Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

[Akil]

Update - 114

ab tak aapne dekha Abhi ka Renuka k saath milan hogaya aur usse ...Divya drishti prapt ho gayi....
aur dekha k Golark talatal lok k kissi Jeev k saath Abhi k viruddh apne shadyantra ki yojna bana raha hai........

ab aagee.........

Golark kis tarah talatal tak pahuncha .....dekhte hai......

Baat tab ki hai jab Vital lok se asuro ko mukt karakar Abhi Atal Lok jaa raha tha .....tab KS k bheje Mohak ne ....apni vidveshan vidya ka prayog karke Abhi ko mohit kiya ...aur Abhi k haatho GK ki mrityu ho gayi......

Jiss damay GK ki mrityu hui uss samay Bhua lok mein raat thi .....Aur waha sthit yaksha bhumi k Alkapoori mein sthit GK ki patni kaavya Golu aur apni beti vika k saath soyi thi k saath soyi hui thi ......

dono baacho ki umar toh hazar varsho se bhi jyada thi lekin yaksha lok k samay anusar abhi dono dikhne mein koi 5 ya 6 varsh k baccho k saman hi the......

Yaha jaisi hi GK ki mrityu hui ....Kaavya ko sawapn mein GK ka sharir jalta hua dikha ......aur woh aansso bhari aankhon se uske aur uske baccho ki taraf dekh raha tha .......

Uski aankhon k saamne uska pati raakh k dher mein badal gaya ....aur woh jor se chikhte hue uthi .....Nahiiiiii ...aapne muzhe vachan diya tha ...aap iss tarah muzhe chod k nahi jaa sakteaur jor jor se rone lagi .. ....

yaksho ko him manusya jaise need mein swapna nahi aate .......yadi kisi ko aise kisi drishya ka sapna aata hai toh woh kisi ka sandesh hota hai.....

Kaavya jaan chuki thi k ab uska suhag nahi raha ....Jo usne sapna dekha woh sapna nahi GK ka sandesh tha unke liye .....jismein woh aashru bhari aankon se saath chodne k liye kshama maang raha tha ......

usse bar bar woh drishya yad aaraha aur woh bas GK ko pukarti hui roye jaa rahi thi .....

Kaavya ki aawaj sunkar uske dono bacche bhi uth gaye aur apni maa ko rota dekhkar ... ..dono bacche bhi rone lage .....

Golu - rote hue - kya hua maa .....aap ro kyu rahi hai .....aur baar baar Pita shri ka naam kyu le rahi hai ........

lekin kaavya bas roye jaa rahi thi ........

Golu - baatao na maa......kya hua ......iss prakar kyu ro rhai ho ....aur woh apni maa k paas jaakar usse pukate hue hilane lagta hai .....

Golu k aisa karne par kaavya ko kuch hosh aaya ...aur usne apne baccho ko rote hue dekha ...apne baccho ko rota dekhkar usne apna dukh ander daba diya .....

aur apne baccho ko apni goadi mein lekar seene se laga liya ......Golu ne bhi apne nanhe haato se apni maa k aansoo ponche ....

Kaavya apne baacho ko gale lagakar unhe yeh ahsas dila rahi thi k sab thik hai .....

K tabhi Golu k sharir mein achanak zhatke lagne lage.......aur woh uske godi se dur chitak gaya ..aur tadapne laga ......

Apne pati ki mrityu ko abhi ek ghadi bhi nahi hui k uapne putra ko iss tarah tadapte hue dekhkar woh aur ghabra gayi ......

Vika bhi apne bhai ko iss tarah dekhkar ghabra gayi ......

Kavya Golu k paas aayi aur usse aawaj dene lagi ....uske haath pairo ...seene ko ragadne lagi .....apne bete ki aise haalat dekhkar uska dil tadap utha .....woh kuch nahi kar paa rahi thi .....usse samaz nahi aaraha tha k kaise woh apne bete ki iss tadap ko khatam kare ....

Toh ussne Golu ko apne gale lagaya aur yske sir par haath pherne lagi.....Golu ab behosh ho chuka tha.......toh kaavya ne usse bed par lita diya .......

Usne dekha k Golu k sharir mein badlav aarahe hai ....uska sharir ab dhire dhire badne laga tha ...

Kaavya ne apni beti ko wahi choda aur vaid ji ko lekar aagayi ......

Vaid ji ne jab Golu ko dekha toh unhe bas itna hi pata chala k koi shaktishali urj usske ander prevesh kar gayi hai ......jisse uske sharir mein badlaav aarahi hai ....

Vaid ji ne kavya ko kuch bataya aur kuch avshadhi di .....

Vaid ji - iiske praano ko koi sankat nahi hai .....abhi 3 din aur lagenge isse hosh mein aane mein .......

Aisa tabhi hona hai jab kisi yaksha ki mrityu asamay hojaati hai ....aur uski saari urja apne putra ya nikatvarti kissi mein sama jaati hai....

Kya Gunak abhi nahi rahe ......

Kaavya kuch nahi bolti bas aanso bahane lagti hai.......Vaid ji dekhkar samaz jaate hai .......

Vaid - dharya rakho putri .....Vidhi k lekh ko koi mita nahi sakta .......inn teen dino mein jab bhi isse dard hone lage toh meri yeh aawshadhi isse pila dena ....jisse iska dard kuch kam ho jaayega ......

Aur vaid ji waha chale gaye ....Golark teen dino tak behosh pada raha ....aur inn teen din mein ab woh poori tarah jawan ho gaya tha ....aur uski saari shaktiya jaagrit ho gayi thi .......

