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Aisa bhi ho sakta ki aadhe 1st part ko like kare aur aadhe dusre vale ko,target toh pura hoga hi nahiBc bus readers part B pr hi like target na complete karde or A part ko bina like kiye nikal jaye yahi ek drawback ho sakta hai back to back 2 updates dalne ka. Baki idea mast hai. Pura update padhne mil jayega.

Scene next update me kr dena puraBro jitni limit h utna post krdo
Baki ka next me continue kr lema
Dui part Mein post kar do![]()
Agar update ko aur lamba nahi khichna chahte to scene aadha clif hanger type rakh dijiye yaa phir edit krke sirf tease krke chhod dijiye.
Dono me se ek scene next update me beth sake to try karlo Bhai
Werewolf parijaat vale scene ke baad main plot bhi hai?
Mere hisab se. Intimate scene pr update khatm nahi karo...
Ek idea hai--
2 update dedo. 6-6k words ke ya 7-7k words ke, jitne allover words hai uske hisaab se.
Updates ke names 205A and 205B rakh sakte hai.
Bhai bich mein ek twist dalkar use adhure mein chhod do aur ek line anewale update ka precap de dijiye, hame ek air new excitement ke liye wait karwado.
Thanks for the suggestions guys.Bich wala Jo part Bacha Hai Usko likh kar
Update Two parts mein Divide kar kar Post kardo
Yepp Thats okThanks for the suggestions guys.
So, basically 3 scenes hai actually.
1st (Main plot related. Completed.)
2nd (Parijaat ghar related. Incomplete.)
3rd (Veer and Purvi. Completed.)
Parijaat ghar wala scene aur Veer aur Purvi wala scene. Dono me sirf erotica hi nahi hai. Parijaat one contains some information, a lot of conversations in between and then the erotica.
Veer and Purvi waale ke saath bhi kuchh sweet moments and then the erotica. That's how they are designed. Isliye, itne shabd le liye ye dono scenes.
So, maine decide kar liya hai.
Mein 1st scene aur 3rd scene Veer aur Purvi waala abhi post kar raha hu. We'll count this as update (1) uske baad (2) me remaining part de dunga.
But.. someone said ki ending erotic scene se mat karo. Toh, mein ek chhota sa ek aur scene main plot related add kar deta hu. Hope that would be fine??? .
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Sahi hai Bhai... Ek erotic scene next update me... Sahi hai..Thanks for the suggestions guys.
So, basically 3 scenes hai actually.
1st (Main plot related. Completed.)
2nd (Parijaat ghar related. Incomplete.)
3rd (Veer and Purvi. Completed.)
Parijaat ghar wala scene aur Veer aur Purvi wala scene. Dono me sirf erotica hi nahi hai. Parijaat one contains some information, a lot of conversations in between and then the erotica.
Veer and Purvi waale ke saath bhi kuchh sweet moments and then the erotica. That's how they are designed. Isliye, itne shabd le liye ye dono scenes.
So, maine decide kar liya hai.
Mein 1st scene aur 3rd scene Veer aur Purvi waala abhi post kar raha hu. We'll count this as update (1) uske baad (2) me remaining part de dunga.
But.. someone said ki ending erotic scene se mat karo. Toh, mein ek chhota sa ek aur scene main plot related add kar deta hu. Hope that would be fine???
It's a good idiotThanks for the suggestions guys.
So, basically 3 scenes hai actually.
1st (Main plot related. Completed.)
2nd (Parijaat ghar related. Incomplete.)
3rd (Veer and Purvi. Completed.)
Parijaat ghar wala scene aur Veer aur Purvi wala scene. Dono me sirf erotica hi nahi hai. Parijaat one contains some information, a lot of conversations in between and then the erotica.
Veer and Purvi waale ke saath bhi kuchh sweet moments and then the erotica. That's how they are designed. Isliye, itne shabd le liye ye dono scenes.
So, maine decide kar liya hai.
Mein 1st scene aur 3rd scene Veer aur Purvi waala abhi post kar raha hu. We'll count this as update (1) uske baad (2) me remaining part de dunga.
But.. someone said ki ending erotic scene se mat karo. Toh, mein ek chhota sa ek aur scene main plot related add kar deta hu. Hope that would be fine???
bus last doubt... parijat vala update phir 15 din baad ayega kya? Kyuki sirf ek erotic scenes and some information ke liye back to back to update doge nahi aap i think.Thanks for the suggestions guys.
So, basically 3 scenes hai actually.
1st (Main plot related. Completed.)
2nd (Parijaat ghar related. Incomplete.)
3rd (Veer and Purvi. Completed.)
Parijaat ghar wala scene aur Veer aur Purvi wala scene. Dono me sirf erotica hi nahi hai. Parijaat one contains some information, a lot of conversations in between and then the erotica.
Veer and Purvi waale ke saath bhi kuchh sweet moments and then the erotica. That's how they are designed. Isliye, itne shabd le liye ye dono scenes.
So, maine decide kar liya hai.
Mein 1st scene aur 3rd scene Veer aur Purvi waala abhi post kar raha hu. We'll count this as update (1) uske baad (2) me remaining part de dunga.
But.. someone said ki ending erotic scene se mat karo. Toh, mein ek chhota sa ek aur scene main plot related add kar deta hu. Hope that would be fine???
Nahi nahi. 15 din baad nahi aayega bhai. Jaldi de dunga. Maybe 2-3 din ke andar hi aa jaayega. Mein use aur achhe se likh sakta hu ab. Plus... Main plot par focus hoga uske baad.bus last doubt... parijat vala update phir 15 din baad ayega kya? Kyuki sirf ek erotic scenes and some information ke liye back to back to update doge nahi aap i think.
Jo bhi kardo post apn adjust kar lenge
Zaroorat nahi hai. Ek hi de sakte ho. Dusra part jaldi de dunga kyunki mein... So no need.Yepp Thats ok.
Do review post karne padenge![]()
Dono ka review ek saath hi de dunga ha ye sahi rahegaZaroorat nahi hai. Ek hi de sakte ho. Dusra part jaldi de dunga kyunki mein... So no need.
