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[Werewolf]

Good to know that you are recovering the weather in Mumbai is like that every one is getting viral fever this days

Mein Mumbai me nahi rehta bhai.

 

[Werewolf]

अपने पिछले रिव्यू मे मैने कहा था की कत्ल के केस मे पुलिस अधिकारी का सबसे महत्वपूर्ण कार्य कत्ल का मकसद जानना , कत्ल का वेपंस , वेपंस की उपलब्धता और बरामदी , और सस्पेक्ट का कत्ल के वक्त की मौजदूगी , उनकी आई - विटनेस की गवाही अहम होता है ।
इस कार्य मे शव परिक्षण , शव का पोस्टमार्टम , फोरेंसिक साइंस , पूछताछ और आज के दौर मे टेक्नोलॉजीज इविडेंश की भूमिका अधिक होती है ।

मुझे शुरू से लग रहा था , मिस्टर निकोल्सन की हत्या के बारे मे जो कुछ भी गारोफानो कह रही है वह संदिग्ध है।
पहला कारण था , मिस्टर निकोल्सन की हत्या एक ऐसे प्वाइजन से हुई थी जो सिर्फ दो लोगो के पास ही हासिल था । मिस्टर रेंशू के पास प्वाइजन तो था लेकिन कोई मकसद नही दिख रहा था ।
इसके बाद सिर्फ एक ही शख्स बचा और वो थी गारोफानो । इनके पास भी वेपंस तो था लेकिन मकसद क्लियर नही हो रहा था ।
इस अपडेट के अनुसार गारोफानो , मिस्टर निकोल्सन के साथ अपने वेयरहाउस या वेयर - शोप कहें गई हुई थी । दोनो ने एक साथ ही वहां प्रवेश किया था । इसका प्रूफ वहां का सी सी टी वी कैमरा था । वेयरहाउस के दो एंट्रेंस थे - एक फ्रंट डोर पर और एक बैक डोर पर । कुछ समय बाद वहां से मिस्टर निकोल्सन अकेले ही बाहर निकल जाते है । और मिस गारोफानो वहीं वेयरहाउस मे ही रह जाती है । कुछ समय बाद मिस्टर निकोल्सन की हत्या हो जाती है । चूंकि गारोफानो के पास सी सी टी वी के रूप मे पुख्ता सबूत था कि इस दौरान वो वेयरहाउस से बाहर निकली ही नही ।
लेकिन पुलिस ऐसे थ्योरी से पुरी तरह संतुष्ट नही होती । मुजरिम अपने घर के छत से , बरामदे से या किसी भी ऐसे जगह से किसी मोटी रस्सी या फिर किसी और माध्यम से नीचे उतर कर और वगैर सी सी टी वी के सामने आए बाहर जा सकता है ।
( मैने सुरेंद्र मोहन पाठक साहब का एक ऐसा उपन्यास पढ़ा था जहां मुजरिम एक कमरे के अंदर अपने दोस्तों के साथ पार्टी करता है और उनके नजरों से बचकर चुपचाप घर से बाहर निकलता है , थोड़ा दुर जाता है और एक व्यक्ति का कत्ल कर के वापस अपने दोस्तों के साथ महफिल मे शामिल हो जाता है । )

Ab ise agar mein full detail me likhu toh ye 10 update se bhi zyada updates le lega. Fir mein itna full proof likh dunga ki chhoti se chhoti baat bhi darshayi jayegi.
Par, woh maqsad nahi hai. Aur, na hi kahani crime par based koi upanyaas hai bhaaya. Ise keval aur keval 3 update me niptana tha. Aur, maine wahi kiya hai.
Ab aapke har tark ke liye mein uska jawaab de sakta hu. Garofano ki workshop ko agar mein keh du ki woh koi ek floor ki nahi thi. Usme 2 se bhi adhik floors the. Aur utni uchaayi se keval ek rassi ke zariye neeche aana? Chalo maan liya ki woh bhi kahi se sambhav ho gaya.
Parantu, agar ab mein keh du ki Garofano CCTV me kuch derr me chalti firti hui bhi nazar aati hai. Fir?
Zaahir hai ki ek aam aadmi itni jaldi jaa ke murder kar ke wapas nahi aa sakta. Parantu, ek system holder ka kya?
Mein chaahu to harr detail de sakta hu kintu, uski aavashyakta hi nahi hai. Uddeshya keval aur keval Garofano ki mystery ko arc me laane ka tha aur use jald se jald khatam karne ka bhi tha. Aur, isliye usi tarah se use niptaya gaya hai. Warna ise adhik updates ke saath lamba bhi kheecha jaa sakta tha.

