Thriller Ahni (Iron) Darwaaza (Completed)

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Ahni (Iron)
Darwaaza​

 

[syed arshad]

Imran Ne Car Rok Di....Dur Tak Hari-Bhari Pahaadhiyan Beekhri Hui Thi....
Aur
Suraj Un Par Naranji Rang Beekherta Hua Maghrib (West) Mein Chup Raha Tha....Dur Ki Pahaadhiyon Mein Halki Si Dhund Chayi Hui Thi....Wo Car Se Niche Utar Kar Doorbin Lagaye Hue Chaaron Taraf Dekhne Laga....!


Use Andaaza Nahi Tha Ke Abhi Aur Kitna Chalna Padhega....In Ataraaf (Sides) Mein Pahli Baar Uska Guzar Hua Tha....Abhi To Use Sadak Ke Kinaare Wo Nishaan Bhi Nahi Mila Tha....Jahan Ruk Kar Use Aage Jane Ka Raasta Talaash Karna Tha....!


Sadargarh Piche Rahe Gaya Tha....Use Sadargarh Se 10 Mile Aage Jana Tha....Usne Doorbin Aankhon Par Se Hata Di....
Aur
Car Se Khakee Ka Thermos Nikaal Kar Uske Dhakkan Mein Coffee Undheli....
Aur
Use Khatm Karne Ke Baad....
Fir
Steering Sambhaal Liya....
Lekin
Abhi Car Start Bhi Nahi Ki Thi Ke Pichle Modh Par Use Ghodon Ki Taapein Sunayi Di....
Aur
Saath Hi Fiza Mein Do Soorile Qism Ke Khahekhahe Bhi Laheraye....Imran Mudh Kar Dekhne Laga....!


Do Nau-Jawaan Ladkiyan Tattu Par Savaar Ho Kar Isi Taraf Aa Rahi Thi....
Lekin
Yeh Pahaadhi Dahqaano Mein Nahi Thi....
Kyun Ke
Unke Jismo Par Jadeed (Aadhunik) Tarz Ke Libaas Tha....
Aur
Unke Ghungrale Baal Maghribi (Western) Taraash Ke The....Wo Imran Ko Ghoorti Hui Khareeb Se Guzar Gayi....!


Yeh Sadak Itni Chaudhi Nahi Thi....
Aur
Unke Tattu Barabar Se Itne Faasle Se Chal Rahe The Ke Unke Darmiyaan Se Car Nikaal Le Jana Asaan Kaam Nahi Tha....
Lekin
Us Modh Se Nikalne Ke Baad Bhi Wahi Masla Dar Pesh Raha....
Yani
Itni Jagaah Nahi Thi Ke Wo Dono Ke Darmiyaan Se Car Nikaal Le Jata....!


Usne Pay-Dar-Pay Kayi Baar Horn Diya....
Lekin
Tattu Ke Darmiyaan Faasle Mein Koi Kami Nahi Hui....
Aur
Ladkiyan Ek Dusre Ki Taraf Dekh Kar Sirf Hans Padhi....!

 

[syed arshad]

Main Is Tafreeh Main Zaroor Sheerkat (Bhaag) Karta....Imran Cheekh Kar Bola....
Lekin
Mujhe Jaldi Hai....Baraah-E-Karam (Krupiya) Apne Tattu Ko Ek Taraf Kar Li Jiye....!


Lekin....Besood....Tattu Usi Andaaz Mein Chalte Rahe....!


Khuda Tum Se Samjhe....Imran Ahista Se Badhbadhaya....
Aur
Uski Car Ahista-Ahista Rengti Rahi....
Lekin
Wo Is Veeran Sadak Par Tattuon Ki Maujoodgi Par Hairaan Zaroor Tha....!


Imran Car Rok Kar Utar Padha....
Aur
Fir Usne Tattu Ke Saamne Pahunch Kar Unki Baggi Pakadh Li....!


Ladkiyan Uski Betakallufi Par Hairaan Rahe Gayi....
Lekin
Wo Khattai Khauffzada Nahi Thi....
Kyun Ke
Imran Ki Shakhsiyath Mein Koi Aisi Cheez Thi Hi Nahi Ke Jiss Ka Raub Dusron Par Padh Sakhta....!


Wo Sar Se Pair Tak Ahmaq Nazar Aa Raha Tha....!


