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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

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abhi1008

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ab tak aapne dekha......... hero ka sukshma sharir Bramhalok mein hai....aur ab aage ..........

Mein yeh soch raha tha ki yeh sab ky chakkar hai aur yeh suksma sharir kya hai , tabhi ...

Bramha ji :- Beta har vyakti k 3 sharir hote hai
sthool sharir... jo 5 tatv
( elements ) ka bana hota hai,

Dusra sukshma sharir yeh yeh indriyo ki urja, antarman aur kundlishakti se banna hua hai

Teesra kaaran sharir jo karmo k faal se banta bigadta hai hai

mein - yeh parampita aap toh iss shrishti k nirman karte hai , toh phir muzh jaise ek sadharan manav ko yaha aane ka saubhagya kaise prapt hua, kyuki jaha tak maine suna hai aap tridev k darshan toh devtao ko bhi durlabh hai, phir mera jaisa ek bahut hi sadharan manav par yeh kripa kyu

Bramha ji -- Putr tum yaha ho ,isse jan lo ki tum koi sadharan nahi ho,
tum hum tridevo k ansh se banne ho,
tum har kaliyug mein bramhand k rakshak ho putra

Mein - Rakshak aur mein ....kaise prabhu ..mein toh kuch gundo ka bhi saamna nahi kar paaya ....toh phir rakshak kaise

Bramha ji - Putra tum apni shaktiyo ko jagrit karo ab samay aagaya hai , putra

itna kah kar unke haato mein rakhe ved se ek prakash nikla aur mere bhitar samane laga, muzhe mere bhitar anneko ved mantra gunjte hue se mahsus hue, aur unn mantro se utpan honewali urja ko mein mahsus kar raha tha, ek divyata ka anbhav


Brahma ji -Putra ab isse aage ka raasta tumahare guru batayenge

mein - Parantu prabhu mere sharir ki aisi haalat..

Brahma ji -- kuch nahi hua putr , tum bilkul swastha ho , jab tumhe tumahare pranshakti ki dharak sparsh karegi , tab tumhe chetna aajaayege
aur tum iss yatra ko bhul jaaoge sirf mera diya hua vedo ka gyan hi jagrit hoga

jab tum apne swarup aur shaktio ko paa loge tabhi hum tridevo ko apne bhitar paaoge
yashshvi buav putra ..
.ab mein vaha mere samne se brahma lok ka drishya adrishya ho ho gaya aur prkashrup ho gaya aur chal pada apni manjil ki aur

ab muzhe dikh raha hai hospital mein pada mera sharir aur usse dekhte hi saari bhavnaye aur yaadein meri jagrit ho gayi

tabhi muzhe kiski dard bhari pukar sunai di k jaise koi muzhe pukaar raha hai..... uss pukar ki taraf jaise hi mera dhyan gaya toh pahuch gaya ek room mein waha maine dekha ek bed par meri Ritu di baithi hai unko dekhte hi muzhe ek dard ka ahsas hua

Di aankhien band kar k baithi hui hai unke gaalo par sukh chuke aansoon k nishan dikh rahe hai , aur band aankon se bhi aansoo bah rahe hai ,

di k dil ki pukar muzhe sunai de rahi hai ( uth jaa na bhai dekh tere bina tere di ka kya haal ho gaya hai betu, agar aaj tu nahi utha toh mein iss duniya se hi uth jaaungi.. meri wajah se hi yeh sab hua hai ...jab tu hi nahi rahega toh mei jee kar kya karungi)

Di ka yeh dard muzhse saha nahi jaa raha tha mein unhe batana chahta tha lekin mein kuch kar nahi paa raha tha

tab maine apne aapko shaant kiya aur di ko mann mein pukara

mein -- Di aap se dur hoke kaha jaa sakta hu mein , muzhe kuch nahi hua di ....tumhe aisi haalat mein nahi dekh sakta di chup ho jaao.... ab mein aagaya hu .. lekin muzhe apni di ka wahi khilta hua chehra dekhna hai

di ko apne dil mein meri aawaj sunai deti hai woh aankein khol kar chaaro taraf dekhti hai