मिस गारोफानो भी ऐसे हो अपने घर से बाहर निकली , मिस्टर निकोल्सन के शरीर मे प्वाइजन इन्जेक्ट किया और फिर वैसे ही वापस अपने वेयरहाउस मे प्रवेश कर गई। और हमे यह भी नही भूलना चाहिए कि वो स्वयं एक सिस्टम होल्डर्स है ।

Yahi kaaran hai ki woh itni jaldi wapas aa gayi. Court agar ye possibility leta hai ki Garofano chhat se bhaag kar gayi thi murder karne toh zaahir hai woh ek time frame ka anuman bhi lagayega.
Garofano ki workshop se crime sthal tak paidal aur gaadi se pahuchne me kitna samay lagega, qatl karne ka samay alag aur wapas lautne ka samay alag.
Kintu, Garofano toh uss anumanit samay ke pehle hi CCTV me nazar aa gayi. Agar mein ye kahu toh? Kya court ye kahega ki Garofano ne koj shaktiyo ka istemal kiya hai? Ya fir woh helicopter se chali gayi thi?
System holder jab jab inn maamlo me aayenge. Aap aam insaan ke nazariye se chal hi nahi sakte.

खैर बहुत ही खूबसूरती के साथ इस पुरे मर्डर मिस्ट्री का वर्णन किया आपने ।
कोरियाई सुंदरी ने जो कुछ किया अपने इज्ज़त , अपनी जान की हिफाजत के लिए किया । इसके अलावा मिस्टर निकोल्सन अप्रत्यक्ष रूप से उसके मां-बाप के कातिल भी थे । मिस्टर निकोल्सन की नीचता यहीं तक समाप्त नही हुई थी , उसने अनेकों मासूम लड़कियों को अपने हवस का शिकार बनाया था । मेरी नजर मे गारोफानो ने कत्ल नही इंसाफ किया है ।

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट।

Bahut bahut dhanyavad bhaaya. Yuhi saath bane rehne ka. Keep supporting.

 

[Werewolf]

Wow, mind boggling turnarounds ! Not only Veer but the readers too must have been bemused by the baffling turn of events occurring in such short intervals , including myself (he he he)! Atlast, Veer unmasked the original assassin of Mr. Nicholson i.e. Miss.Violet urf Garafoño but let her off after coming to know her motive behind the murder . Seems Garafoño too has fallen for Veer, who too seems to have a soft corner for her. Now Veer is back on track on mine case for which he was originally called by Renshu. After a very long while, Kaera is in limelight again but for different reasons or may we say, different causes . Let's wait and see what the next update is going to be , though damn sure it'll not be less dramatic in anyway

That's for sure indeed. The upcoming chapters are full action packed. You'll witness a fight you haven't seen before. A new Veer will emerge...! You will come to know one of the biggest secrets of the system. Or should I say... Pari!? These few chapters will take the arc to its peak and then again suddenly you'll be left in confusion. Immediately, after that Disembowler's arc will start. You won't get any chance to think about the after effects of the Chinatown. Since, we'll be busy dealing with someone else. Thanks a lot btw. And, keep supporting as usual.

bhai kiaera aur veer ki shaadi kara do pyar kara do dono main

Ho jayega.

Ye update bohot hi badhiya tha warewolf bhau. Good to see kaira after long time. I hope the finger is alright. Keep writing

Finger to theek ho gayi bhai par sehat bigad gayi thi. Filhal abhi pehle se behtar hu.

शानदार जबरदस्त लाजवाब update bhai jann superree duperrere update...

Ye veer ne divya ko divyaastra use krke ha karne par majbur kar diya

Aur gur gurfu ko bhi case se nikal diya hey, aur uska ye yehsan ohh nahi bhule gi....

Ab ye bhavana bhi agyi hey yaha par ab dekhte hey ki ohhh kya krti hey ab......

Gur gurfu?

Fabulous excellent outstanding marvelous update bhai.....

Sach mey kahi laga bhi nahi tha ki ye sab gurfu ne karwaya hoga usaka plan hoga....

