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Bahut jada jarurat feel ho rahi hai business arc se dobara padhne ki. Kavya ne jo bahadhuri bhara kaam kiya jisne puri arc ko hi bula diya mere liye.
Yes. Writer ke halaato ko dusra writer hi to samajh sakta hai bhai. It's not an easy job to frame a rom-com scene which has that emotional tension between both of them. Kavya ka out of the line jaake bold hona, Veer se daant khaana, gussa hoke bhaag jaana, fir izhaar karna, aur dil par ghaat pahuchna ki Veer uske baare me dimaag se chal raha tha. And then, the final acceptance from Veer.Bro vo kavya aur veer ka scene padhne me bahut easy laga lekin i feel like usko likhne me bahut jada mahnat ki hogi lekin kavya me himmat to hai bhai aur sath me jo starting se uska nature raha hai us se alag bilkul bhi nahi hua jo ki bahut pasand aaya mujhe
Arohi kahi nahi gayi hai bro.Bhabhi se bhi sulah ho gaye aur if i remeber correctly to purvi ke sath bhi scene bana tha vaha but arohi ke sath etna anayay kyu? Vo side line wali actress kyu bana di gaye hai jabki har waqt vo leading star easily maat de rahi hai?
Ye sab kuch agle arc ka hissa hai. Sonia guilty hai of course. Also, uski secretary Suchika and Kaera ki secretary Ruchika inki bhi story baaki hai. Jo agle arc me hi darshayi jayegi. Wahi triggering factory hai Sonia aur Kaera ke rishte ke beech ka. Dusra triggering factor of course Veer rahega.Insaaf chahiye arohi ke liye aur ek mega update jisme arohi aur sonia bas en dono ki conversation ho. Arohi ke dil me kya chal raha hai vo bas bits and pieces me hi hume dikhaya gaya hai jo interesting to hai lekin ab hume more chahiye sath me sonia ke sath bhi ek conversation jisme vo pehle to sorry bolo for not help him in that hotel aur fir kaera ki vajah se jealousy dikhaya aur uske baad veer ke sath dosti show kare
Tamanaah ke sath to bahut kuch imagine kiya tha lekin apne use saste me nipta diya. Fir se anayay readers ke sath. Vaise vo kaam ki ladki to hai aur usko apni side me lekar veer ko fayda bhi bahut hone wala hai aur hardcore to hona hi hai uske sath aaj nahi to kal to hum uska intezaar karega
Nidhi umr me Veer se badi hai. Samajhdaar use hi hona padega. Wo apni Dil ki sunke baaki cheezo ko ignore nahi kar sakti.I really feel bad for nidhi maam. Bahut kuch dekh liya unhone apni chhoti si jindagi me aur ab jab finally sab normal hone laga hai to vo apne aap me hi ulajh gaye hai. Vaise dekha jaye to vo galat bhi nahi hai veer unse kafi chhota bhi hai aur sath me vo khud divorced bhi hai aur ab to shreya ke sath bhi dekh liya unhone veer ko to apni behan ke beech me to vo bilkul bhi nahi aaegi. Dil totenge bahut sare aane wale waqt me and i am so ready for that
Finally china to pahuch gaya londa apna aur yaha to do do sundari mojud hai garofano aur erica aur ab divya bhi aa gaye. Subah wala scene dobara ho jaye divya ke sath?
Vaise mujhe betrayal wali feeling aa rahi hai jo bahut had tak rensu ki taraf se hi aa rahi hai. Vo veer ko betray kare aur fir veer jeet jaye aur badle me erica aur garofano ke sath threesome. Wow
Jaisa ki maine kaha. Tej aur Arohi dono hi uske waapas aate hi uski class lagaane waali hai. Arc tagda hai but bahut bada nahi hai. Lekin chhota bhi nahi hai. Ek do update to abhi Garofano ki mystery me jaane waale hai. Do update hi maan lo. Update 174 se mine waale matter pe hum aayenge. Aur, fir wo jitna jaha tak jaaye.That whole tribe aur Chinese wala scene jisme abhi tak sayad kuch major khula hi nahi hai vo bahut bada hoga. Jaisa ki aap har baar pichle arc ko top karte ho aur last me to crimson mara tha to es baar to dhamaka bahut bada hone wala hai. I am more interested in after effects. Jab tej ko pata chalega tab kya hoga?