Ladkiyan Chandh Lamhe Use Ghoorti Rahi....
Fir
Ek Ne Jhallaye Hue Lahje Mein Pucha Kya Baat Hai....!


Allah Ke Naam Par....Imran Ne Kisi Gheese Hue Fakheer Ki Tarah Daant Nikaal Diye


Kya Bakwaas Hai....!


Humesha Duaein Deta Rahunga....Allah Humesha Jodhi Salaamat Rakhe....!


Tumhara Dimaagh To Nahi Chal Gaya....Yeh Na Samjhna Ke Hum Tanha Hai....Dusri Ladki Aankh Nikaal Kar Boli


Main Dekh Raha Hu Ke Aap Ke Saath Tattu Bhi Hai....Allah Ke Naam Par....Aisa Mauqa Fir Kabhi Haath Nahi Ayega....Yahan Aas-Paas Koi Nahi Hai....!


Piche Hato....Pahli Ladki Ghurrayi....
Aur
Ek Beek Usne Point-25 Ka Pistol Nikaal Liya....!


Arey Baapre....Imran Baukhla Kar Piche Hat Gaya....Main To Bheee....Bheek Maang Raha Tha....!


Maramat....Dusri Ladki Ne Pahli Ladki Ki Taraf Dekh Kar Aankh Dabayi


Ek Packet Chewing-Gum....Allah Ke Naam Par....Imran Ne Fir Haank Lagayi


Chewing-Gum Chahiye....Dusri Ladki Ne Pucha


Haa....Khuda Bhala Kare....!


Khareeb Aao....!


Imran Aage Badha....
Fir
Badi Tezi Se Piche Hat Gaya....
Kyun Ke
Ladkiyan Ka Dahina Haath Puri Khuvat Se Ghooma Tha....
Aur
Imran Ke Piche Hat Jane Par Jhonk Mein Girte-Girte Bachi....!


Khuda Gharath Kare Tumhe....Imran Bisoor Kar Bola....Fakheeron Se Hatha-Paayi Karti Ho....Abhi Bhasm Kar Dunga....Allah Ka Diya Hua Sab Kuch Maujood Hai....
Magar
Khandani Fakheer Hu....Kabhi-Kabhi Barkat Ke Liye Bheek Maang Leta Hu....
Magar
Aisi Hi Jagah Jahan Koi Yeh Na Jaanta Ho Ke Main Deputy-Collector Hu....Imran Ne Yeh Sab Kuch Intehai Sanjheedgi Se Kaha

 

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Ladkiyan Ab Fir Use Ghoor Rahi Thi....!


Raaste Se Hat Jao....Us Ladki Ne Kaha Jiss Ke Haath Mein Pistol Tha


Afsos Ke Main Apni Been Ghar Bhool Aya Hu....Tab To Aap Ko Yaqeen Aata Ke Main Fakheer Hu....Saanp Bhi Is Waqt Maujood Nahi Hai....
Lekin
Thaheriye....Imran Apni Coat Ke Andruni Jeb Mein Haath Daalne Hi Wala Tha Ke Ladki Ke Kadak Kar Kaha....Khabardar....Apne Haath Uthaye Rakho....!


Fir To Main Aap Ko Yaqeen Nahi Dila Sakhta Ke Main Fakheer Hu....Imran Ne Mayoosi Se Kaha


Yaqeen Ke Liye Tumhari Car Hi Kaafi Hai....Dusri Ladki Boli


Main Pahle Hi Kahe Chuka Hu Ke Khuda Ka Diya Hua Sab Kuch Maujood Hai....
Magar
Main Khandani Fakheer Hu....Mere Khandan Ke Log Din Bhar Tijaarat (Vyapaar) Aur Naukri Karte Hai....Raat Bheek Maangne Ke Liye Hoti Hai....Humare Buzurgon Ka Khaul Hai Ke Apni Asliyat Na Bhoolo....!


Bade Duffer Hai Tumhare Buzurg....!


Tumhare Buzurg Kaise Hai....Imran Ne Pucha


Itne Duffer Bhi Nahi Hai....!


To Fir Agar Tum Koshish Karo To Main Bhi Unhe Apna Buzurg Bana Sakhta Hu....Imran Ne Kaha
Aur
Wo Ladki Jhenp Kar Use Bura-Bhala Kahne Lagi....!


