bhai, iss type ka story iss forum mai dhundhne v nahi milega, whaaa kya hi mast story hai.
aagra aap next story v likhenge toh iss bar ho saake toh "maa beta" ka likhna , aur story aabki baar se aur v jayada lambi likhna plz, iss story mai jo maja aa raha tha ,iss feelings ko bayan nahi ki jaa sakta, plz firse iss tarha ka story likhiye maa beta ka ho sake toh.
btw you r briliant writer.