Golu ko jab hosh aaya toh usne aapne aapko badla hua paaya ........kavya ne usse saari baat batayi ......

Golu ko ab apne pita ki mrityu k baare janana tha ......usne kuch dino tak apni maa aur bahen ko sambhala ...aur saath 2 apni urja k prayog ko sikha ......

Aur nikal pada khoj mein ....kaavya ne bahut roka k.....apne pati ko toh kho hi chuki hu ab apne putra ko khona nahi chahti.......lekin Golu nahi maana .....

Usse itna pata tha k GK Abhi k saath milkar Asuro k saath kisi yudh par nikle the jo usse apni maa se pata chala ....

Usne Abhi ko khojne ki koshish ki lekin Abhi uss samay KS k saath sangharsh mein buri tarah ghayal ho chuka tha ......aur apni saari shakti kho chuka tha .....

Toh Golu ...wapas yaksha lok aagaya ....yaha Shivali apne pita k paas thi ....

Golu Shivali ko mila ...lekin Shivali uske badle hue roop ko dekhkar pahchan nahi paayi ....toh ussne apna parichay diya ...Shivali Golu ko milkar baht khush hui ......

Golu ne apne pita k baare mein pucha ....toh Shivali ne bas itna kaha k asuro se sangharsh mein unko veergati prapt hui .....woh Abhi k dwara GK ki mrityu k baare mein nahi batana chahti thi .....

Jab Golu ne Abhi k baare mein pucha ....Toh Shivali ki aankhon se aansoo bag nikle ...kyu ki Shivali k bahut samzhane par bhi Abhi KS se bhidne chala gaya tha ......aur tab se usse bhi Abhi ka pata nahi chala ....Shaktiya khone se usska sampark Abhi se tut chuka tha ...ussne bhi bahut khojne ki koshish ki lekin Abhi ka koi pata nahi kar paayi......

Shivali ki chuppi ko Golu ne KS dwara hi apne pita aur Abhi ki mrityu k baare mein maan liya tha ..

Usska krodh badne laga .....woh eaha se sidha ...patal lok pahuncha aur KS ko lalkara ......KS ki prachand Shakti k aage woh tik nahi paaya ...aur buri tarah gayal ho gaya ....

KS - aakhir tum ho kaun aur kyu iss tarah apni mrityu ko lalkaara ....tumahari muzhse kya shatruta hai.....

Tab Golark ne usse apne Pita GK aur Abhi ki mrityu ka doshi tahraya .......

KS - kya ..tum Gunak k putra ho .....tumahare putra ki hatya maine nahi ki ...ussi Rakshak ne ki jaiska saath tumahare pita ne pag pag par nibhaya hai.....

Aur ab woh Rakshak bhi apna dand paa chka hai ....mee haatho se mrityu paakar.......lo dekho ...
aur KS ne apni maaya se woh drishya dikhaya jisme Abhi k haatho GK ki mrityu hui thi ....lekin iss drisya mein woh maaya nahi thi jisse dono prabhavit the .....

Golu ne saaf saaf dekha Abhi ko Gk ki hatya kate hue .......

Bahut adhik ghayal hone k kaarn Golark wahi behosh ho gaya.......

KS ne usse patal lok se bahar phikwa diya .........

Golu jakhmi haalat mein behosh pada tha k waha talatal lok ka ek jeev jo prasite ki tarah ki prajaati hai aur dusro k sharir mein pravesh karke hi urja prapt kar sakti hai .......jab usni Golu ko dekha toh woh uske sharir mein pravesh karne aage bada ....

Lekin Golu ko sparsh karte hi usse ek jordar jhatka laga ....aur woh dur jaakar gira .....tab usse Golu ki shaktiyo ka anuman ho gaya ....woh jeev Apne mukhiya kank k paas gaya ......jisske bhiter talatal lok ki urja ka ek bhag tha .....usse bataya ......

Kank ek aadha jeev aur aadha danav tha.....woh iss sansar ka sabase shaktishali banana chahta tha .......woh KS se bhi aage nikalna chahta tha .......Golu ko dekhkar Kank ko usski andar chupi hui urja aur powers ka pata chal gaya .....toh usne socha k yeh uske udeshya ko poorna karne k bahut kaam aasakta hai .

Usne Golu ko uthaya .....aur Talatal lok mein apne kabile le aaya aur Golu ka upchar karne laga ....jisase ...Golu ab poori tarah thik ho gaya ........

Hosh mein aane k baad Golu ko KS ki baatein aur uske dwara dikhaye hue drishya yaad aagaya ..

usske iss baat ka dukh tha k woh apne pita k hatyare ko dand nahi de saka ....isse pahele k woh uss tak pahunchta ....woh KS k haatho maara gaya ......

Apne prano ki raksha karne k kaaran Golu ne Kank ko usko sahyata ka vachan diya .......

Lekin jab usse pata chala k Abhi jeevit hai toh woh apne pita k hatyare ko dand dene tadap utha .

Usne kai baar Abhi tak pahunchne ka prayanta kiy lekin safal nahi ho paaya .....lekin jab Abhi Tapah Lok gaya tha ....uss samay ..Shivali ko dekhkar Golu Abhi tak toh pahunch gaya .....

Lekinkuch kar paata usse pahele hi Abhi ko hosh aagaya tha ......

Tab ussne Abhi k ghar mein hi ghus kar usko uske apno se hi dur karne ki yojna banayi aur .....Shaktiyo ka lalach dekar ...Kank ko madat karne k liye manaya ......

