baje taiyaar hokar salvaar kameez mein Sania Guddu ke ghar ki or nikal gayi. Guddu ka ghar gaon kr bilkul kinare aaya hua hai. Jungle ke beech aur nadi se nazdik. Gaon ke chauk pe jab Sania pahunchi to ek bheed se bhare logo ko paaya jo kisi chiz pe has rahe the. Sania jab aakar pahunchi to dekha ki Guddu tha jispe kuch log has rahe the. Yeh scene dekhkar Sania ko ghussa aaya aur woh sehe na saki. Guddu ki aankho mein aansu aa gaye the.

Paas aakar Sania pahunchi to jor jor se banavati tareeke se hasne laagi. Itna jor se has rahi thi ki bheed mein qareeb 60 log jisme aadmi aur aurat bhi the yeh drishya dekhkar soch mein pad gaye aur sabhi log hasna band kar diye.

"Abey paagal ho kya jo itna jor jor se has rahi ho ?" Ek aadmi ne kaha.

"Arey aap sabne hasna bandh kyon kiya ? Haso na. Main to tum sab pe haas rahi hoon. Mujhe to yakeen ho gaya ki tum sab paagal ho."

Ek aurat ghusse se boli "abey oye tu hai kaun hume paagal kehne wali."

"Aur nahi to kya. Ishwar ki banai hui chiz pe hasna pagalo ka kaam hi to hai. Tumko bhagwaan ne banaya, mujje banaya aur Guddi ko bhi banaya yeh duniya banaya. Phir main tum sab se poochti hoon ki bhagwan ki banai hui chizo pe kyon has rahe ho ? Kya iski galti hai ki yeh bona hai. Khud ko dekho. Koi mota hai kaala hai koi patla hai to kya tum aab pe bhi hasna chahiye samaj ko ?"

Sania ki yrh baat sunkar sabhi log sir jhukaye sharminda ho gaye. Guddu jaise rone laaga. Guddu ke yeh aansu Sania ko chubhne laaga. Sania ne Guddu ke aansu ko pocha.

"Hume maaf karo Guddu aage se aiaa nahi karenge." Bhees me se ek aadmi ne kaha.

Sabhi log haan mein haan milaye aur Guddu se dil se maafi maanga. Guddu ne dil se sabko maaf kar diya. Sabhi log waha se chale gaye. Guddu Sania ko delhte hue kaha "aap kaun ho ? Bhagwan ka bheja hua doot tp nahi jo mujhe sambhalne aaya hai. Devi aage ka to pata nahi lekin jeevan mein tumhe yaad jaropr karoonga is baat pe. Jaane se pehle keh dojiye ki aap kaun hai ?"

"Mera naam Sania Khan hai aur main aapki doctor hoon."

"Oh to aap hai ? Main aapko bhagane wala tha. Lekin aaj aapko dekhkar yakeen hua ki aap dil se bhi doctor ho." Guddu rote hue Sania ke pair padne gaya.

Sania shock hui aur rokte hue kaha "yeh maat karo. Aap mere se bahut bade hai. Please."

"Bada to umar se lekin deemag aur dil se chota kyonki aaj apko dekhkar khud pe sharam nahi aa rahi."

"Woh sab thik hai lekin khid pe humesha fakra mehsops karo kyonki khud ko acha manoge to duniya achi lagegi."

Guddu waise mushkil se Sania ke kamar tak pahunchta tha. Isiliye sir upar karkebaat karna padta tha.

"Chaliye aapke ghar. Aapse ab roj mulaqat hogi."

"Arey haan chaliye doctor sahiba."

"Ek aur baat mujhe Sania bulao Gudduji. Main apse choti hoon."

"Aur mujhe Guddu bulao kyonki main chahata hoon ki aap naam se bulaye."

Sania musqurate hue boli "okay Guddu."

Aage Guddu aur peeche Sania. Guddu Sania ghar pahunche. Guddu ka ghar 2 kamre ka tha aur pakka ghar tha. River bhi ghar se sata hua. Shaanti bahut hai jaise Sania ke ghar jaisa. Lekin Abbas gaon mein ped paudhe bahut kam hai aur yaha ghana jungle.

"Betho Sqnia main paani lekar aata hoon."

Guddu paani lekar aaya. Sania ne sawal poocha "Tum akele rehte ho jaroorat nahi padti kisi ki ?"

"Nahi. Bilkul nahi waiseaapke ghar main kaun kaun hai ?"

"Ji meri ammi aur behen hai jo scholarship lekar London mein padhai kar rahi hai. Ammi college professor."

"Chalo acha hai lekin aap jaise bade gjar logo ko yaha rehne mein dikkat hoti hogi."

"Dekho naukri hai to compromise karma padta hai lekin aap to retire ho gaye hai. Kaam baaki kaise ?"

"Chalta rehta hai. Mera bada bhai bhi hai lekin is waqt bahar gaya kaam se."

"Kab aayenge ?"

"Kuch deen lagega."

"Aapko akela mehsops nahi hota ?"

"Dekho Sania zindagi se agar roj shikayat karenge to kaise chalega. Jab khud ko chota manoge to paoge bhi utna hi."

"Sahi kaha akeli hi to rehti hoon."

"Apka pati Nahi ?"

"Ji tha lekin car accident mein bacha aur pati maare gaye."

"Mujhe maaf karna galti ho gayi."

"Koi baat nahi chalta hai. Chaliye ab aap kaal kab mere ghar aayenge ? Session ke liye ?"

"Kaal subah 8 baje ?"

"Thik hai to kaal milte hai."

Sania muskurate hue waha se chali gayi. Guddu Sania ko dekhta raha aur kaha "bhagwan ne bahit boora kiya iske saath. Kitni ache dil ki hai yeh."
 
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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hind section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 25th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 
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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP 750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader 750 Rupees + Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 
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