Horror Arjun - The Devgadh Mystery

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[RED Ashoka]

Update 1


Ek Andheri Raat, Ek Tanha Safar


Raat ka waqt tha. Pura chand andhero ke peeche chhupa hua tha, jaise kisi ne usse chhupane ki koshish ki ho. Devghar ke jungle se guzarne wali patli railway line par ek matra rail gadi guzar rahi thi. Andhera itna gehra tha ki lagta tha jaise raat kisi rahasya ko chhupa rahi ho.

Arjun ek coach ke kone ki seat par akele baitha tha. Uski aankhein bahar dekh rahi thi, par daayra sirf andhere tak simit tha.

Train ruki nahi thi, lekin bahut dheemi raftaar se chal rahi thi, jaise kisi anjaane bhaar se dab rahi ho. Sab kuch shaant tha, lekin hawa me ek ajeeb si gungunahat thi, ek halka sa shor jo kisi bhi normal awaaz se alag tha.

Vo Awaaz!

Arjun ne apni seat se uthkar train ke darwaze ke paas jaakar bahar jhaankne ki koshish ki. Thandi hawa uske chehre se takra rahi thi, aur ek ajib si thandak uske shareer me daud gayi.

Phir usne suna… ek awaaz“

Arjunnnn…”

Halka, lekin bilkul saaf! Kisi aurat ki awaz!



Uske shareer me ek tez sansanahat daud gayi. Usne turant peechhe mudkar dekha, lekin coach me sirf 4-5 log hi baithe the. Sab apni jagah pe shaant baithe hue the, jaise unhe kuch mehsoos hi na hua ho.

Lekin Arjun ko mehsoos ho raha tha.


Darwaza Khud Hi Khol Gaya?!

Arjun ne dubara bahar jhaankne ke liye apna haath darwaze ki taraf badhaya.

Lekin jaise hi usne haath aage badhaya, darwaza apne aap “Khadak!” ki tez awaaz ke saath khul gaya!


Ek dum se tez thandi hawa andar ghus gayi.

Aur tabhi Arjun ki nazar neeche padi…

Ek pair!

Bina joota, lekin mitti aur khoon se bhara ek pair!

Wo pair hawa me tha… zameen se upar!

Aur phir wo dheere dheere ulta hone laga… jaise koi latak raha ho!

Arjun ka sansa ruk gaya. Uska gala sookh gaya. Usne peechhe murkar dekha, lekin train ke andar baaki log jaise moorti ban gaye the. Koi bhi react nahi kar raha tha

Aur jab usne wapas darwaze ki taraf dekha…

Wo pair gaayab tha!
Lekin ek cheeze ab bhi thi…

Ek patli, safed haath… jo darwaze ke kone se dheere dheere andar aa raha tha…

Agle Pal Kya Hoga?






•Kya Arjun sach mein kisi aatmik shakti ka samna kar raha hai?


•Ye aurat kaun hai? Aur uska Arjun se kya sambandh hai?


Train me baaki log react kyun nahi kar rahe? Kya wo bhi kisi bhram me hain?

 

[Naik]

Nayi kahani ke liye Mubarak baad
Kafi suspense ke saath kahani ki shuruwat huwi h
Ab dekhte h kia rishta h us aurat ka Jo sirf usne Arjun ko awaz dia or suna bhi sirf Arjun ne
Shaandar shuruwat

 

[RED Ashoka]

Nayi kahani ke liye Mubarak baad
Kafi suspense ke saath kahani ki shuruwat huwi h
Ab dekhte h kia rishta h us aurat ka Jo sirf usne Arjun ko awaz dia or suna bhi sirf Arjun ne
Shaandar shuruwat

Thank bro , bilkul kahani me pura suspense milega, I hope ki aapko pasand aaye

 

[SK573khan]

Interested

 

[RED Ashoka]

INDEX


Family introduction (https://xforum.live/threads/arjun-the-devgadh-mystery.167529/post-10436625)
Index - Arjun: The Mystery Fire

Update 1: Devghar Ki Aatmik Raat - Read Here

(More updates will be added as the story progresses
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[RED Ashoka]

Family Introduction:

Arjun(Hero) :- jo shahar me padhai karke apne gav wapis Laut tha hai aur in sab andhvishwas ka virodh karta hai

Arjun mother : (Rajeswari) simple housewife
parivarik parichay


Arjun ke pita:- dead ,achaank anjane tarike se mrityu ho gayi , jiska kisi ko pata nahi

Arjun ke daada (bhadranaath):buddhimani aur pracheen, bhadranaath devghar mein alaukik shaktiyon ke baare mein bahut kuchh jaante hain
Arjun ki dadi:-(Riddhi)

ek aadhyaatmik aur buddhimaan mahila jo gaanv ke anushthaanon aur alaukik tatvon ke baare mein praacheen gyaan rakhatee hai

arjun kee bahan:

saral aur maasoom, araajakata ke beech saamaany sthiti kee bhaavana ka pratinidhitv karata hai
.
arjun ke chacha aur chachi :- chachi ek bhaavanaatmak mahila hain,inke pati ka dehant ho chuka hai

Note: Baki kirdar samay aane pe add kiye jayenge

 

[Smith_15]