Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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[Ringsongking]

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[Anupam Kumar]

No I haven't.

Why not say that update weekends mein hi aayenge..then you would have to spend less time responding to many queries on..Update kab aayega..
Would be more appropriate to keep margin of a day before announcing update which becomes hard to then keep on schedule? Just a thought

 

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Lunch kitne baje hota h bhai...

 

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[Werewolf]

Update - 147 ~ Break The Impasse (2)​

Ab tak...

Aur idhar Veer-

[Maaaaassstttteerrrr!!!]

*Splash*

Uska shareer gehre samundar me jaa gira. Sateh par aate hi, uski nazre Crimson par tik gayi jo cruise se chhalaang maar khud paani me aa chuka tha.

Aur upar khule aasmaan me woh chamak raha tha.

'Its's your unlucky day Crimson!'

Ab aage...

Chaand ki roshni samundar ki upri sateh par chamak rahi thi. Paani bhi sheetal tha. Veer aur Crimson ki iss ghamasaan ladaayi ne jo tabaahi machaayi thi woh bilkul bhi sadhaaran nahi thi.

Vishaal Cruise do bhaago me batt chuka tha. Unn dono ki mutbhed me Cruise ka engine tabaah ho chuka tha. Ek hi engines se baaki engines lage hue the. Aag ki lapto ne jaise hi ek engine ko apne aaghosh me liya, uss se lage hue baaki engines ek ek karke dhamaake ke saath fatate chale gaye.

Cruise ka lower mid section jo ki sabse aham hissa hota tha, woh inn dhamaako ke chalte chatak utha. Ab bas thodi aur halchal chahiye thi usse. Aur, upar deck par ho rahi logo ki afra-tafri ne jaise woh kaam bhi asaan kar diya.

Cruise do hisso me toot ke ukhad gaya. Nichle hisse se paani bahaar maarte hue ek jhatke me andar ghusa. Labalab paani dekhte hi dekhte cruise ke andar bharne laga. Short circuits hue aur electric wirings saari jal uthi, jiske chalte Cruise ki lights bhi band ho gayi.

Upar ki bheed atyadhik bhay ke maare cheekhne lagi. Koi behosh ho chuka tha toh koi apni jaan bachaane paani me kood raha tha. Aur, jinse tairna nahi aata tha woh toh bas cruise ke hisso ko pakde apni maut ka intezaar kar rahe the.

Dheere dheere sagar uss vishalkaay cruise ko apne andar samaane laga. Aur idhar,

“Veeeeeeeeeeeer!!!!”

Doobte hue Cruise se chhalaang maarte hue Crimson dahaad maar kar samundar me gira.

*Splash*

[Master!!]

Pari ne Veer ko sachet rehne ke liye uske mann me pukaara. Aur, Veer jaise turant hi samajh gaya.

‘Yeah!’




Chaand apne poore shabaab me tha. Full Moon hone ke chalte Veer ke senses 80% badhe hue the. Toh wahi uski speed, agility, reflexes aur healing double ho chuki thi.

Upar hawa me udd raha helicopter Veer ko cruise par utaar ke aage Ushant Island ki orr badh chuka tha. Island me helicopter land karwaate hi pilot bhi dur se apni aankho se sab dekh raha tha. Kaise itna bada cruise do tukdo me toot ke bikhar gaya tha.

“B-Baap re! Y-Ye Oyabun ne kaha bhej diya mujhe.” Uski aankhein avaak hone ke kaaran faili hui thi.

‘Oyabun’ ka tatparya yaha par ‘Boss’ se tha. Pilot bhi chinese tha aur shayad Renshu ke home town se hi tha. Prateet ho raha tha ki Renshu uska kisi prakaar ka boss tha.

Ye pehli baar nahi tha jo usne aisi traasdiya apne jeevan me dekhi thi. Kintu, ye koi bhula dene waala sadharan drishya bhi nahi tha.

Woh bas dua kar raha tha ki jald hi woh Veer ko leke yaha se sahi salamat laut sake. Ab bas use kuch derr intezaar karna tha.

Samundar me idhar dekhte hi dekhte ek ek karke sabhi kapti log doobne ki kagaar par pohuch gaye. Unke paapo ki saza aaj unhe mil rahi thi. Hahakar macha hua tha aur samudri ilaake me bas janta ki chillaahat fel gayi.

[Go down!]



Pari ki awaaz Veer ke mann me akasmaat aayi. Woh agle hi pal jaise hi paani ke neeche gaya, usne jo saamne dekha toh uski aankhein hairaani ke maare fel gayi.

‘Wh-What is happening?’

Ye Crimson ko kya ho raha tha?

“Urrghh! Ummphhh! Arrghhh!”

Crimson paani me aate hi seedhe sateh se neeche gaya aur achanak hi uska shareer jhatke maarne laga. Woh ajeeb tareeqe se chhatpata raha tha.




Toh wahi saans lene ke liye Veer dobaara upar aaya,

“Fuahhh!!”

‘What is going on?’

[Take another look, Master!]

Ek baar fir gehri hawa andar kheechte hue usne apni saans roki aur dobaara paani ke andar chala gaya.

*Splash*

Veer ne dekha ki Crimson muh me paani bhar raha tha aur fir muh ko ajeeb tareeke se chalaate hue woh wahi paani baahar nikaal raha tha. Bulbule bann ke paani uske muh se baahar aa raha tha.

[Ahhhnnn!]

Pari woh manzar dekhte hi cheekh uthi.

‘Pari! Kya hua?’

[M-Master-]

‘That Crimson! Don’t tell me-’

[Yes! Master! He’s fucking-!! He’s freaking separating oxygen from the water.]

‘Whaaaatttt??’

Veer ki aankhein underwater hi aashcharya me chaudi ho gayi. Just what else Crimson was hiding in his arsenal?

[Aquatic Breathing, Master. Allows the host to breakdown oxygen molecules present in the water. The process is a bit longer compared to the fishes. Host can last upto 20 minutes underwater without any exposure to the air.]

‘That fucker-!!!!’

Pari ke skill description dete hi Veer chakit reh gaya. Paani! Jise, vigyaan ki bhaasha me H2O bhi kaha jaata hai.

Iska breakdown hote hi O2 release hota hai. Jise hum oxygen kehte hai. Aur yahi toh hamaare liye praanvayu hai. Kintu, Crimson macchliyo ki tarah, unke gills ke bhaati ye apne muh se kar paa raha tha.

Uske muh me maujood Blood capillaries paani ko breakdown kar oxygen ko shareer me jagah jagah pohucha rahi thi. 20 minute tak woh bina hawa se saans liye paani ke andar yu hi reh sakta tha. Woh paani se oxygen ko alag kar raha tha. Ye karne me saksham tha woh.

Par, Veer nahi! Uske paas Aquatic Breathing nahi thi.

[This is bad!! Master! Basically, woh chaahta hai hum underwater lade. Woh poori koshish karega aapko neeche apne saath ghaseetne ki.]

‘Hmm!’

Veer yu hi saans roke paani ke andar Crimson par apni nazre gadaaye hue tha. Usne aas-paas fir sarr fira ke dekha toh manzar dekhne laayak tha.

Dherr saare log paani me doobte hue samundar ki gehraiyo me gaayab hote jaa rahe the. Magar, Veer ki aankhon me unke liye koi daya bhaav nahi tha.

Ye wahi log the jo maut ka nanga naach dekh utsuk hote the, uske liye apni dhan-daulat lutaate the. Inke liye bhala Veer kaise hamdardi rakh sakta tha?

[I’m surprised Master. Aapko swim karna aata hai? I never expected that.]

‘Dada ji ne sikhaya tha. Bachpan me jab Arohi di aur mujhe woh Juhu le jaaya karte the. Tab-’

[That’s good!]

‘Aur tab se mujhe abhi tak yaad hai.’

[Kab kya cheez aapke kaam aa jaaye, ye aapko pata nahi rehta.]

‘Yeah!’

[I would like to know more about that but we got no time now, Master! Here he comes! Get ready!]

Pari ke warning dete hi Crimson ek tezz raftaar me uski taraf aage badha. Veer ko aisa laga jaise maano koi shark uski orr aa rahi ho.

Bhale hi Crimson paani me saanse le sakta tha, lekin Full moon ke chalte Veer ko uske reflexes aur agility me ab hara nahi sakta tha.

Woh jaise hi tezzi me Veer ko gale se pakadne ke liye jhapka, paani me hi Veer ne ek jhatke me khud ke shareer ko baayi orr kar liya.

Aur Veer apne haath perr ka istemaal kar paani ke neeche se upar ko aa gaya. Cruise ka hissa abhi bhi doob raha tha. Veer bina koi deri kiye uss disha me aage tairte hue badha.

Crimson bhala use kaise apne changul se jaane de sakta tha? Woh paani ke neeche se Veer ka peecha karne laga.

Veer jaise jaise aage badh raha tha, use waha aur zyada cheenkhein sunaayi deti jaa rahi thi. Kuch doobti mahilaaye aur purush use guhaar lagaate hue paani me chhatpata ke bula rahe the toh kuch ki aankhein madad ki maang darsha rahi thi. Iss aas me ki ye naujaavaan unki madad karega.

Par, Veer ne ek par bhi rehem nahi dikhaya.

Usne jab punaah paani ke neeche jhaak ke dekha toh darr ke maare uske badan me ek sihran daud gayi.

[N-No-!!!]

Paani ke andar,



Sharks uss samudri ilaake me pravesh kar chuki thi. Lag raha tha woh paani me ho rahi halchal se hi aakarshit hoke aayi thi.

Crimson kya kam khatra tha jo ab ye? Pari ne jaise Veer ki mann ki baat padh li aur use samjhaate hue turant boli,

[Master! Sharks turant aise hamla nahi karti. Lekin, zyada derr nahi lagegi unhe ye abhaas hone me ki paani me halchal macha rahe log unka ahaar bann sakte hai. Be careful!]

*Splash*

Veer aage jhuk apni disha me firse aage badha. Ye chase ka game jaari tha. Par akhir kab tak?

Doobte hue Cruise ke hisse ke paas pohuchte hi Crimson Veer ki speed ko catch up kar liya.

“Shit!!”

Veer ka perr Crimson ke haatho me tha. Paani ke neeche se upar aate hi Crimson ke chehre par bhayanak muskaan saj gayi.

Crimson (smiles) : Where are you running?

Use kheechte hue Crimson ne iss baar Veer ko jakda aur cruise ki body se bhedte hue uss par ghoose barsaane laga.

Crimson : Tujhe laga tu mujhe maar sakta hai? Huh? Bol ha-

*BAAMMMMMM*

Veer ne khud ke bachaav me Crimson ke gale par ek vaar kar apne aap ko chhuraaya.

Aur Crimson ko sambhalne ka mauka na dete hue, usne apni kamar se handgun nikaali,

HAWKEYE!

*BANG*

Gunshot ki awaaz waha fel gayi. Magar firse wahi hua jo Veer hargiz nahi chaahta tha. Crimson uski bullet ko dodge kar chuka tha.

[This is the second time now! Hawkeye firse chook gayi? Akhir wo ye sab kar kaise raha hai???]

Pari ko lagataar jhatke lag rahe the. Veer yaha Crimson ko bilkul bhi mauka nahi dena chahta tha. Yahi ek chance tha aur isliye usne firse,

*Ding*

HAWKEYE!

*BANG*

Bullet fire kar di. Magar, Crimson toh jaise aaj vardaan leke baitha tha ki uska koi baal bhi baaka nahi kar sakta. Gardan side karte hue usne ye teesri bullet bhi dodge kar li. Pehli usne cruise ke andar hi Veer dwara shot ki gayi bullet dodge ki thi. Aur ab ye do aur bullets-

Uske hontho par khaufnak muskan feli hui thi.

Crimson (smiles) : You should give up Veer!

*Click* *Click*

Bullets ab khatam ho chuki thi.

‘Shit!!! Renshu ne isme magazine nahi bhari thi kya?’

[Looks like he gave you the gun as it is. Only 3 bullets were left. Aur humne teeno hi miss kar di.]

‘Fuck this!!’

Veer daant meeste hue aage kuch keh paata ki utne me hi Crimson ne uski taang pakad use paani ke andar kheech liya.

*Plop*

"Nnghh!"

[I'm analyzing his dodging skill. You stall him until then.]

Pari itna bol achanak hi maun ho gayi. Uska poora dhyaan ab Crimson ki dodging skill ka pata lagaane me lag chuka tha.

Ab Veer apne bal boote par tha. Pari beech me koi help nahi karne waali thi.

Veer ka shareer samundar ki gehraiyo me ghashitata jaa raha tha. Crimson jaise use dum ghuta ke maarna chaah raha tha.

'You fucker-! Argh!!!'

Uske chehre par ek zordaar laat maarte hue woh uske changul se baahar aaya.

Sharks aur nazdeek aa chuki thi. Tabhi, Crimson ne kuch aisa kiya jise dekh Veer ke badan me raungte khade ho gaye.

Ek shark Crimson ke behad qareeb thi. Aur jaise hi uss par hamla karne aage badhi, na jaane Crimson ne aisa kya kiya ki shark achanak hi shaant ho gayi.

Woh apne haath se shark ki naak ke upar ahista ahista sehla raha tha maano jaise woh koi uski paaltu jaanvar ho.

'He's a shark tamer?' Veer bhauchakka reh gaya.

Woh yu hi nahi sharks ko Crimson Festival me istemal karta tha. Harr ek cheez ke peeche koi na koi kaaran chhupa tha.

Shark taming skill thi uske paas jiske chalte woh samudra me maujood unn sharks ko tame kar unka upyog karta tha.

Veer 40 se 50 seconds tak hi saans ko paani ke andar rok ke rakh sakta tha. Use baar baar upri sateh par jaana padta tha saans lene ke liye.

Jaise hi woh iss baar neeche aaya, ek shark uski orr tezi me lapki.

[Master-!!! Keep your eyes on it. Nose, gills aur uski aankhon ko apna nishaana banaiye.]

Pari ko na chaahte hue bhi apni analysis band karni padi. Apne Master ko akele nahi chhor sakti thi woh.

[Punch on its nose.]

*BAMMM*

Tareeqa effective tha. Naak kisi bhi shark ke liye ek sensitive part tha. Udhar par hamla hote hi, shark Veer se darr ke dur ho gayi.

[Go towards the deck.]

Veer deep ocean me apna raasta dhoondh waapas se cruise ki taraf jaane laga. Use na jaane kin kin prakaar ki macchliya nazar aa rahi thi.




[Ye open ocean hai. Island se thodi hi duri par hai hum Master. Island ke nazdeek nahi jayengi sharks. Underwater ladna hamare liye behtar hai. He can’t use Vertigo underwater. Disbalance zameen par hi kiya jaa sakta hai. We are floating underwater. So, Vertigo is useless. Island ke paas jaiye jitna jaldi ho sake.]

Par, Veer ke mann me toh jaise kuch aur hi chal raha tha. Woh swim karte hue raftaar me deck ki orr badha.

“Surprise!” Uske bagal se ek awaaz aayi.

“Shit-!”

Aur jaise hi woh palta, ek zordaar ghoosa uske seene me aake pada.

“Gwakh!!!”

Aisa laga jaise Veer ka poora andhruni system hil gaya ho.

*Crash*

Uska shareer paani se uchhalte hue doobte hue cruise ke deck me jaa ghusa. Wooden flooring ko tod woh cruise ke andar jaa gira.

[Such power!]

Andar ka nazaara kuch aisa tha jaise maano woh kisi space me aa gaya ho. Paani bhar jaane ke chalte, andar rakhi cheezein float kar rahi thi. Kahi kisi cabin ka lamp paani me tair raha tha toh kahi lakdi ke kuch tukde.

Aur wahi dusri orr, sharks ne apna bhojan dhoondh liya tha.

“Aaaaaaaaaarrrrrghhhh!”

“H-Helllppppp!! Aaaaaaaaaa!!!”

“Noooooooooo!!!!”

Ab shuru hua tha asli Crimson Festival. Saara paani lahu luhaan ho utha jab Sharks doobte hue logo par baras padi. Logo ko apne nukeele daanto se chabaate hue unke shareer ko tukdo me vibhaajit karne lagi. Ye khaufnak manzar Crimson ko enjoy karna chahiye tha. Par, uski aankhein gusse se ekdum laal thi.

Crimson (growls) : You ruined my another plan as well. Bolo Veer! Kaisi maut du tumhe?

Uske maathe ki nass phatne ko baahar aa rahi thi. He was definitely pissed off.

Dhamaake me ude engines abhi bhi aag ki lapto me qaid the. Kuch aur bhi the jo bas phatne ka intezaar kar rahe the.

Veer deck ki railing ko ek haath se jakde aadhe se zyaada paani ke andar tha. Woh dekh paa raha tha kaise cruise ke andar ke hisse ke poore chithde ude hue the.

Ek aur tooti hui railing ki rod uske qareeb latak rahi thi. Use apni taakat se ukhaad ke Veer ne woh rod apne haatho me li.

Lower mid section me jal rahe engines ki taraf uski nazre daudi. Aur, fir fuel tanks ki orr.

“Haaaaarrrrrggghhhh!”

Woh chillaaya. Aur rod se usne seedha uss fuel tank me hamla kar diya.

*Clang*

Rod fuel tank ko cheerte hue apna kaam kar gayi. Cruise diesel par chalta tha. Dherr saara diesel tank se nikal gravity ke chalte neeche girne laga.

Veer ne fir jalte engine ko dekha. Uss engine ko giraane ke liye uske neeche maujood flooring par waar karna tha. Aur Veer ne theek wahi kiya. Wooden flooring par jaise hi lohe ki badi si woh rod aake padi, ek baar me hi saari flooring toot ke bikhar gayi.

Engine khaska aur neeche gira. Parantu, neeche girne se pehle Veer ne wahi rod uske theek neeche laga di.

Jab engine gira toh pehle woh rod pe gira aur Veer ke hontho par iss baar ek muskaan fel gayi.

Engine ke bhaar ko usne rod se uthaaya-

“Haaaarrghhh!! Take this you fucker-!!!!”

*Wuh-psssh*

Jalta hua engine hawa me ucchla. Waqt jaise tham gaya. Crimson ki ab pehli baar aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Use abhaas hua ki aage kya hone waala tha.

Kintu, sab palak jhapakte ho gaya.

Crimson turant paani ke neeche jaise hi gaya, Engine theek ussi waqt uss jagah par gira. Aur paani me maujood woh diesel-

*BOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMM*

Ek vishaal dhamaka ne janm liya. Crimson jo bhale hi paani ke andar dubki maar chuka tha. Dhamaake ke chalte uske shareer se jagah jagah chamdi udhad gayi. Toh wahi, Veer uss dhamaake me upar ki uchhal gaya aur waapas se paani me jaa gira.

*Splash*

Par ye khel yahi thodi khatam hua tha.

Chot Veer ko bhi aayi thi. Magar Crimson jitni nahi. Veer jaise kisi cheez ka intezaar kar raha tha.

Aur tabhi woh ghadi bhi aa gayi. Crimson paani ke andar achanak hi chhatpatane laga. Apna gala pakad woh upar tezzi me aaya.

Aur upar aate hi woh dahaad maar ke cheenkha,

“Veeeeeeeeeerrrrrrr!!!!”

Uske poore badan me jagah jagah se khoon ris raha tha. Tabhi, Veer ki nigaahein samundar me ek jagah padi. Usne dekha ki ek high performance boat unn sab se dur jaa rahi thi aur usme koi maujood tha.

‘Check’

*Ding*

[Name : Sweetie
Age : 32
Bio : An orphan. Works for Crimson. Money is what she needs. Nothing else.

Relationship : Strangers.
Favourability : 0]

Woh tezz raftaar me waha se bhaag ke nikal chuki thi. Uske chehre par darr saaf jhalak raha tha. Sweetie pe dhyaan ne dete hue Veer ne Crimson par dhyaan diya.

Uski haalat behad kharaab nazar aa rahi thi. Aur ab jaake Pari ko asli baat samajh aayi.

[Y-You! You are a fucking genius!] Pari ek thar-tharati awaaz me Veer se boli.

Hydrolysis Reaction! The chemical breakdown of a compound due to reaction with water.

Diesel jo range karta tha C10H20 se leke C15H28 tak. Kya hoga agar ye molecules break ho jaaye? Woh bhi paani ke saath mil ke?

Combustion ke chalte jalta hua engine jaise hi paani me gira aur visfot hua, ek zordaar chemical chain reaction waha janm liya.

Carbon aur hydrogen ke compounds break hue aur jaa ke seedhe H20 se react kar gaye. Aur fir utpatti hui,

Carbon dioxide (CO2) ki…!

Bhari maatra me carbon dioxide to release hui hi saath hi saath ek woh cheez bhi release hui jiska Veer ko intezaar tha-

Carbon Monoxide (CO)

Woh zehreeli aur jwalansheel gas jiska na hi koi rang hota tha, na hi koi smell aur na hi koi taste.

Paani ke neeche jaate hi Crimson aquatic breathing ka istemaal karega hi, ye Veer pehle se hi jaanta tha. Kya hoga jab Oxygen ki jagah agar woh Carbon monoxide ko apne andar lele?

Maut!!!

Agar Crimson ke paas koi poison ko control karne ki skill nahi hogi toh ye zaahir tha ki uski kya dasha hone waali thi.

*Rumble* *Rumble*




Aur agle hi pal, zorr se baadal garaj uthe. Bijli kadki! Kehte hai ki jaha dhua uthata hai, waha aag hoti hai. Magar, agar vatavaran aapka saath de toh jaha dhua uthata hai waha baarish bhi hoti hai.

Pyrocumulus!! Woh clouds jo aag ke dhue se bante the. Jitna bheeshan dhamaka hua tha, uss se utpadit hui aag ki garam lapte hawa me uth gas bann upar jaati gayi. Islands par waise hi barsaat hoti rehti thi.

Ye dhamake ne jaise ek madad ka haath aage badha diya varsha ke liye.

Tip tip kar agle hi pal choti choti baarish ki boonde girni shuru ho gayi. Aur aasmaan me chaand dhak gaya. Bijli zorro se kadak rahi thi, tezz hawaaein apna rukh le rahi thi. Neeche aag ab bhi faile hue diesel par lagi hui thi. Khoon aur logo ke shareer se ukhde ango se samundar lahu luhaan hua pada tha.

Dhamaake ke chalte kuch jeev badqismati se uska shikaar ho gaye the. Toh baaki bache turant hi waha se dur bhaag nikle.

Aur inn sab ke beech, do laal aankhein Crimson ko ghoor rahi thi. Uss naujavaan ke baal hawa me lehra rahe the.

*Rumble* *Rumble*

Drishya dekh Pari ke khud ke raungte khade ho gaye.

[M-Master-!]

Veer jaise kisi devta samaan lag raha tha.

Crimson khaaste hue apne muh par haath rakha toh uski hatheli par khoon ke dhabbe fel gaye.

Crimson (screams) : Y-YOU-!! YOU BASTARD!!!!!

Veer ne uska ye plan bhi fail kar diya tha. Woh yaha inn ameer logo ko samundar me dhakel ke maarne hi toh laaya tha. Isliye sweetie confused thi ki bhala Crimson kisse maut ke ghaat utaarne waala tha? Woh unn logo ko hi cruise se dhakel ke sharks ka chaara banaane wala tha. Issi baat ka use ek mission mila tha. Yahi uska lakshya tha.

Woh sab maare toh gaye,

Magar-!!

Veer ke haatho. Usi ke kaaran cruise toota aur Crimson ka mission dhara ka dhara reh gaya. Jaha use points milne the, waha use 10,000 points ki penalty lag chuki thi.

Jiski katauti uske system ne turant ke turant hi kar li. HOK bhi gaya, Veer se bhid haath bhi gawaaya tha usne. Aur ab ye mission bhi failed. Gussa uss par kis tarah haawi tha iss waqt ye batlaane ki zaroorat nahi thi.

“Veeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrr!!!”

Woh cheekhte hue ek jhatke me Veer ke nazdeek aaya.

‘Huh?’

[Careful-!]

*Grasp*

Veer ko gale se jakad woh paas se use ghoorne laga. Aur, ek aur buri khabar tabhi Veer ke kaano me padi,

*Ding*

[Beowulf’s Blessings timing has been used.]

[Beowulf’s Blessing has been turned OFF.]

[N-No!!!]

Cruise ke dono bhaag samundar me doob chuke the. Ushant me maujood pilot darr ke maare waha se andar ki orr bhaag apne helicopter me jaa ke baith gaya.

“Tumhe lagta hai tum mujhe maar sakte ho Veer? Huh? *Cough* Mein tumhe-”

*Splash*

Veer ke chehre ko pakad Crimson ne seedha use paani ke andar dubo diya.

*Glub* *Glub*

[Master-!!!]