Flash back ends .....

Yaha Abhi Renu se hue raat k milan k baad Apne samay par utha ......Renu ek haath aur ek pair se Abhi ko pakadkar soyi hui thi ...Abhi ne zero bulb ki halki si roshni mein Renu ko dekha ....aur usse dhire se alag hua .....uske maate par halka sa kiss karke ...uthne hi wala tha k ussne nind mein hi Abhi ka haath pakad liya ......

Abhi phir uske bagal mein let gaya aur uske baalon mein haath pherte hue dekhne laga .......apne baalo mein Abhi k haath ka sparh mehsus karte hi Renu ki aankhien khul gayi ......

Woh ek tak Abhi ki aankhon mein dekhne lagi ......aur usse iss tarah pyar se apni taraf dekhte hue dekhkar ..Abhi niche zhukta chala gaya .....aur uske hontho par kiss kar diya .....

Renu bhi Abhi ko kiss karne lagi ...thodi der aise hi pyar karte rahe phir Abhi uth gaya aur fresh hone chala gaya .......Fresh hokar Abhi roomein aaya toh Renu bhi chali gayi .........

Abhi phir Chat par chala gaya ....Aur dhyan mein baith gaya ......Aaj usse dhyan mein Chakro ki urja k saath saath Unn divyastro ki bhi urja dikhayi di jo Vishwamitra ji ne usse diye the .......

Aaj woh dhyan mein apni pratek urja ko acche se dekh paaraha tha ...aur unki shakti ko apne bhiter mehsus kar paaraha tha .....

Bade der tak dhyan kar ne baad ....usse apne aagya chakra mein woh shakti dikhayi dene lagi ....jo usse Renu se milan mein prapt hui .......

Toh usne uss shakti ka upayog karke kai Apni patniya aur apne saare ansh iss samay kya kar rahe hai ...uska live telecast dekhe laga ......

Jisse usse Rasatal mein badti hui ajeeb se jeevo k gatividhiya dekhi .....aur phir un jeevo k mool ko jaane k liye unke utpatti stan ko khojte hue ...uske saamne talatal lok ka drishya aaya .......

Jaha usne ek ajeeb se kabile mein .....Haddiyo se bane hue singhasan par baithe hue kisi Ajeeb se jeev ko dekha .....yeh tha Kank ......waha se gayab hote hue Abhi ne kisi ko dekha toh usse vishwas nahi hua ......

Yeh wahi samay tha jab Golu kank se baat karne k baad waha se teleport hokar ghar aagaya .....lekin Abhi ne usse waha se teleport hote hue dekh liya tha......

Dhayan karte hue Abhi ko bada samay ho gaya tha ........Suryoday ho gaya tha ......Abhi ....waha se niche aagaya ......Toh Ritu bhi ussi samay Room se nikalkar niche aarahi thi .......

Ritu Abhi ko dekhkar ruk gayi ......

Abhi - gm di .....

Ritu ne usse koi jawab nahi diya ......

Abhi - kya baat hai di naaraj ho muzhse .......

Ritu - Main hoti hi kaun hu jo naraz hou....

Abhi ne Ritu ko mannane k liye uske haath pakadna chaha ...toh Ritu ne uska haath zhatak diya ..

Toh Abhi usse lekar chat par chala gaya......

Abhi - Aakhir aapki problem kya hai di .....

Ritu - meri problem hai tu ....sabko apna pyar baatta phirta hai aur muzhe daantata hai .....

Abhi - apne kaan pakadte hue ...Sorry meri cute ..sweet di ....lekin aap toh jaanti ho k kitna busy hota hu .....

Ritu - Accha ...Lekin apni patniyo k liye kaise time mil jaata hai .......lekin ek main hi hu jisske liye tere paas time nahi hai .........

Abhi - Di aap jaanti ho k mein aapko sukh nahi de sakta kyu k mein sirf 14 vivah hi kar sakta hu ..
ab aap batao k mein kya karu ...

Ritu - ohh toh yeh baat hai ...lekin betu sirf Sharirik sukh hi pyar nahi hai .....vasna prem ka ek ang hosakti hai lekin prem nahi hosakti.....
mein tuzhe kabhi iss baare mein nahi bolungi ....lekin prem toh kar sakti hu na ......

Aur Ritu aage badhkar Abhi ko gale lagati hai ......aur halke se uske hontho par kiss kar deti hai ....Abhi bhi ek halka kiss uske hontho par kar deta hai ....

Ritu - khush hote hue ...bas aisa toh pyar kar sakta hai na .....chal ab breakfast karne nahi toh koi dhundte hue aajayega ......

Aur phir dono niche aane lagate hai .....Abhi aage ..aur ..Ritu piche ......Ritu mann mein kuch sochkar muskurane lagti hai.....

Abhi k liye itna hi .....
Agla update raat ko.....

Toh ek baar fir achchhai ko achchhai ke hi viruddh kar diya ks ne dekhte hain ab aage kya kya hona hai kaise Abhi apni samriddhi shakti nirmaan shakti aur praan shakti ko paata hai

 

[Vickey1211]

Update - 114

ab tak aapne dekha Abhi ka Renuka k saath milan hogaya aur usse ...Divya drishti prapt ho gayi....
aur dekha k Golark talatal lok k kissi Jeev k saath Abhi k viruddh apne shadyantra ki yojna bana raha hai........

ab aagee.........

Golark kis tarah talatal tak pahuncha .....dekhte hai......

