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Bhai mission update 115 hAbhi to nahi aaya hai. Bhai ek guzarish hai. Mujhe ye batao ki woh mission kis update me Mila tha? Mera kaam halka ho jayega.
Do update padh ke ek update ka revo dogi?Back to back 2 update padhne ka apna alag hi maza h...Ab se main yahi Kiya karungi.
Maybe. Or maybe not.Coming back to the update.... We knew what was coming... Divya has been sent for her first assignment. Now she must deal with order and the Legion. FBCC director is mysterious for sure... But are you doing that on purpose?Are you making us think that FBCC Director might be ms. X?
Are you deliberately putting us all on a line to think that director is Mr./Ms. X???
Kahi hum sab aapke jaal me to nhi fas rhe?? Itni asani se aap ne USA wali hint kaise dedi?
Next update me pata chalega.Nd also... Wo Ms. X bhala kyu bataegi ki wo kaha se h? Aur agar batati bhi h to Renshu ne wo card exactly uske address pe kaise bheja? You are framing something don't you???
Really?Well leaving that aside.... What a fucking mind Bender update it was... I think this update is one of the most mind bending update of the story...
Ye deliberately kiya gaya hai.ek minute lag rha tha ki Renshu sahi h..
Fir lagne laga ki Garofano sahi h... Fir lagne lga ki ni Renshu sahi h... So many fucking twists and turns.
Inteligence uske paas bhi hai kaafi. Zaahir hai uske paas uska khud ka explanation bhi rahega Jo ki ekdum thos hoga.I got goosebumps while reading this part...
mujhe laga tha Renshu fas gya... He was hiding something. But then he comes up with this...
ki Mr. Nicholson pehle se hi mare hue the nd Garofano waha se saboot mita k bhaag chuki thi... Agar khoon khud Renshu ne karwaya hoga to bhi kitne cleverly way me usne hide Kia h... Ki main to saboot banana chahta tha taaki police Garofano ko pakad sake...
Agle do updates me iska bhi khulasa ho jayega.But really??? Money??? Paiso k liye Garofano iss had Tak ni jaegi...
Straightforward fighting dikhana boring nahi ho jayega?See... This is the reason why I love this story so fucking much...It was not just action fights between two groups... Garofano's mystery came up... And now this fucking riddle... Who's lying???
even I don't know...![]()
Our boy Veer has come a long way..Veer nd Garofano ka convo bahut sweet tha... Veer handing her his handkerchief... Such a gentleman our Veer is...![]()
Mind games baby...!Veer is so clever... He was trying to frame Garofano by pretending that he's on her side... So that Garofano may leak some info or her facade might get slip from her face and she might show her true colors... However that didn't happen... Veer is neutral right now.
Iss waqt mein koi hints nahi de sakta. Divya aur Veer ke beech kya hoga ye updates me hi pata chalega. Also, Veer solve kar bhi payega ye case ya nahi ye bhi waqt hi batayega. I won't give any hints right now.Erica will get a surprise when Veer will solve this case... She'll come to know why her father acknowledges Veer so much... Now Divya is here too... Will something happen between Veer nd Divya???![]()
Thanks a lot dear. And keep supporting as usual.Thanks for giving us such an amazing update
.. looking forward to the next update eagerly... Keep writing sir...Love ur work...
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Waiting for your next update BrotherDo update padh ke ek update ka revo dogi?
Maybe. Or maybe not.
ho sakta hai mein deliberately kar raha hu, ho sakta hai mein kuch aur plan kar raha hu. Anything is possible you know.
Next update me pata chalega.
Really?Kayi mind bending updates honge aage chal ke.
Ye deliberately kiya gaya hai.
Inteligence uske paas bhi hai kaafi. Zaahir hai uske paas uska khud ka explanation bhi rahega Jo ki ekdum thos hoga.
Agle do updates me iska bhi khulasa ho jayega.
Straightforward fighting dikhana boring nahi ho jayega?
I know fights alag level ki hongi but c'mon.. I want to utilise each and everything from the premise I've built.
