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UPDATE 1
World me ek khubsurat desh hai bharat or bharat me ek place hai jiska nam hai Palampur waise to ye ek chhota sa kasba hai par aadhunik chije yha mil jati hai bas ek kami hai or wo hai education ki.
Is sahar me ek ladka rahta hai jiska nam hai Karan. Wo apne pure family ke sath rahta hai iski family joint family hai jisme iske uncle-aunt , cousin bhai and bhabhi Iski maa or iske pitaji ka dehant ho chuka jo army me the or kargil war me sahid ho chuke hai. Karan ka ek dost bhi hai jiska nam hai Raushan.
Kisi ghar k kamre me baithe do log gahri chinta me dube hue hai or ek dusre se kuchh bate kar rahe hai, ye or koi nhi Karan or Raushan hai or ye ghar hai Karan ka .
Lagta hai is bar ham phas chuke hai ab to kuchh umeed nahi hai Karan bola.
Raushan : Umeed pe duniya kayam hai or tu usi ko chhod diya ,ye bat raushan ne haste hue bola.
Karan bahut Gusse se use dekhta hai or bolta hai: itna philosophy agar padhai me lagai hoti to aaj ye din na dekhna padta.
Tabhi ek ladki ki awaj sunai deti hai jo kahti hai: Ab kya fayda jab chidiya chug gai khet. Ye ladki hai Karan k bhabhi ki bahan jiska nam hai Amulya or waise ye Karan ki classmate bhi hai.
Wo dono bahut gusse bhare najro se use dekhte hai phir Karan bolta hai : musibat me fase hone pe hasne walo ki bat kya kare,
Amu: wo mr mai has nhi rahi balki sabak de rahi hu ,waise kuchh help chahiye to mang sakte ho mai mna nhi karungi.
Raushan Karan se dhire se bolta hai : hame is se programming sikh leni chahiye hme to bas isime problem bhi hai exam k liye.
Karan kuchh sochta hai or phir bolta hai: Thick hai Tum hame ek din ka full time me hame commands sikha sakti ho .
Amu : Yes I will
Karan: phir kal pura din mujhe de sakti ho apna mujhe sikhane me
Amu man me ( main to apni puri jindgi tumhe de di hai ye ek din kya hai )
Karan use hilata hai or : wo madam kha kho gai
Phir Amu hosh me ate hue: yeah sure kal se suru karte hai.
World me ek khubsurat desh hai bharat or bharat me ek place hai jiska nam hai Palampur waise to ye ek chhota sa kasba hai par aadhunik chije yha mil jati hai bas ek kami hai or wo hai education ki.
Is sahar me ek ladka rahta hai jiska nam hai Karan. Wo apne pure family ke sath rahta hai iski family joint family hai jisme iske uncle-aunt , cousin bhai and bhabhi Iski maa or iske pitaji ka dehant ho chuka jo army me the or kargil war me sahid ho chuke hai. Karan ka ek dost bhi hai jiska nam hai Raushan.
Kisi ghar k kamre me baithe do log gahri chinta me dube hue hai or ek dusre se kuchh bate kar rahe hai, ye or koi nhi Karan or Raushan hai or ye ghar hai Karan ka .
Lagta hai is bar ham phas chuke hai ab to kuchh umeed nahi hai Karan bola.
Raushan : Umeed pe duniya kayam hai or tu usi ko chhod diya ,ye bat raushan ne haste hue bola.
Karan bahut Gusse se use dekhta hai or bolta hai: itna philosophy agar padhai me lagai hoti to aaj ye din na dekhna padta.
Tabhi ek ladki ki awaj sunai deti hai jo kahti hai: Ab kya fayda jab chidiya chug gai khet. Ye ladki hai Karan k bhabhi ki bahan jiska nam hai Amulya or waise ye Karan ki classmate bhi hai.
Wo dono bahut gusse bhare najro se use dekhte hai phir Karan bolta hai : musibat me fase hone pe hasne walo ki bat kya kare,
Amu: wo mr mai has nhi rahi balki sabak de rahi hu ,waise kuchh help chahiye to mang sakte ho mai mna nhi karungi.
Raushan Karan se dhire se bolta hai : hame is se programming sikh leni chahiye hme to bas isime problem bhi hai exam k liye.
Karan kuchh sochta hai or phir bolta hai: Thick hai Tum hame ek din ka full time me hame commands sikha sakti ho .
Amu : Yes I will
Karan: phir kal pura din mujhe de sakti ho apna mujhe sikhane me
Amu man me ( main to apni puri jindgi tumhe de di hai ye ek din kya hai )
Karan use hilata hai or : wo madam kha kho gai
Phir Amu hosh me ate hue: yeah sure kal se suru karte hai.
