Romance A A R T I - ek amar prem kahani

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Namaskar dosto,
Mai aap sabke sath ek pawitra prem ki kahani sajha karna chahta hun,
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Lekin uske pahle kuchh baate bata dena chahta hun
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Mai mool roop se bihar ka rahne bala hunn...
Bihar Jo ki kaalantral me apne vazood ko khote chala gaya...
Isme shayad ham biharvashiyo ki bhi bahut dosh hai...
Khair .... Mudde pe aate hai
Abhi kuchh din pahle hi... Hamare bihar me ek dil dehla dene vaali ghatna ghati...
Mai jagah ka naam to nhi lunga... Par hann uss ghatna ke baare me kuchh baate jarur sajha karni hai aapse...
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To short me bataye to kuchh din pahle... Bihar ke ek zile me... Ek ldki ke gharvaale, uske premi ko jhuth me ye bol kar apne ghar bulate hai ki... Wo apne beti ki shadi uss se kara denge... Aur wo ladka bhi khushi khushi... Raat ko 12 baje apne premika ke ghar chala jata hai...
Lekin uski premika in sab baato se anjan rahti hai...
Aur raat ko 2 baje uski nind tutti hai to usse pata chalta hai ki uske ghar me bagal baale kamre me uska aashiq baitha hai... Uske paas jakar usse bhag jane ko wo bolto hai...
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Lekin wo ladka ye bol kar mana kar deta hai. Ki hame shadi ke liye bulaya gya hai...
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Agle subah... Wo ladki... Ussi ladke ke mrit shareer pe dahade mar maar kar rote huye hame news me dekhne kk milti hai...
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Dosto.... Wo ladka... Mera mitra tha.... Ghanist to nhi bol sakte hai... Par hann.... Wo mera mitra to tha....
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Uski prem kahani.... Jo ki uske bachpan se hi suru ho gayi thi... Wo mujhe achhe tarah se pata hai...
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Bahut baar usne apni aarti ke bare hamare samne kahaniya sunaya tha...
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Lekin....
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Ab bas rahi to shirf uski AARTI... Aur AARTI aur CHHOTU ki kahani...
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Bas mod Adirshi Siraj Patel sahab se aage likhne ka aadesh chahta hunn...
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Agar kahani likhne ke liye mod sahab ne haan bol diya to...
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Kahani ko 5 update me viraam de dunga... Akhir kahani to ab adhoori hi rah gayi na....
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Dhanyavaad
Jay trikal​

 

[Pappu roy]

Likho bhai ye mast story hai

 

[Ashwathama]

Likh dalo bhai... Chhotu ki kahani hame bhi padhni hai

 

[Mr.X796]

Kya sach main aap uske dost the bhai phir to ek baat pakki h ab aap jan gaye honge ki aaj ke jamane mein bhi pyar ka anjam adhiktar bura hi hota h ya phir usme dukh hi milta h to bhi aajkal ke bachhe maa baap ya family ko pyar ke liye dushman samajhte hain akhir jane kab sabko akal aayegi

 

[Ashwathama]

ब्रो, इस कहानी को लिखने से मना किया गया है... लड़के( जिसका जीवनी रावण भाई लिखने वाले थे) के भाई द्वारा... जोकी रावण भाई के ही एक घनिष्ट मित्र है... जैसा की उन्होंने मुझे बताया...
पर उनकी.... Ek bechara.... 15 August से पहले की तरह ही जारी रहेगी...

 

[Aakash.]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP	750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader	750 Rupees + Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff