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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 213 13.0%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 35 2.1%

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Itna kuch na sochta mein.
jinna tum sonchte ho unna sab sonchte to story ki line lag jati bhai tamaam achchi achchi story reader pareshan hui jate kinna padhen waise bulao veer ko bhai :peep:
 

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The first report that was sent to DGSI by Las Vegas didn't have any mention of Veer. To kya kaaran tha ki DGSI Veer ke pichhe padd gayi?
That's the whole reason why DGSI were after Veer. Crimson pre-warned DGSI that something similar like HOK will happen in the city. He gave the clue that "ask investigation department from LA, if you don't believe me."
He was the one who gave out Veer's location and labelled him as a suspect of new HOK with the help of Ava. That's the whole reason why Chris, Andre, and Terashima were there in the alley. (With their camcorders to record the footage of the suspect.) During that time Ava seems happy with Veer. But the moment Veer turns away from her she acts like she's scared.

The whole reason why DGSI confirmed that veer actually kidnapped Ava. History was getting repeated. Another Hok. (According to LA reports.)

And the major suspect - Veer :declare:

This is where Crimson sends fake police officers who starts shooting. DGSI didn't recieve an order to shoot Veer. That's why they were surprised. There's a line in that update which tells you how DGSI didn't know anything about shooting orders.

But the officers were fake. Shooting was done to let DGSI agents Know that the threat is real. They must execute him on spot.

And then the rocket launcher blast which makes their belief firm. Veer is the real criminal. And then we see him running on bike... Breaking the traffic signal rules.... The chopper to fly away...

Suspicion level - over 100. This is what happened. Mega update 143 was just about all this only.
Crimson never mentioned Veer or gave his photograph to DGSI. Plus, why were the agents following Ava?
Crimson didn't send any photographs. He just had to say Ava (natalia) has been kidnapped. That's it. :D Since ava will be bringing Veer in the alley. He just gave his location prior to the incident. And then what I explained above takes place.
 

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jinna tum sonchte ho unna sab sonchte to story ki line lag jati bhai tamaam achchi achchi story reader pareshan hui jate kinna padhen waise bulao veer ko bhai :peep:
Arre mera matlab tha ye pages vages ke baare me nahi sochta mein. Dhyaan nahi deta unn par. Mein toh bas revos aur likes dekhta hu. Readers ka response milta hai apun khush hota hai aur apne kaam me lag jaata hai. :good:
 

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I think unhe doudt tha ki humla ava par hoga isiliye use follow kar rahe the aur jab dekha ki veer ke pass rahte ava veer ke sath kisi karan vash ghabara rahi hai toh unhe uspr doubt hua aur jab valley me fake police ne veer par goliya chalayi toh unka shaq yakin me badal gaya aur phir waha huye bomb blast ne unhe kuch aur sochne ka mauka nahi diya
Its only my theory
Waise mera ek sawal hai agar ava itni badi star hai uske pass system hai aur andha paisa bhi hoga toh woh apni mom ke liye kuch bodyguards kyu nahi rakh leti for safety reasons
Sahi samjhe ho. Par kayi layers aur dabi hai abhi neeche. Arc khatam hote hote crimson arc ke saare doubts ckear ho jayenge.
 

