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Agle arc me ye sab nahi rahega kyuki waha bahut kuch hone waala hai.Ufff ufff ufff.....
Yahi to accha lagta h mujhe har baar... Nidhi aur Veer k beech ki ye kashmakash...The way you wrote this small segment was just... Muahhh
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Exactly!Nidhi loves Veer so much that... She doesn't even want to accept. This is ultimate sacrifice. She loves him so much that she doesn't want Veer to settle with an average woman like her. She has inferiority complex. I'm 100% sure use Inferiority complex h...
Yes! Age gap se toh ek baar aap Bach sakte ho. Lekin baaki factors ko samaaj ki nazro me aap legal aur normalised kaise saabit karoge?Wo ni chahti ki Veer us se shadi kare ya uske saath relationship banaye... Kyuki wo jaanti h ki wo ek divorced woman h... 2 baccho ki maa h... Uski teacher h... Nd the age gap... Chalo age gap ko to sab ek time k liye ignore kar bhi skte h... But what about the other reasons..??![]()
Yes. But woh kahi na kahi chaahti bhi hai andar se ki Veer use apnaaye. Uska conscious mind use inn sab se bhaagne keh raha hai par subconsciously woh Veer ko paana chaahti hai.Veer se wo itna pyaar karti h ki Veer ke liye wo accha hi chahti h... Use pata h ki Veer jaise ladke ke wo layak ni h ... Veer ke saath uski age ki koi Ameer ghar ki padhi likhi sundar ladki hi acchi lagegi... Isliye nidhi peeche hatt rhi h... It's love babyyy ...![]()
Exactly!She has reached a stage where even if she has to let go of her feelings for the sake of Veer, she'll do that...
Ye scenes aate rahenge. Jab tak ki Veer unn dono me se kisi ek ke sang poori tarah settle nahi ho jaata.but here comes the twist... And your beautiful writing...Shreya.... Ufff... Nidhi ki hi choti behan ab Veer k saath... Jese usne touch Kia nd suddenly nidhi ka waha aa jaana... Nd uss jagah ko dekhna jaha Shreya ka haath rakha hua tha Veer ki body pe ... Nd dono ka aankho se aankhe milna... Uffff...
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Shukriya.Yahi to khubsoorti h aapki writing ki... It's not just about action suspense thriller or fights... It's about emotions... You showed that perfectly..
Yes.Now let me tell you readers...Nidhi wants Veer. Aur ye baat 100% sach h ... But wo abhi accept ni kregi... Use ek push chahiye... Jo shayad according to our writer sir next arc me milega... Disembowler arc... I guess??
Uske zariye hi mehsoos karwana maqsad tha mera.Shreya ko dekh k jo anxiety Nidhi ko hoti h... Wo aapne bakhubi dikhayi h... I could feel those stares...
Profit Path zindabad.nd about Tamanna's part... Veer is utilising his new partners very well...Tamanna k saath aabha nd Shreya ka combo... What an idea sir jii
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She was remembering those forceful pushes.Nd after such a long time... Niharika madam k darshan hue ... Kaha thi ye?Was she remembering Veer? Or veer's...
Hehehe...
Shukriya shukriya.waiting for your new arc and its new update as well... Keep writing sir jii... We r always with u...
love... Rihanna![]()
Koi na Bhai.Haa bhai yaad aa gaya ha woh naam m Thoda gad bad ho gaya
Baherhal saari confusion door ho gayi
Bahot bahot shukriya
Shukriya.I read last 2 updates after a long time. But once I started, i was hooked. Great imagination and storytelling. Keep it up!
Nahi Bhai. Aaj reply Kiya hai dekho.Aaj update nahi aayega guys...aaj warewolf bhau rihana madam ko reply krne wale h![]()
Gaurav ki wife toh theek hai par woh Priya ki badi behan kab se ho gayi?Werewolf bhai,, gaurav ki wife aur Priya ki bdi bahen ka kya hua,,, unka kuchh scene aayega kya,,, jabse wo thik hui hai tbse uska veer se contact he ni hua
Ohh haa, sorry,, me naam bhul gya tha, Sonia ko Priya bol diaGaurav ki wife toh theek hai par woh Priya ki badi behan kab se ho gayi?
Woh toh Sonia ki badi behan hai na. Suhana!!! Jald hi Nazar aayegi.