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Ju 15 din se nahi nahaaye?Aapko pata hai nahane ma kinna pani barbaad hota hai ishiliye meri request hai ki agar jaroori ho to kam se kam 15 din ma nahayen pani bachayen![]()
Abhi tak kahani mei koi bhi system wala banda marte hue nhi dikhaya gaya hai.Nahi! System abhi upgrade nahi hua. Lekin, Crimson ko maarne ke baad zaroor ho sakta hai.![]()
Aap to aise mu bichka rahe jaise hamri biwi karti hai bhaiJu 15 din se nahi nahaaye?![]()
Woh banda alag league me hai. :aura:So humne ek aisa banda bhi dekh loya jis se crimson ki bhi gand fat rahi thi. Sab yaha par baap hai aur fir unka baap aajata hai aur veer to dada ban kar batha hi hai special thanks to pari
Now according to you hum actual me ek new world me enter kar chuke hai aur bahut sari jankariya bhi mili hai aur unki vajah se kafi puzzled bhi ho rahe hai. Acha lag raha hai jaise jaise aap kuch chhije disclose kar rahe ho lekin completely kisi ke bare me nahi bata rahe. Readers ko hooked rakhna bahut ache se jante ho aap
Jaan boojh ke Crimson ne identity disclose nahi ki. Maan lo ki unknown caller jim, Nightwalker, ya pitcher ke contact me aa jaata. Toh zaahir hai woh unn sab ko check karta.Vaise kya mast plan banaya tha crimson ne nearly perfect. Pehle jim ko chudaya fir nightwalker aur pitcher se mil kar hok banaya and sabse important apni identity disclose nahi ki. Nice
Not just HOK but khud ka balidaan deke Veer ne poore hi plan ka kachra kar diya. Haha!Lekin sayad usne veer ko underestimate kar liya tha aur veer uski sari mahnat par moot bhi gaya by destroying hok mansion
Asli interlinking to finale arc me dikhegi.Aap jis tarah se chhote chhote scene ko ek dusre se link kar rahe ho vo kabile tareef hai. Most of the time writer aise karte time bahut jada raita faila dete hai lekin aapne jis kadar likha sab kuch. Hats of to you for that
Woh abhi nahi aayega. Abhi usse aane me kaafi samay hai.I’m very much interested about that jail wala banda. Kuch bahut bada role lag raha hai uska also usne bola tha you’re one of us aur kuch patient ke bare me bhi
To kya kisi tarah ka lab experiment karke system banaya gaya tha aur kuch logo par vo perform kiya gaya tha jisse patient bola gaya?
Nahi! Abhi nahi aayega woh.Us admi ki harkato se to vo psycho scientist hi lag raha tha jisne khud par hi sabse pehle test kiya hoga ye sab
Aapne bola bhi tha ki vo aadmi abhi nahi aayega lekin aapne abhi dikhaya matlab kuch to important jarur hai faltu ki chhije to kyu hi dikhaoge aap
Exactly!Ava ne kya hi gand mari crimson ki bc maja hi aa gaya dham dham dham chutad faad diye usko and yes i dont hate her. Hum me se koe bhi uski jagah hota to yehi karte abhi chahe kitna bhi gyaan chhod le hum but uski condition me uske pass koe dusra option nahi tha plus who the fuck use hande photo for a negative character bhai? She must be a top tier character in this story
Business arc me Kaera and Sonia hi rahengi. Aur bhi bohut se jann.Sonia ko bhi dikha hi diya aapne. Thank you bhai kitna kuch karte ho aap hum logo ke liye. Although jada kuch tha nahi us conversations me except ki vo kaera ki secretary ki behan ko apni secretary banaye hue hai she is also having a back story sath me sonia bhi ab sabki information nikalne lag gaye hai. Maybe pehle se hi karte rahi ho lekin ab openly dikha diya hai aapne
Want more of sonia and arohi.
Naah! Aisa kuch na hai. Actually, Terashima ne aaj tak kabhi iss tarah kisi innocent ke saath aisa nahi kiya tha. Woh apne decisions aur logo ko parakhne me aage rehti hai. Balki, saari DGSI aage rehti hai. Lekin iss baar woh sab fass gaye.Also herosima ne bhi sab sach bata hi diya but why she is crying? I mean theek hai veer ne uski jaan bachae but abhi tak to prove hi nahi hua tha ki he is innocent or not aur vo ek agent hai jo apni feelings kam hi dikhate hai to kya veer ke pass ek aur ladki aane wali hai? Achi equation banaegi vaise dono ki agar aisa hua to
Bohut se heartbreaks honge. Readers ke bhi aur kahani me paatro ke bhi. Dukh dard peeda abhi jhelna baaki hai.Suhaaannaa man i loved her too. Kya khusburat dhang se aapne uske emotions ko dikhaya just wow. We all know ki vo kis direction me ja rahi hai ab bas intezaar hai to sonia ka jab usse sab pata chalega. Sonia aur suhana ko ek sath kaise handle karenge bhai hum? Lekin raham bilkul mat karna hum par. Sath me suhana ka arrogant side me dikhate jana. Vo bhi important hai uski hi vajah se to ab soft side enjoy kar rahe hai
Contact kar diya hai bhai Veer ne.Veer ke ghar wale bhi stressed me hai aur unko hona bhi chahiye sath me vo bhi chal diye dundne veer ko but why veer didn’t contacted them?
Kya uski extreme intelligence ne usko es bare me bataya nahi ya fir kuch aur soch rakha hai usne? Sayad kuch aur hi soch rakha hai
Abhi uske liye samay hai thoda sa. Abhi toh business arc shuru hoyega.To rensu ne bachaya veer ko lekin ab ye sala rensu kon hai? Eski bhi back story aaegi kya? Lag to raha hai ki jitne bhi system wale jinda hai sab ke sab ki back story aaegi aur humare dimag ke sath khilwad karegi
Hmm! Underestimate kisi ko bhi nahi karne ka.Ab mujhe ye lag raha hai jaise game of thrones ki tarah ye bhi us holly throne ke liye ladenge ki kon sabse best hai. Abhi ke liye to mr. X hi sabse bada dikh raha hai but main baki kisi ko bhi underestimate nahi kar sakta specially vo jail wale bande ko
Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage.Veer ki baat ho gaye uske ghar walo se to ab atleast vo thode chain ki saas le payenge but what will happen when veer will face tej? That moment gonna be classic
Vo baki sab ko to handle kar sakta hai lekin tej ko?
din ya raat jo bhi hogi us time bahut lambi hone wali hai but starting ek ache se hug se ho to kya hi kahna
Bohut bohut dhanyavaad bhai itne pyaare revo ke liye. Aise hi bane rehne ka. Keep supporting as usual.Ab next update ke intezaar me aur dekhenge veer aur ava ki conversation. Tab tak ke liye stay healthy bhai and keep writing. Much love to you.
Aisi garmi me na nahaana apne aap me paap hai.Aap to aise mu bichka rahe jaise hamri biwi karti hai bhaipata karna hoga meko ju kahin uske alias to noi ho kya pata wo yahan bhi aa gayi ho
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Achcha ab inna bhadak rahe to hum naha lete hain waise A.C me garmi na lagti bilkul bhi ho log bahar ghumte unko nahana jaroori haiAisi garmi me na nahaana apne aap me paap hai.![]()