Ritu - betu kaha hai tu .....kyu chup raha hai...betu saamne aaja na

di ki aawaj wah baithi maa sun leti hai

Maa - kya hua beta ..kisko pukar rahi hai

maa ki aawaj sunkar mera dhyan unki taraf gaya toh dekha unki aankhein bhi ro rokar lal ho gayi hai muzhe unke dil mein chupa hua dard dikhayi dene laga , dil mein mamta ka saagar aur mera thik hone ki niranter bhagwan ki prarthana dekh kar mera man unko gale lagane ka hua ..lekin mein abhi asamarth tha

Ritu di -- maa abhi Betu ne muzhse baat ki woh aanewala hai maa....bhai thik ho gay hai maa ...itna kah kar di washroom mein chali gayi

ab mein papa ko dhundne laga toh dekha woh waiting room mein meri puri family se ghire hue hai ..sab aaye hai Dada, dadi ... Nana ,nani dono bua ki family , Mama mausi sab rishtedar aur papa apne dil ka dard chupakar unko saari sthiti bata rahe the

ki tabhi waha par kisi ki aawaj aayi
papa ....... jab mera dhyan uss taraf gaya toh dekha meri jaan jisme basti hai .. mere dil ka tukda ...meri chotti behan ...Adira

Duad kar aai aur papa k gale lagkar rone lagi ...ussko rote dekhkar sabke aankon mein aanso aagaye aur papa bhi apne aap ko nahi rok paaye

Papa -- Chup ho jaao meri gudiya

Adira -- Papa aap bahut bure ho ....itna kuch ho gaya aapne muzhe bataya nahi ..maine bhai ko ph karne ki bahut koshish ki lekin meri baat nahi hui ..aur pata nahi kyu muzhe bar bar rona aaraha tha,tab maine yaha aane ka socha ... aur jab mein ghar gayi toh waha koi nahi tha .....shankar kaka ne kaha ki sab bahar gaye hai unhone bhi kuch nahi bataya .....lekin jab maine tv par news dekhi toh sab pata chala

aur woh jor jor se rone lagi , uska dard dekhkar mein bhi dard se tadaf utha

Adira -- Papa muzhe abhi le chalo bhai k paas muzhe abhi dekhna hai bhai ko

Papa - Beta dekho abhi wo ICU mein hai hum usse sirf bahar se dekh sakte hai

Adira - mein kuch nahi jaanti papa muzhe abhi bhai se milna hai aap kuch bhi karo
yeh kahkar woh jor jor se rone lagi

apne dil k tudkde ki aisi haalat dekhkar R.V.S ne doc se baat ki aur badi mushkil se srif ek ko jaane ki permission mili


papa Adira ko lekar ICU ki taraf chal pade waha jaakar dekha toh maa aur Ritu di bhi ICU k bahar mili Adira ko lekin sirf apne bhai ko dekhne ki jaldi thi iss pahele maa aur di kuch kahti doc ne ICU ka door khol diya aur Adira turant ander chali gayi aur saath hi saath mein bhi sukshma rup se bhiter gaya, aur ander apne sharir ko dekhne laga jaha oxigen cylender laga hua tha aur saline se koi dawa meri andar pahuchayi jaa rahi thi kuch machine bhi lagi hui thi jo awaj se mere jivit hone ka praman de rahi thi

Meri aisi haalat dekhkar Chotti ki aankon se aansu bah nikle , aur kahne lagi

Adira -- Uth jaao na bhai dekho aapki gudiya aapko pukar rahi hai, aapne muzhse roj baat karne ka waada kiya tha utho na bhai ...ab mein aapse koi jid nahi karungi .. bhai agar aap aaj nahi uthe toh mein bhi aaj k baad kisi se baat nahi karungi

itna kahte hue wih aage badi aur mera haath pakad liya...... jaise hi gudiya ne mera haath pakda gudiya ki aankon se white roshni nikalne lagi .... aur woh safed urja uske haato k jariye mere bhitar jaa rahi thi

bahar se mom, dad aur di glass mein se dekh rahe the lekin unhe woh prakash nazar nahi aaya

achanak muzhe aaisa laga jaise muzhe apne sharir mein koi shakti khich rahi hai aur mein prevesh kar gaya apne sharir mein

