Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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[Naughtyrishabh]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Ekdam kamal ka or umda drishya the yaara....
Mazaaaa aa gaya bhai waah....

Update - 145 ~ X​

Ab tak...

Ava ke poore badan me sihran daud gayi. Woh kisi chidiya ki tarah harr taraf gardan modte hue apne chaaro orr dekhne lagi.

'V-Veer!!!!?'

Agle hi pal uski nazre bagal se lagi building ke uss terrace par gayi.

Par, usne jo saamne dekha toh-

Siwae aasmaan me chamakte chaand ke alaawa waha koi nahi tha.

Terrace khaali thi.

'Veer!!!????'

Ab aage...

Andhkaar!

Kya hota hai? Kya prakaash ka na hona andhkaar hai?

Maut!

Kya hoti hai?

Kya saans na le paana mrityu hai? Kuch sunn na paana, dekh na paana, bol na paana, mehsoos na kar paana. Kya yahi hai maut?

Agar vyakti inme se kuch bhi kar na paaye, ye bhi pata na ho ki uski dhadkane chal rahi hai ya nahi? Toh kya usse mrat ghoshit kiya jaa sakta hai?

Uss soch ka kya jo waha ab bhi maujood hai? Woh soch jo duniya bhar ke gyaan ko samajhne ke liye saksham hai.

Veer ki soch iss waqt issi sthiti se guzar rahi thi. Chaaro orr andhkaar fela hua tha.

Na hi wo apne shareer ko mehsoos kar paa raha tha aur na hi kuch dekh ya sunn paa raha tha.

Kaisa mehsoos hota hoga jab aapke saamne andhera chhaa jaaye. Aap jaante ho aapki soch ab bhi kaam kar rahi hai. Aap ye bhi samajh paa rahe ho ki aap andhkaar me doobe hue ho. Par kaisa mehsoos hoga jab ye bodh hoye ki sirf sochne ke alaawa aap aur kuch nahi kar sakte.

Koi awaaz nahi, koi drishya nahi, koi anubhooti nahi. Kaisa lagega tab?

Veer abhi issi sthiti me tha.

Aisa lag raha tha jaise woh kisi antariksh me ghoom raha hai. Farq sirf itna tha ki yaha koi taare nahi the aur na hi koi roshni.

Jab woh apne mann ke vichaaro me ladte ladte maansik roop se thak gaya, aur iss paristhiti se baahar nikalne ka koi hal khoj na saka, tabhi usse kuch dhundh si nazar aayi.




'Huh?'

Aur fir ek dhwani,

[....ster!!!]

[.....errrr!!!!!]

'Huh?'

Veer ki saansein tej ho uthi. Yeh awaaz woh bhali-bhati jaanta tha.

Aur agle hi shan, uska shareer kisi chumbak ki tarah khichta chala gaya. Uski consciousness drift hone lagi.

"Aaaarrrghhhh!!!"

Laga jaise woh aseem raftaar me antariksh me udd raha hai.

Theek uske turant baad hi,

'Uhh!!?'

Sab kuch akasmaat shaant ho gaya. Andhkaar toh abhi bhi tha. Magar ab,

Uska seena upar neeche ho raha tha. Woh saans le raha tha.

Uski naak me aas paas ke vatavaran ki praanvayu aane lagi. Samudra ki lehro ka shor sunaayi dene laga.

Ek ek karke harr senses uske apna apna kaam karne lage. Woh zinda tha.

Saath hi,

[Maaaasttttteeerrrrr!!!]

Woh awaaz bhi usse sunaayi di.

Palke jhapki aur dheere dheere Veer ki aankhon ke saamne kuch drishya aane lage.

'Urgh!'

Ek andhruni karaah uski nikli. Aankhein dard kar rahi thi. Usse fir kuch nazar aaya.

Apni baayi orr dekhte hi kuch aisa nazaara uske saamne tha.




Akaash me chandrama apni roshni bikhere chamak raha tha. Derr raat ho rakhi thi.

[Master!!! Thank god! Finally! Can you hear me?]

Veer ne mann hi mann haami bhari.

Poora badan uska dard kar raha tha. Lag raha tha jaise uske shareer ke tukde tukde kar ke zameen par bikher diye ho.

Jab usne aas-paas ka jayza liya toh usse anumaan ho gaya ki woh samudra me maujood chattaano ke nichle hisse me bani kisi gufa me tha.

Uska shareer chattaan ki deewaar se hi tika hua tha. Peeche usse kuch gadd raha tha. Apne haath ko tatol ke usne uss cheez ko sehlaaya toh paaya ki ye wahi gun thi.

Jo usne Ushant Island me uss ek gang member ko behosh kar ke chhinaayi thi.

Abhi woh kuch harqat karta ki tabhi usse kuch awaaz sunaayi di. Kisi ke qadmo ki awaaz thi. Dheere dheere ye awaaz uske nazdeek aa rahi thi.

Veer turant hi sachet ho gaya. Khatre ki bhanak lagte hi usne sarr utha ke saamne dekha.

Ek bade se shareer ki chhaaya aakriti uske saamne thi. Usse dekhte hi,

'Check!!!'

*Ding*

[No information available.]

Notification dekhte hi Veer ki aankhein bhay ke maare fel gayi.

'Crimson???'

Uski aadat bann chuki tha harr nazdeek maujood insaan ko check karna.

Notification ka bodh hote hi,

*Swoooshhhh*

Woh apni jagah se ekdum se ucchla.

[Master-!!! No-!!! Wait!!]

Par Pari ki baat sunn'ne me usse derri ho gayi. Woh tab tak hawa me kood chuka tha.

Saamne khada vyakti uske iss tarah achanak hamle se achambhav me reh gaya.

"Y-You-!!!!"

Veer kisi ghaayal sher ki tarah uss aadmi par lapka aur uske vishaal shareer ke upar chadh gaya.

Furti me uska haath peeche kamar par gaya, aur haath me gun aate hi Veer ne bandook uss aadmi ki khopdi par upar se taan di.

Magar,

Trigger nahi daba paaya. Kyuki,

Veer ki aankh ke theek saamne ek paini sui bas 0.5 cm ki duri par tainaat thi.

Jaha Veer uss aadmi ki peeth par chadh uske sarr par aim lagaya tha. Toh wahi uss aadmi ne jhatse kahi se lagbhag 15 cm lambi ek sui nikaal ke Veer ki aankh ki putli ke saamne kar di thi.

Veer ki aankhein adh-khuli thi. Saansein bhi ukhdi-ukhdi le raha tha woh. Yu jaldbaazi me ucchalne se uske shareer ka dard bhadha aur jagah jagah se khoon nikalne laga. Parantu, uske baad bhi woh tass se mass na hua.

Aadmi : Such will power-!!!

Haafte hue woh uss aadmi ke upar hi chadha hua tha.

Aadmi : Ladke!!! Neeche aao!! Issi waqt! Warna apni aankh kho doge. Tumhari bandook me goli nahi hai!

Ye toh Crimson nahi tha. Aadmi ki awaaz sunte hi Veer ne forun hi trigger daba diya.

*Click* *Click*

Par uss aadmi ki baat satya thi.

Gun me waqai bullets nahi thi.

'Tsk!'

Veer jaise hi neeche aaya woh ladkhada ke gir pada.

[Master!!!!]

