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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 231 13.4%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 36 2.1%

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Werewolf

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Werewolf bhai kam se kam ek adha question ke answer toh diye hota 😂😂😂 kuch spoiler hi diya hote
2 questions ke answers diye toh :dazed:
- systems me koi bhi interconnection nahi hai
- ladki ki tasveer ya uska alag se aage koi arc nahi hai.

Count karna seekh :slap:
 

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Rihanna के लिए दिल से यही आवाज निकलती है -
" जिसकी रचना ( रिव्यू ) इतनी सुन्दर , वो कितना सुंदर होगा "।
कोई कैसे न फिदा हो जाए ! :D
:heh:
 

Werewolf

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Yaar aap logon ne to aapas mein KBC khelna shuru kar diya
Khair jo bhi ho mera ek sawal hai ki kya Pranjal aur Madhuri ka Chapter bhi story me ayega ?
Maybe or maybe not :eyes2:
 

Werewolf

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System wali nayi laundiya aagayi ab bas uss photo wale I mean Uske Bhai ke aane ki kami hai (par wo to mar chuka hai n :hmm2: ) :roflol: Werewolf
:beer:
Tu talli hoke comment mat kiya kar. :laugh:

Kaha? Kaun sa bhai? Kis bhai ki baat kar rahe ju? :laugh: Photo frame me kaun hai ye to darshaya hi nahi gaya. Fir iss conclusion par kaise aa gaye?
aur rahi baat usse phone par order ya kaho to jabardasti kaam karwane wale ki to obviously wo crimson to bilkul nhi hai aur wo jo shakhs tha jisane ladki se wo sab krwaya may be wo issliye karwa paya kyuki uske badle wo usse kuchh batane wala tha kisi ke bare me ya kaho to jiski photo wo dekh rahi thi usse related kuch jo confirm crimson hai aur ab wo uske piche padeli hai khair ek aur chis jiski photo dekh reli thi wo baar baar wo confirm uska koi relative hi hai boyfriend ya lover to hone se raha to confirm uska bhai hi ho sakta hai :dontknow:
Accha? Pakka? :laugh: Chalo dekh lenge hum.
jiska badala lene nikali hai aur ab crimson ke pichhe hai jo may be uske pic wale ka kuch lena dena ya katil ho anyways aage dekhte hai :beer:
Tu daaru peeke comment mat kiya kar :hit:
 
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Let's start with the review... Is update mein poora focus uss pahaadi waali ladki par hi tha parantu saath hi ek aur vyakti, joki most probably chautha system dhaari vyakti hai, uska bhi zikra hua is update mein...

Pehli baat, jis tarah se boxing karte samay, bathrobe utarne ke samay aur Slogan ke dwara uska chehra dekhe jaane ke samay, uski khubsurti ka varnan hua hai, us hisaab se kisi khatarnak maal ki photo maangta hai apun uske character ke liye... :protest: Taking into note, she has system, so her appearance will become more & more breathtaking in the future, that's why, the celeb whose pictures you'll use, needs to be proper bomb! :shy: (I'm assuming ki Veer ke hi maafiq wo bhi apne stats badha sakti hogi, itna bhi dissimilar nahi honge sabhi systems, I think)... Btw. Ava ke liye use ki gayi pictures ke baad is waali se umeedein badh chuki hain... :approve:

Khair, ab baat karen, un chand baaton ki jo is update se samajh aayi to... Firstly, wo ladki India ki nahi hai, obviously Ava ki tarah ho sakta hai ki wo pehle Indian rahi ho, aur baad mein baahar chal di ho, but currently she's not an Indian resident. (She knows Hindi, can be a gift of the system just like Veer has). I think she was the one who shot Crimson while he was standing in front of Veer, to kaafi probability hai ki wo ladki France ki hi nivaasi ho. Secondly, she's desperate to find someone. Veer was desperate to find his mother, Crimson was desperate (was he?) to find the location of Grace Martin (?)... And this girl too? But who's she looking for? The unknown caller (probably 4th system holder), knew about her, knew about the person she's looking for and most probably that she's also having system! (That's why she was absolutely shocked when he revealed something)...