Gudiya ne mehsus kiya ki mera haath hil raha hai toh uski pakd aur majbut ho gayi aur bhai bhai karke pukarne lagi.

tabhi dhere dhere meri aankien khula aur mera muh se nikla .....gudiya

abhi k liye itna hi ..... next update soon
 

Nky

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ab tak aapne dekha......... hero ka sukshma sharir Bramhalok mein hai....aur ab aage ..........

Mein yeh soch raha tha ki yeh sab ky chakkar hai aur yeh suksma sharir kya hai , tabhi ...

Bramha ji :- Beta har vyakti k 3 sharir hote hai
sthool sharir... jo 5 tatv
( elements ) ka bana hota hai,

Dusra sukshma sharir yeh yeh indriyo ki urja, antarman aur kundlishakti se banna hua hai

Teesra kaaran sharir jo karmo k faal se banta bigadta hai hai

mein - yeh parampita aap toh iss shrishti k nirman karte hai , toh phir muzh jaise ek sadharan manav ko yaha aane ka saubhagya kaise prapt hua, kyuki jaha tak maine suna hai aap tridev k darshan toh devtao ko bhi durlabh hai, phir mera jaisa ek bahut hi sadharan manav par yeh kripa kyu

Bramha ji -- Putr tum yaha ho ,isse jan lo ki tum koi sadharan nahi ho,
tum hum tridevo k ansh se banne ho,
tum har kaliyug mein bramhand k rakshak ho putra

Mein - Rakshak aur mein ....kaise prabhu ..mein toh kuch gundo ka bhi saamna nahi kar paaya ....toh phir rakshak kaise

Bramha ji - Putra tum apni shaktiyo ko jagrit karo ab samay aagaya hai , putra

itna kah kar unke haato mein rakhe ved se ek prakash nikla aur mere bhitar samane laga, muzhe mere bhitar anneko ved mantra gunjte hue se mahsus hue, aur unn mantro se utpan honewali urja ko mein mahsus kar raha tha, ek divyata ka anbhav


Brahma ji -Putra ab isse aage ka raasta tumahare guru batayenge

mein - Parantu prabhu mere sharir ki aisi haalat..

Brahma ji -- kuch nahi hua putr , tum bilkul swastha ho , jab tumhe tumahare pranshakti ki dharak sparsh karegi , tab tumhe chetna aajaayege
aur tum iss yatra ko bhul jaaoge sirf mera diya hua vedo ka gyan hi jagrit hoga

jab tum apne swarup aur shaktio ko paa loge tabhi hum tridevo ko apne bhitar paaoge
yashshvi buav putra ..
.ab mein vaha mere samne se brahma lok ka drishya adrishya ho ho gaya aur prkashrup ho gaya aur chal pada apni manjil ki aur

ab muzhe dikh raha hai hospital mein pada mera sharir aur usse dekhte hi saari bhavnaye aur yaadein meri jagrit ho gayi

tabhi muzhe kiski dard bhari pukar sunai di k jaise koi muzhe pukaar raha hai..... uss pukar ki taraf jaise hi mera dhyan gaya toh pahuch gaya ek room mein waha maine dekha ek bed par meri Ritu di baithi hai unko dekhte hi muzhe ek dard ka ahsas hua

Di aankhien band kar k baithi hui hai unke gaalo par sukh chuke aansoon k nishan dikh rahe hai , aur band aankon se bhi aansoo bah rahe hai ,

di k dil ki pukar muzhe sunai de rahi hai ( uth jaa na bhai dekh tere bina tere di ka kya haal ho gaya hai betu, agar aaj tu nahi utha toh mein iss duniya se hi uth jaaungi.. meri wajah se hi yeh sab hua hai ...jab tu hi nahi rahega toh mei jee kar kya karungi)