Bhai Garofano hai wo... Gurfu nahi

Aur ab ohh veer ki koi madat nahi kar sakti hey ab....

Usne long ke bare mey use agyaha bhi kiya hey use direct na bhide...


Aur ab veer aur gurfu ka taka bhid gaya hey ab to kuch tension na hogi fir.....

Yaha india mey kaira ki deal chin liyi soniya ne uske hi secretary ke sath mil ke, secretary ne use dhoka de ke....

Ab kya juliya ki bato ka kuch parinam niklta hey ya nahi ye bhi dekhna dilchps rahega.....

Werewolf bro

Kaera ki secretary ne use dhoka nahi Diya Bhai. Bhool Gaye kya? Kaera ki secretary Ruchika hai. Aur Ruchika ki ek badi behan thi jo bhaag gayi thi Ghar se kaafi saal pehle...

Woh thi Suchika. Jo Sonia ki secretary hai. Sonia Suchika ka istemal kar ke delas hathiyaa rahi hai. Woh ye kaise kar rahi hai iska zikr aayega aage. Shukriya btw. And keep supporting.

 

[Carry Minati]

Mein Mumbai me nahi rehta bhai.

To pune me?

 

[Werewolf]

romanchak and lovely update ..jab veer ko mission mila aur penalty me kuch nahi tha tab aisa laga hi tha ki garofano involve hai apne ghatiya baap ki maut ke pichhe .
veer bhi 2 kadam aage ki sochke chal raha tha aur ye baat garofano samajh nahi payi .
beti banakar galat najar se dekhna aur uske maa baap ke kaatil hone ki saja dekar kuch galat nahi kiya garofano ne .
ab kaera kya step legi ,kya wo veer ko call ya msg karegi ,waise kaera se kaha gadbad ho gayi jo uski deal sonia ko mil gayi .

Galti Kaera se nahi hui Bhai. Bas, baazi Sonia ne maar li hai iss baar. Ab usne ye baazi kaise maari, ye aage pata lagega. Bahut interesting hai wo bhi. Uske liye alag se scene prepare karunga mein ek. Jisme woh scene poora dikhaunga ki Kaera kaise seal khoti hai aur Sonia kaise use jhapatati hai. Sab dikhaya jayega aage. Par wo next arc me. Thanks btw and keep supporting.

Super awesome update brother finally ek case solve hua ab mine ka matter start hoga aur end me kaera ko dikha k ye update aur bhi interesting bna dia apne eagerly waiting for your next update brother luvd it pls do cont asap take care

Thanks a lot Bhai. Yes ab mine ka matter hi hai. Kaam chal raha hai update par. Keep supporting as usual.

Tow yeh sab kia dhara violet ka tha jiski bhanak veer ko bhi lag gayi thi asli culprit Violet thi or Violet ne bhi apne asli maa baap ki maut ka badla hi lia h
Veer n sahi time per apni intelligent m 10 point add ker lia Jo yaha kaam aa gaye nahi Violet ne tow 3 ghante ke liye paralyzed ker hi dia tha
Udher Mumbai shayad pehli Baar Kaera se koyi deal nikli or woh bhi gayi kaha Sonia ke
Julia achche aina dikha dia Kaera ko ab Kaera ke ooper h yeh sab or achche se dekhne ki
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Badhiya zabardast shaandar update

Thanks a lot. Exactly! Veer ne jo 10 points intelligence me daale hai, uss se bahut fayda hua hai use aur aage bhi hoga. But baaki stats par bhi dhyaan Dene ki zaroorat hai ab. Kyuki, ab mine ka matter saamne hai. Legion saamne hai. Baaki dekhte hai hum. Yuhi saath bane rehne ka.

Please take the right stand regarding this story dear friend - in one post by another reader (Ramjanne1998), you endorsed his comments on this story as boring & in the same breath, you are praising this story to be one of the best. Kindly clarify us as to which one of your views regarding this story is genuine and honest valuation. This is just my genuine feeling with regards to your comments but not anybody else's, especially not the esteemed writer, dear friend. If at all you feel offended by my comments, I request you to take it in the right spirit & forgive me

Ilte chhilte comments par dhyaan nahi dete. Mujhe yaha story likhte saalo ho gaye. Aaye din koi na koi chomu aa jaata hai. Inpe dhyaan nahi Dene ka. Uske liye mein hu na. Inhe kaise sambhalna hai apun ko aata hai. So, worry not...