Paani ke bulbule Veer ke muh se nikal rahe the. Lekin, Veer ne zara bhi paani apne andar nahi liya. Carbon monoxide slightly soluble hoti thi paani me. Aur woh mili hui thi.

Veer ki saanse ukhad hi rahi thi jab-

*BANG*

Ek bullet aake seedhe Crimson ke kandhe ko cheer ke andar ghus gayi.

“Urgh!”

Woh apne kandhe par haath rakha. Veer uski pakad se chooth gaya. Bullet Island se chali thi. Zaahir hai ki ye ek sniper ki bullet thi. Normal handgun se ye sambhav nahi tha.

Crimson ki nigaahein Island par tiki hui thi. Aur, mauke ka fayda uthaate hi turant Veer ne,

LIMBO!!

*Crack* *Crack*

“Aaaaarrrrghhhhhhhhh!”

Ek teevr dardnaak cheenkh waha goonj gayi. Crimson ke dono haath ajeeb-o-gareeb dishao me mud chuke the.

Renshu ne toh iss ladayi me shaamil hone se mana kiya hua tha. Woh toh ye bullet fire nahi kar sakta tha. Woh toh Paris me hi tha. Toh fir kaun tha?

“You Bitch!!!!”

Crimson zorr se Island ki orr dekhte hue chillaaya. Aur, agle hi shan Veer ko andaaza lag gaya. Renshu ke alawa jo vyakti Crimson se bhidne ki aukaat rakhta tha…!

Apni bauhe sikode Veer ne Island ki disha me dekha.

‘Ava!?’

Tezz hawao me Ushant Island ki sateh par ek khubsoorat ladki haatho me sniper liye waha khadi hui thi. Kal use apni hi kahi gayi baatein yaad aa rahi thi~

‘There’s one more thing I have to do!’

Aur idhar achanak hi,

[Ahnnn!! I got it!]

Pari zorr se chillaayi.

[Master! I get it now! Crimson-! Woh kaise ye sab dodge kar paa raha tha. He couldn’t dodge that bullet now. Teen baar!! Sirf teen baar woh koi death ya fatal blow dodge kar sakta hai ek din me. He was not using a skill but a card Master.]

'???'

[He's using Probability Manipulation.]

Pari Veer ko aur baatein samjhaati par Veer hamle ki liye zyaada aatur tha.

Matlab Crimson kisi fatal blow ko ek din me sirf teen baar hi dodge kar sakta tha?

Ab harr baat sense bana rahi thi. Use samajh aa chuka tha ki kyu uski teen bullet Crimson dodge kar liya parantu, Ava ki fire ki gayi chauthi bullet dodge nahi kar paaya.

Saari dots connect ho rahi thi ab. Ushant Island me bhi toh yahi hua tha na?

Veer ne jab uss building ki terrace pe Crimson ko rod maari thi, aur ek bullet bhi. Eric ne bhi ek bullet fire ki thi chopper se, jo ki teeno hi baar Crimson ne dodge kar li thi.

Aur isliye-

Isliye woh lighthouse se neeche girte waqt uss blade ko dodge nahi kar paaya tha. Kyuki woh teen mauke istemaal ho chuke the.

Aur isliye Renshu ki bullet bhi tab dodge nahi kar paaya tha. Sab kuch ab samajh aa chuka tha Veer ko.

'So that's why-!!'

Ab iss se behtar opportunity kya ho sakti thi?

Crimson ke haath mude hone ka fayda uthaate hue Veer apni saans rok seedha neeche gaya aur uski taango ko apne haatho me le jakad liya.

"You-!! Rrghhh!"

*Plop*

Use neeche ghaseetate hue Veer andar hi andar aage badhne laga.

Iss waqt woh shabd uske mann me goonj rahe the.

'CRIMSON!!!!! AGAR AAJ MEIN MARTA HU, TOH MERI LAASH KO DEKH KE SUNISHCHIT KAR LENA KI WOH MERI HI LAASH HAI…! WARNA AGAR MEIN YAHA SE ZINDA BACHA…! TOH TUMHE WO MAUT DUNGA JO SANSAAR NE PEHLE KABHI NAHI DEKHI HOGI!!'

[Master!!!]

Jin jeevo ka Crimson istemaal karta tha, wahi jeev aaj use apna ahaar banaane waale the.

Crimson : N-Noooo! You fucker!! Nrrghhh!!!

Shark jo waha se bhaag rahi thi, paani me khoon me ho rahi halchal mehsoos kar turant hi Veer ki orr aane lagi. Uske jabdo se lage hue woh nukeele daant, maans ko phaadne ke liye taiyaar the.

Veer Crimson ko taango se ghaseetate hue laaya aur jaise hi shark ne apne daant khole-




"Haarrrghhh!!!"

Poori taaqat se Crimson ko kheench Veer ne use shark ke muh ke saamne kar diya.

"Nooooooooo- rrrgghhhhh!!!!"

*Crunch*

Shark ke jabdo me jo taaqat hoti thi woh Crimson jaisa taqatvar aadmi bhi jhel nahi sakta tha.

Ek hi baar me woh nukeele daant uske seene ko puncture kar andar dhass gaye. Shark ne jab dusri baar hamla kiya toh ghaav aur gehra ho gaya. Haddiya toot chuki thi. Aur peeche se Veer taango ko kheech ke cheer diya.

Drishya kuch aisa tha ki Crimson ka shareer do tukdo me usi cruise ki tarah vibhaajit ho gaya. Ek hissa shark ke muh me tha. Toh dusra Veer ke haatho me.

Veer apne kahe gaye shabdo pe khada utra tha. Usne wahi maut di Crimson ko jo sansaar ne kabhi nahi dekhi thi.

Shark se dur hatt woh jaise hi upar aaya toh use ek shor sunaayi diya.

Dekha toh paaya ki-

"Veer!!!"

Motorboat me Ava uski orr jhuk ke haath aage badhaaye hue thi.

Veer ne kuch na kaha. Haath ko thaama aur woh upar aa gaya.

Ava ne boat filhaal ke liye Ushant Island ki orr hi badha dii. Bohut si baatein thi jo woh Veer se karna chaahti thi.

Magar, Veer jaise koi bhi baat karne ke mood me nahi tha. Woh toh Ava ki shaqal bhi nahi dekhna chaahta tha. Ye baat sach thi ki Ava ne uske saath chhal kiya tha.

Lekin, ye baat bhi sach thi ki abhi usne hi uski madad ki thi.

Ushant ki dehleez par aate hi Veer ke mann me awaaz aayi,

[We'll meet again! Master!]

*Ding*

['Mission : Kill Crimson' has been completed.]

*Ding*

[You have received 10,000 points.]

*Ding*

[System has reached Level 9]

Par jo sabse zyada chauka dene waali baat thi woh ye thi ki-

*Ding*

[You have gained - Probability Manipulation.]




*Ding*

[You have gained - Limb Substitution.]




*Ding*

[You have gained - Aquatic Breathing.]

'Wh-What!?'

Veer ki aankhein aisi phati hui thi jaise maano usne nangi taar ko haath me le liya ho.

Toh wahi woh akela nahi tha.

Ava use utne hi aashcharya me dekh rahi thi. Kyuki uske mann me bhi ek notification aaya tha aur woh tha -

*Ding*

[You have gained - Healing Factor.]



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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update took time because of the work. A few rooms are getting renovated in my home. Mein ghar ka bada ladka hu toh mujhe hi dekhna hota hai sab. Saath hi job bhi rehti hai. Renovation finish hone me abhi kuch 4-5 din aur lagenge. But I'll try my best to give you the next update asap. Baaki, likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target wahi hai apna. 150.
Dhanyavaad!

 

[Werewolf]

Superb update.....
Jis tarah se aapne Suhana ki feelings aur emotions ko dikhaya hai, woh mind-blowing tha, lag raha tha ki samne koi movie ka scene chal raha hai.....
Suhana ko Veer ki kami bohot jyada mehsoos ho rahi hai....
The action scenes was superbly described.....
Nice work.....
Keep it up....

Super excited update

Superb update loaded with thrill and action

Super and fantastic update bhai

Awesome Update hai Werewolf bhai or fight sequence bhi mast tha

bahut badhiya update

लाजवाब अध्याय गुरु जी
मुकाबला पढ़के मजा आ गया
धन्यवाद गुरु जी

Zabardast bhai mazza aa gaya

Nice update but small

Pehle emotions, phir jabardast ladayi, kya khub use kiya hai LIMBO ka, aur ant me... Puranmasi, fullmoon, the day when Beowulf's Blessings is at peak, maybe 200%... As always, outstanding. Your capacity to look into details is mesmerizing,, the name of the hotel is visible in the picture.