Di ka yeh dard muzhse saha nahi jaa raha tha mein unhe batana chahta tha lekin mein kuch kar nahi paa raha tha

tab maine apne aapko shaant kiya aur di ko mann mein pukara

mein -- Di aap se dur hoke kaha jaa sakta hu mein , muzhe kuch nahi hua di ....tumhe aisi haalat mein nahi dekh sakta di chup ho jaao.... ab mein aagaya hu .. lekin muzhe apni di ka wahi khilta hua chehra dekhna hai

di ko apne dil mein meri aawaj sunai deti hai woh aankein khol kar chaaro taraf dekhti hai

Ritu - betu kaha hai tu .....kyu chup raha hai...betu saamne aaja na

di ki aawaj wah baithi maa sun leti hai

Maa - kya hua beta ..kisko pukar rahi hai

maa ki aawaj sunkar mera dhyan unki taraf gaya toh dekha unki aankhein bhi ro rokar lal ho gayi hai muzhe unke dil mein chupa hua dard dikhayi dene laga , dil mein mamta ka saagar aur mera thik hone ki niranter bhagwan ki prarthana dekh kar mera man unko gale lagane ka hua ..lekin mein abhi asamarth tha

Ritu di -- maa abhi Betu ne muzhse baat ki woh aanewala hai maa....bhai thik ho gay hai maa ...itna kah kar di washroom mein chali gayi

ab mein papa ko dhundne laga toh dekha woh waiting room mein meri puri family se ghire hue hai ..sab aaye hai Dada, dadi ... Nana ,nani dono bua ki family , Mama mausi sab rishtedar aur papa apne dil ka dard chupakar unko saari sthiti bata rahe the

ki tabhi waha par kisi ki aawaj aayi
papa ....... jab mera dhyan uss taraf gaya toh dekha meri jaan jisme basti hai .. mere dil ka tukda ...meri chotti behan ...Adira

Duad kar aai aur papa k gale lagkar rone lagi ...ussko rote dekhkar sabke aankon mein aanso aagaye aur papa bhi apne aap ko nahi rok paaye

Papa -- Chup ho jaao meri gudiya

Adira -- Papa aap bahut bure ho ....itna kuch ho gaya aapne muzhe bataya nahi ..maine bhai ko ph karne ki bahut koshish ki lekin meri baat nahi hui ..aur pata nahi kyu muzhe bar bar rona aaraha tha,tab maine yaha aane ka socha ... aur jab mein ghar gayi toh waha koi nahi tha .....shankar kaka ne kaha ki sab bahar gaye hai unhone bhi kuch nahi bataya .....lekin jab maine tv par news dekhi toh sab pata chala

aur woh jor jor se rone lagi , uska dard dekhkar mein bhi dard se tadaf utha

Adira -- Papa muzhe abhi le chalo bhai k paas muzhe abhi dekhna hai bhai ko

Papa - Beta dekho abhi wo ICU mein hai hum usse sirf bahar se dekh sakte hai

Adira - mein kuch nahi jaanti papa muzhe abhi bhai se milna hai aap kuch bhi karo
yeh kahkar woh jor jor se rone lagi

apne dil k tudkde ki aisi haalat dekhkar R.V.S ne doc se baat ki aur badi mushkil se srif ek ko jaane ki permission mili


papa Adira ko lekar ICU ki taraf chal pade waha jaakar dekha toh maa aur Ritu di bhi ICU k bahar mili Adira ko lekin sirf apne bhai ko dekhne ki jaldi thi iss pahele maa aur di kuch kahti doc ne ICU ka door khol diya aur Adira turant ander chali gayi aur saath hi saath mein bhi sukshma rup se bhiter gaya, aur ander apne sharir ko dekhne laga jaha oxigen cylender laga hua tha aur saline se koi dawa meri andar pahuchayi jaa rahi thi kuch machine bhi lagi hui thi jo awaj se mere jivit hone ka praman de rahi thi