Uske girte hi saamne khade shaks ka chehra gufa me chaand ki aati roshni ke saamne aaya. Veer ne dekha ki qareeban 50 kuch ki umr ka vyakti uske saamne tha.

Bhayanak badi kad-kaathi. Lambe ghane baal jo adhiktar kaale the magar kuch safed baal bhi unme shaamil the.

Badi badi daadhi aur lambi latakti hui mooche.

Ghaayal Veer usse bas satarkta me ghoor raha tha. Iss haalat me bhi woh ladne se bhaag nahi raha tha.

Aadmi ne apne haath me li hui badi si sui ko apni kamar ke peeche ek kapde ke bag me rakh liya.

[Master! Don't worry! He's our benefactor. Usne hi aapki jaan bachaayi hai.]

'What?'

Pari ki baat sunn, Veer hairat me uss aadmi ko dekha.

Aadmi : Taajub hua? System ne sach bata diya? Mein tumhara dushman nahi ladke.

Aadmi ne chinese bhaasha me bola. Jiske jawaab me Veer ne bhi chinese me hi baat ki,

Veer : Kaun ho tum?

Aadmi : Tum mujhe 'Renshu' keh ke bula sakte ho.

Renshu apna vishaal shareer liye wahi bane ek patthar par baitha. Kamar par latki ek bottle gourd usne nikaali aur usme se paani peene laga.

Pyaas bhujte hi usne bottle gourd Veer ki orr feki.

Veer ne ek haath se uss bottle ko catch kiya. Ye natural water bottles hoti thi jinhe bottle gourd ki sabzi se banaaya jaata tha.

Renshu : Paani hai! Tum 2 din se behosh the. Pee lo!

Veer ne kuch shan tak Renshu ko dekha aur fir apne haath me uss natural water bottle ko.

[It's okay Master! Drink it.]

Pari ki sahanubhuti se Veer ne fir koi virodh nahi dikhaya.

Usne paani piya. Ab harr jagah usse dard mehsoos ho raha tha. Josh josh me woh ucchal ke Renshu pe chadh toh gaya tha par uske chalte uske shareer ke ghaav firse khul gaye the. Khoon fir behne laga tha.

Renshu wahi se kuch qadmo ki duri par lakdiya ikhatta kar aag jalaane chala gaya. Derr raat ho rahi thi aur thand thodi badh chuki thi.

Renshu : Ladke!!! Tumhe pata hai tumhare behosh hone ke baad kya kya hua hai?

Veer ko sab jaise yaad aaya. Ushant Island ki woh vardaate.

Veer : R-Right-!! Mein! Kya hua tha?

Iss baar usne Hindi me bola aur uska jawaab Renshu ne bhi Hindi me hi diya,

Renshu : 2 din tak Island ke aas-paas chhaan been chali hai. Tumhari laash ko dhundhne ki. Kuch derr pehle hi woh sab yaha se nikle hai.

Yaani Veer 2 din se behosh tha. Aur waha DGSI aur police force do din tak Island ke tat par chhaan been karte rahe.

Veer : Hum unse kitni dur hai?

Renshu : Kareeb 2 KM dur. Chinta ki zaroorat nahi. Ye jagah surakshit hai ladke.

Dono ke liye koi bhi language barrier nahi tha. Woh harr bhaasha me baat kar sakte the. Aur DGSI logo ke jaane ke baad shayad isliye ab Renshu bina kisi fiqr ke aag jala raha tha.

Veer : Mein 2 din se behosh tha?

Renshu : Poore 2 din aur 3 raat.

Veer : That's-!!

Renshu : Mein sab kuch samjhane nahi baitha tumhare liye. Apne system se pucho. Woh tumhe samjha dega. Ya…! Samjha degi!?

Veer ne Pari ko awaaz lagayi toh andar se Pari ki awaaz aayi. Woh toh tatpar hi baithi thi sab kuch bataane ke liye.

[Master-!!]

'Pari! Kya hua tha akhir? Mujhe yaad hai, mein-! Crimson se ladayi kar raha tha. Uske baad-! Right! Ava!! She-!'

[First of all-]

'!!??'

[Don't you fucking do that ever again!!]

Pari ki awaaz bilkul wesi hi thi. Ruwaasi. Jab usne antim baar uss se baat ki thi. Awaaz bilkul wesi hi thi.

'I-'

[Stop! A-Aur meri baat suniye pehle-!]

[Kya soch ke aapne aisa kiya haan? Who told you to do that? Aapne ek baar bhi mere baare me nahi socha? I told you. Didn't I? Mein firse koi energy se space travel nahi kar sakti. Once you die. I die as well. Aur uske baad bhi aapne-]

'I-I… I'm sorry Pari!'

Apne Master ke muh se sorry sunn, Pari turant hi shaant ho gayi.

[J-Just keep in mind from now on. Ahinda se aap aisa kuch nahi karenge.]

'Yes!'

[Aur rahi baat kya hua tha? Then allow me to explain.]

'Hmm!'

Veer kisi bacche ki tarah tha abhi jo apni maa se daant kha raha tha. Pari uski laparwahi par bhadak rahi thi. Magar zyada derr apne Master se gussa kaise reh sakti thi.

[Sabse pehli baat Master. Jo aadmi aapke saamne hai. Usne hi aapki jaan bachaayi hai.]

'Renshu?'

[Yes. Jab aap paani me gire the toh Renshu hi tha jo aapke shareer ko saath leke waha se dur leke aaya.]

'I see! Magar police ne dekha nahi? Hum underwater aaye? Mein bach kaise gaya?'

[Aap underwater kuch seconds ke liye hi the. Renshu aapko neeche ke raaste se laaya hai. Aur fir tairte tairte yaha iss gufa me. It was so hard. Kayi baar bache hai. Then, he removed the water you swallowed, and the bullets as well. Fir dressing hui aur ab jaake aapko hosh aaya hai.]

'I see!'

[And that witch-!!!]

'Huh?'

[AVA GRACE MARTIN! The witch framed us. Usne hume dhoka diya Master. Woh uss Crimson ke saath mili hui thi.]

Veer ko andaaza toh tab hi ho gaya tha jab usne Ava ko helicopter me baithe dekha tha. Uska kuch na kehna. Woh khamoshi sab kuch bayaa kar gayi thi. Veer sab jaan gaya tha. Par ek baat se abhi bhi anibhigya tha woh.

[Also, she has a system.]

Aur Pari ne keh diya. Ye jaante hi Veer ko ek bada jhatka laga.

'Kya????'

Woh ye jaanta tha ki Ava ne usse dhoka diya hai. Par uske paas system tha? Ye bhala kaise ho sakta tha?

'N-No! Ye namumkin hai. Mene check kiya tha aur-'

Pari ne tabhi uske mann me screen ke saamne kuch rakh diya.

*Ding*

[Skill : Camouflage.
Bio : Allows the host to set a fake status according to their will. Favourability can also be altered.]

Skill ka description padhte hi Veer hakka bakka reh gaya.

'N-Nahi!!'

[Shuru se ant tak, woh aapke saath game khel rahi thi.]

'N-No!'

Ek ajeeb si peeda Veer ke dil me janm li. Aur baar baar ek hi sawaal pe uski sui aake atak rahi thi.

Akhir kyu?