Pehle emotions, phir jabardast ladayi, kya khub use kiya hai LIMBO ka, aur ant me... Puranmasi, fullmoon, the day when Beowulf's Blessings is at peak, maybe 200%... As always, outstanding. Your capacity to look into details is mesmerizing,, the name of the hotel is visible in the picture.
P.S. - My first reaction of seeing Crimson with two hands was shocking, but knew Werewolf cannot make such mistakes, this doubt was immediately cleared. Just one thing, where are the sharks, maybe the cruise has travelled and changed its position to the other side of island or come nearer to island being the last day, where there are no sharks.

Super bro

Jabardastttt Updateee

Superb update bro...
Waiting for next

Superb update

Great work indeed

Zabardast

Crimson ki mot ek update ke liye tak gai he. Agle update me it will be sure.

Bahut hi shandar update tha, pehle emotion bad me ladai, kintu ladai ke bich update break thik nahi he. Waiting for next superb one who end the Crimson.

मजा आ गया आज के अपडेट में
पर बीच में ही छोड़ दिया
Pura hi kar dete bhai
agle ka intejar rhega

Awesome Update

super update bro

Shandaar update

Jabardast update bhai..

nice1

So its Full Moon
Crimson ke tu lag gaye
I hope to see a good fight
Awesome Update

Bro jabardast dhamekdar update bro

Beautiful update

Now what should I react, the update is incomplete, he ran away without killing the enemy, it is a cool update, it will be settled in the next update

सुहाना को गम ने जकड़ लिया है। तब ही निकलेगी जब वो उसे मिलेगा। वो उसकी पुरानी यादें याद कर , वो अपने आपमे ग्लानि पैदा कर रही है। कि वो उसे बचा ना पाई।

Ava का पहलू देखे तो उसने एक ट्वीट कर ये बताना चाहता में अपनी जगह सही हु।

उसने अपना बोझ हल्का करना चाहा है

Bohat hi vadia update
Full moon maza aayega ab fight dekne me.

Or ye kiara kaha hai abhi kya usko khabar nhi
Abhi dunya me kya kya ho raha hai?
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Or ye party kis ke liye rakhi gyi thi crimson ne?

Suhana's love for Veer is very much because of her suffering it is evident that she truly loves Veer.

Awesome update

way to good ....

keep rocking

Nyc update

Update your fastly

Fantastic update bro

Damn brother... What an episode.. This is the most amazing action sequence till now because until now all action scenes had moments like crests and troughs, they were like you were starting a symphony orchestra and those scenes always had a beat drop in them but this time it looks like the symphony is in its full swing starting the episode where we knew the higher notes are about to come any moment, and you build it up like you always do and then came the scene we have been waiting for..Once it started it only got intense never dropping a beat or giving us chance to take a breath, then even finishing on a high where we know that the action sequence will only go upwards from here.
Like always we all will wait for the next episode hoping that it will be highly action packed from the beginning itself but somewhere within our mind we know that in first scene you will take us to somewhere else and then build up the episodes intensity and bring us back to ushant island...
Bhai aise hi hume dimaag ke ghode daudane pe mazboor krte rehna..

Bhai shabdo se hi dimaag mein aisi picture chal rahi thi jaise, mujhe abhi koi movie ka naam yaad nahi aa raha par wo scene hote hain na jinme foreground mein andhi tabahi machi hoti hai aur background mein sab sunn pade hote hain, jinhe samajh hi nahi aa pata ki chal kya raha hai, aur aage ye dono slow-motion mein lage pade hain , kyunki real time mein ladenge to kuch pata hi nhi padega humein, kuch kuch age of Ultron ke opening sequence jaisa

Awesome jabardast update

Mast update yaar

Awesome update

Great Update.

Such a truemendas update maja aa gya Dono taraf se mission mill chuke hai dono ki penalty death hai ab dekhna hai veer kya karta hai Veen ke pass full moon ka favour bhi hai jo shayad crimson ke liye buri baat sabit hoga

Nice update

Awesome bro yar bhot zhe zabardast ......
I hope k next update Crimson ki zindagi ka last day ho ga or phr Veer DGSI ko proof dey ga who's the criminal.... or is k saath he Ava k din bhee thorey rae jaey gey...... laken ye sb ab pr hai story ko kis try turn krtey ho....... Intizar rahey ga next update ka ....... khush raho bhai good luck ......

Boht achi fight chal rahi hay Crimson k sath, biL aakhir Veer Jeet hi jaye ga dosri terf Ava bhi apni mistakes ko compansate kerny ma lagi hoi hay, Lets see end ma Ava deti bhi hay ya nahi

I'm from Bengal aur Bengali New year so aap ko Nav varsh ki bohot bohot shubhkamnaen
Aur ha yaar zabardast khatarnak update superb kya baat, lagta hai ki Crimson ka khel khel khatam hone ab uska band bajane wala hai. Sach mein Update der aaya per bahut durust aaya superb

Awesome one werewolf bhai. Every update takes readers curiosity to next level.

Superb update

Badhiya update ha
Dekhana yeh hai ki crimson aur veer mekon jeetega

If veer kill to Crimson,
Then all powers of crimson and get to wear

iss update ko pad kar maza aa gaya, bohut hi romanchak action scene as expected! Ava ka veer ko tweet kar ke inform karna, suhana ka emotional hona ekdum ek naya level, roungate khade ho gaye, jab veer and crimson ka first appearance!chalege, veer ka confidence!ek naya level! I think veer ke taraf ye fight jayegi hint : werewolf in moon, and agar main galat hi veer will use some other skill in card jo aap ne nahi bataya, ya some hidden items with him jo veer ko confidence de raha hai, although bada hi mazedar update, next update jaldi dena,intezaar nahi ho pa raha

Damn amazing n outstanding marvelously awesome update

Nice update

Shuhana ki conditionjyada kharab hai....veer ki mout ki khabar sunn kar uss par dukho ka pahad tut gaya gaya hai... veer ke is liye jo bhi feeling thi woh ab uske samne aa rahi hai or ab usse pata chala ki veer uske liye kya mayne rakhta hai.

Ava ko veer ka zinda hone ki khabar to mil gay.. veer ki help karne ke liye crimson ka pata tweet karke bata diya veer ko par jo dhokha usne diya hai uski maafi is tweet se nahi milegi.

khair veer ko to khud system ne mission de diya hai crimson ki death ka ... Veer pehle se or power full hoke lad raha hai or iss baar takkar mast hai varna veer pehle kamjor pad jata tha..
full moon nikal chuka hai crimson ki L lagne wali hai ab to..

Superb Update bhai

awesome back of veer

apki update lajawab hoti hye

Maza a gaya bhai amazing awesome fantastic

Nic
Nice updates

Ek jabardast action se bharpur shandar update

Ava ne Crimson ka pta indirectly Veer ko diya, lekin veer ko marne ke baad uski sirf ek baar Crimson se mulakat hui thi to phir use kaise pta ki vo kahan milega. Mtlb ava ko crimson festival ki puri jankari thi.

Ye chutiya janta jahan dimag lgana chahiye vahan nhi lagati, bas har chiz viral kar do, veer ke pictures DGIS ne hataye or ye masiha bankar use internet par circulate kar rhe hai.

Ye bhi dekhne vali baat hogi ki crimson ko markar veer kaise apne aapko innocent sabit krega.

Suhana ki halat sabse khrab hai, bechari ko pta hi nhi hai ki Veer jinda hai. Jab Ava ne Suhana ko btaya ki Veer is dead to vo uske samne hi behosh ho gyi. To kya ava ko uski halat ka andaza nhi hai, Ava chahe to koi bahana banakar Suhana ko veer ke jinda hone ki khabar de sakti hai.

Ava ki koi galti nhi hai but usne galat to kiya aur abhi bhi uska guilt itna jyada nhi lag raha ki use maaf kiya jaa sake. Agar use maaf kiya jata hai to uss se pehle Veer kisi tarah Ava ko punish kare or usko apni galti ka ahsas ho ki usne kya kiya hai. Ava ka emotional breakdown nazar aana chahiye.

Veer ki ek jabardast fight crimson se hui, btao BC pura cruise ship hi uda diya 2 logo ki fight me.