Coming back, he asked her to visit India, gave her the photograph and address of Slogan, and asked her to check whether he's alive or not (????)... I mean what the fuck is that? Obviously, this wasn't his only target, he was asking for two things, and the above mentioned was the first one... But koyi sense hai is baat ki? Jab wo khud hi Slogan ko phone karke uski gaand maar leta tha, to obviously wo zinda hi hoga, ab uski aatma to baat karegi nahi... So can we assume that she lied to Slogan? Wo wahaan uske adde par kuchh aur maksad se gayi thi ya kahun ki use kisi aur maksad se bheja gaya tha? :hmm2:

Secondly, when Veer went into the forest, and she stopped some meters behind the other cars (of Jassi-Raghu & Party), she said, "Idhar se Nahi ho paayega. I must be within a close distance"!!

Hmm..? Kya karna tha use? Did Veer kill Slogan? Did Slogan die by himself (by falling off the cliff)? Or She Killed Slogan? Was she using any skill or card or something like that which somehow got her involved in Slogan's ending? Cuz, when Veer doesn't complete his mission all by himself, his reward points are not awarded completely, they're deducted. In the recent one, DGSI's agents saved Ava, so I'm damn sure that Veer ain't getting the complete rewards (kuchh milega bhi ya nahi ye bhi guaranteed nahi hai)... Aise mein us ladki ko Death Flag naamak jo notification aaya jiske anusar "Target : Slogan Is Dead"... What was her Target? To watch Slogan die? Or Just the death of Slogan, by any means? Or she was to be the one to end him? Lots of questions have been ignited due to this update...

Algorithm(s) of the 4 systems which have been introduced till now, their possible interconnection, the connection of their hosts (if any), the similarities between the journeys/stories/pasts of the various hosts, and above all, the objective or aim of the systems? Is there some kind of race or shall I say tussle going on between the systems (Pari and her counterparts) to make their respective host, the real 'Baadshah'..? Kya Pari sachmein nahi jaanti baaki systems ki existence ke baare mein? Shayad uski kisi aur personality ko maaloom ho is baare mein... By personality I mean level... Veer hasn't reached a certain level where he can get information about other systems and their hosts? Crimson and the 4th guy might have reached there already, and that's why they knew about Veer and that girl respectively... :dazed:

This arc is going to answer certain questions but the secret of system and it's origin is the spine of this story, so I don't think it's gonna get revealed completely till the end... Maybe the last update? Last conversation between 'Baadshah' Veer and the vanishing (human form?) Of Pari..? Whatever..! For now, this pahaadi waali ladki is going to play a crucial role... What's her system's level? What's her motive? What's her role in the story? Is she Veer's heroine? Or she's going to be Veer's foe? Lot of questions but I think which side she'll be on, will be revealed soon, as I'm expecting Crimson's end will be possible only when Veer and she'll be on the same page... Because that guy is absolutely mental!!!! :cold:

Another great update man! Interconnection of two updates which are separated by such a huge number of updates in between them, speaks a lot about the hardwork and brainstorming that has been put in before the story even started. Kudos for that! :claps: The next update is highly awaited cuz Veer is currently under the rocks, well and true... :approve:

Waiting for the next one...
 

Death Kiñg

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Rihanna के लिए दिल से यही आवाज निकलती है -
" जिसकी रचना ( रिव्यू ) इतनी सुन्दर , वो कितना सुंदर होगा "।
कोई कैसे न फिदा हो जाए ! :D
Sanju bhaiya aur unke sabhi ladkiyon ke liye ataah prem... :bow:
 

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crimsone ke baad jis ladki ki entry hui hai..jo slogan ke time par bhi dikhi thii...mujhe lagta hai..ye ladki system hi head ho sakti hai..aur veer ka asli muqabla jab bhi hoga is ladki se jaroor hoga...ye meri soch hai..baaki lekhak ke man me kya hai..wo lekhak hi jaan sakta hai...
System ki head? System ki head ka kya matlab hai? :?:
Ye to back story hai alag view' se iska mtlb is ladki ke pass bhi system hai or i guess veer se jyada powerful hai abhi ye kahan hai or kahin isne hin to nat ko kidnap ke liye nhi bola ya sayad ye hin nat ho but ye nat nhi ho skti to phir ye koun hai
Hum jaan jayenge jald hi. Dekhte jao bas. Aur updatwa ko like thokne ka.
Warna nawa update na milega. Target reach hoyega tabhi likhna start karega apun. :hit:
ये अपडेट ओल्ड के संग दिया।