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nayee kahani ke liye mubarakbaad...
ab aate hain kahani pe...
shruwat hui ek aise din se jab karan exam ke performance ko le ke chintan kar raha hain apne param mitra raushan ke saath... sahi kahan amulya ne kee ab pachhtaye ka hoye.... exams se pehle amulya se madad le leta toh aaj yeh naubat na aati... khair jab jaago tabhi sawera,,, ab karan toh amu jee se command seekhna chah raha hain lekin wo toh apne dil ka command usse dena chah rahi hain..
khiar mata pita ke baad chacha chachi ke yehan hi rah raha hain... bhabhi kee behen bhi yahee hain matlab wo bhi idhar se hi padhai karti hain... aage dekhte hain inke pariwar waale kaise hain... akhir ek anath toh sabke liye bojh hi rahta hain...
nice update mitra...
ab aate hain kahani pe...
shruwat hui ek aise din se jab karan exam ke performance ko le ke chintan kar raha hain apne param mitra raushan ke saath... sahi kahan amulya ne kee ab pachhtaye ka hoye.... exams se pehle amulya se madad le leta toh aaj yeh naubat na aati... khair jab jaago tabhi sawera,,, ab karan toh amu jee se command seekhna chah raha hain lekin wo toh apne dil ka command usse dena chah rahi hain..
khiar mata pita ke baad chacha chachi ke yehan hi rah raha hain... bhabhi kee behen bhi yahee hain matlab wo bhi idhar se hi padhai karti hain... aage dekhte hain inke pariwar waale kaise hain... akhir ek anath toh sabke liye bojh hi rahta hain...
nice update mitra...
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UPDATE 2
Tumse achha to mai kisi bachhe ko padhati or use bhi jaldi sikha deti gusse me Amulya ne Karan ko bola. Is bat pe haste hue Karan bolta hai: sorry Amulya madam.
Amu : kitni bar bola hai mujhe amu bolo Amulya nhi.
Karan : isme thoda time lagega madam .
Isi tarah majedar kahasuni k sath Karan or Raushan Amulya se commands sikhte hai.
Phir ata hai exam ka din jiske liye Karan or Raushan ne ek sal se mehnat ki thi.
Subah subah uthkar dono jaldi se exam center jate hai or exam dete hai.
Center se bahar ate hue Karan raushan se bolta hai ki wo mandir ja raha hai tum ghar k liye nikal lo.
Idhar Karan mandir me pahunch kar bhagwan se exam me qualified hone ke liye prarthana karta hai or phir wha se wo nikal rha hota hai ki dekhta hai ki
Ek bahut hi Khubsurat ladki bhagwan k murti k samne ghutno pe baithkar bol rahi thi: please god is bar kisi tarah se qualify kara do mai promise karti hu ki next time se pakka mehnat karungi. Apne dad ka har kahna manugi please god save me.
Karan to bas uski chehre me kho sa gya tha us ladki ko dekhkar use or kuchh hosh hi nhi tha ek awaj se uski Dhyan bhang hota hai: are beta kaha tha tu kitni bar bola hai main us jabutre pe milungi na ki mandir k compound me .
Ye awaj thi Karan k chachi ki jo har sham mandir ati hai or Karan unko pic karne aya tha .
Karan : sorry chachi wo bhagwan k darshan karne lga tha to udhar nhi aya abhi aahi rha tha.
Chachi : maine dekha tu kis bhagwan ka darshan kar rha tha.
Karan : are chachi aap bhi chhodiye chaliye ghar mujhe bhi late ho rha hai.
Karan phir chachi ko lekar ghar aa jata hai,ghar ane k bad bhi wo us ladki k bare me sochta rahta hai wo to is kadar kho chuka tha ki use ye bhi nhi pta chalta ki uski bhabhi kab uske kamre aa chuki thi jab tak bhabhi use nhi pukarti use to hosh hi nhi tha
Bhabhi : lagta hai kisi jadu kar diya hai aapke upar warna jo ladka ek min shant nhi rahta wo itna der se kis khyalo me khoya hai.
Karan : nhi bhabhi aisi koi bat nhi hai wo bas
Bhabhi : rahne dijiye devar ji mujhe lagta hai kisi jogan ne jog lga diya hai ,warna aisi harkat wo bhi aap
Karan : kya bhabhi aap bhi kuchh nhi hai aisa.
Bhabhi : mujhe to lagta tha ki main bhabhi kam or best friend jyada hu lekin khair aap nhi batana chahte to
Ye bolkar bhabhi ne Karan ko imotional blackmail karna suru kar diya phir Karan bolta hai
Karan: bhabhi aisi koi bat nhi hai aapko to pta hi hai mujhe abhi kis chij ki tension jyda hai
Karan ye bolkar tal jata hai phir bhabhi use khane k liye lekar chali jati hai.