Baat tab ki hai jab Vital lok se asuro ko mukt karakar Abhi Atal Lok jaa raha tha .....tab KS k bheje Mohak ne ....apni vidveshan vidya ka prayog karke Abhi ko mohit kiya ...aur Abhi k haatho GK ki mrityu ho gayi......

Jiss damay GK ki mrityu hui uss samay Bhua lok mein raat thi .....Aur waha sthit yaksha bhumi k Alkapoori mein sthit GK ki patni kaavya Golu aur apni beti vika k saath soyi thi k saath soyi hui thi ......

dono baacho ki umar toh hazar varsho se bhi jyada thi lekin yaksha lok k samay anusar abhi dono dikhne mein koi 5 ya 6 varsh k baccho k saman hi the......

Yaha jaisi hi GK ki mrityu hui ....Kaavya ko sawapn mein GK ka sharir jalta hua dikha ......aur woh aansso bhari aankhon se uske aur uske baccho ki taraf dekh raha tha .......

Uski aankhon k saamne uska pati raakh k dher mein badal gaya ....aur woh jor se chikhte hue uthi .....Nahiiiiii ...aapne muzhe vachan diya tha ...aap iss tarah muzhe chod k nahi jaa sakteaur jor jor se rone lagi .. ....

yaksho ko him manusya jaise need mein swapna nahi aate .......yadi kisi ko aise kisi drishya ka sapna aata hai toh woh kisi ka sandesh hota hai.....

Kaavya jaan chuki thi k ab uska suhag nahi raha ....Jo usne sapna dekha woh sapna nahi GK ka sandesh tha unke liye .....jismein woh aashru bhari aankon se saath chodne k liye kshama maang raha tha ......

usse bar bar woh drishya yad aaraha aur woh bas GK ko pukarti hui roye jaa rahi thi .....

Kaavya ki aawaj sunkar uske dono bacche bhi uth gaye aur apni maa ko rota dekhkar ... ..dono bacche bhi rone lage .....

Golu - rote hue - kya hua maa .....aap ro kyu rahi hai .....aur baar baar Pita shri ka naam kyu le rahi hai ........

lekin kaavya bas roye jaa rahi thi ........

Golu - baatao na maa......kya hua ......iss prakar kyu ro rhai ho ....aur woh apni maa k paas jaakar usse pukate hue hilane lagta hai .....

Golu k aisa karne par kaavya ko kuch hosh aaya ...aur usne apne baccho ko rote hue dekha ...apne baccho ko rota dekhkar usne apna dukh ander daba diya .....

aur apne baccho ko apni goadi mein lekar seene se laga liya ......Golu ne bhi apne nanhe haato se apni maa k aansoo ponche ....

Kaavya apne baacho ko gale lagakar unhe yeh ahsas dila rahi thi k sab thik hai .....

K tabhi Golu k sharir mein achanak zhatke lagne lage.......aur woh uske godi se dur chitak gaya ..aur tadapne laga ......

Apne pati ki mrityu ko abhi ek ghadi bhi nahi hui k uapne putra ko iss tarah tadapte hue dekhkar woh aur ghabra gayi ......

Vika bhi apne bhai ko iss tarah dekhkar ghabra gayi ......

Kavya Golu k paas aayi aur usse aawaj dene lagi ....uske haath pairo ...seene ko ragadne lagi .....apne bete ki aise haalat dekhkar uska dil tadap utha .....woh kuch nahi kar paa rahi thi .....usse samaz nahi aaraha tha k kaise woh apne bete ki iss tadap ko khatam kare ....

Toh ussne Golu ko apne gale lagaya aur yske sir par haath pherne lagi.....Golu ab behosh ho chuka tha.......toh kaavya ne usse bed par lita diya .......

Usne dekha k Golu k sharir mein badlav aarahe hai ....uska sharir ab dhire dhire badne laga tha ...

Kaavya ne apni beti ko wahi choda aur vaid ji ko lekar aagayi ......

Vaid ji ne jab Golu ko dekha toh unhe bas itna hi pata chala k koi shaktishali urj usske ander prevesh kar gayi hai ......jisse uske sharir mein badlaav aarahi hai ....

Vaid ji ne kavya ko kuch bataya aur kuch avshadhi di .....

Vaid ji - iiske praano ko koi sankat nahi hai .....abhi 3 din aur lagenge isse hosh mein aane mein .......

Aisa tabhi hona hai jab kisi yaksha ki mrityu asamay hojaati hai ....aur uski saari urja apne putra ya nikatvarti kissi mein sama jaati hai....

Kya Gunak abhi nahi rahe ......

Kaavya kuch nahi bolti bas aanso bahane lagti hai.......Vaid ji dekhkar samaz jaate hai .......

Vaid - dharya rakho putri .....Vidhi k lekh ko koi mita nahi sakta .......inn teen dino mein jab bhi isse dard hone lage toh meri yeh aawshadhi isse pila dena ....jisse iska dard kuch kam ho jaayega ......

Aur vaid ji waha chale gaye ....Golark teen dino tak behosh pada raha ....aur inn teen din mein ab woh poori tarah jawan ho gaya tha ....aur uski saari shaktiya jaagrit ho gayi thi .......

Golu ko jab hosh aaya toh usne aapne aapko badla hua paaya ........kavya ne usse saari baat batayi ......

Golu ko ab apne pita ki mrityu k baare janana tha ......usne kuch dino tak apni maa aur bahen ko sambhala ...aur saath 2 apni urja k prayog ko sikha ......