आप तो अंतरयामी हो प्रभु... ​

Koi shaq?

राम जाने... की आप संतुलित हैं भी या नही ​

Ju ne hi uska comment like Kiya hai wese

हमेशा की तरह 'अद्भुत'... और सच कहुँ तो पहले से भी बेहतरीन और परिपक्व लेखनी...

ये कहानी शायद हमारे अनुमान से भी कहीं और आगे निकल गयी... और आशा है की ये हमारे हर उस अनुमान को तोड़ कर यूँही बढ़ती जाये..जिसमे हम सब ने अपने अपने अपने विचारों को गढ़ा ...

पढ़ कर मन प्रफुल्लित हो गया...

विश्तार से टिप्पणी करने बैठूँ तो समझो होगया... आखिर अपनी टिप्पणी मे क्या लिखुं क्या छोड़ू...

वो फ़िर कभी विस्तार से...

बाकी अपडेट बेहतरीन था...

धन्यवाद ​

Anumaan se aage bahut pehle hi nikal gayi thi bhai. Jab akhiri finale arc aayega toh iss baat ko aur behtar dhang se jaan jaoge ki aisa kyu kaha maine. Shayad wo arc sabse bada jhatka dene waala arc hoga. Abhi use pakne do. Abhi samay hai. Thoda samay hai abhi. Kintu, jald hi Safar ke ant kj orr badhte jaa rahe hai hum. Dhanyavad. Saath bane rehne ka.

और Werewolf .... यार तुम अपने हेल्थ का थोड़ा ध्यान रखा करो भाया...

जब भी यहाँ आता हूँ... और कुछ मिले या नही मिले... तुम्हारी हेल्थ से जुड़ी कुछ न कुछ नकारात्मक पता चल ही जाती है ...
एक तुम्हारी रचना ही तो है जो शायद इस फोरम की आत्मा बन चुकी है....
हमारे जैसे बहुत होंगे जो शायद इस रचना के लिए मात्र... यहाँ अपनी हाजरी लगाते होंगे...
बाकी हम भी दिल से दुआएं करते हैं की जु स्वस्थ और सुरक्षित रहो...
धन्यवाद ​

Ye mujhe sirf ju hi nahi, mere colleagues aur dost bhi keh chuke hai. Mein last kuch months se kuch zyada hi beemaar pad raha hu. Pata nahi kya chal raha hai... Itna beemaar mein aaj tak nahi pada...

Na hi koi beemari hai na hi kuch... Fir bhi jaldi jaldi sehat bigad rahi hai inn dino. Halaki pehle se abhi behtar hu. Aur, iska nivaran dhundhna padega mujhe. Shukriya wese... Mein dhyan rakhunga sehat ka.

 

[Werewolf]

Huhhh.... It's been two unread update that I read... Not going to talk how where they... Coz... You already set higher standard so they were quite good....

Now let's talk about those updates...

It's clear for me that Nicholson has been killed by grafano... In first interaction where she come to attack on renshu... And suddenly stopped after seeing veer coz she knows veer is powerful so she can't harm him... Also maybe has soft corner... Whatever you can say my Fan theory was correct that Nicholson been killed by grafano that he actually was in second update....

Hein? Your fan theory? When did you give that? Why didn't I see it?
Anyways!!! Yes! Garofano killed Nicholson. Lekin, wo already dead hi tha. Garofano ne bas quickly use maut ke ghaat utaar diya. Woh wese bhi marrne hi waala tha. And, no... Garofano ne Veer par isliye attack nahi kiya ki Veer powerful tha. Garofano simply Veer pe attack karna hi nahi chaahti. She has a soft corner for him. Also, Garofano was in search for the man she was yearning for... Veer was the one... She will never harm him.

Secondly... Bond btwn Divya n veer... Heartwarming.... Fufu... Love to see if something happens btwn them in china... Her favourlty also changed to 100 so you have to do something for Divya... Y I sound like horny... Anyway...

Divya and Veer will always be tangled together if there's a case and they are solving it together. Of course, there'll be always some scenes between them.

So grafano revealed that she killed Nicholson but poor girl I know as fan that she can't fool him... Her intelligence should be more then mine....