Allah Ke Naam Par....Imran Ne Fir Haank Lagayi


Tum Nahi Hatoge....Pahli Ladki Dahaadi


Ek Packet Chewing-Gum....Mere Khatm Ho Gaye Hai....!


Main Goli Maar Dungi....!


Maar Do....Tum Bhi Kya Yaad Karogi Ke Kisi Fakheer Se Vaasta Padha Tha....!


Achanak Usne Apna Tattu Imran Par Dauda Diya....
Lekin
Wo Aage Nikli Chali Gayi....
Kyun Ke
Imran Badi Phurti Se Ek Taraf Hat Gaya Tha....!


Tattu Daudta Raha....Shayad Wo Beqaabu Ho Gaya Tha....!


Dekha Tum Ne....Imran Ne Dusri Ladki Se Kaha....Yeh Tha Fakheeron Se Dil Lagi Karne Ka Nateeja....Ab Wo Use Gaddhe Mein Gira Dega....
Aur
Haddiyan Choor Ho Jayengi....!

 

[Nkmahakal]

Congrats for new thread sir

 

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Hato Saamne Se....Mujhe Jane Do....Dusri Ladki Kuch Nervous Si Nazar Aane Lagi Thi


Ek Packet Chewing-Gum....
Varna
Tumhara Bhi Yahi Hashr Hoga....Tumhare Paas To Pistol Bhi Na Hoga....!


Hai....Mere Paas....!


Jhoot....Sau Feesad Jhoot....Hota To Ab Tak Tum Bhi Nikaal Chuki Hoti....!


Saamne Se Hat Jao....Baag Chhodo....!


Ek Packet Chewing-Gum....!


Kutte Ho Tum....Ladki Ne Shikaar Ke Thaile Mein Haath Daalte Hue Kaha....
Aur
Chewing-Gum Ka Packet Nikaal Kar Uski Taraf Uchaal Diya....!


Khuda Jeeta Rakhe....Imran Ne Use Sambhaalte Hue Kaha


Jao....Ab Tum Jaa Sakhti Ho....
Lekin
Ab Agar Raaste Mein Kahin Tum Logon Ne Mera Raasta Rokne Ki Koshish Ki To Maamla Ek Packet Chewing-Gum Par Nahi Talega....Samjhi....!


Imran Ek Taraf Hat Gaya....
Aur
Wo Tattu Ko Seedha Kar Ke Aage Badh Gayi....!


Imran Fir Car Mein Aa Baitha....Wo Sonch Raha Tha Ke Yeh Ladkiyan Khareeb Kahin Rahti Hongi....
Varna
Is Tarah Lamba Safar Karna To Mumkeen Nahi....Waise Us Ladki Ke Paas Pistol Ki Maujoodgi Ne Use Uljhan Mein Daal Diya Tha....Wo Jaanta Tha Ke In Ataraaf (Sides) Mein Rahne Wale Zyadatar Sarmayedar Qism Ke Log Hai....!


Sadargarh Apne Navaahi iLaaqon (Suburban) Samet Matti Ke Tel Ke Chashmon Ka Bohath Bada Markaz (Kendr) Tha....
Aur
Yahan Ki Abaadi Mazdooron, Clerks, Tajeeron (Businessman) Aur Sarmayedaron Ki Thi....!


50 Saal Pahle To Yahan Khaak Bhi Nahi Udhti Thi....
Kyun Ke
Yeh Ek Pahaadhi iLaaqa Tha....!


Imran Apni Zindagi Mein Shayad Teesri Baar Sadargarh Aya Tha....
Lekin
Is Hisse Tak Aane Ka Pehla Ittefaaq Tha....!


Un Dono Ladkiyon Ke Mutaleekh (Sambhandit) Sonchte Hue Usne Car Start Kar Di....Ho Sakhta Hai Wo Us Moqaam Se Waaqif Rahi Ho Jahan Imran Ko Pahunchna Tha....!


Ladkiyon Se Dobara Mulaakhaat Hone Mein Der Nahi Lagi....Wo Tattuon Se Utar Kar Ek Chattaan Par Baithi Imran Ki Rukti Hui Car Ko Ghoor Rahi Thi....!