Crimson ke L lagne vale hai akhir full moon ki night jo hai. Pani me action scene jabardast hoga.

Aur haa Bhai main kai readers se agree krunga ki agar Ava Veer ke haram ka part banti hai to uske pass system nhi hona chahiye, uss se pehle aisa kuch ho ki Ava ka pass system na rahe. Varna use veer ke haram ka part nhi hona chahiye.

Baki Werewolf bhai jo aap likhoge best hi likhoge

My view about previous updates

Pehle main is kahani ko ignore kar rha tha, kyoki jab kahani ka intro mene padha tha ki ye kisi Japanese system concept pe based hogi to mujhe laga ki kuch boring hoga.

Lekin ye kahani mene padhna tab shuru ki thi jab kuch 95 updates aa chuke the. Or sare updates mene 3-4 dino me padh diye the. Ab 146 updates tak to iss kahani me puri tarah se dub chuka hu.

Aisi jabardast kahani pure forum par aur koi nahi hai ( in my POV)

Aapki kahani ke baad kuch isi tarah ke concept par aur kai kahaniya is forum par shuru hui, lekin koi bhi iske aas paas nhi aati. Sahi kehte hai original is best.

Abhi phir se kahani ke shuruaati update padhne shuru kare the, yahan tak kahani padhke phir dubara starting se padho to use padhne ka experience hi badal jata hai. Aisi aisi batein notice krte hai ki jo pehle nhi ki thi.

Ek baat thi mere mann me ki ab tak ki kahani me sabse important character kon hai Veer ki life me.

Jab pichle update padhe to Samaj aaya ki Nidhi ki jagah koi nhi le skta. Baki sab ne bhi veer ki alag alag jagah help ki yaa use support kiya.
But Nidhi tab aayi thi jab Veer kuch bhi nhi tha, vajah chahe kuch bhi ho, usne sirf ek teacher hone ka farz nibhhaya ya baat kuch or thi ye important nhi lagta.

Lekin veer ke sath vo tab thi jab veer ki so called family ne bhi use chhod diya, use hospital me dekhne tak nhi aaye.

Baki sab ke liye veer tab important hua jab veer ne sabki help ki, jaise ragini ko aatish se bachana, Sweta ko gundo se bachana, Suhana or uski behen ko aatish se bachana, baki sab ke sath bhi aisa kuch na kuch hua jahan veer unki help ke liye maujud tha.
Lekin nidhi ke mamle me aisa kuch nhi tha. Veer ne nidhi ki madad to bahut baad me jakar ki use uska beta dilakar.

Kavya bhi veer ko hmesha se pyar karti thi uske liye Dil me soft corner tha. Isliye kavya ka character bhi khass hai is mamle me.

Phir aati hai Pari, halaki vo ek system hai or sach me vo kya hai uska Raaz abhi Khulna baki hai, lekin kahani me use ek living character ek ladki ki tarah hi pesh kiya gya hai. Aaj veer ji kuch bhi hai vo Pari ki vajah se hi hai vrna shayad vo yahan tak kabhi nhi pahuchta yaa ab tak mar chuka hota.

Mere liye Nidhi aur Pari hi hai jo Veer ki life me sabse important hai ya hone chahiye.

It's not a comparison between anyone
kyoki jo jagah ragini ki hai use nidhi replace nhi kar sakti, jo jagah nidhi ki hai use bhawna replace nhi kar sakti, aur jo jagah bhawna ki hai use Sweta replace nhi kar sakti, koi bhi ek dusre ko replace nhi kar sakti.

Writer ki writing ka hi kamal hai ye.

Eagerly waiting for next update

Superb fantabulous update Werewolf bhai...

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and awesome update....

super update broo khatarnak mindblowing , fighting part is so good. I want to see the death of crimson along with Sweety. I am waiting for it.....

So bro zabardast update tha 1 dum paisa wasool aap late update dete ho kbhi kbhi but update itna zabardast hota he ke sari kasar nikal jati he,
Aab baat karte he update ki to is update me bhi har masala tha emotions, darama, action, sb cheez,
Suhana to wese bhi ab sb hi readers ki favorite ban gai he waqt kese badal gaya pata hi nhi chala 1 wo waqt tha jb veer suhana se first time mila tha tb wo 1 arrogant aur attitude wali larki thi jo apne aage kisi ko kuch nhi manti thi ab wo 1 aisi larki ban gai he jis me har trha ki feelings aur emotions agye he, veer ne use completely badal diya he, aur suhana ko dekh ke 2 cheeso ki curiosity barh gai he,
1st. jb suhana ko pata chale ga ke wo veer se pyar karti he to tb kiya hoga,
2nd. Suhana ko dekh ke ye spchne pe majboor hojata hu ke jb kaera me change aaye ga to wo kesi nikal ke aaye gi, and i think baqi readers ko bhi is chees ka intezar hoga,
Aur divya me bhi buhat bara change dekhne ko mil raha he,
Also mike 1 buhat hi interesting banda he kiya us ka story me aage role dekhne ko mile ga?
Ava ko khushi he ke veer zinda he aur us se veer ki thori si help karne ki bhi koshish kari he but veer ka ab us pe itni anasi se trust karna banta nhi he to kiya hoga jb veer us se hisab lene jaye ga?
And finally veer and crimson ki fight to sb se amazing cheez he is update ki,
But 1 cheez samajh nhi aai veer pehle se itna powerful kese hogya?
Kiya us ne apne stats barhaye he ya koi skill upgrade ki he?
And last line to goosebumps degai bhai,
Veer wese hi crimson pe bhari parh raha tha upar se ab full moon me agya he crimson ki to kher nhi ab,
But ab 1 sawal bachta he crimson ko marne ke baad veer apni begunahi kese sabit kare ga?
Kiya ava us ki help kare gi ya wo khud hi ye kare ga? But kese? Sawal to abhi bhi buhat he lakin jwab aage to mil hi jaye ge to poch ke suspense kahe karab kare hum
Baqi update har bar ki trha amazing hi tha beo keep it up
Lot's of love and respect

वीर को क्रिम्पसन का ठिकाना बताकर एवा ने आखिरकार अपने गलत फैसले को सुधारने का प्रयास शुरू कर दिया।
वैसे सिस्टम के द्वारा क्रिम्पसन का लोकेशन पहले ही ट्रेस हो चुका था पर फिर भी उसने शुरुआत तो की । उसके नीयत पर शक नही होना चाहिए।

इसके बाद एक बार फिर से दो जांबाज का हैरतअंगेज मुक़ाबला । बेहतरीन फाइटिंग , लाजवाब उनके आक्रामक प्रहार और स्तब्ध वातावरण ।
तस्वीर मे टाइटैनिक फिल्म के ही जहाज का सीन्स था लेकिन यह टाइटैनिक किसी चट्टान से टकराकर नही बल्कि वीर और क्रिम्पसन के शरीर के प्रहार से टूट कर डूब रहा था। इस से अंदाजा लगाया जा सकता है कि दोनो की फाइटिंग कितनी भीषण और डेंजरस रही होगी।

यह युद्ध अब आर पार का बन गया है। या तो वीर जीवित बचेगा या क्रिम्पसन । या फिर दोनो मे कोई नही।
क्योंकि दोनो के सिस्टम ने युद्ध हारने पर पेनल्टी के रूप मे मौत सुनिश्चित किया है।
वीर का limbo skills का इस्तेमाल खुद पर करना , क्रिम्पसन का limb substitution skills के द्वारा पुनः अपनी भुजा प्राप्त कर लेना और फिर से उसका वीर पर हाबी होना , उसका Verigo Skills का प्रयोग करना , और क्रूज से समन्दर मे दोनो का पहुंच जाना , सबकुछ किसी चलचित्र की तरह प्रतीत हो रहा था।
मुझे लगता है क्रिम्पसन जमीन पर अधिक ताकतवर था लेकिन पानी मे उसकी ताकत वीर के सामने कमजोर पड़ जायेगी। शायद उसके सिस्टम ने ये खूबि उसे न प्रदान की हो !

इस क्रूज पर जो भी पैसेंजर थे , वो भले ही धनकुबेर रहे होंगे लेकिन सभी के सभी विक्षिप्त , विकृत , पागल और गिरे हुए इंसान थे।
टाइटैनिक टूट चुका है और समन्दर मे समा रहा है। अतः इन सबकी समाधि समन्दर मे ही हो जानी चाहिए। एक शख्स नही बचना चाहिए वोल्फी भाई !