When she realised she fucked up... Rather running she kissed veer for his intelligence... Fuck I deserve too as well then.....

Why running? She knew Veer won't harm her. Veer had no business with Nicholson. Veer doesn't care what happens with Nicholson at all. There was no need to run anyway. Garofano knew. She knew Veer doesn't harbour any ill feelings towards her. So, there was no need to run away. She kissed Veer because as I said... She has a soft corner for him. Also, she starting to like him.

Back to it...

Now veer going to do what he actually came here to do... Fight with Jaw Long... That will be epic... Intresting to see how veer going to handle that stuff....


Y my Fan theory says Eric going to stab back veer... She doesn't give me any good wives as well let's see what happens next....

Erica can't abandon Veer. She can't betray him. Because she follows Renshu's footsteps. If Renshu betrays Veer... Then, there will be a different story. We'll see though.

Stop where are you going not ended yet how can I not going to talk about kaera in this update... My crush

Good to see him
Julia wao... Men... Seriously desrv this from my side... The she talks about how a women should be... She needs to be a social media influencer...
Get her job also veer...

Julia is a submissive woman. She values men greatly. If you know what I mean. She is like a perfect wife material. She can keep her husband all satisfied. Although she's still unmarried. We'll see what happens with her story.

My girl is crying... I can't see her cry... Dear writer... It's request please start a convo btwn her n veer... it's been more then 7 or 8 months when she was with veer... My girl was fine that time.... Don't do this...

Kaera will get better. Only time and Veer's presence can heal her. However, for now Veer is tangled here in this mess. First, he needs to put an end to this mine's matter.

Huhhhh... All done now... see you on USC.... Are you coming?? Will meet you there....


Sayonara

Not sure this time. I'm not in my perfect health currently. Also, J haven't thought of any idea for USC at all. It came suddenly. Plus, I'm to busy right now to write anything other than my own story. So, this time I won't be participating very likely. Thanks a lot for this revo though. Keep supporting as usual. Keep reading.

 

[Werewolf]

Mujhe kya shak ho rha hai k Government Renshu ko 2ble cross kr rhi hai...

2 system owners getting double crossed? Erica and Renshu? Okie...

WOh chaah rhe hain k saamp bhi mar jaye or laathi bhi naa toote...
bcz they know that k Us Tribe ko haraana bilkul bhi easy nhi hoga even for Renshu too..
or Govt ko sab ache se pata hai accept about system (probably)..

No one else knows about the system. Only system holders know about the system. No one else.

Govt chaahti hai k Renshu unke liye apne haath gande Kare or Tribe ko khatam Kare ya jo bhi kare pr unhe Mine mil jaye...

Ye to official hi indirectly bata gaya tha.

also woh chaahte hain k Jab Renshu is sab m uljhaa ho tabhi same time pr FBCC is maamle ko tackle krne ki koshish kare pr ek different angle se, as " Order vs Legion "...

Hmm... But FBCC ladayi me hissa nahi le sakti. Theh sent Divya only. One escort and just a security guard for her.

Pr real m to asia kuch hai bhi nhi, Renshu ko Us tribe se koi issue bhi naa hota unless k unka leader ek system holder hai or woh bohot bura or zaalim hai pr ye baat to Govt ko nbi pata...

Aisa kab dikhaya gaya ki Jaw Long bahut bura aur zaalim hai. Yaha tak ki Renshu ne khud bhi Aisa kabhi nahi kaha hai jaha tak mujhe yaad hai.
The only reason Renshu iss matter me haath daal Raha hai woh ye hai ki Legion ne mine par qabza karna shuru kar diya hai. Jo ki illegal hai. Already more than 50% mine ka hissa unke under me hai. Jaw Long mine ko qabze me kyu le rahe hai, iss baat se bhi Renshu pareshan hai. Iske pehle kabhi aisa nahi hua tha. Agar Jaw Long mine par qabza karne se aur strong hota hai toh kahi na kahi Renshu ke liye ye khatre ki baat hai. Zaahir hai use fir iss maamle me haath daalna hi padega. Kyuki, mine ke baad Jaw Long ka agla target Order ho sakta hai.

is liye Govt k hisaab se ye Govt/State vs Legion hai jisse woh har haal m jeetna chaahte hain but keeping there hands clean...
pr woh sabko aisa dikha rhe hain k Mainly ye sab Renshu k Order or Legion ka phadda hai...

