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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,364 83.2%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 213 13.0%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 35 2.1%

  • Total voters
    1,639

Werewolf

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Werewolf

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Bhai Kaml ka likhte ho
Nice update
Thanks
Just terrific. Eagerly waiting for next Update.
Thanks
Divya or uski team ne veer ki pic media or paki sare platform se hatva ke achaa kiya nahi to jyada problem hoti or sabse jyada veer ki family ko hi hoti.. bicharo ki ek aasha ki kiran bhi tut jati..
Khair veer ki family se bhi veer ko dudhne paris aa gaye hai.
Khabar ab bhi pata lag sakti hai bhai. Kyuki ab toh woh sab paris me hi hai.
Shuhana ki halat dekh kar saaf pata chal jata hai ki uske liye veer kitne mayne rakhta hai .. Veer ki jaagah uske dil me kya hai.. Ava ke muh se veer ki mout ka chun kar behosh hi ho gay..
Bilkul
Finally.. Veer ke jinda hone ki khabar mil gay .. dekhte hai dhokha khane ke baad veer ke under kya badlav aata hai.. vahi Ava ki halat patli ho gay.

Shandar update bhai
Thanks a lot. Keep supporting bhai
Aa toh gaya ab kaahe ro rahe :roll:
Superb update
Suhana to Veer ke liye pagal hi Ho rakhe
Nice update
Superb update bhai
Nice update
Thanks bhailog.
Sayad ye veer ki koi skill hi h jis se pahle notification death ka aaya veer ne koi skill purchase ki hogi jese Ava ke pass apni system ke notification change karne ki skill h usi tarah
Agle update me spasht ho jayega.
Suhana.... Ye naam shayad is story me veer ke baad sabse zyada mahetvapoorn hai. From the time she was introduced as an arrogant and prideful character tabse she was my favourite. Ek aisi women jo bahar se bahut arrogant lagti hai and koi bhi usko ek baar dekhe to yahi dhaarna banae ki wo sirf paise aur class ko mehatv deti hai.
Paise aur fame ko woh mehatv deti hai aisa woh dikhaati hai bhai. That's an escape route for her. Uski split personality ki samasya ko Ashita aur Divya ke alawa koi nahi janta. Veer bas hai jo usse control kar leta hai. Zaahir hai suhana ko subconsciously veer se lagaav hai.
But when you get to know her, like veer did.. to usme ek bahut hi masoom aur dari hui personality chhupi Hui hai. But she tries to subconsciously hide that cute side of herself.
She tries to hide her chaotic side. Her beating the shit outta teddy bear. Haha.
ss update me suhana ke andar ke saare bhaav Jo ki wo itne time se apne andar chhupa ke rakh rhi thi especially veer ke prati wo fatt ke bahar aae hai. Usko aankon me jo gussa dikha wo tabhi dikhta hai jab khudki bahut kareebi cheez apase dur krdi jaae. Wo veer ke lie kuchh bhi kar guzarne ko tayyar thi, like the time when she took a bullet on herself which was targeted for veer. Aur fir jab Ava ne reveal Kiya ki veer is no more.... Suhana ko koi sudh budh hi nhi rhi... It was like she lost track of reality.
That's the right wordings there. Usse sudh budh nahi hai. Veer ki maut ki khabar bohut zorr se lagi hai usse.
Merko ab ye dar hai ki iss aaghaat ka suhana ke mind par kya asar padega, I mean she fucking loves veer, she adores veer.
Yes :approve:
This update was really heavy Werewolf in terms of the emotions shown in a single update. Hats off sir.
Thanks a lot man! Keep su6as usual. ✨
Gajab ka update tha Werewolf chalo ek chus to clear hui death notification system ke band hone ke karan aaya tha khair update bohot jabardast raha. :beer:
Ye kisne keh diya? Kitni baar :slap: kitni baar mana kiya hai daaru peeke comment ni karne ka :slap:
Story ka sbse best update hai ye 😭😭😭
Thanks.
 

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Paise aur fame ko woh mehatv deti hai aisa woh dikhaati hai bhai. That's an escape route for her. Uski split personality ki samasya ko Ashita aur Divya ke alawa koi nahi janta. Veer bas hai jo usse control kar leta hai. Zaahir hai suhana ko subconsciously veer se lagaav hai.
She tries to hide her chaotic side. Her beating the shit outta teddy bear. Haha.
Bhawna meri bhi wahi thi kehne ki par shayad Mai thoda idhar udhar beh gya😥😅
 

Werewolf

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Sir bohat maze ki storie hai ap ki main ne 1 hafte me sab update parh liye, main mostly manhwa parta hu aur system based Manhwa meri Favourite hai, Lekin ap jab mostly korean ya japanese manhwa aur anime daikhte hai to hindi me wo thora ajeeb taste de deta hai, but ap ki storie me aisa nahi hai lag he nahi raha koi hindi storie parh raha hu har cheeze detail me likhi gayi hai
Yes! I can relate. Jab anime ko hindi me dekho tab bhi wahi vibes aati hai. But ispe kaafi dhyaan diya hai mene. Aur uss tarah se likha gaya hai ki woh vibe nahi aayegi. Chuki parivaarik kahani bhi hai ye toh narration me woh saundhi mitti ki khushboo honi chahiye. Ekdum modern writing nahi hona chahiye. But at the same time system hai kahani me, business arc jaise arc hai, aaj ke zamaane me based hai kahani toh kahi na kahi aapko modern rakhna hoga narration ko.