Nahi! Iss baar to Arohi bhi nahi chorrne waali use.Kavya ko to vo easily mana lega, arohi to uski hi hai vo use jada push bhi nahi karegi lekin tej to use kacha chaba dalne wali hai. Maja to bahut aaega
Woh mere liye bahut complicated hone waala hai.Aur uske baad jab kaera, sonia, ava, garofano, erica, divya, suhana sab milegi(milegi na kabhi to kabhi) bhai aap soch lena hum kya imagine karke bathe hai. Dil nahi tootna chahiye humara
Thanks a lot Bhai.Aise hi likhte raho bhai. Ek baar vapas padh kar detailed review diya jayega. Abhi to sirf apni presence mark karne ke liye jitna yaad tha likh diya.
Much love and respect. Keep going
Las Vegas waale Veer ko baahar aana padega.Garofano or Renshu me kon sach or kon juth bol raha hai ye jannne ke liye ab apna detective dimang lagana padega .
Yahi toh dekhna hai ki kaun sach chhipa raha hai.Garofano ke khilaf sare proof hai jo khud Renshu ne rakhe par. Renshu bhi kuch chupa raha hai shayad.. and third party involve hai shayad ussi ka kiya dhara bhi ho..
Dekhna hoga ki Divya kya waqai me help karti hai ya nahi.Divya bhi aa gay hai to lagta hai ab iss problem ka solution dono mil kar khoj nikalenge..
Thanks and keep supporting.Superb update Bhai
Shukriya. Saath bane rahiyega.Kamal.ki updet ha yar writer ko dnon hato sa slute he bht jandar jon jon stori aga brh rahi itni hi yh dlchsp hoti ja rahi
Why??Divya ki Boss that lady is suspicious
Umm...! Dekhte hai. Kya scene chal raha hai peeth peeche.Lag raha hai ki she is one of the system owner or May be the creator jo game khel rahi shayad wo ab system n system owners ko control nahi kar pa rahi hai.
Ye bhi dekhte hai. Wese bhi, FBCC ki director hone ke naate aap apni jagah se jaa nahi sakte. Kaam hi itna hota hai headquarter me. Upar se agar jaate bhi hai toh wo bhi rarely hi hota hai.Khaas baat
Renshu
Gurafano
Divya
Teeno Veer ko jaante hain / pahle mil chuke hain, matlab May be Veer se khatra hai is mysterious lady ko isliye wo aane wali nahi hai filhaal.
If you think director is Mr. X or Ms. X then answer her questionSame
And i am sure director is mr x
Because
Its not coincidence that divya's first mission is with veer
Its pre planned by the director and she is in usa also
And another thing you say why she will say that he/she is in usa
And i am asking you why she cant say this
If reason is fear than no its not
Because one who can monitor veer , crimson ,ava and lord like renshu at same time
I think she will have the ability and power to come in front
And also an amazong update bro
You are just awsm
Aapas me baat kar lo.Arreee... It's a trap by Werewolf
why are u guys falling for that trap??? You must not fall for this cheap trick...
Agar director miss x h... Then how will you explain the guy who killed Ava's parents??? Gender to change ni ho sakta na? I mean in today's world anything is possible
but but but... Agar Ava k parents ko uss mister X ne mara tha... Then suddenly wo female kese ho gya???
that means... Director can't be mister X... Bcoz wo she h... Na ki he
I'm pretty sure hum ko deliberately ghumaya ja rha h...
ShukriyaVery Nice Fantastic And Excellent Update Bhai
Thanks a lot.Great update. Kya suspense create kiya hai!!! Ek baat to samajh me aa gayi ki koi bhi guess karna bekaar hai. You will twist the plot so cleverly that one will finally land with ones own entangled limbs.
We still don't know whether Renshu is telling the truth or not. Whether Garofano is innocent or not. Both of the them have their solid explanations. But there's one thing where Renshu is lacking... He didn't tell Veer about Mr. Nicholson's younger brother. Was he himself unaware of this fact? Or he hid it from Veer on purpose?First I thought that a third person is trying to create rift between Renshu and Garofano, which may come out to be true, but it was not Jaw Long and Renshu does not know anything about it. Now it has come out tha Renshu imolicated Garofano, thinking he was doing justice.
Why won't they?The scene between Renshu, Erica, Garofano and Veer was very interesting. Kafi kuch unke baare me, unki skills ke baare me Veer ko pata chala. Lekin weh sab apni skills ko Veer ke saamne expose kyon kar rahe hain, sochne wali baat hai.