Yahi official ne kaha tha. Basically, woh chaahta hi hai ki Legion vs Order ho.

to obviously woh chaahte hain k Renshu isse khatam kare or phir FBCC as a culprit usse hi punish kare ya jo bhi woh uske saath krna chaahen karte rahen..

Ye dekhna hoga. Kyuki, FBCC ka stand clear hi nahi hua hai abhi.

iska reason mere according ye hai k agr Renshu Legion ko khatam kr k Mine waapas le leta hai to iska matlab saaf hoga k woh kitna powerful hai or in future woh Govt k liye bhi problem create kr sakta hai, Mine ko hatheyaa kr ya usne se share maang kr jaisa Tribes ne kiya tha ya woh kisi or tarhaan unze payoff leta ..

pr ab bhale hi woh unhe haraa de pr woh khud bhi bach nhi sakta bcz FBCC uske peeche padi hogi...
pr Govt waale jaante nhi k uske paas system hai..

Aisa koi zaroori nahi hai. Iss length tak jaane ki zaroorat hi nahi hai govt. ko. Renshu saaf saaf keh bhi toh sakta hai ki use mine milne par mine ka koi bhi hissa nahi chahiye. Zyaada savdhani ke liye ek treaty ya paper bhi sign ho sakte hai Renshu aur sarkaar ke beech me.
Renshu ko toh sirf apni property se matlab hai. Mine uska hissa shuru se hi nahi tha. Aur na hi woh rakhna chahega. Ab tak uske character se itna to pata laga hi liya hoga.

or unka ye bhi plan ho sakta hai k chaahe jo bhi jeete Order ya Legion, or baad m FBCC usse tackle kar le ga or unka raasta saaf ho jaye ga....

is ze se Govt k haath bhi saaf rahen ge, Tribe ka issue bhi khatam ho jaye ga or Mine completely unke under aa jaye gi or Renshu ko FBCC sambhaal le ga to unhe usko bhi koi payout nhi dena pade ga...

Ye ek acchi theory hai. Magar, jaisa ki maine kaha. FBCC ki orr se bas Divya hai. Divya alone is not capable to take Renshu away from his territory. Govt. Renshu ko force nahi kar sakti. Khaas kar tab jab mine usi ne haatho me laa ke di ho. Riot ho sakti hai. Renshu akela nahi hai. Erica aur uske aadmi bhi hai. Press tak khabar pahuchne me derr nahi lagti...
Aur govt. yahi toh nahi chahti ki unki image bigde. Wo harr haal me press aur media ko dur rakhenge iss matter se. Sab kuch tabhi release kiya jayega jab sab kuch ghatit ho chuka hoga. And of course jo reveal kiya jayega wo unki hi banayi gayi full proof kahani hogi.

YE sab meri soch hai and i think k it's quiet possible to happend...
and also i think k yehi ek maqsad ho sakta hai Govt ka ek hi time pr Renshu or FBCC ko involve krne ka pr different angle se...

ya woh chaahte hain k Renshu yahan pr as a Enforcer kaam kare or FBCC as deal maker...
is se Tribe ko woh confused rakhen ge k unhe Baat cheet krni hai ya Ladna hai or isii beech kisi tarhaan Renshu unhe khatam kr de ga ya Govt chupke se ye kaam niptaa de gi...

Jaisa ki maine Sanju bhaaya ko kaha tha. Game bahut bada chal raha hai. Ek rassi uthaoge to pata chalega ki uss rassi se aur kitni saari rassiyaan bandhi hui hai. Parantu, sahi rassi abhi readers ne uthaayi hi nahi hai.

Kahani hi aisi hai ki ab aap anumaan hi nahi laga sakte. Kuch hadd tak anumaan sahi jaa sakte hai par harr jagah nahi. Game bada chal raha hai. Uska reason arc ke end Tak pata lag jayega. Dhanyavaad wese... Aise hi saath bane rehne ka.

 

[Werewolf]

Garofano ne hi Charles ko marva diya..vaise jo wajah batay uss hissab se apna badla lene ke liye sahi kiya.
Khair ab garofano ka case bhi solve ho gaya ab veer Mine ke matter par focus kar payega..
Renshu veer ko ab kya kam chopta hai? Garofano ne bataya aise hi 2 option dega?.

Awesome update bhai.