Kyu kiya Ava ne uske saath ye sab? Kya bigada tha usne Ava ka? Woh toh yaha uski madad ke liye aaya tha na? Toh fir kyu?

Pari ne jaise apne Master ki peeda ko mehsoos kar liya. Andar hi andar Veer ki iss haalat ko dekh Pari ka khud ka seena chhalni ho raha tha.

Parantu, apne Master ko satya se avgat karana zaroori tha.

'T-Tumhe kaise pata chala Pari?'

Veer ki awaaz ahista se Pari ko sunaayi padi.

[Jab aap paani me waha se kood rahe the. Aapki nazre police officers par thi. Par meri nazre, Ava par tiki hui thi.]

'??'

[She was leaning down towards the door of the helicopter. Woh jhuk ke aapke girte shareer ko bade hi dhyaan se dekh rahi thi. Uski aankhon me woh glaze.... The moment I saw it- I knew what was happening.]

'Magar-'

Veer punaah apni baat rakh paata ki tabhi Pari ne ek aur jankaari uske saamne pesh kar di.

*Ding*

[Skill : Death Flag.
Bio : Allows the host to set a target on any living being. A Death Flag will then be raised indicating the being's life and death condition. As long as the Flag is up, being will be considered alive. Once the Flag falls, it means the being is dead.

Range : 1 KM (Upgradable upto 2 times.)

Note : Host must remain within the range to check the condition.]

Aaj Veer ka imtihaan tha. Usse jhatke pe jhatke lag rahe the. Harr baat usse stabdh kar ke chhodh rahi thi.

[That explains why she was leaning down to see you.]

'P-Pari!!! Tumne ye sab kaise itne kam time me-?'

[Yes. I did it. Also, I'm sorry Master.]

'Sorry? K-Kyu?'

[Aapki heartbeat rokne ke liye.]

'What?'

[I'm sorry! Lekin, Ava kitni hi smart kyu na ho. I'm still smarter than her.]

'???'

[Death Flag, woh skill hai Master jo aapko ye bataati hai ki koi zinda hai ya nahi. Ava ne aapke upar Death Flag lagaya tha. Taaki, usse pata chal sake ki aap zinda rahoge ya nahi.]

Abhi bhi Veer ko ye sab sach hazam nahi ho raha tha. Par yahi satya tha.

'Ava ne!? Mujh par? K-Kab?'

[Kabhi bhi kar sakti hai Master woh. But I think mujhe pata hai usne kab kiya tha.]

'K-Kab?'

[Remember the time when we went to her concert?]

Veer ne tabhi apni yaadon me jhaak ke dekha. Aur uske haath ek khaas pal laga. Jaha woh Las Vegas me Suhana aur Divya ke saath Ava ke concert me gaya tha. Ava ne hi toh invitation bheja tha.

[Kya hua tha jab aapne usse check kiya tha?]

Veer ko jaise hi dhyaan aaya, uske badan me raungte khade ho gaye.

Jab usne Ava ko check kiya tha, toh stage par maujood Ava ne ek jhatke me uski orr dekha tha. Tab Veer aur Pari dono hi hairaan reh gaye the. Lekin, uske baad jab Ava ne Suhana aur Divya ko bhi dekh haami bhari thi toh Veer ne uss baat ko apne dimaag se nikaal diya tha.

[Yes! Now you remember. I think that was the time when she marked you.]

Veer ke hosh udte hi jaa rahe the. Ye saari sacchaayi ek saath hazam karna behad kathin tha.

Ab ek ek karke Ava ke saath guzaare harr pal usse yaad aa rahe the.




Ab usse samajh aa raha tha kyu woh haath se goli maarne ka ishaara karti thi. Woh sirf mazaakiya dhang nahi tha uska.



She was after his life, all along. Aur woh sanket the uske.

Woh alley me le jaana, fake police, protection ke liye invitation. Sab kuch frame kiya gaya tha.

Veer ka sarr apne aap hi neeche jhuk gaya. Uske ghane baalo ne uski aankhon ko dhak liya. Renshu dur baithe side-eye kar Veer ke expressions padhne ki koshish kar raha tha. Kintu, woh nakaam raha.

[As I said, woh bhale hi smart ho. Magar mujhse smart nahi ho sakti. Death Flag me apna ek fault hai Master. After all, it's just a Gold Tier Skill. Nothing much.]

'???'

[Aur woh fault ye hai ki Death Flag sirf targeted person ki heartbeat ko check karke notification deti hai. Basically, kisi ki heartbeat band ho gayi toh woh dead maana jaata hai. Right?]

'Aur isliye tumne meri heartbeat-!?'

[Yes. Sorry. Mene bataya tha aapko ki mein ek time par ek hi cheez par focus kar sakti hu. Pehle aapke blood loss ko rok rahi thi. Lekin, Ava ko galat notification dene ke liye mujhe blood loss se focus hata ke heartbeat par dhyaan lagana pada.]

'I see!'

[Woh abhi yahi samajh rahi hogi ki aap marr chuke ho.]

'Why did she-?'

[Zaroor uss Crimson ke saath mili hui hai woh Master.]

Veer ki mutthi achanak hi kass uthi.

[Time to time mene Beowulf activate kiya hua tha. It gives 50% more healing. Isliye aap jald hi hosh me aa gaye.]

'Ohh!'

[Yes! So, Beowulf ka use karte rahiye. Energy zaroor lega woh lekin aap heal jaldi hoge.]

'Pari!'

[Umm?]

'Thank you so much! Mene laparwahi ki par tumne fir bhi mujhe-'

[Yahi mera kaam hai Master. And didn't I tell you?]

'???'

[As long as I'm here. I won't let you die.]

Iss baar Veer ke honth halke se muskaan me fel gaye. Aur gaal se ek ashru ki boond fisal ke beh gayi. Kintu, aankhein ab bhi baalo se dhaki hui thi.

'Kyu kiya Ava ne mere saath aisa? Mission??'

[Ho sakta hai. Dusra case ye bhi ho sakta hai ki woh majboor ho. Lekin, fir bhi-! Mein usse maaf nahi karne wali.]

Veer ne koi jawaab na diya. Uske chehre par kya bhaav the ye koi nahi jaanta tha.

[Aur ek baat bataani hai Master.]

'What is it?'

Tabhi ek aur notification Veer ke mann me jhalka,

*Ding*

[Mission - 'Get to Ava as soon as possible' is failed.]

[2500 Points will be deducted.]

'Ah!!!'

[Aap puch rahe the na ki mission ki penalty sirf 5000 points kyu hai? Toh ye raha jawaab. Ava kabhi mushqil me thi hi nahi Master.]

'Aur uske baad bhi system bewakoof bann gaya?'

[Yes. Almost actually. Ava sirf acting kar rahi thi. Kahi na kahi system ne bhaanp liya tha ki kuch gadbad hai lekin pin-point nahi kar paaya. Isliye penalty me sirf 5000 points hi the.]

'Aur agar woh asliyat me mushqil me hoti toh?'

[Toh penalty points kam se kam 10,000 toh hote hi.]

'Ab mujhe sab samajh aa raha hai Pari.'

[Yes. Isliye mission fail hone par penalty sirf 2500 points ki lagi hai. System ne realise kar liya tha ki ye sab framing hai.]

'I see! Mere paas itne points toh nahi hai Pari. Kya zaroori hai abhi deduct hoye saare points?'

