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Adultery Komal & A story of an Agent
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Thank youNice...This story has started very well, keep tying this story in the same way...best luck..
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update 2 ( Sam intelligence)
yaha...komal puri tarha phas chuki thi... Nill ko bhi uspar shak hogya tha.. aur wo washroom ke door.. ke bahar patli..c..gali type jagah par khadi thi...
(jaisa ke aap sabne... shuro mein padha tha.. komal kisi ko phone lagane ka try kar rahi thi... par Sim...ke signal .. problem kar rahe thy aur call connect nahi ho rahi thi ..,)
Koman man mein ,(ohhh god.. please connect hojaye..ye call signal kiyu issue kar rahe hai )
wo baar baar try kar rahi thi .....
...par tabhi... call connect hojati hai... "Ring Ring Ring"... aur 30 seconds baad call waha se pick hoti aur ek awaaz..aati
call voice : hello.. han bolo komal... kiya baat hai... bade hafto baad call ki ,
Komal Ghabrate hue : Hello sam ..
Please I need your help right now. Meri jaan khatre mai hai mein tumhe location send kar rahi hu... mein yaha phans gayi hu...
sam ko kuch " samaj mein ..... nahi aata.. ke komal us sey keh kiya rahi hai"
Sam : komal kiya keh rahi...ho... muje samaj nahi aarha ,
komal : .. mein tumhe baad mai..samjha dungi but...tum .. please.. mere paas...aoo..mein location bhej rahi hu.. tab tak..mai..yaha se...nikalne ka try karti hu ...,
tabhi komal call cut karke .. "Whatsapp par ... current location send kardeti hai sam ko",
Sam ke mobile screen par .... notification aata hai aur .. wo.. car mein hee betha tha ... aur location ko map mai open karke ... nikal parta hai...
...........
par.. ye Sam hai kaun ? .. aur komal ne isey call kiyu ki?...to chaliye...chalte hai..2 months..peeche.. jaha aap..sam..ke baarey mein jaan paaye gy,
.........
Delhi ki garmi mein ek ajeeb si shanti thi. Sam, jo ki 26 saal ka ek kaabil agent tha, apni car mein baitha hua tha. Uske....dimaag hamesha kaam karta rehta tha, har cheez ko notice karta tha. aur uske eyes mein ek sharpness thi jo har cheez ko scan kar leti thi.. uski body well built thi .. aur wo kaafi attractive dhikta tha ,
Sam ko tabhi ek phone call aaya. Callercity police commissioner se,
commissioner, : Sam, tumhe ek case solve karna hoga ...Yeh ek murder case hai, lekin ismein kuchh ajeeb baatein hai ..,
Sam ne car start ki aur police station ki taraf badh gaya. Raaste mein usne apne dimaag ko active kiya. Murder case? Ajeeb baatein? Uske mann mein khud se sawal ho raha tha.
Police station pahunchne par, commissioner usey ek room mein le gaya. Room mein ek dead body thi. Ladki thi, umra lagbhag 22-23 saal. Uske face par daravna darsha raha tha.
tabhi commissioner us sey bolta hai ,
Commissioner: Kya pata lag raha hai?
Sam ne body ko closely inspect kiya.
sam : nishan to nahi hai .. lekin yeh maatar.....ek baat hai, iske baal kuchh ajeeb si condition mein hain.
Commissioner;.."Kya matlab?" .
sam :,Inke baal... inke baal mein ek chit thi. Sam ne chit nikali. Yeh ek code hai. 3-14-15." Usne chit ko dikhaaya.
Commissioner ne chit li aur bola, "Yeh code kya hai?
Sam ne socha. ..Yeh ek alphabet code ho sakta hai. Har number ek alphabet ki position batata hai." Usne apne phone se ek app khola. "3-14-15... yeh C-O-N. 'Con'?( Sam ne socha. but ismein kuch...baaki bhi hai.")
Usne aur numbers check kiye. "Yeh code 3-14-15 12-20-8 5-1-12-12-15..." Usne translate kiya. "Con... L-T... A-A-N... Yeh kya hai?"
Uske dimaag mein ek idea aaya. "
Sam : Yeh ek message hai... 'Con... lt... a a n...' Iska matlab...?"
Usne dobaara check kiya. "C-O-N... L-T... A-A-N... Ohh..Yeh 'Confidential' ka code hai."
Commissioner ne haan mein sir hilaaya.
commissioner :...Billkul.
Iska matlab yeh message confidential hai."
(Sam ne socha, "Toh yeh ladki ne yeh code apni murder se pehle likha hoga. Kya yeh ek clue hai?)
Usne room ko dekha.
Sam : is room mein aur kuchh mila hai?
commissioner: haan..."Ek diary. Jismein kuchh ajeeb cheezein likhi hain.