They know that Veer isn't a weak system holder. Dono hi ye baat jaante hai. Veer jab ghayal tha tab woh Renshu pe hamla kar diya tha. Garofano jab uss se pehli baar mili thi toh Veer ne use almost jakad hi liya tha. They know ki woh strong hai. Aur, use halke me nahi Lena hai.Ek baat aur, jis tarah se Renshu ki kalayi par nishan ban gaye aur Garofano Veer ke saamne ke dam se shaant ho gayi, unko Veer ki capabilities ke baare me jaan kar kuch shock sa laga.
Before putting a theory about Mr. X. You must have a basic imagination about~Waise aur koi story hoti, to sab bade araam se kehte ki in sab ke peeche Mr Nicholson ke bhai ka haath hai, usko hi sab daulat milne wali hai agar Garofano convict ho jati hai. Ho sakta hai ki kisi aur ne hi bhai ko motivate kiya ho. Ab aate hain Mr X... ya phir Ms X. Mujhe yeh nahi samajh me aa raha hai ki weh kyon batayegi ki we US se hai. Ek taraf to ye ek bada plot lagta hai, do deshon ke beech me sambandh bigaadne wala, wahin jyada logical lagta hai ki Mr/Ms X, apne sab rival system owners ko eliminate kar rahi hai. Pehle Veer ke through Crimson ko marvaya, ab shayad in chaaron ki baari hai.
Abhi use aaye hue hi kitna samay hua Bhai jo rehesyamayi ho gayi woh?In sab me FBCC ki director ka role bahut rahesmayi hota ja raha hai. Kya weh Divya ke through Veer ko monitor karna chahti hai. Kya weh hi Ms X hai... Sorry, no guesses...
Dekhte hai. But as I said... This Pari is different. Har Pari hi different hoti hai but this one is... Wild!!! You'll come to know soon why I'm emphasizing on her personality that much. Thanks a lot. And, keep supporting.Update was very well written. Lagta hai ki Pari ko jaldi hi haar manani padegi.
Abhi to nahi aaya hai. Bhai ek guzarish hai. Mujhe ye batao ki woh mission kis update me Mila tha? Mera kaam halka ho jayega.Bhai keara ke emosans ko bapas lane wala mission Mila tha uske pura hone ka notification nhi aaya
Who knows?Interesting update! Could Divya’s boss be X?
Another reason why he's the protagonist and not anyone else.So many similarities between Veer and Violet! Both lost a friend! Veer’s mannerisms showcase that he is thinking like a king - he doesn’t take side, but does what’s just and correct!
Maybe. Or maybe not. He knows that if anyone can harm them then it's gonna be a system holder. So, he always checks them in and out making sure that he's not letting a snake come inside his territory. That's the reason he is always biased against system holders.Renshu’s way of thinking and his act seems so biased! So far I thought he would be a wise guy. The possibility that he was manipulated seems doubtful! Could he be hiding something??
Thank you so much. During the business arc I was stuck here for a few days. I used to brainstorm how to bring in Garofano in this whole arc. Because, she's an important system holder in herself. And, then finally one day I came up with this idea. Hope, everyone is enjoying this mystery. There will be 2 updates for this riddle. In these 2 updates everything about Garofano will be sorted out. So, you guys will have to be patient to witness the mine related matter.This update is a real mind bender! The writer has really put in great effort to think this throughJust thinking of different possibilities is making me excited for the next updates! I smell a mystery!
Wahi toh baat hai na Bhai. Kuch cheezein chhipayi jaa rahi hai aur Veer ko yahi dekhna hai ki kaun chhipa raha hai cheezein. Of course uske liye ye kaafi mushqil hone waala hai.Update 171
dono ki baate Sach lag Rahi h
Renshu ki taraf se dekha jaye tow Violet hi gunehgaar h matlab yeh ki Nicholson ki property ke liye usne unka khoob ker dia or ager Violet ki BAAT maani jaye tow woh bhala us adminka khooni kyon karegi jisne use ek anaath ki jindagi Jeena se bachaya or itna kuch dia tow iss hisab se Violet bakasoor h lekin ab yaha per Nicholson ke bhai ka naam bataya Violet ne jabki Renshu koyi zikr nahi kia tha Kahi aisa tow nahi ki uska bhai hi ho iss sabke peeche or Renshu uska saath de raha ho
Bilkul! Divya to apne pehle assignment ke liye yaha aayi thi. Veer ko achanak waha dekh ke of course woh chaukegi hi.Veer ke liye yeh bahot bada wala dimag sahi kerne wala kaam h dekhte h Veer kaise Sach samne laa pata h
tow Divya bhi pahoch gayi yaha jise dekh ker Veer or Divya dono chonk gaye hona bhi chahiye acpect jo nahi kia hoga dono n
Koi bhi X ho sakta hai.or Kahi aisa tow nahi woh USA wali Divya ki boss wahi tow X nahi h
Bahut bahut shukriya bhai. Keep supporting.baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
bahot behtareen zabardast shaandar lajawab update bhai
Iss prashn ke liye pehle iss prashn ka jawaab do.Ek baat aur yaad aayi, Mr X ne US me hi Crimson se Ava ke father ka accident karvaya tha.... FBCC director ke Ms X hone ke chances badh rahe hain. Bas usne Renshu se last time kyon bina voice modulator ke baat ki... Aur Renshu ne bina address ke usko kaise invitation bheja... Kuch to Renshu chupa raha hai... Locha hi locha...![]()
Arreee... It's a trap by Werewolf
why are u guys falling for that trap??? You must not fall for this cheap trick...