Meri aisi haalat dekhkar Chotti ki aankon se aansu bah nikle , aur kahne lagi

Adira -- Uth jaao na bhai dekho aapki gudiya aapko pukar rahi hai, aapne muzhse roj baat karne ka waada kiya tha utho na bhai ...ab mein aapse koi jid nahi karungi .. bhai agar aap aaj nahi uthe toh mein bhi aaj k baad kisi se baat nahi karungi

itna kahte hue wih aage badi aur mera haath pakad liya...... jaise hi gudiya ne mera haath pakda gudiya ki aankon se white roshni nikalne lagi .... aur woh safed urja uske haato k jariye mere bhitar jaa rahi thi

bahar se mom, dad aur di glass mein se dekh rahe the lekin unhe woh prakash nazar nahi aaya

achanak muzhe aaisa laga jaise muzhe apne sharir mein koi shakti khich rahi hai aur mein prevesh kar gaya apne sharir mein

Gudiya ne mehsus kiya ki mera haath hil raha hai toh uski pakd aur majbut ho gayi aur bhai bhai karke pukarne lagi.

tabhi dhere dhere meri aankien khula aur mera muh se nikla .....gudiya

abhi k liye itna hi ..... next update soon
Nice update bhai
 

abhi1008

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ab tak aapne dekha ....adira k chunne se hero ka sukshma sharir wapas uske sharir mein aajaata hai....... aur hero ki aankhein khulti hai..... ab aage


Mein - Gudiya .... mera baccha

Meri aawaj sunkar woh mere gale lagkar rone lagi
Adira - bhayia ..aap bahut bure ho aap apni gudiya ko chod kar jaa rahe the na
mein - nahi meri pyari aadu mein kaise tumko chod kar jaa sakta hu
aur mein pyar se uske sir par haath pherne laga
yaha bahar khade mom ,dad aur di ne muzhe hosh mein aate hue aur gudiya se baat karte dekha
dad ne fauran paas khade doc ko aawaj dekar bulaya , aur teeno doc k saath ander aagaye
ander aate hi doc ne machines check ki toh sab normal dekhkar hairan ho gaya .
mom aur di muzhe hosh mein dekhkar bahut khush huye aur unki aankon se khusi k aanso nikal ne

yeh aanso bhi ajab chij hai, gum ho yaa khushi, bahar aane ko tayyar rahete hai

tabhi di ne pyar se mere sir par haath rakha toh unka mere liye pyar dekhkar mere aankon mein bhi aansoo aagaye

Ritu di - Mat ro betu dekhab tu jadi thik ho jaayega, tune muzhe toh rone k liye mana kiya tha aur ab tu khud ro raha hai
muzhe kuch samaz nahi aaraha tha ki di kya kah rahi hai, kyu ki mein suksma shari dwara dekha gaya sab kuch bhul gaya tha

mom ne aage badh k mere aanson poche Addu bahi tak mere upar gale lagi hui sisak rahi thi
jaise agar woh chod degi toh mein kahi chala jaaunga

Doc - Rana sahab abhi aap isse akela chod de please, abhi hume inko check-up karna hai , phir inhe room mein shift karna hai, waha aap sab mil sakte ho

papa meri taraf dekh rahe the apne dil ka dard dil mein chupaaye, aur mera sir par unhone ne haath rakha , aur bole ...... mera pyara bahadur beta in choti moti choto se Hamare khoon ko kuch nahi ho sakta ....bete abhi toh bahut lambi ladayi hai

maa - kya ji aap abhi mera beta hosh mein aaya aur aap ladayi ki baat lekar baith gaye, kahi nahi jaane dungi apne lal ko kahkar ....apne aanchal se mero muh saaf karne lagi ..... maa ke aanchal ki woh divya sugandh ne mere sharir ko ek aaram sa mila.....aurmuzhe achanak nind si aagayi

maa - doc dekho na ky hua phir se

doc - kuch nahi maa ji abhi patient ko aaram ki jarurat hai

papa - beta addu chod do ab bhai ko dekho unko aaram ki jarurat hai, tum chati ho na ki tumahara bhai jaldi thik ho jaaye