[Don't worry. System update ho chuka hai Master. Aap points collect karke fir penalty bhar sakte hai.]

Veer ne ye sunn ek raahat ki saans li.

'That's a relief.'

Veer ki nigaahein fir dur baithe Renshu par tik gayi.

[Master. Mujhe nahi lagta woh hamara dushman hai.]

'Hmm!'

Ab jaake Veer ko samajh aa raha tha. Ava ka yu singer hona. Usse ye bhi yaad aaya ki Suhana itna kyu pareshaan thi concert ke dauraan. Bachpan me kabhi Ava ne singing me koi ruchi nahi dikhayi thi. Toh achanak itne kam samay me itni safalta paana. Upar se aise darje ki singing.

Sab samajh aa gaya tha Veer ko.

[Kahi na kahi mene Renshu ki skills ka andaaza bhi laga liya hai. This guy must have some survival skills, medical skills and some identifying skills.]

Renshu itne me uth ke Veer ke nazdeek aaya aur uske shareer par jagah jagah bandhi pattiyo ko kholne laga.

Veer bas chup chaap uski harqato ka aaklan kar raha tha. Uske mann me abhi aneko sawaal ghoom rahe the.

Apni potli se nayi pattiya Renshu ne nikaali aur Veer ke badan par ghaav waali jagaho par baandh di.

Veer : Urgh!!! Why help me?

Renshu : Kyuki yahi mera kaam hai. Sansaar ke sanrakshan ke liye, tum jaiso ka zinda rehna zaroori hai.

Veer : Huh?

Renshu : It's my duty. I must protect those who can help in sustaining peace.

Veer (frowns) : Oh really? Toh meri jagah Crimson ko kyu nahi bachaya?

Renshu : Kya yahi naam hai uska?

Veer : Tumhe uska naam bhi nahi pata?

Renshu ne naa me sarr hila diya.

Renshu : Bilkul nahi! Mein uss se pehle kabhi nahi mila. Bhala mujhe kaise uska naam pata hoga. Ladke! Ek system dhaarak vyakti dusre system dhaarak vyakti ko check nahi kar sakta.

Veer : Ohh!

Veer ko ek aur nayi jankaari haath lagi. Matlab ek system owner dusre system owner ko check nahi kar sakta tha. Ava ko woh isliye check kar paaya tha kyuki Ava Camouflage skill rakhi hui thi. Ab sab kuch sense bana raha tha.

Veer : Agar aisa hai toh fir Crimson ko kaise mere baare me-?

Renshu : Baahri source bhi hote hai ladke.

Veer : Mera naam Veer hai.

Renshu (nods) : Hmm!

Veer : Tumne abhi bhi mere sawaal ka jawaab nahi diya. Agar, system owners ko bachaana hi tumhara kaam hai toh meri jagah Crimson ko kyu nahi bachaya?

Renshu : Mene tumse kaha na. Mein unhe bachata hu jo shaanti ke santulan ko banaaye rakhne ke yogya ho. Woh Crimson...! Mujhe uss se koi umeed nahi. You are the one who matters.

Veer : Bina matlab ke tumne meri madad nahi kari hogi. So tell me. What do you want from me?

Renshu : Samajhdar ho! Par abhi ye samay nahi. Sahi waqt pe tumhe pata chal jayega ki favour kab return karna hai. For now, just rest. And heal your wounds.

Veer shaant ho gaya. Kuch derr baad usne apni baat rakhi,

Veer : Tumhare paas phone hai? Mujhe ek call karna hai.

Renshu ne naa me gardan hilaayi.

Veer : Whattt??? Tumhare paas phone bhi nahi hai?

*Whistle*

Agle hi shan Renshu ne ek zordaar seeti maari. Aur kuch hi palo me waha ek kabootar apne pankh fadfadate hue gufa ke andar pravesh kiya.

[Ah! It's a pigeon.]

Kabootar andar aake seedha Renshu ke kandhe par baith gaya. Aur fir neeche utar Veer ko tak-taki laga ke dekhne laga.

Apne jhole me se Renshu ne ek kaagaz ka tukda nikaala aur syaahi waala ek pen. Kaagaz par kuch likha aur fir usse roll karte hue woh kabootar ke perr me baandhne laga.

Veer uski harr harqat ko padh raha tha.

'This guy seems a bit old-fashioned.'

[Old fashioned ho ya na ho. Lekin, uske paas pigeon ko tame karne ki bhi skill hai. I see.]

Jaha Veer nayi nayi jankaari praapt kar stabdh hota jaa raha tha toh wahi Pari pehle se 10 guna aur satark ho chuki thi. Woh apna poora dhyaan system owners ki skills aur cards ko identify karne me laga rahi thi.

Veer : Tumhe system ke baare me itni jankaari kaise hai?

Renshu kuch derr ke liye maun raha. Woh Veer ko taakta raha aur Veer usse. Fir ek gehri saans lete hue usna batana shuru kiya.

Renshu : Tumhe bataane me koi harz nahi hai. Toh suno.

Veer : Hmm?

Renshu : Sansaar me kul 30 System dhaaran karne waale log the.

Veer : 30???

Veer ko ek aur bada jhatka laga. Pari ne toh shuruaat me uss se kaha tha ki wahi ekmaatr hai. Fir ye sab?

Renshu : Aur ab sirf 18 bache hai.

Veer : You mean-!!!?

Renshu ne jaise hi haami bhari toh Veer ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi.

Veer : Baaki 12 logo ka kya hua?

Renshu : Woh marr gaye. Ya maar diye gaye.

Veer : A-Aur ab?

Renshu : Isliye mene tumhe bachaya hai. Santulan banaaye rakhne ke liye. Tumhara zinda rehna zaroori hai.

Veer (frowns) : Tumhe kaise pata chala ki mein aur Crimson aapas me bhidenge. Aur mera ye haal hoga?

Renshu (sighs) : Mujhe ek call aaya tha.

Veer : Huh?

Renshu : Sach kahu!!! Toh koi hai...! Koi hai jo shayad iss shatranj ke khel me hum sabko pyaade ki tarah istemaal kar raha hai. Aisa mera mann keh raha hai.

Veer : Phone se tumhara kya matlab hai?

Renshu : Uss phone call se hi mujhe pata laga ki tum jaisa naujavan yaha musibat me aane waala hai. Woh aadmi ye bhi jaanta tha ki mein tum jaise logo ko bachaane ke liye hi kaam karta hu.

[That's strange Master.]

Veer : Iska matlab Crimson par woh goli-

Renshu : Woh goli mene hi chalaayi thi. Mujhe laga tha tum usse shayad shikast dedo. Lekin, woh tum par haawi tha.

Veer : Kaun hai woh unknown?

Renshu : Abhi ke liye-

Veer : ??

Renshu : Mein usse 'X' keh ke bulaata hu. Koi toh hai, jo ham sab se zyada jaanta hai inn sab ke baare me.

Veer : X!!?

Renshu : Hmm! Sandesh bhej diya hai mene. Jald hi ek helicopter yaha aa jayega. Lekin 2 din lagenge. Tab tak hume yahi rukna hoga. Aur tum-!!! Ab zyada hiloge nahi.

Toh isliye shayad usne woh kabootar ke perr me sandesh baandh ke bheja tha. Ye saari information Veer ke liye bohut zyada thi. Apne mastishk ko araam dene ke liye Veer aankhein band kar araam karne laga.