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Hmmmm...kafi badi planning Hui re baba...sch me is update ne dimag ki sare purje khol diye... crimson ne kafi kosis kri mission ke jriye veer ko khatm krne ki....jis tarah se usne veer ko fansa wakai me uski system powerful h...wolfi bhai ne ek baar kaha tha ki asli villain abhi aaya kahan ... yahan to mujhe crimson se bhi upar ki chiz hone ki aabhash ho reya se...ab veer ki halat ko bhi dekhne ki aaturta charam per hai.... waiting for the next one.
Veer ki haalat ko vistaar se agle update me dikhaya jayega. Basically kya hua tha kaise wo aaya waapas sab bataaya jayega. Dhanyavaad! Keep supporting! ✨
Excellent update bhai
Thanks
Superb, crimson ne jo pehle khel racha tha us par se parda hat gaya he, aur ab agle update me VEER ke samachar milenge.
So nice, mind blowing update
Waiting for next one, fadu update.
Thanks a lot. ✨
Keep supporting as usual.
Bhai next update present me story hogi ki past mein?
Present me hi toh chal rahe hai man. Past ho gaya.
Super duper update
Thanks
Chha Gaye bhai jabardast update bro
Thanks
Ye sahi hai... System sirf Veer paas hi nahi hai aur bhi kayi log hai, ab tak 5 logo ke paas dikhaya hai - Veer, Crimson, Ava, mad jail guy and the caller.
Dikhaya sirf 4 ke hi paas hai. Paacha toh log assumption maan rahe hai. Ye ki Caller wala banda bhi system waala hai. :D
Aisa lagta Crimson ka level kaafi upar hai. There must be a master of system creator and he/she has a bigger plan to make them fight (till death) among themselve to evolve the best system. Just a wild guess.
Raaz pata lagte jaayenge. Just watch. Last ye 6 updates me bohut saari info milne waali hai. Dhyaan se padhiyo. :D
dhamakedar update ..to veer se koi dushmani nahi thi crimson ki par koi ek aisa insan hai jo crimson se bhi powerful hai ,aur shayad uske paas bhi system hai ,warna wo aisi dhamkiya nahi deta crimson ko .
us anjan shaks ko ava ke baare me bhi sab pata hai .aur wo veer ko apna dushman samajhta hai aur apne hi haatho se maarna chahta tha par crimson ko uski dhamki pasand nahi aayi aur usne apna hi alag plan bana liya .
Andhruni baat aur gehri hai. Jald hi samjhoge aage ke updates me :D
ab wo jail se bhaga aadmi kaun hai jiske paas bhi system hai 🤔🤔..
Puch toh aise rahe ju man jaise mein bata dunga. :laugh:
crimson ke saath kaam karna majburi thi ava ki par us anjan shaks ki baat maanna samajh nahi aaya 🤔. aur us shaks ko sirf veer ko hi kyu maarna hai ,kya koi personal dushmani ,
Personal dushmani ke chalte hi aadmi Veer ke peeche nahi padta man. Crimson ko dekh lo. :D
kyunki agar system rakhne ka matter hota to ava ,crimson aur kuch aur logo ke paas bhi hai to unko bhi maarne ki sochta par usne aisa nahi kiya .
:smartm: Thoda aur socho.
to aisa lagta hai ki har system me alag alag cards honge ,aur system se reward ke roop me milte honge ,
shayad veer ko bhi pata nahi chal paya jab wo crimson se ladh raha tha ki uske paas kaunsa card hai aur ava ke paas apna nature ye kuch change karne ka card hai jisse veer ko lag raha tha ki uski favourability badh rahi hai 🤣..par ava usko skill se chakma de rahi thi
Cards quest hunt se milte hai. Missions se bhi mil sakte hai but bohut hi rarely aisa hota hai. Of course. System me kitne cards honge? Uncountable maan lo. Toh aise me bhala Pari kaise identify kare ki Crimson kaun sa card use kar raha hai. Kyuki ek hi cheez ke liye alag alag cards ya skills ho sakti hai.

For example - Veer ki jo Hawkeye hai woh aim lagaane me madad karti hai. Ab aim lagaane ke liye ajr bhi skills hai shop me. Toh kisi ko kaise pata chalega ki Veer Hawkeye ka istemaal kar raha hai?

Samjhe? :smartm:
house of killers kaise bana aur usse crimson ameer bana sab pata chal gaya aur kaise crimson ne khudko bachane ke liye veer ko target bana diya dgsi ka .
par bechare ki kismat kharab ki usko veer ko maarne ka target mil hi nahi paya aur ek haath bhi gawana pada par kya system uska haath dobara laa sakti hai ??.
Bas dekhte jao bhai. :D Sab mein abhi bata dunga toh maza kya reh jayega.
ava ke paas to ek best card hai jiska tod to crimson ke paas bhi nahi .
Naah! Crimson can defeat Ava. Par wo uss samay best condition me nahi tha.
to aisa lagta hai ki har system me alag alag cards honge ,aur system se reward ke roop me milte honge ,
shayad veer ko bhi pata nahi chal paya jab wo crimson se ladh raha tha ki uske paas kaunsa card hai aur ava ke paas apna nature ye kuch change karne ka card hai jisse veer ko lag raha tha ki uski favourability badh rahi hai 🤣..par ava usko skill se chakma de rahi thi
:smartm:
maja aa gaya update padhke bas ab present me kya ho raha hai ye dekhna hai ..
Nawa update posted hai. Aur aage ka nawa update Friday night ko.
Thanks a lot man. Keep supporting! ✨
 

