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Adultery Aakhir m peda hi kyu hua ? (zero to hero)

Lead character ka nam kya rakhe ?


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katana

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Hello everyone
I am new in story writing.
the plot for this story is realistic
No magic , No system .
Yeh kahani h ek ladke ki jo sidha sadha h
Bachpan m bahut daant or maar khane ki wajah se thoda dabbu h
Ladkiyo se bat krne m zero , social skill zero
Dimag tej chlta h pr pdayi m focus hi kr pata
 

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Hello everyone
I am new in story writing.
the plot for this story is realistic
No magic , No system .
Yeh kahani h ek ladke ki jo sidha sadha h
Bachpan m bahut daant or maar khane ki wajah se thoda dabbu h
Ladkiyo se bat krne m zero , social skill zero
Dimag tej chlta h pr pdayi m focus hi kr pata
Nice start
Congratulations for your new story
 
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katana

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Isko kuch kam bhi nhi ata bas khana kkata h sota h , talent zero , aalsi , dimag to chalata hi nhi
 
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katana

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Jyada se jyada like krne ka , replies pelne ka , share bhi krne sare log

Thank You So Much Laughing GIF by Pusheen
 
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mass8787

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Kahani may ager hero belkul hee lula dekhawoo gay tuu khar dekhty hay Post tuu karo update
 

katana

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UPDATE :- 01

Ek gaon m ek ladka bhag rha h bhut tej bhag rha h ,
pichhe gunde uske piche uski jan lene ke liye doud rhe h

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Bhagte bhagte wah jungle m chala jata h ,
pichhe gunde bhi agye
Ab ladka bhut thak chuka tha or bhaga nhi ja rha tha ,
Ladka ab samajh chuka h ki agar bachna h to ladna pdega to
Ladka ek ped k piche chhip jata h gunde bhagte bhagte jab vaha se nikalte h
To ladka sabse piche wale gunde ko pakad kr uska muh band krke uska gala puri takat se daba deta h ,
jisse gunda thodi hi der m swarg sidhar chuka tha ,
ab ladka khada hota h bhagte huye age jata h
Idhar gunde uske samne se gayab ho jane se use idhar udhar dhundne lgte h
Ladka bhagte hue ata h or pir chhupke se ped ke pas chhip jata h
Tabhi ek gunda use dhundte hue waha aa jata h ladka savdhani se uske ghutne pr lat marta h jese hi wah girne ko hota h ldka uska muh band krke aram se jamin pr leta deta h or uske pran har leta h

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Abhi bhi 3 gunde bache the
Ab wah ped pr chad jata h or intezar krta h tabhi ek gunde isi taraf aata h or chillate hue bolta h :- ae ladke kab tak chhupa rhega bahar aja tujhe asan mout dege nhi to tujhe tadpa tadpa ke marenge . Ladka thoda dar jata h lekin samne nhi ata , gunda jese hi ped ke niche ata h ladka us ped se gunde ke upar kud jata h , ladke ka ghutna gunde k muh m lgta h to uski chikh nikal jati h or gunda behosh ho jata h , phir ladka pad pde pathhar ko uske sir par marke uske pran har leta h , tabhi dono gunde waha pahuch jate h or dekhte h uska sathi mara pda h to un dono ki gand phat jati h lekin phir in dono m se ek ke pas chhoti chaku thi jise wah hera par akele hamla krta pehle war ko ladka dodge krta h , phir gunda dusra war krta h ladka use dodge krne ki koshish krta h lekin uske hath m ek cut lag jata h iske sath hi ek jordar chikh nikal jati h or ladka whi niche beth jata h or rone ka natak krta h or jese hi gunda uske pas ata h ladka jaldi se pas pde pathar se uske sir ki chatni bna deta h hamla itna Jordar tha ki gunde ki chikh uske gale m hi rah jati h or uska ram nam satya ho jata h .
ab ladka akhiri bache gunde ki or dekhta h jisne dar ki wajah se apne pant m hi mut diya , ldka ab khada hota h or chalke uske pas jata h pr usse puchhta h "kisne bheja h tumhe "
Par gunda dar ke mare chu bhi nhi nikal rhi thi or wah behosh ho jata h ladke gusse m pas pde paththar ko uske sir par patak deta h or uski jeevan dhara samapt kr deta h .
Tabhi ldke ko khun bhne se or itne der bhagne ki wajah se chakkar aa jate h or wah pas pde nukile patthar par pet ke bal gir pdta h jo uske pet ke aar par ho jata h or phir.....
Uski nind khul jati h or wah jor se chillata h mummyyyyyy

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Tabhi ek aurat dodke ari h or use gale lga leti h or bolti h
Kya hua mere raja babu ,mera beta
Koi bura sapna dekha kya
shant hoja dekh kitna pasina aa rha h le beta pani pi
or phir ladka pani pike wahi apni mummy se chipak kr so jata h .
Yeh ladka koi or nhi apna hero akshat hi h
Or uski maa radhika thi


Ajj ke liye itna hi ummid krta hu apko yeh story ka pehla update pasand aya hoga
 
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