Yaha se nikalne me abhi usse samay tha.

Dekhte hi dekhte kaafi waqt beet chuka tha. Renshu aur woh Paris aa chuke the. Aur yaha aate hi Veer ne sabse pehla jo kaam tha woh tha apne ghar waalo ko soochna dena.

Usse gaayab hue ab hafte ho chuke the. Paris aane me bhi usse zyada hi samay lag gaya tha. Uska shareer lagbhag 70% heal ho chuka tha.

Pichli ek raat full moon ki raat thi. Beowulf ke stat percentages full moon me double ho jaate the. Jaha usse normally 50% healing me baddhotri milti thi toh wahi full moon me ye 100% ho jaati thi. Matlab duguni.

Jis kaaran woh kaafi jaldi heal ho gaya. Jis vyatha me woh pehle tha, udhar se aane me warna usse mahine se upar lag jaata.

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3 hafte ho chuke the. Paris me Bhavna sang sabhi log ek hotel ke kamre me maujood the. Yaha ki sthiti dekh ke iss waqt unke andar ki bechaini ka varnan nahi kiya jaa sakta tha.

Ek Maa apne bete ki khabar paane ke liye tadap rahi thi. Behne apne bhai ke baare me jaan’ne ke liye vyaakul thi. Ek buzurg apne pote ke haal-chaal ke baare me jaan’ne ke liye icchuk the.

Magar koi khabar haath nahi lag rahi thi. Tej Paris ke hi logo ke social media par unke kuch open accounts me chhaan-been karne me lagi hui thi.

Bhavna : Kuch pata chala beta?

Tej : Dekh rahi hu Mom!

Woh abhi kuch accounts ko dekhi hi thi ki kisi ek ladke ke open account me usse woh dikh gaya jo usse bilkul nahi dikhna chaahiye tha.

Uske hi bagal se baithi Arohi bhi sab dekh rahi thi. Saamne dali post ko jaise hi usne padha. Arohi bechaari ke haath se uska mobile chhutak ke neeche gir gaya. Woh kisi murti ki tarah apni jagah par jamm gayi.

Paris me janta kitne virodh me thi ye sirf Paris hi nahi poora France jaanta tha. Achanak se kisi criminal ki photos harr platforms se hata di jaaye toh kya karegi janta aise me?

Vidroh! DGSI ke iss action se jaise aam janta aur gusse me aa padi. Bhale hi Veer ki photos daalne par karyavaahi honi thi. Magar, janta ne uska hal bhi dhoondh nikala tha.

Koi na koi, fake accounts bana ke Veer ki wahi news aur photos daalne me laga hua tha. Taaki, janta tak khabar barabar bani rahi ki yahi woh shaks hai jisne unke sheher me aatanki hamla kiya hai. Ye bach ke jaane na paaye.

Arohi aur Tej ke saamne wahi khabar thi jo hafto pehle news channels par release hui thi.

Bhavna ne jaise unke haav-bhaav padh liye,

Bhavna : K-Kya hua?

Par koi jawaab na mila. Tej ke haath ki ungliyaan laptop ke touch pad par rakhi hui kaanp rahi thi.

Arohi aur woh, dono hi bhaybheet aankhein faade murti ki tarah wahi baithi hui thi.

Bhavna tezz qadmo ke saath unke paas aayi aur jaise hi usne screen par maujood khabar ko dekha. Pal bhar ke liye toh usse kuch samajh na aaya. Fir jaise bodh hua. Aur abhaas ka fir bada sa patthar jaise uske sarr ke upar aake gira.

Apne muh ko saree ke chhor se dhakte hue woh ladkhada ke wahi gir padi

“N-Nahi!!!”

Arohi ki aankhein apne aap hi bheeg gayi. Naino me aansu panapne lage. Veer ke akhiri shabd uske dimaag me goonjne lage.

“Arohi di!! Aap se mujhe kaam hai. Kya aap ghar aa jaogi? Teju di aur baaki sab aapko yaha sab samjha dengi. Aur Kavya ko bhi le aana. Warna baad me woh muh fula ke baith jayegi.”

Uske baad se uski baat Veer se nahi hui thi. Woh Paris jaa chuka tha. Aur ab ye khabar…!

Arohi ka dimaag jaise kaam karna band kar chuka tha. Tej ka haal aur bhi bura tha. Woh becchari wese hi baat karne ke liye kitne dino se tadap rahi thi. Kintu, uske saamne toh-

Uske bhai ki maut ki khabar jhalak rahi thi.

Ab sab dorr aapas me judti jaa rahi thi. Kyu phone nahi lag raha tha. Kyu usne Bhavna se ghar par rehne ke liye zidd ki thi. Sab kuch Bhavna ko samajh aa raha tha.

Manorath ye drishya dekh aage badhe. Unki kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha. Ye sab iss tarah se kyu pesh aa rahe the?

Par abhi woh aage badhi hi the ki Tej ka phone baj utha.

Ghanti bajti jaa rahi thi magar Tej ko jaise duniya ka ab koi shor sunaayi nahi de raha tha.

Arohi ka haath apne aap phone par gaya, usne call uthaaya aur phone apne kaan se laga liya. Aur tabhi, dusri orr se ek awaaz aayi,

“Teju dii!”

Pal bhar ke liye laga jaise Arohi kisi sapne me thi. Uske dil ne kayi dhadkane ek saath phaand li. Haath kaanpne lage.

Arohi : Veeeeeeeeerrrr????

Aur uske iss shor se Tej aur Bhavna dono hi hosh me aa gayi. Bhavna ne fauran hi Arohi se mobile chhina ke apne kaano me lagaaya.

Bhavna : H-Hellooo???

Toh fir ek awaaz waha se aayi,

“M-Maa?”

Aur bas! Bhavna ki tezz dhadkane aur tezz hui magar uss awaaz ko sunte hi uski saansein fir durust hone lagi. Aur aankhon se nirantar aansu behne lage. Ye awaaz sunn’ne ke liye uske kaan taras gaye the.

Bhavna : V-Veeeeeer? B-Beta???

Veer : Umm! Mein theek hu. Surakshit hu. Aap chinta mat kariye!

Bhavna jaise muh se shabd baahar hi nahi nikaal paa rahi thi. Tej ne phone lete hue apne kaan se lagaya aur boli,

Tej : V-Veeeeer????

Veer : Teju dii!

Aur Tej ka bhi yahi haal tha. Woh ro padi.

Tej : K-Kaha ho tum? Ye khabar! Y-Ye sab kya hai? Hum sab Paris me hai!!

Veer : Aap sab Paris me ho? Mene Maa se kaha tha na ki ghar se baahar mat nikalna, jab tak mein laut nahi aata then-

Tej : SHUT UP!!!

Veer : Huh?

Tej : Shut up! *sniff* Bolo kaha ho tum!! Jaldi!!!

Veer : Mein-

Tej : Don’t you fucking dare!! Tell me!!! *sniff*

Veer : Aap sab jaha par hai. Wahi rukiye. Mein kuch hi dino me aapke saamne hounga. Ghabrana nahi Teju di. Haan? Maa ko sambhaalna!

Tej : T-Tum kya keh rahe ho? Veeeeeer!!!