एक बार लगा क्या लोचा हो गया

फिर लास्ट में जाकर पता लगा नही ओर ही नए राज है
Hmm! :approve:
Readers ko suspense me chor kar bhag Gaye bhai....🥺
Aadat na lagi abhi tak? :laugh:
Ye toh mein pehle update se karte aa raha hu
System family badte ja Rahi hai....😀😀
Veer ki ek aur system relative aa gayi....😂😂😂
Badhte jaa nahi rahi bhai. Pehle se hi tay hai sab kuch. Bas ab saamne aa rahi hai. :laugh:
Wadia
Par thoda ajeeb laga ye wala update
Fr v dilchasp tha
Bas ju log samajh jao wahi bohut hai man :sweat:
 

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Abe ye kya update tha🤔...bhai itna unpredictable update toh aaj tk ni mila ju ki taraf se.. Ye flashback kya tha, I mean thode time ko lga jaise slogan wala update ju ne copy paste kr dia h yha pe😏
Slogan wala update na hai ye. :roll:
Uske kuch dialogues ko zaroor dikhaya gaya hai kuch scenes ko bhi, par saath hi behind the scenes ho rahi vardaato ko ujaagar kiya gaya hai.

Agar mein unn scenes ko repeat na karwata toh readers sarr khujaate reh jaate. Ye bc kaun sa update aa gaya. Kya chal raha hai kahani me? :crazy2:

Yaha tak ki mene images aur gifs bhi wahi same lagaye hai taaki reconnection baith sake.
bs fark itna tha k isme wo Anjaan ladki thi..ab ye kaun h or wo aadmi kon tha use kaam dene wala or kya is ladki ke paas b system h kya🙄👀...
Ladki ke paas system hai? Ye sawaal update padhne ke baad bhi puch rahe ho? :laugh:

Pata nahi kya hoga meri audience ka. :sweat:
.sala kya ho ra h yha meko ghanta smjh ni aa ra.. Bc dimag ka bharosa kr dia ju ne🤦...or is baar sirf us flashback me hi update khtm kr dia koi or scene aya hi ni.. May be that's why ju ne update thoda chhota dia 😅😏...
Update chhota nahi tha. 4.2 k words. Normal length ka tha. :redface: Bade bade update padhne ki aadat laga di hai mene ju logo ki.
Well shi h waise b u became very persistent these days😌...baaki let's see wts gonna be happen in next update.. Jldi try krna coz ye update ki guthhi sulajhna bhot zruri ho gya h.. n rest of these things.. More love to u bro.😘.keep entertain us 😉❤️💯
Agla update tabhi likhna start hoega jab iss update pe responses complete hoyenge. Target reach hoyega uske baad hi mein likhunga ab. Toh sab tum kog ke haatho me hi hai. :dazed:
Anyways, thanks a lot. Keep supporting! ✨
First of all sorry for late review bro

Update ke bare me kiya hi kahe har bar ki trha amazing update tha bhaaya,
Finally pahar wali larki ka kuch raaz khula he but wo he kon ye pata chalna baqi he,
Jald hi pata lag jayega man.
Aur 1 aur suspense agya ke jis ne us larki ko call ki wo kon he,
Aur larki kis ki talash me he,
Aur larki ke pass notification aya slogan ki death ka to kiya us ke pas bhi system he🤔
Itna bura sawaal? :redface:
Mann me ding ki sound hai. Screen pe notification aaya mann me.
Ju abhi bhi puch rahe ki uske paas system hai ya nahi? Kya ye obvious nahi? :redface:
Aur jb veer aur wo larki 1 dusre ke samne honge tab kiya hoga,
Kiya us larki ka is arc me koi role he,
Yes. :approve:
Aur jis ne phone kiya he us ka kiya maqsad he kiya wo koi villain he ya koi aur,
Buhat sare sawal hogye he jis ke jawab obviously aage hume mile ge,
Baqi update har bar ki traha mind blowing tha keep it up bro,
Lot's of love and respect ❤️🥰
Bohut bohut dhanyavaad. Keep supporting! ✨
 

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system ki head ke matlab jiske paas sabse powerful system hoga. shayad ye ladki bahot powerful hai...shayad ye wahi ladki hai..jisne crimson par goli chalai hai..kyunki crimson ke paas bhi system hai...aur us ladki ke paas bhi system hai....ab system kiske paas sabse jyada powerful hai..ye dekhna dilchasp hoga
 
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