Adira(addu) - lekin papa mein bhi bhai k ......

papa - lekin vekin kuch nahi , kya tum apne bhai ko takleef dena chahti ho

itna sunte hi addu uth gayi....
nahi papa mein bhai ko kaise taklif pahucha sakti hu.... aap jo bologe mein woh karungi
phir sab bahar aagaye , aur doc ne muzhe check karna shuru kiya , toh woh hairaan rah gaye

doc - Nahi yeh nahi ho sakta, its impossible, its really a miracle ...kaise ho sakta hai yeh

assistant - kya hua sir kya nahi ho sakta

doc - idhar dekho iss patient ke saare ghav apne aap kaise bhar gaye ,aur operation ka nisshan kaha gaya

assis - haa sir yeh toh unbealivable hai
doc - ek baat dhyan rahe yeh baat bahar nahi naikalni chahiye , nahi toh kai sawal khade ho jaayenge

assis - ji sir jaisa aap kahe

ab muzhe ek bade se room mein shift kar diya gaya , yeh ek bada room tha kyu ki doc ko pata tha ki visitors ki list bahut lambi hai

aur mein yaha sapne mein ek golden color k room mein apne aap ko dekgta hu jaha vedo k mantra gunj rahe hai
aur dheere dheere woh mantra mere buddhi mein apni jagah bana rahe hai ...mein unki urja mehsus kar raha hu

jaise hi mantra dhwani ruki ek aawaj gunji aaj k liye itna hi putr

aur phir meri aankhein khul gayi aur maine aapne aapko ek room mein paaya mera sir maa ki godi mein tha aur woh pyar se muzhe hi dekh rahi thi , muzhe hosh mein aate dekhkar unke chehre par muskurahat aagayi

meri gudiya aur di bhi muzhe utha dekhkar khushi se gale lag gayi .
aur bhi bhi sapne ki baato mein khoya hua tha , muzhe ander ek nayi urja ka ahsas ho raha tha , mere mastishk mein kai mantro ka aabhas hone laga abhi mein soch hi raha tha ki yeh mantra mere bhitar kaha se aaye to gudiya ne muzhe hilaye

addu - bhai kaha kho gaye ho mein aapse kuch bol rahi hu...

Mein - mein sun raha hu betu kya bol rahi ho

addu - bhai ab mein hostel nahi jaaungi , aapko chodkar kahi nahi jaaungi,

mein - dekh betu aise jid nahi karte

addu - nahi bhai muzhe aur kuch nahi chahiye ,muzhe sirf aap chahiye

itna kah kar woh rone lagi
mein - chup jo jaa betu mat ro, thik hai jo tu kahegi wahi hoga....aur meri gudiya tu itni rondu kab se ho gayi.
chup hio jaao sona, mein promise karta hu jo tu chahegi wahi hoga

itne mein addu k aansoo band ho gaye aur woh khilakar haste hue boli

addu - aapki gudiya rondu nahi hai bhaiya, ab aapne promise kiya hai

mein sab samaz gaya ki issne natak karke muzhse promise le liye

mein -- addu tu na bahut shaitan ho gayi hai, toh mein pyar se ek chapat uske sir par laga di

mom aur di bhi addu ki nautanki dekhkar hasne lagi

yaha room k bahar doc aur R.V.S


Doc - Rana saheb jo meine dekha mein vishwas nahi kar sakta
lagta hai aapke bete mein powers hai