Table par use uske samne bilkul Amulya baithi thi jo uske ane k bad us se puchhti hai: kaisa gya mere students ka exam koi apne teacher ko bhi batao.
Ispe Karan bolta hai: Bahut achha gya Amulya madam,
Amu : kitni bar kaha hai mujhe amu bolo na ki Amulya
Karan : isme thoda time lagega madam.
Karan ye bolkar apne kamre me bhag jata hai.
Isi tarah 15 din bit jate hai or exam ka result aa jata hai or Karan and Raushan dono qualify kar jate hai phir un dono ko councelling k liye bulaya jata hai or uske bad undono Shimla me ek college me admission mil jata hai.
Uske bad wo dono wha jane ki taiyari me lag jate hai. Or wo din bhi aa jata hai jab undono ko jana hota hai.
Tumse achha to mai kisi bachhe ko padhati or use bhi jaldi sikha deti gusse me Amulya ne Karan ko bola. Is bat pe haste hue Karan bolta hai: sorry Amulya madam.
Amu : kitni bar bola hai mujhe amu bolo Amulya nhi.
Karan : isme thoda time lagega madam .
Isi tarah majedar kahasuni k sath Karan or Raushan Amulya se commands sikhte hai.
Phir ata hai exam ka din jiske liye Karan or Raushan ne ek sal se mehnat ki thi.
Subah subah uthkar dono jaldi se exam center jate hai or exam dete hai.
Center se bahar ate hue Karan raushan se bolta hai ki wo mandir ja raha hai tum ghar k liye nikal lo.
Idhar Karan mandir me pahunch kar bhagwan se exam me qualified hone ke liye prarthana karta hai or phir wha se wo nikal rha hota hai ki dekhta hai ki
Ek bahut hi Khubsurat ladki bhagwan k murti k samne ghutno pe baithkar bol rahi thi: please god is bar kisi tarah se qualify kara do mai promise karti hu ki next time se pakka mehnat karungi. Apne dad ka har kahna manugi please god save me.
Karan to bas uski chehre me kho sa gya tha us ladki ko dekhkar use or kuchh hosh hi nhi tha ek awaj se uski Dhyan bhang hota hai: are beta kaha tha tu kitni bar bola hai main us jabutre pe milungi na ki mandir k compound me .
Ye awaj thi Karan k chachi ki jo har sham mandir ati hai or Karan unko pic karne aya tha .
Karan : sorry chachi wo bhagwan k darshan karne lga tha to udhar nhi aya abhi aahi rha tha.
Chachi : maine dekha tu kis bhagwan ka darshan kar rha tha.
Karan : are chachi aap bhi chhodiye chaliye ghar mujhe bhi late ho rha hai.
Karan phir chachi ko lekar ghar aa jata hai,ghar ane k bad bhi wo us ladki k bare me sochta rahta hai wo to is kadar kho chuka tha ki use ye bhi nhi pta chalta ki uski bhabhi kab uske kamre aa chuki thi jab tak bhabhi use nhi pukarti use to hosh hi nhi tha
Bhabhi : lagta hai kisi jadu kar diya hai aapke upar warna jo ladka ek min shant nhi rahta wo itna der se kis khyalo me khoya hai.
Karan : nhi bhabhi aisi koi bat nhi hai wo bas
Bhabhi : rahne dijiye devar ji mujhe lagta hai kisi jogan ne jog lga diya hai ,warna aisi harkat wo bhi aap
Karan : kya bhabhi aap bhi kuchh nhi hai aisa.
Bhabhi : mujhe to lagta tha ki main bhabhi kam or best friend jyada hu lekin khair aap nhi batana chahte to
Ye bolkar bhabhi ne Karan ko imotional blackmail karna suru kar diya phir Karan bolta hai
Karan: bhabhi aisi koi bat nhi hai aapko to pta hi hai mujhe abhi kis chij ki tension jyda hai
Karan ye bolkar tal jata hai phir bhabhi use khane k liye lekar chali jati hai.
Table par use uske samne bilkul Amulya baithi thi jo uske ane k bad us se puchhti hai: kaisa gya mere students ka exam koi apne teacher ko bhi batao.
Ispe Karan bolta hai: Bahut achha gya Amulya madam,
Amu : kitni bar kaha hai mujhe amu bolo na ki Amulya
Karan : isme thoda time lagega madam.
Karan ye bolkar apne kamre me bhag jata hai.
Isi tarah 15 din bit jate hai or exam ka result aa jata hai or Karan and Raushan dono qualify kar jate hai phir un dono ko councelling k liye bulaya jata hai or uske bad undono Shimla me ek college me admission mil jata hai.
Uske bad wo dono wha jane ki taiyari me lag jate hai. Or wo din bhi aa jata hai jab undono ko jana hota hai.