इस भीषण फाइटिंग से पूर्व , लाॅस बेगास मे दिव्या की यादों के केंद्र मे बस वीर ही बसा हुआ है तो पेरिस मे सुहाना , वीर के वस्त्र को अपने सीने से लगाए गुमसुम यादों मे खोई हुई है। मौत किसी की भी हो , अत्यंत ही पीड़ादायक होती है जबकि वीर तो इनका शुभचिंतक और मददगार था।
मुझे विश्वास है , वीर , क्रिम्पसन को परास्त कर तुरंत ही इनसे सम्पर्क साधेगा !

बहुत ही बेहतरीन और खुबसूरत अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड जगमग जगमग।

Beautiful update bhai

Kya baat hai... Veer is back with a bang. Isiko baazigar kahte hai.

*Full moon ho rha h Aaj to veer ki raat h

Mind blowing

Super fantastic update bro

Veer ko chaand nazar aa gya, mubaraka mubaraka .. Well jokes apart full moon nazar aa ra h Syd ye beowulf blessing ka best time h or uski strength b...ab crimson laude ki Maa chu*egi...mza aa gya kya entry li h veer ne.. Is chutiye ka kissa khatm ho to thoda veer ke chaahne walo k b kuch scenes dekhne mile...or tej toh veer ko pelne hi wali h...eagerly waiting for next update

Werewolf bhai USC ke liye congratulations

As always fantastic update ...har ik scene ko kitni bariki se likha hai.. pdke aisa lgta hai jaise sbb apni ankhon ke sahmne ho raha ho..ek movie ki trah.... mazedaar damdar.... ...abhi fight shuru hui hai... Khatam kese hogi dekhte hein ..

Awesome update sir


Moon ki roshani में Veer ki power बढ़ेगी

समस्याओं का पहाड़ खड़ा है। उसे खोदकर दूर करना है।

पहले विलन को फिर जनता की नजर में फिर से सही बना है।

परिवार के सभी से मिलना उनको फेश करना है। तेज का इस बार रिएक्शन क्या होगा।

भावना की भावनाओ का जबाब क्या होगा।

बहुत लंबी लाइन लगी है।

Next Update Bhut Hi Badhiya Aayega LgtA hai







Bhut hi jabrdast lajwab update Bro

Marvelous update boss

Excellent update Bhai

fantastic update hai bhai maja aa gaya. crimson ke pass jyada skil aur power hai per mujhe lagta hai uske over confidence ki wajah se wo marega. kyuki ek choti si galti bhi veer ke liye bada mauka ban jayegi ab full moon me lets see crimson ka end kiase likhte ho bhai.

Werewolf Nice update bro sorry thoda busy tha is liye itna late comment kar paya

woww! Full moon......
अब तो क्रिमसन पेला गया....।

Zabardast update

Ye he to ap ke Kahani me mujhe acha lag raha hai, bhale he storie ek time me he kiu na repeat per ap bore nahi hote bhale he storie aage nahi barhi iss update me lekin jpo information ap ne likhi hai aur jis andaz se likhi hai sach me kamal hai

romanchak update ..divya ,suhana dono pareshan hai veer ke liye .divya ne ek mission pura kiya par usko usme dilchaspi nahi hai balki wo sirf veer ke baare me soch rahi hai ,mike ko bhi andaja hai divya ka isliye usne baat ki divya se ki wo veer ka ehsanmand hai aur usko dhundne ki puri koshish karega .divya soch rahi hai ki suhana abhi tak kyu nahi aayi par suhana to apne hi gum me dubi hai veer ki shirt ko haath me lekar yaad kar rahi hai veer ki baate .

ava ne veer ke liye ek secret message to bhej diya par veer ko pehle hi mission mil chuka tha crimson ko khatm karne ka ,penalty ab sirf death hi hai .veer ka calculation thoda galat ho gaya ki crimson ka ek haath nahi hoga par deck par jaane ke baad jhatka lag gaya jab dono haath sahi salamat dekhe .
jo log dusro ki maut dekhke khushi manate the aaj wo khud ki maut ko aate dekh chikh chilla rahe hai ..

crimson ke kuch moves samajh gaya veer jab pehli baar fight ki thi waise hi moves the .
limbo ka apne upar hi istemal karna ek best idea tha matlab ab veer ka dimaag bahut tezz kaam kar raha hai .

aasman me chand ko dekhkar crimson ko pata chal gaya ki aaj uska din lucky nahi hai .
jahaj to doob rahi hai aur ab ye dono bich pani me kaise ladhenge dekhne me maja aayega .

mst update bro ab do crocodile ki fight hogi pani me aur jo harbar maza le rahe the maut ka wo pani me bin pani ke machli jese tadap rahe hai dekhte hai aage kya hota hai jaldi update dena bro

waiting waiting waiting

Fantastic Fabulous Mazedaar update sir.

Amazing

Super bro

Update superd haihar baar ki tarah

Congrats on completing 3000 pages dear bro . Anxiously awaiting your new update

Wow, amazing update indeed bhai . Aakhir Crimson Apne antim ghadi tak pahunch Gaya. Lagta hai iska ant agla update mein ho jaayega. Hats off to the daring Veer . Aapka agla master update Ka besabri se intezaar rahega hamaara

Nice update

Waiting for next update bhai

Jaisa aap keh hi rahe hain mahoday, main jaanta hoon ki aage chalkar Ava ki image behad positive ho jaayegi kahani mein. Afterall, she's a member of the Trinity, kuchh na kuchh wo aisa karegi hi jis se ki uska sthaan us tikdi mein barabar ka bana rahe.

But the point is, Suhana & Ava can't be put in the same bracket, Suhana, though I disliked her a lot in the beginning, but she never wanted to kill (or physically harm) Veer at any point in the story. That's why covering up for what she did was comparatively easier. And that easy part was to take a bullet for Veer.

Plus, Ava helping Crimson (or following Mr. X's orders) can be justified to an extent cuz of Grace. But how do we explain her gestures of pointing those fingers (signifying gun), towards Veer? Ek tarah se uphaas hi uda rahi thi wo Veer ka...

Fadu update bro

Bechara crimson moon night me phasa hai jab veer ke card ki power almost 3 time hoti hai Bohat buri mout Marne vala bus muze to sweety ki fikar hai kya hoga uska crimson ke bagair

Bechare plan B bana baithe the veer ne apna plan c laga diya vaise ye plan b tha kya bataya nahi bro.....

Sari ladkiya Roti baithi hai khas kar suhana. Jab veer jinda nikalega nat ki band baj degi Suhana aur system bhi shayad tab kaam naa aye.Wait kayde se sabse pahle veer ki band bajni chahiye..

Ab ate sabse jaruri chij rewards kya milega jab ek system player mara jayega bus bro nirash mat karna sasta reward deke agar crimson ke sare cards or skills mil Jaye tab to kya kahne,agar ye naa mile to bus limb card se me santusht kar lunga bro

Baki Ava ko patva do aur Keira se milva do ab to bandi emotionless ho gayi hogi shayd

Baki bus agle update kaa intazar.......

भाई SANJU ( V. R. ) भाया अपनी जवानी जी लिए, घाट घाट का पानी पी कर बैठे है, अब उनका हृदय पाप, पुण्य, लोभ, मोह से ऊपर उठ चुका है,

इतनी सारी gf बनाने के बाद उनका हृदय इतना विशाल हो गया है की उसमे कोई भी लड़की समा सकती चाहे उसने कितनी ही बड़ी खता क्यों न की हो।

रही बात सुहाना और ava के comparision की तो सुहाना और ava दोनो diffrent case है, सुहाना was stubborn, उसने जानबूझ कर वीर को नीचा नही दिखाया था वो बस उसकी फितरत थी और कोई ऐसा मिला भी नही था जो उसे पलट कर जवाब देता जैसे वीर ने दिया, लेकिन ava शुरू से नाटक कर रही थी, ताकि वीर को आराम से मारा जा सके,

सुहाना at least acting तो नही कर रही थी, and obviously हमे मालूम है जैसा जैसी लीपापोती स्वेता के character के साथ हुआ है वैसे ही कुछ ava के साथ होगा,

अब फिर बोलेंगे की बहुत से लोगो को स्वेता पसन्द है, लेकिन अभी भी बहुत से लोग है जिन्हे स्वेता पसंद नही आई है। हां अब जबरदस्ती ava को थोपेगे पसंद करने के लिए तो कुछ नहीं कहा जा सकता बाकी तो
First impression ही ava का गलत गया है,