Veer : Mera aapke paas rehna abhi theek nahi. Jo khabar aapne padhi hai. Woh ek badi misunderstanding hai Teju di. You believe me na? Then trust me. Mere baare me koi bhi topic mat uthana public me. Mein sab samjha dunga baad me-

Tej : N-Nooooo!!

Veer : Abhi aapko bas wahi rehna hai. Don’t get out okay? Mein jald hi lautunga. Don’t worry!

Tej : N-Nahiiiiii! Veeeeeerrrrr!!

Par tab tak call cut chuka tha.

Idhar Veer ki nazre call cut karne ke baad uss saamne hotel ki building par tik gayi.

7th floor par, ek khubsoorat celebrity, aur singer khidki se lag ke khadi hui thi.

Veer ke baal raat me tezz hawao me lehra rahe the.

Theek uske peeche kuch duri par Renshu khada hua tha. Veer ka aura woh mehsoos kar paa raha tha.

‘The air has changed around him. It- It feels heavy.’

Renshu ki bauhe thode aashcharya me uthi hui thi.

Veer ki aankhon me koi bhaav nahi jhalak rahe the. Renshu ne usse kapde diye the. Iss samay woh ek white shirt pehna hua tha, jo tezz hawao me lehra rahi thi.

Pari ki awaaz tabhi uske mann me aayi,

[Uddyamen hi sidhyanti, kaaryaani na manorathe,
Na hi suptasya singhasya, pravishanti mukhe mragah.]

'!!!?'

[Yaani ki, koi bhi kaarya kadi mehnat ke bina poora nahi kiya jaa sakta Master. Sirf sochne bhar se kaarya poore nahi hote. Unke liye prayatn bhi karna padta hai. Kabhi bhi sote hue sher ke muh me hiran khud nahi aata. Usse shikaar karna padta hai.]

'Pariiiiii!!!!'

[Y-Yes!!!]

'Get ready!!! We're going on a hunt!!!'

Aur woh agle hi shan uss building se tezz raftaar me gaayab ho gaya.

Aur yaha dur hotel ki building me khadi Ava bas uss building ki khaali terrace ko dekhti reh gayi.
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Update - 145 ~ X​

Ab tak...

Ava ke poore badan me sihran daud gayi. Woh kisi chidiya ki tarah harr taraf gardan modte hue apne chaaro orr dekhne lagi.

'V-Veer!!!!?'

Agle hi pal uski nazre bagal se lagi building ke uss terrace par gayi.

Par, usne jo saamne dekha toh-

Siwae aasmaan me chamakte chaand ke alaawa waha koi nahi tha.

Terrace khaali thi.

'Veer!!!????'

Ab aage...

Andhkaar!

Kya hota hai? Kya prakaash ka na hona andhkaar hai?

Maut!

Kya hoti hai?

Kya saans na le paana mrityu hai? Kuch sunn na paana, dekh na paana, bol na paana, mehsoos na kar paana. Kya yahi hai maut?

Agar vyakti inme se kuch bhi kar na paaye, ye bhi pata na ho ki uski dhadkane chal rahi hai ya nahi? Toh kya usse mrat ghoshit kiya jaa sakta hai?

Uss soch ka kya jo waha ab bhi maujood hai? Woh soch jo duniya bhar ke gyaan ko samajhne ke liye saksham hai.

Veer ki soch iss waqt issi sthiti se guzar rahi thi. Chaaro orr andhkaar fela hua tha.

Na hi wo apne shareer ko mehsoos kar paa raha tha aur na hi kuch dekh ya sunn paa raha tha.

Kaisa mehsoos hota hoga jab aapke saamne andhera chhaa jaaye. Aap jaante ho aapki soch ab bhi kaam kar rahi hai. Aap ye bhi samajh paa rahe ho ki aap andhkaar me doobe hue ho. Par kaisa mehsoos hoga jab ye bodh hoye ki sirf sochne ke alaawa aap aur kuch nahi kar sakte.

Koi awaaz nahi, koi drishya nahi, koi anubhooti nahi. Kaisa lagega tab?

Veer abhi issi sthiti me tha.

Aisa lag raha tha jaise woh kisi antariksh me ghoom raha hai. Farq sirf itna tha ki yaha koi taare nahi the aur na hi koi roshni.

Jab woh apne mann ke vichaaro me ladte ladte maansik roop se thak gaya, aur iss paristhiti se baahar nikalne ka koi hal khoj na saka, tabhi usse kuch dhundh si nazar aayi.




'Huh?'

Aur fir ek dhwani,

[....ster!!!]

[.....errrr!!!!!]

'Huh?'

Veer ki saansein tej ho uthi. Yeh awaaz woh bhali-bhati jaanta tha.

Aur agle hi shan, uska shareer kisi chumbak ki tarah khichta chala gaya. Uski consciousness drift hone lagi.

"Aaaarrrghhhh!!!"

Laga jaise woh aseem raftaar me antariksh me udd raha hai.

Theek uske turant baad hi,

'Uhh!!?'

Sab kuch akasmaat shaant ho gaya. Andhkaar toh abhi bhi tha. Magar ab,

Uska seena upar neeche ho raha tha. Woh saans le raha tha.

Uski naak me aas paas ke vatavaran ki praanvayu aane lagi. Samudra ki lehro ka shor sunaayi dene laga.

Ek ek karke harr senses uske apna apna kaam karne lage. Woh zinda tha.

Saath hi,

[Maaaasttttteeerrrrr!!!]

Woh awaaz bhi usse sunaayi di.

Palke jhapki aur dheere dheere Veer ki aankhon ke saamne kuch drishya aane lage.

'Urgh!'

Ek andhruni karaah uski nikli. Aankhein dard kar rahi thi. Usse fir kuch nazar aaya.

Apni baayi orr dekhte hi kuch aisa nazaara uske saamne tha.




Akaash me chandrama apni roshni bikhere chamak raha tha. Derr raat ho rakhi thi.

[Master!!! Thank god! Finally! Can you hear me?]

Veer ne mann hi mann haami bhari.

Poora badan uska dard kar raha tha. Lag raha tha jaise uske shareer ke tukde tukde kar ke zameen par bikher diye ho.

Jab usne aas-paas ka jayza liya toh usse anumaan ho gaya ki woh samudra me maujood chattaano ke nichle hisse me bani kisi gufa me tha.

Uska shareer chattaan ki deewaar se hi tika hua tha. Peeche usse kuch gadd raha tha. Apne haath ko tatol ke usne uss cheez ko sehlaaya toh paaya ki ye wahi gun thi.

Jo usne Ushant Island me uss ek gang member ko behosh kar ke chhinaayi thi.

Abhi woh kuch harqat karta ki tabhi usse kuch awaaz sunaayi di. Kisi ke qadmo ki awaaz thi. Dheere dheere ye awaaz uske nazdeek aa rahi thi.

Veer turant hi sachet ho gaya. Khatre ki bhanak lagte hi usne sarr utha ke saamne dekha.

Ek bade se shareer ki chhaaya aakriti uske saamne thi. Usse dekhte hi,

'Check!!!'

*Ding*

[No information available.]

Notification dekhte hi Veer ki aankhein bhay ke maare fel gayi.

'Crimson???'

Uski aadat bann chuki tha harr nazdeek maujood insaan ko check karna.