R.V.S - man mein (kahi doc ne yeh baat bahar bata di toh mushkul hongi... kuch karna hoga) tabhi who bole
Doc sahab jara dheere se nahi toh koi sun lega, aur phir doc ki aankhon mein dekhkar man mein kuch bolne lage .. isse doc ka sir bhari sa hone laga

R.V.S - kya hua doc sahab aap thik toh hai na.....kya kahrahe the aap

Doc - kuch nahi rana sahab halka sa sir dard hai thiik ho jaayega .......
aur haa mein kah raha tha discharge paper kal tak mil jaaenge

(R.V.S ne aise kya kiya ....... jo doc sab bhul gaya.... )
Doc se baat karke R.V.S bete k paas aagaya

papa - uth gaye young man ab kaisa feel kar rahe ho

mein - Ab accha lag raha hai papa , (idhar udhar dekhte hue) papa Rakesh kahi dikhai nahi de raha kaha hai woh

papa - beta woh muzhse puchkar hi gaya tha, aajaayega jaldi

itne mein aawaj aai haa dost ko bada yaad kar raha hai , kabhi hume bhi yaad kar liya karo

meine darwaje par dekha toh merin dono bua aur unki family thi

inn sab k baare mein full family intro mein pata chalega

yaha visitors ka aur media walo ka aur bayan lene k liye police ka tanta laga hua hai...............yaha inhe chodte hai aur chalte hai hai isi shahr k end mein forest k paas ek farm house mein kuch dhamaka honewala hai waha

Roopnagar k dakshin disha mei ek ghanna jungle hai , jaha se jugle shuru hota hai waha kai resorts bane hue hai, wahi hotels aur resorts se kuch duri par ekkanth mein ek aalishan bangla hai.. jiske charo aur 20 ft unchi deeware hai aur ek bada sa gate laga hua hai ... jaha 4 gaurds hamesha
ak 56 se lance pahra dete hai ander ek bahut sunder park aur bich mein water fountain uski sunderta ko char chand laga rahe hai, sham k samay light se aur bhi shandar lag raha tha

bahar se jitna bada dikh raha hai usse jyada ander se bada hai


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ander ek choti si drink party chal rahi hai jaha karib 10 ladke sharab aur shabab ka lutf utha rahe the
unmein se ek ... yaar Vilas aaj toh maza aagaya
Vilas (mla ka chotta ladka)- haa yaar aaj toh jasn mannane ka di hai

yeh sab mla ka ladka aur uske dost the jo kisi baat ka jasn manna rahe the....aanewali maut se anjan

Vilas - yaaro aaj khulkar piyo mere raste ka kaanta aaj ukad gaya

baki ko L1,L2 likhunga...

L1 - lekin bhai usska baap bahut powerful hai

vilas - Humne bhi kacchi goliya nahi kheli uska baap toh kya kissi ko bhi pata nahi chalega , yeh hamara kand hai
L2 - wah bhai kamal kar diya, lekin uss fulzhadi Ritu ko kyu chod diya usse le aate toh aaj maza aajaata

L3- arre bewakuf sabar se kaam le , bhai ne kuch socha hoga

Vilas - haa yaar , mere baare mein jissko pata tha, uska woh bhai toh ab nahi raha , jo mere liye kgatra ban sakta tha, uss Ritu ko ab kabhi bhi utha sakte hai

L5 -haa bhai bada uchalta tha Abhi aur woh uska dost haa kya naam tha uska...haa Rakesh itne mein hi ek jor ka dhamaka hua aur hall ka darwaja tut kar gir gaya, Waha ka security alaram baj utha aur dekhte hi dehkte uss bangle k tahkhanne se karib 100 Gaurds aadunik hatiyaro k saath vilas aur usske dosto ki security k liye unko gher kar khade ho gaye

sab tute hue door k tarf dekhte hai toh waha utha dhua chatte hi ek saaya nazar aaya

tabhi waha bhayanak ek aawaj gunji

Maut hu mein ....mahakaal ka ansh tumahara kaal hu mein....

abhi k liye itna hi.....

agla action se bharpur update raat ko
 
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