 

[syed arshad]

Imran Car Se Utar Kar Sadak Par Khada Ho Gaya....!


Ladkiyan Khamosh Baithi Rahi....
Fir
Imran Unki Taraf Badha....!


Main Darasal....Imran Kuch Kahte-Kahte Ruk Gaya....
Magar
Dusri Ladki Ne Uska Jumla Pura Kar Diya....Ab Aap Logon Ko Been Suna Kar Saanp Dikhaunga....!


Mujhe Afsos Hai....Been Aur Saanp Ghar Chhod Aya Hu....
Lekin
Aap Ko Kuch Zaroor Dikhaunga....!


Dur Hi Rehna....Pahli Ladki Bigadh Kar Boli....
Varna
Sach-Mooch Main Goli Maar Dungi....Tumhari Badaulath Mere Pairon Mein Chonth Aa Gayi Hai....!


Tattu Ki Badaulath....Imran Ne Maghmoom (Udaas) Awaaz Mein Kaha....Kisi Khatoon Ko Tattu Par Baithe Dekh Kar Mujhe Humesha Gehra Sadmaa Hota Hai....!


Kyun Piche Padhe Ho....Humare....Apna Raasta Lo....!


Raasta To Aap Hi Ne Roka Tha....Imran Ne Bura Sa Muh Bana Kar Kaha....Ab Mujhe Raasta Bataiye....Iske Evaz Main Aap Ka Dil Khush Kar Dunga....Saanp To Nahi Hai Mere Paas....Magar....


Imran Ne Apni Coat Ke Andruni Jeb Mein Haath Daal Kar Ek Deebiya Nikaala....
Aur
Uska Dhakkan Uthate Hue Use Unke Saamne Pesh Kar Diya....Dabbe Mein Paanch Bade-Bade Bhichchu The....!


Inke Liye Been Zaroori Nahi Hai....
Kyun Ke
Yeh Bhi Bhains Hi Ki Biradari Se Taalooq Rakhte Hai....Imran Ne Kaha


Ladkiyan Chaunk Kar Ek-Dusre Ki Taraf Maane Khaiz Andaaz Mein Dekhne Lagi....!


Imran Andaaza Nahi Kar Sakha Ke Unhe Hairath Thi Ya Wo Khauffzada Ho Gayi Thi....!


Ab Aap Mujhe Raasta Bataiye....Imran Ne Ahmaqana Andaaz Mein Kaha


Main Nahi Samjhi....Us Ladki Ne Kaha Jiss Ne Kuch Der Pahle Pistol Nikaala Tha


Main Daraab Castle Jana Chahta Hu....!


Oohh....Wo Fir Dusri Ladki Ki Taraf Dekhne Lagi....
Aur
Fir....Ek Beek Uska Ravaiyya Badal Gaya....Wo Muskura Kar Boli....Daraab Castle....Haa....Naam To Suna Hai....Oohhoo....Wahi To Nahi....Jahan Sardar Daraab Rahte Hai....!


Wahi....Wahi....Imran Sar Hila Kar Bola....Main Aap Ka Shukr Guzaar Rahunga....!

 

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Magar....Yeh Kaise Mumkeen Hai....Ladki Ne Bade Bholepan Se Kaha....Aap Car Par Hai....
Aur
Hum....


Tattu Par....Imran Ne Mayoosana Andaaz Mein Kaha....Car Two-Seater Hai....
Varna
Main Tattuon Ko Isme Joth Deta....!


Oohhoo....Koi Baat Nahi....Ladki Ne Kaha....Main Aap Ke Saath Baith Jaungi....
Aur
Yeh....Usne Dusri Ladki Ki Taraf Ishaara Kiya....Mera Tattu Le Kar Aa Jayegi....!


Nahi....Aap Dono Car Se Jaiye....Main Dono Tattuon Par Ek Beek Waqt Savaar Ho Kar Chalunga....Imran Ne Khaaksarana Lahje Mein Kaha


Aap Aadmi Hai....Ya....


Main Aadmi Hi Hu....Aap Mutmayeen (Santusht) Rahiye....Waise Bhool Jane Ka Marz Buri Tarah Mujh Par Haavi Hai....
Magar
Isse Koi Farq Nahi Padhta....Aaiye....!