वीर की मुलाकात सुहाना से बहुत पहले हुई थी। कारण था सोनिया के साथ फ्रेंडशिप और स्लोगन कांड । इसी दौरान वीर और सुहाना के दरम्यान एक अच्छी अंडरस्टैंडिंग बन गई थी।
दोनो ने एक दूसरे की मदद निजी कारणों से की थी लेकिन उनके बीच फ्रेंडशिप का रिश्ता तो कायम हो ही गया था।

नटालिया मार्टिन उर्फ एवा के साथ वीर का रिलेशनशिप लगभग स्ट्रैंन्जर का ही था। पहली मुलाकात ही मात्र कुछेक माह पहले हुई थी। स्ट्रैंन्जर से भावनात्मक लगाव वैसा नही बन पाता जितना अपने परिवार और फ्रैंड के साथ बन जाता है।

यह अब जगजाहिर है कि एवा सिस्टम के मामले मे वीर से अधिक सक्षम थी । यहां तक कि वो क्रिम्पसन को भी बराबरी का टक्कर दे सकती थी।
उसकी सिर्फ एक ही कमजोरी थी और वह थी उसकी बीमार मां। इसके अलावा वो कहीं से भी कमजोर नही थी।
वीर से उसका पर्सनल लगाव था नही।
और जब खुद के ताकत पर किसी को अभिमान हो जाए तो उसके बुद्धी पर भी असर पड़ ही जाता है। वो मगरूर और अहंकारी हो जाता है। वह निर्बल का उपहास करने लगता है।
एवा पुरी तरह अहंकारी तो नही बनी लेकिन किसी का उपहास करने मे उसे झिझक भी नही हुई।
शायद यही कारण था कि उसने वीर के साथ ऐसा फूहड़ मजाक किया। एवा ने क्रिम्पसन की मदद मजबूरन की थी लेकिन उसका वीर के साथ किया हुआ मजाक फूहड़पन भरा था। इसी कारण वो रीडर्स के आंखो की किरकिरी बन गई।
लेकिन यह भी सच है कि उसे अपने गलती का एहसास भी हुआ। पश्चाताप की भावना उसके दिल मे घर कर गई। और वीर को क्रिम्पसन का लोकेशन बताकर अपने भूल का सुधार करने की कोशिश भी की।

गलती सभी करते है। लेकिन जो अपनी गलती से सबक लेकर फिर कभी न दुहराने का संकल्प करे वही अक्लमंद इंसान होता है।

Nice update bhaii bhit Awla Maza Aya gya par Kar ab new update Ka intazar ha

Waiting for next

Waiting

bhai next update kab aayega

Sayed kayera ke paas v system he qki suruwat me kayera ko v check nahi kar paya tha

Aapko pata hai nahane ma kinna pani barbaad hota hai ishiliye meri request hai ki agar jaroori ho to kam se kam 15 din ma nahayen pani bachayen

Werewolf
मित्र उमर निकल जाते हैं और इस तरह की कोई बात नहीं है कि इस उम्र में ही एक मात्र लक्ष्य हो वीर ऐवा क्रीमसन सुहाना... दिव्या... बहुत ही रोमांचक अपडेट है...

कई भावनापूर्ण क्षण प्रस्तुत किए हैं...

अंत अपने अंतिम चरण में पहुच गए दोनों
अद्भुत मजेदार...
स्वास्थ्य की गारंटी के लिए हम सब से पूरी दुआओं में तुम्हें याद करते हुए..
अगले अंक में प्रकाशित किया गया प्यार मजेदार हो
ध्यान रखिए v अगला अंक प्रकाशित कर हमे आनंदित करे

Abhi tak kahani mei koi bhi system wala banda marte hue nhi dikhaya gaya hai.
Crimson ne bhi kisi aise ko nahi mara jiske paas system hai toh agar Crimson Veer ke haatho marta hai toh kuch bhi ho sakta hai.
Aur uski jankari toh ju hee de sakte ho

bhai or ak behetarin update or crimson arc apne atiam patav pe he or ane vale update crimson ka khatma bhi ho jayega or is ke bad chalu hoga system ka khel jo Ki ho Adami khelega jo ki system ke bareme sab janta ho or veer ke jindgi me naye tufan leke ayega jse veer ka baadshah bane ka safar me uski madat karega bhai ek question tha jisne veer ki jan bachai ho hi main villain he ya kohi or jara is pe pakash dale..

UPDATE BHAI PLEASE MAZA A REHA HA

Werewolf bhai next update Kab?

Got it. Kaera ke time per notification aya tha '[You are not eligible to view this person's status.]' jab ki Crimson ko pehle Ava se aur phir jail wale se bhi aya tha '[No information available']. so clear, Kaera ke pass system nahi hai.

Waiting for next update bhai

Bhai update kab aayega

Aisa nahi hai bhai pranjal ke pass system nahi mangta hai apun ko

Ha maza to tab aaye jab pranjal or Crimson apas main bhide kasam karunesh ki Crimson pranjal ki tang uthake gaand marega agar aisa huva to

Waiting for next

Superb very nice update

Bhai ji great adhbhut Jabardast update har baar ki tarah

bhai update kab ayega....???

Bahot khubsurat Lekhani he bhai apki kya . Vaaaa guru

waiting for update bro

Bhai update kb aayega

Bro update kab aaega

Waiting for updates

Ekdam dhamakedaar or jordaar update yaara....
Mazaaaa aa gaya bhai waah....

Bhai update kab tak.

Intejaar kab Tak ham kare.............. bata.....,

w8ing

Are bhai mera ek sawal hein ki bachpan mein jo ladki khaai mein gir gayi tHi baad mein uska kya huaa?
Or mujhe lagta hein ki woh abhi zinda hein or kahi bs sahi moke ka injaar kar rahi hein

Besabri se intezar hai Bhai update ka

Ek bat bta bhai duniya bhar ki saarrii kasar is story me nikaldega ya apni kisi next story ke bare me socha hai kuch
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Ya
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Ise ko u ki last story smjo mai
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Q ki duniya ki hr bat Teri issse story me jaannee ko mil rhe hai bha.
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Plz sawal ka bura Mt manna mn aaya to poch lyaa

Waiting..

update ?

Bhai sa'b ye badi nainsafi he pani ke sath, pehle naha naha he baha diya aur ab na nahayenge na bahayenge.

WaitinG f0r n3xt uPdAt3 D3arzZzzzzzz,,,,,,,, pl3AsE,,,,,,,,,,???

Nice story bro tum badhiya story writer ho keep it up

This is wrong,
You are giving update after a week why?

Take Your Time Bro, MaiN Samajh Sakta Hoon Kitna Busy Ho
But Bhai Ek Yeh Baat Bhi Hai Ki,Bohut Writters Story Chhod Dete HaiN
Isliye Shayad Sab Dar Rahe HaiN,Hope Tum Jaldi Hi Come Back Karoge

Waiting

Sir koi nahi aaj nahi to kal update de dena

Koi baat nhi bhai apki writing skills aur story hi esi k wait hi nhi ho pata readers se

koy baat nahi bro health ka bhi khayal rakhna chahiye

Next update please

Koi nhi bhai...........take your time

What time can we expect for the update??

Bhai jaldi karna

Waiting.....Take your time brother

Jyada mut socho..hope for the best ..abhi to raat is jawan..ummeed karo ki kal Tak to AA hi jayega update...I agree it is not easy to take such a plot so well ahead Bina us par time lagaye..so wait for a great finish to the final fight wid Crimson Yada

Jaldi update de do bhai ab or intezaar nahi ho raha h

Subah ho gayi ab to.....

Good morning ho gayi bhi ab kab tak do ge update

Jaldi update de do bhai ab or intezaar nahi ho raha h

Bhai update

Weating update please

Last updated Friday ko aya tha

I think he isn't wake up yet....

waiting broo....

Waiting bro

Abb toh inteha hoo gayi intezaar ki ... Just for fun ... Take your time Werewolf

Kya hua tera wada .....
Update ka wada kiya tumne lekin Update na aai ..

Waiting

Why not say that update weekends mein hi aayenge..then you would have to spend less time responding to many queries on..Update kab aayega..
Would be more appropriate to keep margin of a day before announcing update which becomes hard to then keep on schedule? Just a thought

Werewolf de jaldi bhai

Bro jldi dedo update

Update 147 has been posted.