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Ufff ufff ufffff...
Zabar update de diye ho Bhai tum toh
Kehne ko bohot kuch chl raha hai dimag me but sabse pehle
Crimson crimson crimson.... Man you deserve respect. Precisely ek ek minute level par planning kri hai tumne
:smartm: Bande ke naam ke upar poora arc hai man. Of course, he'll be OP in his arc.
Ye lines apne andar bohot si theories and conspiracy liye hue hai.
Ek mastermind crimson jo kisi k liye kaam krta tha (who knows legal or illegal) usne us unknown aadmi ka sath chhod diya kyunki vo pakda gya tha apne hi boss k dwara .
Ehh? Oh! I see! A hypothesis by you.
Ho na ho crimson ek deemak ki tarah hi uss unknown ko khokla kr uski power use krke apni hi ek alag duniya basana chah raha ho us unknown k jaise.
You can put it that way.
Jisme vo kafi hadd takk kamyab bhi raha hai jaise update me dikhaya gya kaise usne apna Empire establish Kiya.
Yup! He formed HOK. :approve:
Mudde ki baat ye hai ki uss unknown ne crimson ko apni team se aise Shanti se jane bhi diya jaisa crimson chahta tha.
I'm just reading. :eyes2:
🤔 Zaroor ya to unke rishte ache rahe honge ya crimson uska favourite ho.
Even seems like that unknown have system and that too most powerful of them all atleast since now.
:Munch:
Ohhh mannn iss scene ke kya hi kehne
Ekdum ankho k samne visualise kewa diya pura to.
Maze aa gye padh ke
Mein khud visualise karta hu. Uske baad hi shabdo me rakhta hu. :declare: Mere mann me toh poori anime ki tarah chalti hai story. Too lit.
Crimson jo apni team ke liye sathi lene aaya tha detention camp me jaha par uska aur yha tak ki hum readers ka bhi ek surprise wait kar raha tha.
Doctor,ek sarfira doctor.
Ye kehna SHAYAD galat na ho ki ye vhi sarfira doctor hai jiske patients whi sab system dharak hai jo puri story me bawal machaye hai.
Uff crimson arc gadar macha diya.
I told you, it's one of the most anticipated arcs. (From my side.)

I've been waiting simce months to get to this part. And now we are only left with 6 updates for this arc.
Chinatown ko ek villan dekr jo ki veer ko apna sikar bta rha hai
Or sath hi SAYAD sarfire vaigyanik doctor ke rup me ek saviour bhi jiski madad veer ko leni hi padegi kisi na kisi villan ko khatam krne me.
Dekhenge hum. Kitni theories sahi jaati hai isme se.
Doctor sahab kuch ya bohot kuch system ki hakikat se vakif hai

Coming to the next,
Crimson partner/worker sweetie
Ye sweetie itni bhi sweet nahi hai jaisa dekhne se lag rha hai
Crimson par koi nazar rakhe hue hai ye hum jaan chuke hai
But crimson ki asli pehchan to jim nightwalker pitcher bhi nahi jante the jo vo unknown se share kre.
Uski almost sachai to bas sweetie ko hi pta hai.
Aisa kaha likha hai? :?:
Sweetie knows nothing. :laugh:
Sweetie ek aam insaan hai toh system ki jankaari uss se kaise saajha ki jaa sakti hai. Pay attention here that crimson ne jitne bhi baar system ka raaz bataya hai woh baaki system owners se hi bataya hai. Not to any normal person. Ye lo...
Ek aur spoiler patak diya na mene. :sigh2:
Is part se clear hogya ki pichle update me ava ke ek hi vaar me crimson dhul kyu chatne lga
He was wounded man! Try to look on every aspect. :smartm: He had only one arm. Blood loss, fatigue, wounded chest (after removing the bullet.) It's because he knew Ava had one strong card he didn't execute her. Otherwise things would have been different. :laugh:
Isse ye clear ho gya ki veer ko crimson ne vegas encounter me kyu nhi maara
:approve: To gain the profits.
Ohhhh bhai bhai bhai ab samjha kya catch tha inn dono ka iss mamle se.