Sam ne diary li. Uske panne palte..aur commissioner ki taraf dhek kar bola..."
Sam : Mujhe maarna hoga. Main jaanti hoon. Lekin main tumhein batana chahti hoon ki...
sam achanak se ruk gaya...
Usne agle panne ko palta..
Sam: "Aage nahin likha. Bas itna hi
(Sam ne socha. "Iska matlab yeh ladki jaanti thi ki uska murder hone wala hai. Aur usne yeh code likha.")
Usne dobaara code dekha. "3-14-15... confidential. Toh yeh message kya hai?"
Uske dimaag mein ek aur idea aaya. "Yeh ek address ho sakta hai. 31415, koi specific jagah?"
Usne phone se map check kiya. "31415... yeh Delhi mein ek specific location hai. Koi flat number?"
Commissioner ne haan mein sir hilaaya. "Haan, yeh ek flat number hai. JCP tower, flat number 31415."
(Sam ne socha, "Toh yeh message is flat ki taraf ishara kar raha hai.)
(Sam ne phir se kuch socha. "Toh yeh ladki ne apni murder se pehle yeh message likha, taaki hum jaan sakein ki uska murder kyun hua.")
.............
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Sam car mein baithkar JCP tower ki taraf badh gaya.
(Uske mann mein ek daravna ehsaas tha. Kya wahaan par kuchh aur clues milenge?)
JCP tower pahunchne par, Sam ne flat number 31415 mein knock kiya. Koi jawab nahin aaya. Usne darwaza khola. Andar kuchh ajeeb si smell a rahi thi.
Usne andar dekha. ..aur andar dhekte hee uske hosh udh gaye...
Sam : Shit...,
us room mein ek dead body thi. Yeh ek aadmi ki thi. Uske face par ek smile thi.
(Sam ne socha, "Yeh kya hai? Do murders? Aur dono ke beech kya connection hai?)
Usne room ko chaan been kiya ...aur Ek table par ek note pad tha. Us par likha tha, ["You are next.]
(Sam ne socha, "Toh yeh ek warning hai. Kya yeh message mere liye hai?)
Uske dimaag mein ek aur idea aaya. "Iska matlab is case mai... ab mujhe target banaya jaa raha hai."
(Sam ne dobaara socha. "to.. matlab is case mein kuchh aur bhi log involved hai..,)
Usne room se ek chit li. "Yeh ek phone number hai. +91 99999 99999."
Usne us number par call ki.... thori der baad call pick huwi ...tabhi call. ..mein se ek awaaz aati hai,
unknown: tumne sahi jagah par phone kiya hai Sam...,
Sam ne poocha : ..Kaun ho tum..aur tumhe mera naam kaise maloom,
unknown : main tumhare saath khelne wala hoon. Tumne abhi tak do clues solve kiye hai ... well-done Agent Sam,
Sam ne socha, "Yeh kiya bakwaas kar raha hai. ...
Sam : kaun hai tu ...aur kiya bakwaas kar raha muje seedhi bata ,
Unknown:..Agla clue bhi tumhare liye ek aur murder hai. Tumhein usse solve karna hoga...,
Sam gusse se: ...kiya bakwaas kar raha hai .. mein ne pocha.. tu kon hai muje seedhi tarha bata ...,
tabhi .. wo unknown person call cut kardeta hai...aur Sam "hello hello"..karta reh jaata hai...,
(Sam ne socha, "Toh yeh case ab ek aur murder ki taraf le ja raha hai...par usne aisa kiyu kiya...aur wo tha kaun)
Sam : to muje isko solve karna hoga. Kyunki yeh case...ek khel...ki tarha banta jaa raha hai....,
aur Sam police ko inform karke ..udher se nikal jaata hai ,
Sam car mein baithkar dobaara socha. Kya yeh case uske liye ek challenge hai? Ya phir kuchh aur...,
Usne dobaara diary ko dekha. "Is diary mein aur kuchh likha hai?"
Usne dobaara panne paltay.."Bas itna hi. 'Mujhe marna hoga. Main jaanti hoon. Lekin main tumhein batana chahti hoon ki...'" Usne socha, "is ladki ne aagey kyun nahi likhaa..."
Uske dimaag mein ek aur idea aaya. "Shayad yeh ek trap hai. Aur main ismein ... phas raha hoon ..,
Sam ne dobaara se socha. :.Toh jo clue .. muje ab tak miley wo muje is dead body ke paas laaye.. aur wo call par.. us shak ne... muje khulle Aam..kaha.. tumhara.. agla clue...bhi dead body hai",
tabhi Sam khud se kehta hai :..Main isko solve karunga. Kyunki yeh mera kaam hai ...,
To be continued...
yaha...komal puri tarha phas chuki thi... Nill ko bhi uspar shak hogya tha.. aur wo washroom ke door.. ke bahar patli..c..gali type jagah par khadi thi...