Aur nikal pada khoj mein ....kaavya ne bahut roka k.....apne pati ko toh kho hi chuki hu ab apne putra ko khona nahi chahti.......lekin Golu nahi maana .....

Usse itna pata tha k GK Abhi k saath milkar Asuro k saath kisi yudh par nikle the jo usse apni maa se pata chala ....

Usne Abhi ko khojne ki koshish ki lekin Abhi uss samay KS k saath sangharsh mein buri tarah ghayal ho chuka tha ......aur apni saari shakti kho chuka tha .....

Toh Golu ...wapas yaksha lok aagaya ....yaha Shivali apne pita k paas thi ....

Golu Shivali ko mila ...lekin Shivali uske badle hue roop ko dekhkar pahchan nahi paayi ....toh ussne apna parichay diya ...Shivali Golu ko milkar baht khush hui ......

Golu ne apne pita k baare mein pucha ....toh Shivali ne bas itna kaha k asuro se sangharsh mein unko veergati prapt hui .....woh Abhi k dwara GK ki mrityu k baare mein nahi batana chahti thi .....

Jab Golu ne Abhi k baare mein pucha ....Toh Shivali ki aankhon se aansoo bag nikle ...kyu ki Shivali k bahut samzhane par bhi Abhi KS se bhidne chala gaya tha ......aur tab se usse bhi Abhi ka pata nahi chala ....Shaktiya khone se usska sampark Abhi se tut chuka tha ...ussne bhi bahut khojne ki koshish ki lekin Abhi ka koi pata nahi kar paayi......

Shivali ki chuppi ko Golu ne KS dwara hi apne pita aur Abhi ki mrityu k baare mein maan liya tha ..

Usska krodh badne laga .....woh eaha se sidha ...patal lok pahuncha aur KS ko lalkara ......KS ki prachand Shakti k aage woh tik nahi paaya ...aur buri tarah gayal ho gaya ....

KS - aakhir tum ho kaun aur kyu iss tarah apni mrityu ko lalkaara ....tumahari muzhse kya shatruta hai.....

Tab Golark ne usse apne Pita GK aur Abhi ki mrityu ka doshi tahraya .......

KS - kya ..tum Gunak k putra ho .....tumahare putra ki hatya maine nahi ki ...ussi Rakshak ne ki jaiska saath tumahare pita ne pag pag par nibhaya hai.....

Aur ab woh Rakshak bhi apna dand paa chka hai ....mee haatho se mrityu paakar.......lo dekho ...
aur KS ne apni maaya se woh drishya dikhaya jisme Abhi k haatho GK ki mrityu hui thi ....lekin iss drisya mein woh maaya nahi thi jisse dono prabhavit the .....

Golu ne saaf saaf dekha Abhi ko Gk ki hatya kate hue .......

Bahut adhik ghayal hone k kaarn Golark wahi behosh ho gaya.......

KS ne usse patal lok se bahar phikwa diya .........

Golu jakhmi haalat mein behosh pada tha k waha talatal lok ka ek jeev jo prasite ki tarah ki prajaati hai aur dusro k sharir mein pravesh karke hi urja prapt kar sakti hai .......jab usni Golu ko dekha toh woh uske sharir mein pravesh karne aage bada ....

Lekin Golu ko sparsh karte hi usse ek jordar jhatka laga ....aur woh dur jaakar gira .....tab usse Golu ki shaktiyo ka anuman ho gaya ....woh jeev Apne mukhiya kank k paas gaya ......jisske bhiter talatal lok ki urja ka ek bhag tha .....usse bataya ......

Kank ek aadha jeev aur aadha danav tha.....woh iss sansar ka sabase shaktishali banana chahta tha .......woh KS se bhi aage nikalna chahta tha .......Golu ko dekhkar Kank ko usski andar chupi hui urja aur powers ka pata chal gaya .....toh usne socha k yeh uske udeshya ko poorna karne k bahut kaam aasakta hai .

Usne Golu ko uthaya .....aur Talatal lok mein apne kabile le aaya aur Golu ka upchar karne laga ....jisase ...Golu ab poori tarah thik ho gaya ........

Hosh mein aane k baad Golu ko KS ki baatein aur uske dwara dikhaye hue drishya yaad aagaya ..

usske iss baat ka dukh tha k woh apne pita k hatyare ko dand nahi de saka ....isse pahele k woh uss tak pahunchta ....woh KS k haatho maara gaya ......

Apne prano ki raksha karne k kaaran Golu ne Kank ko usko sahyata ka vachan diya .......

Lekin jab usse pata chala k Abhi jeevit hai toh woh apne pita k hatyare ko dand dene tadap utha .

Usne kai baar Abhi tak pahunchne ka prayanta kiy lekin safal nahi ho paaya .....lekin jab Abhi Tapah Lok gaya tha ....uss samay ..Shivali ko dekhkar Golu Abhi tak toh pahunch gaya .....

Lekinkuch kar paata usse pahele hi Abhi ko hosh aagaya tha ......

Tab ussne Abhi k ghar mein hi ghus kar usko uske apno se hi dur karne ki yojna banayi aur .....Shaktiyo ka lalach dekar ...Kank ko madat karne k liye manaya ......

Flash back ends .....

Yaha Abhi Renu se hue raat k milan k baad Apne samay par utha ......Renu ek haath aur ek pair se Abhi ko pakadkar soyi hui thi ...Abhi ne zero bulb ki halki si roshni mein Renu ko dekha ....aur usse dhire se alag hua .....uske maate par halka sa kiss karke ...uthne hi wala tha k ussne nind mein hi Abhi ka haath pakad liya ......