And that's where my writing style comes in. I combine both of them.
aur bohat saaf andaz se likhi gayi hai, aur mujhe andaza hai jab bhi veer dusri country me jata hai to ap ko kitni research karni parti ho gi, kehna asaan hai lekin har information internet per mil to jati hai lekin phir us ko verify karna aur phir sirf likhne se information nahi milti ap ko dhoondni parti hai internet per phir puri information ko note karna, us ke Status detail likhni,
Yes. Woh kaam sabse zyada time consuming aur hectic hota hai. Boriyat ka bhi. Kyuki at the end of the day jab aap aise aise updates deliver kar rahe ho, toh aap nahi chaahoge ki quality me koi kami aaye ya kahi koi mistake nikle. So, bhale hi samay lele ye sab lekin mein quality se compromise nahi karta.
aur shayad me ne comments me kanhi parha tha ke ap ye sab card bhi khud he edit karte ho bohat zada kaam hai ye sab lekin is ke bawajood ap itni achi tarha storie ko likhne me kamyaab hote ho sach me asaan kaam nahi hai ye, storie maze ki lag rahi hai next update ka intezar hai take your time and also take proper rest
Yes man. I create all those cards and Veer's full status. Nexacom, Elite motors inke logos design karna. Sab mein hi karta hu. Since I'm alone, I have to do this all.
storie maze ki lag rahi hai next update ka intezar hai take your time and also take proper rest
Rest hi toh badi mushqil se mil paata hai bhai. 2 baje ke pehle sota hi nahi mein. Tab tak yahi sab likhne me jaata hai samay. Thanks btw. Keep supporting! Also, thread me swagat hai ju ka. :welcome1:
Update ki baat kare to ap ki storie me jo sab se achi baat hai wo ye hai ke ap kisi bhi character ko bhoolne nahi dete ab sonia ke baare me jo ap ne likha wo bhale he bakliyo ko thora bore lage aur wo kahe ke ap sirf update lamba kheench rahe ho but wo likhna zaroori tha,
Absolutely. Sonia kaafi time se dur rahi hai plot se. Usse dheere dheere toh laana hi hoga. But at the same time scene faaltu nahi hona chahiye. Aisa nahi ki uske baare me kuch bhi dikha diya. Woh kya kha rahi hai, kya kar rahi hai, kya pehni hai. Nope! These add nothing to the plot. And if they're doing nothing to the plot. Cancel them out.
sach kahu in sab kaira ke baare me mind se nikal raha tha per ap ne wo bhi ek jhalak me sab ko dikha dia kuch bhi bina wajha ke nahi likha ap ne, headquarter ko bhi ab ehsaas ho raha hai unho ne kitni bari galti ker di hai, suhana ka gussa bilkul jayaz hai Ava bhale he kitna marzi ro le chahe jo bhi wajha ho lekin us ne galti ki hai aur bohat bari galti ki hai, Ab agar veer ne use aise he maaf ker dia ye keh ker ke wo majboor thi ye mujhe acha nahi lage ga, uss ko us ke kiye ki saza to milni chaiye,
Uski saza usse zaroor milegi. See! Karma comes back to you. Jo usne galat kiya hai, samay uski saza usse dega. Dekhte jao bas.
aur jo ap ne veer ki entry dikhayi for a moment i got chills
Haha! Thanks a lot man. Keep supporting! ✨
 
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Good one update bro last main jab ava or veer vala scene tha vo bahut hi Thriller tha
Thanks man.
Superb update bhai sorry ha main ye 1 mahina revo shayad na de pau kyu ki achanak se hi abhi brass product main itni tezi aayi huyi hai ki baat mat pucho isi liye work load badha huva hai
Koi baat nahi. Jab samay mile tab de dene ka.
Main job nahi karta but humara business hai humari company braass ke parts and products banati hai humari company nexacom ya elit motor ke level ki to nahi hai but acchi hai tum keh sakte ho ki hum uper middle class family hai
Mein bhi upper middle class family se hi hu bhai. Par mere yaha business nahi. Soch raha hu mein try karu side business ka. :think: Halaki mere paas Veer ki tarah Profit Path nahi :sad:
Or mere boss mere khudke dad hai wese 40 se 50 workers to hai but kuch kaam to hum mailk ko bhi karna padta haina aise main agar dad phone use karte dekhle to wo alag class lete hai ye revu bhi office ke washroom main baith ke typ kar raha hu
Waah! :laughing: Kya baat hai. Bathroom se revos aa rahe hai. :laugh:
OK bhai kuchh time aise reply chala loge main pakka free hote hi saare update ka ek mega rovu pesh karunga free hote hi ok
Koi na.
Byy bro agle update ka intejar rahega
Thanks a lot. Keep supporting man. ✨
 
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