Wo Ladki Patthar Se Uth Gayi....
Aur
Dusri Ladki Ko Ishaara Karti Hui Imran Ke Saamne Chalne Lagi....
Fir
Wo Imran Ke Saath Car Mein Baith Gayi....!


Imran Ne Engine Start Kiya....!


Filhaal Seedhe Hi Chaliye....Ladki Boli


Oh Acha....!


Car Chal Padhi....Imran Khamosh Tha....!


Ladki Bhi Shayad Guftgu Nahi Karna Chahti Thi....Uske Andaaz Se Yahi Maalum Hota Tha....Wo Na Sirf Kisi Gehri Sonch Mein Thi....
Balke
Chahre Se Tashveesh (Chinta) Bhi Zaaher Ho Rahi Thi....!


Haa....Dekhiye....Usne Kuch Dur Chalne Ke Baad Kaha....Aap Car Baayi (Left) Taraf Modh Di Jiye....!


Imran Ne Uske Kahne Par Amal Kiya....Baayi Taraf Ek Patli Si Dhalon Sadak Thi....Jiss Ki Baayi Janib Ek Bada Board Nasab (Fit) Tha....
Aur
Board Par Likha Tha....Yeh Raasta Aam Nahi Hai....!


Haaain....Imran Aankhein Phaadh Kar Bola....Yeh Raasta Aam Nahi Hai....Iska Kya Matlab....Kahin Aap Mujhe Kisi Musibath Mein To Na Phansa De....!


Yeh Sadak Sardar Daraab Ki Milkiyat Hai....
Aur
Unki Khiyaamgah (Nivaas)....
Yani
Daraab Castle Tak Jati Hai....!


Aap Bhi Wahin Kahin Khareeb Mein Rahti Hai....Imran Ne Pucha


Haa....Moqtasar (Short) Sa Jawaab Mila


Khareeb Do Forlong Chalne Ke Baad Imran Ko Ek Badi Imaarath Dikhayi Di....Jo Sach-Mooch Qeela (Castle) Hi Maalum Ho Rahi Thi....Phatak Par Ek Santri Bhi Maujood Tha....Usne Car Ko Guzar Jane Diya....!

 

[syed arshad]

Imran Ko Is Par Hairath Hui....
Lekin
Fir....Usne Soncha....Mumkeen Hai....Yeh Ladki Bhi Isi Imaarath Se Taalooq Rakhti Ho....!


Achanak Usne Apne Baayein Pehlu Mein Kisi Cheez Ki Chuban Mehsoos Ki....
Aur
Fir....Dusre Hi Lamhe Mein Use Maalum Ho Gaya Ke Wo Ladki Ki Pistol Ki Naal Thi....!


Wo Ek Bohath Bade Baagh Se Guzar Rahe The....
Fir
Car Jaise Hi Ek Rihaayashi Imaarath Ke Saamne Pahunchi....Ladki Ne Tahukmana Lahje Mein Kaha....Gaadi Rok Kar Engine Bandh Kar Do....!


Imran Ne Be-Chu-Va-Char Tameel Ki....
Lekin
Uske Honthon Par Muskurahat Thi....Ek Maane Khaiz Si Muskurahat....!


Ab Chup-Chaap Niche Utar Aao....!


Utar Aya....Chup-Chaap....Imran Ne Car Se Utarte Hue Kaha....Agla Programme....!


Chalo....Usne Use Pistol Ki Naal Se Dhakka Diya


Imran Chalne Laga....
Fir
Wo Bade Dalaan Par Pahunch Kar Ruk Gaye....Jahan 11 Aadmi Mulaazimo Ki Vardi Mein Khade The....!


Baba Kahan Hai....Ladki Ne Unhi Mein Se Ek Ko Mukhateeb Kiya


Shatranj Khel Rahe Hai Huzoor....!


Acha....Is Aadmi Ko Pakadh Kar Kahin Bandh Kar Do....!


Haaain....Yeh Kyun....Imran Ahmaqana Andaaz Mein Bola....Kya Yeh Daraab Castle Nahi Hai....!


Tum Daraab Castle Mein Ho....Ladki Ne Uske Pehlu Se Revolver Hatate Hue Kaha


Naukar Use Narghe (Ghere) Mein Le Chuke The....!