Abhi phir uske bagal mein let gaya aur uske baalon mein haath pherte hue dekhne laga .......apne baalo mein Abhi k haath ka sparh mehsus karte hi Renu ki aankhien khul gayi ......

Woh ek tak Abhi ki aankhon mein dekhne lagi ......aur usse iss tarah pyar se apni taraf dekhte hue dekhkar ..Abhi niche zhukta chala gaya .....aur uske hontho par kiss kar diya .....

Renu bhi Abhi ko kiss karne lagi ...thodi der aise hi pyar karte rahe phir Abhi uth gaya aur fresh hone chala gaya .......Fresh hokar Abhi roomein aaya toh Renu bhi chali gayi .........

Abhi phir Chat par chala gaya ....Aur dhyan mein baith gaya ......Aaj usse dhyan mein Chakro ki urja k saath saath Unn divyastro ki bhi urja dikhayi di jo Vishwamitra ji ne usse diye the .......

Aaj woh dhyan mein apni pratek urja ko acche se dekh paaraha tha ...aur unki shakti ko apne bhiter mehsus kar paaraha tha .....

Bade der tak dhyan kar ne baad ....usse apne aagya chakra mein woh shakti dikhayi dene lagi ....jo usse Renu se milan mein prapt hui .......

Toh usne uss shakti ka upayog karke kai Apni patniya aur apne saare ansh iss samay kya kar rahe hai ...uska live telecast dekhe laga ......

Jisse usse Rasatal mein badti hui ajeeb se jeevo k gatividhiya dekhi .....aur phir un jeevo k mool ko jaane k liye unke utpatti stan ko khojte hue ...uske saamne talatal lok ka drishya aaya .......

Jaha usne ek ajeeb se kabile mein .....Haddiyo se bane hue singhasan par baithe hue kisi Ajeeb se jeev ko dekha .....yeh tha Kank ......waha se gayab hote hue Abhi ne kisi ko dekha toh usse vishwas nahi hua ......

Yeh wahi samay tha jab Golu kank se baat karne k baad waha se teleport hokar ghar aagaya .....lekin Abhi ne usse waha se teleport hote hue dekh liya tha......

Dhayan karte hue Abhi ko bada samay ho gaya tha ........Suryoday ho gaya tha ......Abhi ....waha se niche aagaya ......Toh Ritu bhi ussi samay Room se nikalkar niche aarahi thi .......

Ritu Abhi ko dekhkar ruk gayi ......

Abhi - gm di .....

Ritu ne usse koi jawab nahi diya ......

Abhi - kya baat hai di naaraj ho muzhse .......

Ritu - Main hoti hi kaun hu jo naraz hou....

Abhi ne Ritu ko mannane k liye uske haath pakadna chaha ...toh Ritu ne uska haath zhatak diya ..

Toh Abhi usse lekar chat par chala gaya......

Abhi - Aakhir aapki problem kya hai di .....

Ritu - meri problem hai tu ....sabko apna pyar baatta phirta hai aur muzhe daantata hai .....

Abhi - apne kaan pakadte hue ...Sorry meri cute ..sweet di ....lekin aap toh jaanti ho k kitna busy hota hu .....

Ritu - Accha ...Lekin apni patniyo k liye kaise time mil jaata hai .......lekin ek main hi hu jisske liye tere paas time nahi hai .........

Abhi - Di aap jaanti ho k mein aapko sukh nahi de sakta kyu k mein sirf 14 vivah hi kar sakta hu ..
ab aap batao k mein kya karu ...

Ritu - ohh toh yeh baat hai ...lekin betu sirf Sharirik sukh hi pyar nahi hai .....vasna prem ka ek ang hosakti hai lekin prem nahi hosakti.....
mein tuzhe kabhi iss baare mein nahi bolungi ....lekin prem toh kar sakti hu na ......

Aur Ritu aage badhkar Abhi ko gale lagati hai ......aur halke se uske hontho par kiss kar deti hai ....Abhi bhi ek halka kiss uske hontho par kar deta hai ....

Ritu - khush hote hue ...bas aisa toh pyar kar sakta hai na .....chal ab breakfast karne nahi toh koi dhundte hue aajayega ......

Aur phir dono niche aane lagate hai .....Abhi aage ..aur ..Ritu piche ......Ritu mann mein kuch sochkar muskurane lagti hai.....

Abhi k liye itna hi .....
Agla update raat ko.....

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[Shahrukh]

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[abhi1008]

Update - 115

ab tak aapne dekha k kaise Golark Ks ki chal mein aakar Abhi k virudh hua....
Abhi ne Divya drishti se Rasatal mein chal rahi jeevo ki gatividhya dekhi aur unn jeevo ka mool tallok bhi dekha ...Jaha usne Goark ki ek zhalak dekhi ......

ab aage.....

Abhi Ritu k saath niche aajaata hai ....aaj ka break fast dono bahu milkar bana rahi thi aur apne haatho se serve kar rahi thi ........

Abhi aur Ritu bhi pahunch gaye .......aur apni apni jagah baith gaye.......

Naina - kaha rah gaya tha betu aaj badi der laga di ........Aur Ritu tu bhi kaha thi....hamara toh bf khatam hone ko aaya ......

Ritu Abhi ki taraf muskurate hue - Mom woh aaj betu kuch jayada hi dyam kar Raha tha ....toh main isse bulane hi gayi thi .......wah aaj toh khane ki badi acchi khushbu aarahi hai ......