(jaisa ke aap sabne... shuro mein padha tha.. komal kisi ko phone lagane ka try kar rahi thi... par Sim...ke signal .. problem kar rahe thy aur call connect nahi ho rahi thi ..,)
Koman man mein ,(ohhh god.. please connect hojaye..ye call signal kiyu issue kar rahe hai )
wo baar baar try kar rahi thi .....
...par tabhi... call connect hojati hai... "Ring Ring Ring"... aur 30 seconds baad call waha se pick hoti aur ek awaaz..aati
call voice : hello.. han bolo komal... kiya baat hai... bade hafto baad call ki ,
Komal Ghabrate hue : Hello sam ..
Please I need your help right now. Meri jaan khatre mai hai mein tumhe location send kar rahi hu... mein yaha phans gayi hu...
sam ko kuch " samaj mein ..... nahi aata.. ke komal us sey keh kiya rahi hai"
Sam : komal kiya keh rahi...ho... muje samaj nahi aarha ,
komal : .. mein tumhe baad mai..samjha dungi but...tum .. please.. mere paas...aoo..mein location bhej rahi hu.. tab tak..mai..yaha se...nikalne ka try karti hu ...,
tabhi komal call cut karke .. "Whatsapp par ... current location send kardeti hai sam ko",
Sam ke mobile screen par .... notification aata hai aur .. wo.. car mein hee betha tha ... aur location ko map mai open karke ... nikal parta hai...
...........
par.. ye Sam hai kaun ? .. aur komal ne isey call kiyu ki?...to chaliye...chalte hai..2 months..peeche.. jaha aap..sam..ke baarey mein jaan paaye gy,
.........
Delhi ki garmi mein ek ajeeb si shanti thi. Sam, jo ki 26 saal ka ek kaabil agent tha, apni car mein baitha hua tha. Uske....dimaag hamesha kaam karta rehta tha, har cheez ko notice karta tha. aur uske eyes mein ek sharpness thi jo har cheez ko scan kar leti thi.. uski body well built thi .. aur wo kaafi attractive dhikta tha ,
Sam ko tabhi ek phone call aaya. Callercity police commissioner se,
commissioner, : Sam, tumhe ek case solve karna hoga ...Yeh ek murder case hai, lekin ismein kuchh ajeeb baatein hai ..,
Sam ne car start ki aur police station ki taraf badh gaya. Raaste mein usne apne dimaag ko active kiya. Murder case? Ajeeb baatein? Uske mann mein khud se sawal ho raha tha.
Police station pahunchne par, commissioner usey ek room mein le gaya. Room mein ek dead body thi. Ladki thi, umra lagbhag 22-23 saal. Uske face par daravna darsha raha tha.
tabhi commissioner us sey bolta hai ,
Commissioner: Kya pata lag raha hai?
Sam ne body ko closely inspect kiya.
sam : nishan to nahi hai .. lekin yeh maatar.....ek baat hai, iske baal kuchh ajeeb si condition mein hain.
Commissioner;.."Kya matlab?" .
sam :,Inke baal... inke baal mein ek chit thi. Sam ne chit nikali. Yeh ek code hai. 3-14-15." Usne chit ko dikhaaya.
Commissioner ne chit li aur bola, "Yeh code kya hai?
Sam ne socha. ..Yeh ek alphabet code ho sakta hai. Har number ek alphabet ki position batata hai." Usne apne phone se ek app khola. "3-14-15... yeh C-O-N. 'Con'?( Sam ne socha. but ismein kuch...baaki bhi hai.")
Usne aur numbers check kiye. "Yeh code 3-14-15 12-20-8 5-1-12-12-15..." Usne translate kiya. "Con... L-T... A-A-N... Yeh kya hai?"
Uske dimaag mein ek idea aaya. "
Sam : Yeh ek message hai... 'Con... lt... a a n...' Iska matlab...?"
Usne dobaara check kiya. "C-O-N... L-T... A-A-N... Ohh..Yeh 'Confidential' ka code hai."
Commissioner ne haan mein sir hilaaya.
commissioner :...Billkul.
Iska matlab yeh message confidential hai."
(Sam ne socha, "Toh yeh ladki ne yeh code apni murder se pehle likha hoga. Kya yeh ek clue hai?)
Usne room ko dekha.
Sam : is room mein aur kuchh mila hai?
commissioner: haan..."Ek diary. Jismein kuchh ajeeb cheezein likhi hain.
Sam ne diary li. Uske panne palte..aur commissioner ki taraf dhek kar bola..."
Sam : Mujhe maarna hoga. Main jaanti hoon. Lekin main tumhein batana chahti hoon ki...
sam achanak se ruk gaya...