Our boy Veer has come a long way..
Mind games baby...!Mind games hi honge ab bas. Even fights me bhi intelligence use hota hai.
Iss waqt mein koi hints nahi de sakta. Divya aur Veer ke beech kya hoga ye updates me hi pata chalega. Also, Veer solve kar bhi payega ye case ya nahi ye bhi waqt hi batayega. I won't give any hints right now.
Thanks a lot dear. And keep supporting as usual.![]()
Dekhte hai dekhta hai...I think Renshu bhaiya ka chutiya banaya ja raha hai and Divya's new boss is behind this. I'm damn sure ki Garofano jaisi khubsurat kanya galat kaam kar hi nahi sakti. Even if usne apne so called baap ko maara bhi ho to bhi meri nazron mein wo bekasoor hai.![]()
What an interesting idea you've suggested me...Haa wohi wohi ....
But ye Werewolf sir kahi kuch ulat pulat na kar de...kyu werewolf sir???
Uss director k paas kahito nhi na?
Ni to aap use ladki dikha k .. use
deke mister X se use jod do... Ki ye lo... Ye ladka bhi h... Aur ladki bhi ...
aisa hua to main aapko chodhungi nhi...![]()
Shukriya bhai.Bhai aap shi the jab aapne crimson arc mein kha tha k china Town arc mein to aur zyada suspense thrill hoga mujhse SBR nhi hota isliye mein 2-3 update ek sath padhta hu vrna mujhe aur zyada padhne ka Mann krne lgta h updates to jese aaana h vese hi aana h but keep going you are fantastic
Pre planned rehta hai sab.Definately bt ju ka pta nhi kuch change krdo![]()
Ye magic based story nahi hai bhai. Ye system based chal rahi hai aur aage chal ke end me ju ko kuch accha dekhne ko milega. Toh saath bane rehne ka. Dhanyavaad.Bhai kya marvelous story hai apka system Bala concept bada hi unique hai aapne jo bi act likhe bade hi unique aur harek part detail se mention Kiya hai jisko jitni baar pad lo Kam hai Bhai jo gale main chain hai uski bi koi power dikhayo muje incest ke sath magic power aur adventure Bali story bahut jada pasand hai
Bhai Meri ek wish hai ki mein apni khud ki book, book cover sahit me isko poora chhaapu. Lekin, book sirf ek hi hogi aur sirf mere liye.Bhai sahab...kamal ki writing hai warewolf bhau....wait krna safal ho jata hai update padh kar.
Review kya hi likhu bhau apun writer nhi h aapke trh....tareef me itna kahna chahunga ki aisa badhiyan story life me kabhi nhi padha. Ye kahani complete hone ke baad novel chapwa lo bhau iska... bestseller banega
Romance bhi rahega bhai. Beech beech me dikhega. Poora alag se romance ka arc nahi hai.Bhai aapki story bhut hi achi jaa rhi hai bass mujhe thoda sa romance kam lagta baki aap ane hisaab se chalo.......
Bahut bahut shukriya bhai.Bhai mission update 115 h
Toh phir update ka intezar rahega bhai....Pre planned rehta hai sab.
Bas moderation hota hai. Moderation me itna change nahi aata ki plot hi ulat pulat ho jaaye.![]()
Thanks but koi bawaal nahi karna hai. Ye story already meri agli story se linked hai toh wo possible nahi. Poora World interlinked hai mera. Jab ye story finish hogi toh sab maalum ho jayega ki kese sab kuch link hua. Hint de deta hu. Ye story meri 3 stories se link hone waali hai.Bhai aap or salty bhai milkar dono story last last tak 1 shat merge krdo kya hi bawal hoga
3 Stories...Thanks but koi bawaal nahi karna hai. Ye story already meri agli story se linked hai toh wo possible nahi. Poora World interlinked hai mera. Jab ye story finish hogi toh sab maalum ho jayega ki kese sab kuch link hua. Hint de deta hu. Ye story meri 3 stories se link hone waali hai.![]()