Mom - aaj ka naastha dono bahu ne banaya hai ..........

Rimpy - maa ji ...maine toh bas thodi help ki hai ..saara bf ..aaj chotti ne banaya hai......

Ritu - Wah meri choti bhabi ....toh gazab ki cook hai ....

Abhi ko Ritu mein aaya change samaz aaraha tha .....Lekin Abhi k thode pyar se woh khush thi Abhi k liye itna hi bahut tha.......


Bf k baad Abhi room mein chala gaya .....aur Rinku ko maansik sandesh bheja .......aur uske aane ka intejar karne laga .......

thodi hi der mein Rinku aagaya .....Abhi ne Rinku ko ghar par aur pariwar par gupt roop se poori tarah nazar rakhne k liye kaha ........

Rinku - muzhe toh pahli hi nazar mein yeh golu kuch gadbad laga ....lekin tumhe kuch jyada hi isspar vishwas tha isiliye main kuch nahi bola .......

Abhi - bas dhyan rakha ,Golu ko nahi pata chalna chahiye k tum aur tumahari team usspar nazar rakh rahi hai ........aur yadi koi khatra mehsus hue toh turant muzhse sampark karna .....Abhi pahle muzhe Rasatal ki problem dekhni hai ...aur uski jad tak pahinchna hai ....

Rinku - Tu bina kisi chinta k jaa main hu yaha...

Rimpy ander aate hue - ab kaha jaane ki baatein ho rahi hai ....arre wah Rinku .....accha toh Rinku bhi hai ......kaha the itne din ....

Rinku - bas bhabi ....kuch samay College ....kuch ....Abhi ...k diye kaamo mein aur kuch bacha kucha ...Lima ..k saath .....

Rimpy - accha shadi vaadi ka kya plan hai ......kab kar rahe ho ....

Rinku - College k baad hi soch raha hu .....

Tabhi Renu bhi room mein aajaati hai .....usse dekhkar Rinku ......

Rinku - Yaar yeh nayi entry kaun hai inse toh milaya hi nahi ...Kahi yeh nayi bhabi toh nahi ....

Abhi - haa yr ...yeh hai Renu teri nayi bhabhi .......

Rimpy - acvha aapne bataya nahi kaha jaane ki baat ho rahi thi...

Rimpy k puchne par Abhi usse Rasatal mein chal rahi pareshaniyo k baare mein batata hai ......

Rimpy - ohh ...Tabhi main kahu k itna kuch yaha ho raha hai aur Shivali di ka kuch pata nahi ...hum bhi aapke saath chalenge .....aur Renu bhi sabse mil legi .....

Abhi - lekin yaha bhi toh tumahari jarurat hogi .....

Rimpy aap chinta na karo hum bas ...unse milkar wapas aajaayenge .......

Thik hai tum pahuncho mein kisi ko lekar waha pahunchta hu .......

Rinku aur Abhi waha se nikal gaye .......Rinku Abhi k diye hue apne kaam mein lag gayi ussne apni team ko .....RVS ....Ritu ...Addu aur Naina ki safety mein laga diye jo unse ek duri banakar .....poori tarah satark the ....Aur Rinku ne ghar par nazar rakhne ki jimmedari apne upar le li .....

Abhi waha se nilkar Golu k paas pahuncha .....Yasha bhumi uske ghar ......

Abji ko iss tarah apne ghar aaya hua dekhkar pahele toh Golu hadbada gaya .......

Golu - arre bhai aap ....aayiye2 andar ....kitne dino k baad aap aaye hai accha laga ......

Abhi - kya kare bhai itne kaamo mein vayst rahne k kaaran samay hi nahi mil paata .....

Tabhi ander se kavya aate hue ...arre beta kaun hai ..jab Abhi ko dekha toh uske chehre par khusi aagayi .....Golu ne ab tak apni maa ko kuch nahi bataya tha ....

Kavya - arre beta ...aao aao ...aaj yaad aai hai tumhe humari ....inke jaane k baad ek baar bhi hamari khabar lene nahi aaya ...

Abhi - muzhe kshama kare chachi cahkar bhi nayi aa paaya ....apni vyastata k kaaran .....

Kavya - koi bast nahi beta mein samaz sakti hu ......lekin kabhi kabhi aaya kar accha lagta hai ......tu baith mein kuch khane k liye kuch laati hu ...
aur woh ander chali gayi ......
.Abhi - Golu muzhe tumahare saath kuch baat karni hai ...lekin yaha nahi kar sakte

Golu - aisi kya baat hai bhai ..jo yaha nahi ho sakti..

Abhi - hai kunch baat

itne der mein Kavya ne khane ka kuch le aayi ....

Naaste k baad Abhi Golu ko lekar Naag lok nikal gaya ......

Iss samay Naag raaj Abhi (AN )...sulehka ...Shivali ....Baithe hue ...inn jeevo se kaise nijat paayi jaaye woh soch rahe the.....Rimpy aur Renu bhi waha baithi thi

Abhi ko Golu k saath aaya dekhkar .......Sabhi khade ho gaye .....

Golu ka sach Abhi k jaane k baad ...Abhi k antarman se connected hone k kaaran ..Sivali sab kuch jaan gayi thi ....Abhi k saath Golu ko dekhkar ...Shivali ...kuch bolne k liye aage hi badi thi k Abhi ne usse shant rahne ka ishara kiya ......

Golark ko kuch toh andesha ho gaya tha k Abhi uske sach ko jaan gaya hai ......

Golu - Bhai tum muzhe yaha kyu laaye ho ......