Usne agle panne ko palta..
Sam: "Aage nahin likha. Bas itna hi
(Sam ne socha. "Iska matlab yeh ladki jaanti thi ki uska murder hone wala hai. Aur usne yeh code likha.")
Usne dobaara code dekha. "3-14-15... confidential. Toh yeh message kya hai?"
Uske dimaag mein ek aur idea aaya. "Yeh ek address ho sakta hai. 31415, koi specific jagah?"
Usne phone se map check kiya. "31415... yeh Delhi mein ek specific location hai. Koi flat number?"
Commissioner ne haan mein sir hilaaya. "Haan, yeh ek flat number hai. JCP tower, flat number 31415."
(Sam ne socha, "Toh yeh message is flat ki taraf ishara kar raha hai.)
(Sam ne phir se kuch socha. "Toh yeh ladki ne apni murder se pehle yeh message likha, taaki hum jaan sakein ki uska murder kyun hua.")
.............
.........
Sam car mein baithkar JCP tower ki taraf badh gaya.
(Uske mann mein ek daravna ehsaas tha. Kya wahaan par kuchh aur clues milenge?)
JCP tower pahunchne par, Sam ne flat number 31415 mein knock kiya. Koi jawab nahin aaya. Usne darwaza khola. Andar kuchh ajeeb si smell a rahi thi.
Usne andar dekha. ..aur andar dhekte hee uske hosh udh gaye...
Sam : Shit...,
us room mein ek dead body thi. Yeh ek aadmi ki thi. Uske face par ek smile thi.
(Sam ne socha, "Yeh kya hai? Do murders? Aur dono ke beech kya connection hai?)
Usne room ko chaan been kiya ...aur Ek table par ek note pad tha. Us par likha tha, ["You are next.]
(Sam ne socha, "Toh yeh ek warning hai. Kya yeh message mere liye hai?)
Uske dimaag mein ek aur idea aaya. "Iska matlab is case mai... ab mujhe target banaya jaa raha hai."
(Sam ne dobaara socha. "to.. matlab is case mein kuchh aur bhi log involved hai..,)
Usne room se ek chit li. "Yeh ek phone number hai. +91 99999 99999."
Usne us number par call ki.... thori der baad call pick huwi ...tabhi call. ..mein se ek awaaz aati hai,
unknown: tumne sahi jagah par phone kiya hai Sam...,
Sam ne poocha : ..Kaun ho tum..aur tumhe mera naam kaise maloom,
unknown : main tumhare saath khelne wala hoon. Tumne abhi tak do clues solve kiye hai ... well-done Agent Sam,
Sam ne socha, "Yeh kiya bakwaas kar raha hai. ...
Sam : kaun hai tu ...aur kiya bakwaas kar raha muje seedhi bata ,
Unknown:..Agla clue bhi tumhare liye ek aur murder hai. Tumhein usse solve karna hoga...,
Sam gusse se: ...kiya bakwaas kar raha hai .. mein ne pocha.. tu kon hai muje seedhi tarha bata ...,
tabhi .. wo unknown person call cut kardeta hai...aur Sam "hello hello"..karta reh jaata hai...,
(Sam ne socha, "Toh yeh case ab ek aur murder ki taraf le ja raha hai...par usne aisa kiyu kiya...aur wo tha kaun)
Sam : to muje isko solve karna hoga. Kyunki yeh case...ek khel...ki tarha banta jaa raha hai....,
aur Sam police ko inform karke ..udher se nikal jaata hai ,
Sam car mein baithkar dobaara socha. Kya yeh case uske liye ek challenge hai? Ya phir kuchh aur...,
Usne dobaara diary ko dekha. "Is diary mein aur kuchh likha hai?"
Usne dobaara panne paltay.."Bas itna hi. 'Mujhe marna hoga. Main jaanti hoon. Lekin main tumhein batana chahti hoon ki...'" Usne socha, "is ladki ne aagey kyun nahi likhaa..."
Uske dimaag mein ek aur idea aaya. "Shayad yeh ek trap hai. Aur main ismein ... phas raha hoon ..,
Sam ne dobaara se socha. :.Toh jo clue .. muje ab tak miley wo muje is dead body ke paas laaye.. aur wo call par.. us shak ne... muje khulle Aam..kaha.. tumhara.. agla clue...bhi dead body hai",
tabhi Sam khud se kehta hai :..Main isko solve karunga. Kyunki yeh mera kaam hai ...,
To be continued...
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woww you have written both the updates very well.. and the story. The beginning is very good and the way you have introduced Sam… that too with his case.. it was very good... waiting for the next update ..hope we'll get soon
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Nice update
Please add some images or gifs if possible just a suggestion
And keep going the story is very interesting