And sabse mast to cherry on the top,icing on the cake to ye reason lga ki veer ko fasaya kyu gya dgsi k dwara or uska plan ka execution.
Masallah subhanallah Walla hi wallah...
Ohhh yrr ek ek reason padh kr aisa feel mil raha hai jaise orgasm se milta ho.
Insane writting skills mann.
Reasons padh ke orgasms. :roflol:
Man! Fir toh finale arc me kya hoga ju ka? :crazy2:
Orgasm hi orgasm
No it's not good.
It is excellent 🤯🤯🤯
:thanx:
Agar jaha crimson ko goli lgi or uske basement me zyada fasla na ho to iske zyada chances hai ki goli chalane vali sweetie ho skti hai.
Sweetie nahi hai man goli chalaane waali. :laugh:
Ava ka vo Card.
Jis tarah ki skill hai vo uss hisab se lagta hai ki vo diamond ya platinum tier ki skill hai.
Uska wo card hai. Vinona's mark. Skill thodi hai. :?: Aur carda ya toh legendary hi nikalte hai seedha ya fir trash cards.
Isse hum ye bhi predict kar sakte hai ki ava ka system bhi veer se kuch kam nahi hai.
Or jis tarah se uski system ki usse interaction dikhayi gyi hai isse lagta hai ki she is soft cored person.
Ye toh Ava ka system dekh ke hi pata lag payega hume.
Acha hume ye bhi pta chl gya ki veer ne ava ko check Kiya to use pta kyu nhi chla tha.
:smartm:
abhi aur vistaar se jaanoge agle update me.
Wow man itne bade bade doubts ko itni choti choti bato ke madhyam se itni asani se explain kar Diya.
Sabdh kam pad jayege to praise this wonderful creation.
Mera perception se apke jo purane update the hok wale vo ek perfect knitted cloth ki jaise the jo khi se fata nhi ho.
Ekdum smooth...
But jo abhi ke updates hai connection wale vo bilkul uss kadhayi ki tarah hai jo hatho se unn barik se spore me se fir buna jata hai ki cloth or sundar ho jaye or cloth bhi perfect rhe.
Microscopic levels par apka work dikha hai iss update ke madhyam se.
Aww man! Such a wonderful way to put it into words. Thanks a lot man. I appreciate it. Means a lot. :shy:
It is a MASTERPIECE.
and till now the best update of the whole crimson arc
Sahi mayno me updates pehle se behtar hote ja rhe hai
Hats off
Well written...
Harr agle update me reader best update kehte hai. :shy:
Do baate abhi back of the mind chl rhi hai
1, agr veer bachega,jo ki hoga hi, or use system ka kuch raaz janna ho to vo ava se consult kr skta hai. Ki uske pass kaise aaya system
Ju ne latest update padha ki nahi? :think:
2, abhi tk humne jitne bhi veer ke villan se encounter dekhe hai vo directly ya indirectly involve kiye hue hai Suhana ko chahe vo atish ho, slogan ho,pitcher ho,nightwalker ho, jim ho,yha tk ki crimson hi ho pehle vegas or ab yha bhi...
Itna closeness hazam nhi hui bro.
Ha manta hu khi na khi vo veer ko like krti hai but aisa behaviour?? Fishy Neo!!!
Well! Darasal aisa hai ki,
Sonia Kaera ki dost hai. Toh Aatish Sonia ke zariye Kaera tak pohuchna chaah raha tha. Kyuki Slogan ko Kaera chahiye thi.

Ab Suhana badi behan hone ke naate jaanti thi koi peeche hai. Slogan aur Aatish ke baare me bhi jaanti thi. Criminals hai. Connection strong jo hai uska. So she got involved.

Fir rahi baat vegas me kaise? Well! Divya! :dontknow: Divya ke liye wo aayi, veer had to return the favour back to suhana so they all got involved in HOK. aur HOK me pehle hi planning ho gayi thi so ab veer yaha hai. Suhana is clean though. Not fishy. She took a bullet for Veer man :slap: Respect her! :budhau:
Personal experience: apke updates padhne ka asli maza raat ko hi aata hai...
Other than all up from my side till next
Obviously! Aur likhna ka maza bhi mujhe raat me hi aata hai. Post bhi raat ko hi karta hu. (Generally).
Best wishes for next update
Keep writing ....
Thanks a lot man for this massive revo. :bow:
Aise hi saath bane rehne ka. Keep supporting! ✨ :five:
 
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