Aur Tum Mujhe Bandh Kara Rahi Ho....Is Khabar Se Sardar Daraab Ko Sadmaa Pahunchne Ka Andesha Hai....!


Bandh Kar Do....Ladki Ne Tahukmana Lahje Mein Kaha


Naukar Ke Haath Lagane Se Pahle Hi Imran Unke Narghe Se Nikal Gaya....
Aur
Ek Jagaah Rukta Hua Bola....Tum Mujhe Bandh Karne Ki Jagaah Dikha Do....Main Khud Bandh Ho Jaunga....
Varna
Ho Sakhta Hai Ke Tumhe In Logon Ke iLaaj Ke Liye Bohath Rupaiya Sarf Karna Padhe....!


Pistol Ki Naal Fir Imran Ki Taraf Uth Gayi....Aye....Tum Log Ise Dekho....Main Abhi Ayi....!


Haa....Yeh Thik Hai....Imran Sar Hila Kar Bola


Naukaron Se Use Fir Gher Liya....
Lekin
Khareeb Pahunch Kar Haath Lagane Ki Himmat Nahi Padhi....!

 

[syed arshad]

Ladki Andar Jaa Chuki Thi....!


Imran Badi Laparwaahi Se Chewing-Gum Kuchalta Raha....!


Naukar Ek-Dusre Ki Taraf Maane Khaiz Nazron Se Dekh Rahe The....!


Kuch Der Baad Ladki Wapas Aa Gayi....Uske Saath Do Aadmi Aur Bhi The....Dono Hi Achi Sehath Wale The....!


Baba....Ladki Ne Ek Ko Mukhateeb Kar Ke Imran Ki Taraf Ishaara Kiya....Yahi Hai....!


Hmmmm....Budhe Ne Naak Par Ainak (Chashma) Jama Kar Imran Ko Upar Se Niche Tak Dekha....
Aur
Fir....Ainak Utaar Kar Uske Sheeshe Saaf Karne Laga....Wo Chaundiyayi Aankhon Se Imran Ki Taraf Dekhe Bhi Jaa Raha Tha....Dobara Ainak Laga Kar Usne Lambi Saans Li....
Aur
Fir....Ladki Ki Taraf Dekhne Laga....!


Iske Paas Bichchoo Maujood Hai....Ladki Boli


Hmmm....Haa....Kahan Hai....Kyun....Tum Bichchoo....Wo Imran Ki Taraf Dekh Kar Badhbadhaya


Main Bichchoo Nahi Hu....Imran Ne Ahmaqana Andaaz Mein Kaha....Main....Main Hu....
Yani
Ali Imran Msc-Dsc Aur Ab Phd....!


Main Puchta Hu Tumhare Paas Bichchoo Hai....Budhe Ne Bhanna Kar Kaha


Kya Aap Sardar Daraab Hai....Imran Ne Pucha


Oohh....Jahannum Mein Gaya Sardar Daraab....Ab Tum Mere Sawaal Ka Jawaab Kyun Nahi Dete....!


Jee Haa....Mere Paas Bichchoo Hai....!


Tab Main Tumhe Phaansi Par Chadha Dunga....Samajh Gaye....!


Jee Haa....Bilkul Samajh Gaya....Imran Ne Bade Aasooda Andaaz Mein Sar Hila Kar Kaha


Kahan Hai Bichchoo....?


Meri Jeb Mein....
Lekin
Shayad....Aap Sardar Daraab Hai....!


Sardar Daraab Ki Aisi Ki Taisi....Main Tum Se Kya Kahe Raha Hu....Nikaalo....Wo Bichchoo....!


Imran Ne Bichchoon Ka Dabba Nikaal Kar Uski Taraf Badha Diya....!


Oohh....Budhe Ki Aankhein Hairath Se Phail Gayi....!


Mujhe Sir Sultan Ne Bheja Hai....Imran Ne Ahista Se Kaha


Tumhe....Budhe Ne Niche Se Upar Tak Uska Jayeza Liya....Imran Is Waqt Ahmaqon Ka Shahzaada Nazar Aa Raha Tha....!


Jee Haa....Mujhe....!


Andar....Budhe Ne Darwaaze Ki Taraf Ishaara Kiya


Imran Faujiyon Ke Se Andaaz Mein Chalta Hua Darwaaze Mein Mudh Gaya....!


Continue.............................................................................................................!