Bhai options ki baat alag hai. Abhi dekhte jao agle update me kya hota hai. Samajh aa jayega. Shukriya wese. Keep supporting.

No no no... Crimson saw mr. X... Remember? Ava k parents ko jab marwaya tha usne...

Crimson saw him. He didn't see his face but saw his physique... Waha k conversation se hum kaise keh sakte h ki wo ladki thi?

Unless she shrinked her boobs... Crimson ko dikhega ni kya? Crimson could tell whether the person in front of him is a guy or girl... We didn't see him using any credentials like 'Miss' or 'Mrs.'

So... That's why I think she's not the X... X is a guy... Not a girl... Or may be I could be wrong too. Werewolf sir pta ni kya ghuma de firse...

Mein kya ghuma dunga? Mein kisi ko nahi ghumata. I'm innocent.

The ingenious Werewolf sir is here again...

unmasked... How can you come up with such accurate titles for the updates???

It's in my DNA

Veer wore a mask, luring us into thinking that he was caught off guard and fell directly into the Garofano's plan... Garofano wore the mask showing that she was a timid helpless girl all along though it was just the opposite...

Both of them unmasked their masks at the right time... And to top this... You showed Kaera... Where Julia makes the statement "you don't need to wear a mask in front of Young Master Veer."

The way you connected that segment to the update's title... Was... *Muah muah

Oh yes of course!!! I was on shortage with the words for this update. So, I... wahahaha I created Kaera's segment there...

The whole Garofano mystery was so flabbergasting... I didn't expect her to be so cunning... I thought our girl was really in need of help...

Never trust a system owner so easily. Never!

But she was slithering like a snake, waiting for her prey to come near her and then bore her fangs into it.

Ohh! I like this... Slithering like a snake... Bore her fangs in it...

but more than Garofano Veer surprised me the most. I thought Veer was done... My hero was caught in her web... There was no way he could come out of it... However... he was playing as well... Hehehehe...

Now let me tell you a fact. Originally, Veer was supposed to lose here. He was supposed to get hit by her paralysis toxin. Then, Garofano would have dropped him at Renshu's house by car and would have left to take care of her errands.
However, I had to make more twists. So, I did this instead. I'm glad you liked it.

I guess this is over now.. Garofano will be busy with her own work. She has to clear her name. She must get rid off the dirty records. Whereas Veer and the others will be focused on the mine matter. Although I wanted to see Garofano along side Veer. I wanted to see how she fights and what are her skills. Anyways we might see her after a few updates I guess?

You will see her full status.

She is here only. She might come if she comes to know that Veer is in danger. I don't know why she cares for Veer but it's true she has that one soft corner for him... Or it's more than that? Maybe? Idk... If she didn't come... Erica might get close with Veer... Hehehe it'll be bad for her... She better take this chance...

She'll be busy for atleast a couple of days. She won't be here anytime soon. It will take atleast 3 days for her to come back. Not sure about Erica though. We'll see how it turns out at the end.

Bhavna has returned home but so far she has no clue where is his son.... I'm pretty sure she and Tej will bombard questions after questions the moment Veer arrives home.

That's for sure.
Not only them but Arohi too... This time she won't spare Veer at all.

That's it for now... Read 2 updates back to back... Reading 2 updates back to back is always good... Hehe.. Thank you for this wonderful work again Sir... Looking forward to the action scenes now... It's been a while since we saw hardcore action ... Waiting for new new update... Keep writing...

Thanks a lot dear. It's always a pleasure to read your revos. I love how you analyse and try to interpret the situations. I'm glad I have readers like you. So, keep supporting and keep writing revos just like this. Thanks once again.

 

[Werewolf]

Garofano is still innocent, as I said. Nicholson ya jo bhi naam tha us leechad vyakti ka, achha hua wo mar gaya. Ek tarah se Garofano ne social service hi ki hai use maarkar.

Charles Nicholson se itni nafrat. Itna bada aadmi tha woh. Itna daan karta tha. Itni nafrat kyu?

In that way every body should take law into his or her own hand.
Then what is the need of courts and judges? We can save a lot in way of salaries and infrastructure ( though unemployment will increase someway).

Garofano has a system. System doesn't exist in our real world.

 

[Amitgupta]

Pune m nhi indor m rahte h
Agar indor nhi to mp ki koi bhi district ho sakti h