Notification ka bodh hote hi,

*Swoooshhhh*

Woh apni jagah se ekdum se ucchla.

[Master-!!! No-!!! Wait!!]

Par Pari ki baat sunn'ne me usse derri ho gayi. Woh tab tak hawa me kood chuka tha.

Saamne khada vyakti uske iss tarah achanak hamle se achambhav me reh gaya.

"Y-You-!!!!"

Veer kisi ghaayal sher ki tarah uss aadmi par lapka aur uske vishaal shareer ke upar chadh gaya.

Furti me uska haath peeche kamar par gaya, aur haath me gun aate hi Veer ne bandook uss aadmi ki khopdi par upar se taan di.

Magar,

Trigger nahi daba paaya. Kyuki,

Veer ki aankh ke theek saamne ek paini sui bas 0.5 cm ki duri par tainaat thi.

Jaha Veer uss aadmi ki peeth par chadh uske sarr par aim lagaya tha. Toh wahi uss aadmi ne jhatse kahi se lagbhag 15 cm lambi ek sui nikaal ke Veer ki aankh ki putli ke saamne kar di thi.

Veer ki aankhein adh-khuli thi. Saansein bhi ukhdi-ukhdi le raha tha woh. Yu jaldbaazi me ucchalne se uske shareer ka dard bhadha aur jagah jagah se khoon nikalne laga. Parantu, uske baad bhi woh tass se mass na hua.

Aadmi : Such will power-!!!

Haafte hue woh uss aadmi ke upar hi chadha hua tha.

Aadmi : Ladke!!! Neeche aao!! Issi waqt! Warna apni aankh kho doge. Tumhari bandook me goli nahi hai!

Ye toh Crimson nahi tha. Aadmi ki awaaz sunte hi Veer ne forun hi trigger daba diya.

*Click* *Click*

Par uss aadmi ki baat satya thi.

Gun me waqai bullets nahi thi.

'Tsk!'

Veer jaise hi neeche aaya woh ladkhada ke gir pada.

[Master!!!!]

Uske girte hi saamne khade shaks ka chehra gufa me chaand ki aati roshni ke saamne aaya. Veer ne dekha ki qareeban 50 kuch ki umr ka vyakti uske saamne tha.

Bhayanak badi kad-kaathi. Lambe ghane baal jo adhiktar kaale the magar kuch safed baal bhi unme shaamil the.

Badi badi daadhi aur lambi latakti hui mooche.

Ghaayal Veer usse bas satarkta me ghoor raha tha. Iss haalat me bhi woh ladne se bhaag nahi raha tha.

Aadmi ne apne haath me li hui badi si sui ko apni kamar ke peeche ek kapde ke bag me rakh liya.

[Master! Don't worry! He's our benefactor. Usne hi aapki jaan bachaayi hai.]

'What?'

Pari ki baat sunn, Veer hairat me uss aadmi ko dekha.

Aadmi : Taajub hua? System ne sach bata diya? Mein tumhara dushman nahi ladke.

Aadmi ne chinese bhaasha me bola. Jiske jawaab me Veer ne bhi chinese me hi baat ki,

Veer : Kaun ho tum?

Aadmi : Tum mujhe 'Renshu' keh ke bula sakte ho.

Renshu apna vishaal shareer liye wahi bane ek patthar par baitha. Kamar par latki ek bottle gourd usne nikaali aur usme se paani peene laga.

Pyaas bhujte hi usne bottle gourd Veer ki orr feki.

Veer ne ek haath se uss bottle ko catch kiya. Ye natural water bottles hoti thi jinhe bottle gourd ki sabzi se banaaya jaata tha.

Renshu : Paani hai! Tum 2 din se behosh the. Pee lo!

Veer ne kuch shan tak Renshu ko dekha aur fir apne haath me uss natural water bottle ko.

[It's okay Master! Drink it.]

Pari ki sahanubhuti se Veer ne fir koi virodh nahi dikhaya.

Usne paani piya. Ab harr jagah usse dard mehsoos ho raha tha. Josh josh me woh ucchal ke Renshu pe chadh toh gaya tha par uske chalte uske shareer ke ghaav firse khul gaye the. Khoon fir behne laga tha.

Renshu wahi se kuch qadmo ki duri par lakdiya ikhatta kar aag jalaane chala gaya. Derr raat ho rahi thi aur thand thodi badh chuki thi.

Renshu : Ladke!!! Tumhe pata hai tumhare behosh hone ke baad kya kya hua hai?

Veer ko sab jaise yaad aaya. Ushant Island ki woh vardaate.

Veer : R-Right-!! Mein! Kya hua tha?

Iss baar usne Hindi me bola aur uska jawaab Renshu ne bhi Hindi me hi diya,

Renshu : 2 din tak Island ke aas-paas chhaan been chali hai. Tumhari laash ko dhundhne ki. Kuch derr pehle hi woh sab yaha se nikle hai.

Yaani Veer 2 din se behosh tha. Aur waha DGSI aur police force do din tak Island ke tat par chhaan been karte rahe.

Veer : Hum unse kitni dur hai?

Renshu : Kareeb 2 KM dur. Chinta ki zaroorat nahi. Ye jagah surakshit hai ladke.

Dono ke liye koi bhi language barrier nahi tha. Woh harr bhaasha me baat kar sakte the. Aur DGSI logo ke jaane ke baad shayad isliye ab Renshu bina kisi fiqr ke aag jala raha tha.

Veer : Mein 2 din se behosh tha?

Renshu : Poore 2 din aur 3 raat.

Veer : That's-!!

Renshu : Mein sab kuch samjhane nahi baitha tumhare liye. Apne system se pucho. Woh tumhe samjha dega. Ya…! Samjha degi!?

Veer ne Pari ko awaaz lagayi toh andar se Pari ki awaaz aayi. Woh toh tatpar hi baithi thi sab kuch bataane ke liye.

[Master-!!]

'Pari! Kya hua tha akhir? Mujhe yaad hai, mein-! Crimson se ladayi kar raha tha. Uske baad-! Right! Ava!! She-!'

[First of all-]

'!!??'

[Don't you fucking do that ever again!!]

Pari ki awaaz bilkul wesi hi thi. Ruwaasi. Jab usne antim baar uss se baat ki thi. Awaaz bilkul wesi hi thi.

'I-'

[Stop! A-Aur meri baat suniye pehle-!]

[Kya soch ke aapne aisa kiya haan? Who told you to do that? Aapne ek baar bhi mere baare me nahi socha? I told you. Didn't I? Mein firse koi energy se space travel nahi kar sakti. Once you die. I die as well. Aur uske baad bhi aapne-]

'I-I… I'm sorry Pari!'

Apne Master ke muh se sorry sunn, Pari turant hi shaant ho gayi.

[J-Just keep in mind from now on. Ahinda se aap aisa kuch nahi karenge.]

'Yes!'

[Aur rahi baat kya hua tha? Then allow me to explain.]

'Hmm!'

Veer kisi bacche ki tarah tha abhi jo apni maa se daant kha raha tha. Pari uski laparwahi par bhadak rahi thi. Magar zyada derr apne Master se gussa kaise reh sakti thi.

[Sabse pehli baat Master. Jo aadmi aapke saamne hai. Usne hi aapki jaan bachaayi hai.]

'Renshu?'