Abhi - shayad tum jaante ho .....lekin kuch bhi kahne aur karne se pahele ......tumahare liye ek sach ko janana bahut jaruri hai .......

Abhi ne Golu ko ek jagah bithaya ....aur apne haath aage karke maya se Hawa mein ek screen se bana diya ...aur apni divya drishti ka prayog karke sab k saamne wahi drishya chalaya jab Abhi k haato GK ki mrityu hui thi .....

Jaise jaise drishya aage badha .....Glou ki aankhon se aansoo bah nikle .......ab woh sach jaan chuka tha k kin haalato mein ......Abhi k haatho GK ki maut hui thi ..

Abhi - Golu maine tumhe apna bhai maana ...aur tumne mere hi saath viswas ghat kiya ......kuch karne se pahele ...ek baar toh muzhse puch lete .....
Shivali toh tumhe apna chota bhai maanti thi ya usse hi puch lete ......

Golu - Main jaanta hu bhai muzhse bahut badi galti ho gayi.......Lekin mein kya karta .....uss samay maine di se pucha tha ...lekin unhone bhi muzhe kuch saaf saaf nahi bataya ....Aur aapka bhi koi pata nahi tha .....KS ...ne uske haatho aapki mrityu k baare mein bataya ....aur woh drishya dikhaya ......toh mein kisse puchta ....

Abhi - baad mein bhi toh puch sakte the jab mein tumse mila tha ......tumahari iss bhool k kaaran ek maasum Deepu ne apne paarn gawaye .......kya tum usse lauta sakte ho ....
tumhe pata hai GK mera mitra se bhi badhkar tha .......Jab KS k shdyanra ne uski jaan li toh mein aaweg mein bina kuch soche Ks ka mukabla karne pahunch gaya .......tabhi main buri tarah ghayal hogaya tha......

Golu - mein jaanta hu meri galti kshama yogya nahi hai .....Aap iske liye muzhe jo saza dena chahte ho muzhe sweekar hai .......

Abhi -tumahare jagah koi aur hota toh ab tak mein usse maut k ghat utar chuka hota ......lekin tum GK ki nishani ho isiliye abhi tak jeevit ho .......issbaar toh mein tumhe chodraha hu ....taaki tumahari mata ..niputi na hi jaaye .....parantu yadi phir tum mere raaste mein aaye ....toh din tumahare jeevan ka aakhri din ho .....

Chale jao yaha se ..iss pahele ...k mein kuch kar du n...
.tumahara chehra dekta hu toh nuzhe Usmein deepu ka kaatil nazar aata hai .......chale jaao yaha se ......

Golu - main itna bojz apne hriday par nahi sah sakta .......Vishwas ghat ka ek hi dand hota hai mrityu .....muzhe maar do bhai ......

Abhi - tumhe apni mata aur bahen k liye jeena hoga yahi tumahari saza hai .......

Golu - thik hai ....lekin jaane se pahele mein apne bigade hue kuch kaam sudharna chahta hu .....
phir Golu ne apni saari urja ekatrit ki ...Aur Naaglok ki dharti par chodi ......Golu ki urja naalok ka chakkar kaatne lagi .....aur jaha jaha bhi woh jeev chippe hue the unko jaakar lagi.....jisse woh tadspne lage aur ....wapas talatal lok mein wapas chale gaye ...

Golark ab waha se jaa chuka tha ......

Golark k jaane k baad Abhi sabse mila ......

Shivali Golark ka sach jaankar...dukhi thi ....Abhi Shivali k dil ki haalat jaanta tha ....

Abhi - tum kyu uske baare mein sochkar ...dukhi ho rahi ho .....Shivu ......

Shivali - jab main usse mili toh muzhe laga ek pyara sa bhai mil gaya.....mein uske mano bhav ko pakad hi nahi paayi ......

Abhi - Beeti hui baato ko chodo Shivu ...jo ho gaya so ho gaya ...ab hume aage aur satark hona hoga ....kyu ki ab hum ....maha yudh k bahut nikat hai .......chunautiya aur badne wali hai ......

Abhi muzhe apni agli yaatra par nikalna hoga .......talatal Lok ...

Talatal lok Vaitarni nadi k kaaran do hisso mein bata hua hai

ek hisse mein Yumraj ki nagri ....Sayamini poori hai jaha woh sabhi k karmo k anusar nayay karte hai...Vital lok mein 28 mein se 10 narak the...baaki bache hue 18 narak ...Yumlok k dakshini bhag mein the......

Aur Vaitarni nadi k dusri taraf unnjeevo ka vaas hai jinhe narko mein laaye gaye ....bhog sharir ...dharan ki hui jeevatmao ko dand dene k liye prayog kiya jata tha ......

Inn jeevo ka swami tha kank ....

aaj k liye itna hi ...
agla update kal ....

frnds aaj meri tabiyat thik nahi hai ....bp bahut badh gaya hai ...badi ..mushkil se yeh chotta update likh paaya hu .....
aapke comments ka intezar rahega.....

 

[abhi1008]

Toh ek baar fir achchhai ko achchhai ke hi viruddh kar diya ks ne dekhte hain ab aage kya kya hona hai kaise Abhi apni samriddhi shakti nirmaan shakti aur praan shakti ko paata hai

Bahut bahut dhanyawad bhai aapke is fantastic comment k liye...

aise hi saath banaye rakhe....

Latest update 115 posted....

 

[abhi1008]

Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya

Thanks bhai aapke icomment k liye...

aise hi saath banaye rakhe....

Latest update 115 posted....