Agar director miss x h... Then how will you explain the guy who killed Ava's parents??? Gender to change ni ho sakta na? I mean in today's world anything is possible
but but but... Agar Ava k parents ko uss mister X ne mara tha... Then suddenly wo female kese ho gya???
that means... Director can't be mister X... Bcoz wo she h... Na ki he
I'm pretty sure hum ko deliberately ghumaya ja rha h...
Agle update me case aage badhega.lovely update ..ab kaun sach aur kaun jhooth bol raha hai ye veer ko hi pata lagana hai ..
ab divya bhi is case me entry maar chuki hai aur ye uska pehla case hai nayi job ka ..
By the way systems ek dusre ko check nahi kar sakte. You know that right?nicholson ko maarnewala jarur koi system holder hi hoga jisko garofano ke baare me bahut kuch pata hai .
Ava alive hai ya dead ye batana to spoiler hai.I think Mr.X ne fbcc ki head se through phone karwaya ho yeh phir kisi aur female ke through that can happen but who I am to know this thing. This is only known by Mr.werewolf by the way waiting to see is ava dead aur not but mere hisaab ne nhi maari hoyegi ava lekin iss baat ka answer bhi khali werewolf jaantein hai (agar ho sake toh bataa do itna ki ava is alive aur dead please)
Ye toh pehle se hi bata diya gaya hai ki pari is world ki nahi hai. Update 4 ya 5 me hi woh khud bata deti hai. To ye toh obvious hai. Baaki system ka raaz bahut gehra hai aur bahut unexpected hai. Log ise sci-fi se jod rahe hai but sci-fi se related hai hi nahi. Akhiri me pata chalega ye raaz.System ka raaj ye ho sakta h ki system ek dusri duniya ho jha sabhi sestem hi ho jinme se kuch system kuch khash logo ko milte ho jo jindgi m bahut pareshniya jhel rhe ho fir system Milne ke baad ye USS vykti ke haath m ki vo system ka sahi istemal kare ya galat kam ke liye istemal kre
May be ki ye ek trap ho, and honestly mujhe bhi nahi lagta ki wo mr.x hai but ha high probability hai ki jo bache huye 8 system owner hai unme ek fbcc ki director bhi ho.
Plot toh pre decided hai pehle se. Bas moderations hote hai agar kuch aur accha uss waqt dimaag me click kar jaata hai toh. Otherwise, jaisa socha hai usi hisaab se likha jaata hai.Ha ab iske baad Wolfie plot change kar de to alag baat hai lekin ek system owner hone ke jo qualities hai wo saaare hints diye Wolfie ne fbcc director ke liye
Dekho mein maanta hu ki mein bahut bade bade jhatke deta hu.main bas ye chahta hu twist ke naam par divya system owner naa nikle warna dimag ki maa bahan ek ho jayegi![]()
Arreee... It's a trap by Werewolf
why are u guys falling for that trap??? You must not fall for this cheap trick...![]()
Interesting question. Jawaab do bhai.Agar director miss x h... Then how will you explain the guy who killed Ava's parents??? Gender to change ni ho sakta na? I mean in today's world anything is possible![]()
Apan kuch bhi disclose nahi karne waala.Agar director miss x h... Then how will you explain the guy who killed Ava's parents??? Gender to change ni ho sakta na? I mean in today's world anything is possible
but but but... Agar Ava k parents ko uss mister X ne mara tha... Then suddenly wo female kese ho gya???
that means... Director can't be mister X... Bcoz wo she h... Na ki he
I'm pretty sure hum ko deliberately ghumaya ja rha h...