malikarman
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Jo aapko thik lageAmmi's slow seduction or straight to main story?
Jo aapko thik lageAmmi's slow seduction or straight to main story?
Story may become monotonous with this angle. Anyways you are the writer whatever you like you should write.Sadly: In survey: most people are only interested in Noor+Hira
Aur Dono Saas Bahu ek din alag Alag kamre mein chudeBadhiya twist hai... Saas aur bahu dono gair mardon ke lund pe uchhal-2 ke chudwayegi ab.... Baki story to jabardast hai lekin updates regular aane chahiye... Sirf Heera aur Noor ki chudai se story boring ho jaegi to new twists aate rehne chahiye....
RightAmmi's slow seduction.Noor should assist hira's friend panna in seducing so that she could spent more time with hira without any fear and control her husband's ammi.