[Yes. Jab aap paani me gire the toh Renshu hi tha jo aapke shareer ko saath leke waha se dur leke aaya.]

'I see! Magar police ne dekha nahi? Hum underwater aaye? Mein bach kaise gaya?'

[Aap underwater kuch seconds ke liye hi the. Renshu aapko neeche ke raaste se laaya hai. Aur fir tairte tairte yaha iss gufa me. It was so hard. Kayi baar bache hai. Then, he removed the water you swallowed, and the bullets as well. Fir dressing hui aur ab jaake aapko hosh aaya hai.]

'I see!'

[And that witch-!!!]

'Huh?'

[AVA GRACE MARTIN! The witch framed us. Usne hume dhoka diya Master. Woh uss Crimson ke saath mili hui thi.]

Veer ko andaaza toh tab hi ho gaya tha jab usne Ava ko helicopter me baithe dekha tha. Uska kuch na kehna. Woh khamoshi sab kuch bayaa kar gayi thi. Veer sab jaan gaya tha. Par ek baat se abhi bhi anibhigya tha woh.

[Also, she has a system.]

Aur Pari ne keh diya. Ye jaante hi Veer ko ek bada jhatka laga.

'Kya????'

Woh ye jaanta tha ki Ava ne usse dhoka diya hai. Par uske paas system tha? Ye bhala kaise ho sakta tha?

'N-No! Ye namumkin hai. Mene check kiya tha aur-'

Pari ne tabhi uske mann me screen ke saamne kuch rakh diya.

*Ding*

[Skill : Camouflage.
Bio : Allows the host to set a fake status according to their will. Favourability can also be altered.]

Skill ka description padhte hi Veer hakka bakka reh gaya.

'N-Nahi!!'

[Shuru se ant tak, woh aapke saath game khel rahi thi.]

'N-No!'

Ek ajeeb si peeda Veer ke dil me janm li. Aur baar baar ek hi sawaal pe uski sui aake atak rahi thi.

Akhir kyu?

Kyu kiya Ava ne uske saath ye sab? Kya bigada tha usne Ava ka? Woh toh yaha uski madad ke liye aaya tha na? Toh fir kyu?

Pari ne jaise apne Master ki peeda ko mehsoos kar liya. Andar hi andar Veer ki iss haalat ko dekh Pari ka khud ka seena chhalni ho raha tha.

Parantu, apne Master ko satya se avgat karana zaroori tha.

'T-Tumhe kaise pata chala Pari?'

Veer ki awaaz ahista se Pari ko sunaayi padi.

[Jab aap paani me waha se kood rahe the. Aapki nazre police officers par thi. Par meri nazre, Ava par tiki hui thi.]

'??'

[She was leaning down towards the door of the helicopter. Woh jhuk ke aapke girte shareer ko bade hi dhyaan se dekh rahi thi. Uski aankhon me woh glaze.... The moment I saw it- I knew what was happening.]

'Magar-'

Veer punaah apni baat rakh paata ki tabhi Pari ne ek aur jankaari uske saamne pesh kar di.

*Ding*

[Skill : Death Flag.
Bio : Allows the host to set a target on any living being. A Death Flag will then be raised indicating the being's life and death condition. As long as the Flag is up, being will be considered alive. Once the Flag falls, it means the being is dead.

Range : 1 KM (Upgradable upto 2 times.)

Note : Host must remain within the range to check the condition.]

Aaj Veer ka imtihaan tha. Usse jhatke pe jhatke lag rahe the. Harr baat usse stabdh kar ke chhodh rahi thi.

[That explains why she was leaning down to see you.]

'P-Pari!!! Tumne ye sab kaise itne kam time me-?'

[Yes. I did it. Also, I'm sorry Master.]

'Sorry? K-Kyu?'

[Aapki heartbeat rokne ke liye.]

'What?'

[I'm sorry! Lekin, Ava kitni hi smart kyu na ho. I'm still smarter than her.]

'???'

[Death Flag, woh skill hai Master jo aapko ye bataati hai ki koi zinda hai ya nahi. Ava ne aapke upar Death Flag lagaya tha. Taaki, usse pata chal sake ki aap zinda rahoge ya nahi.]

Abhi bhi Veer ko ye sab sach hazam nahi ho raha tha. Par yahi satya tha.

'Ava ne!? Mujh par? K-Kab?'

[Kabhi bhi kar sakti hai Master woh. But I think mujhe pata hai usne kab kiya tha.]

'K-Kab?'

[Remember the time when we went to her concert?]

Veer ne tabhi apni yaadon me jhaak ke dekha. Aur uske haath ek khaas pal laga. Jaha woh Las Vegas me Suhana aur Divya ke saath Ava ke concert me gaya tha. Ava ne hi toh invitation bheja tha.

[Kya hua tha jab aapne usse check kiya tha?]

Veer ko jaise hi dhyaan aaya, uske badan me raungte khade ho gaye.

Jab usne Ava ko check kiya tha, toh stage par maujood Ava ne ek jhatke me uski orr dekha tha. Tab Veer aur Pari dono hi hairaan reh gaye the. Lekin, uske baad jab Ava ne Suhana aur Divya ko bhi dekh haami bhari thi toh Veer ne uss baat ko apne dimaag se nikaal diya tha.

[Yes! Now you remember. I think that was the time when she marked you.]

Veer ke hosh udte hi jaa rahe the. Ye saari sacchaayi ek saath hazam karna behad kathin tha.

Ab ek ek karke Ava ke saath guzaare harr pal usse yaad aa rahe the.




Ab usse samajh aa raha tha kyu woh haath se goli maarne ka ishaara karti thi. Woh sirf mazaakiya dhang nahi tha uska.



She was after his life, all along. Aur woh sanket the uske.

Woh alley me le jaana, fake police, protection ke liye invitation. Sab kuch frame kiya gaya tha.

Veer ka sarr apne aap hi neeche jhuk gaya. Uske ghane baalo ne uski aankhon ko dhak liya. Renshu dur baithe side-eye kar Veer ke expressions padhne ki koshish kar raha tha. Kintu, woh nakaam raha.

[As I said, woh bhale hi smart ho. Magar mujhse smart nahi ho sakti. Death Flag me apna ek fault hai Master. After all, it's just a Gold Tier Skill. Nothing much.]

'???'

[Aur woh fault ye hai ki Death Flag sirf targeted person ki heartbeat ko check karke notification deti hai. Basically, kisi ki heartbeat band ho gayi toh woh dead maana jaata hai. Right?]

'Aur isliye tumne meri heartbeat-!?'

[Yes. Sorry. Mene bataya tha aapko ki mein ek time par ek hi cheez par focus kar sakti hu. Pehle aapke blood loss ko rok rahi thi. Lekin, Ava ko galat notification dene ke liye mujhe blood loss se focus hata ke heartbeat par dhyaan lagana pada.]

'I see!'

[Woh abhi yahi samajh rahi hogi ki aap marr chuke ho.]

'Why did she-?'

[Zaroor uss Crimson ke saath mili hui hai woh Master.]

Veer ki mutthi achanak hi kass uthi.

[Time to time mene Beowulf activate kiya hua tha. It gives 50% more healing. Isliye aap jald hi hosh me aa gaye.]

'Ohh!'

[Yes! So, Beowulf ka use karte rahiye. Energy zaroor lega woh lekin aap heal jaldi hoge.]

'Pari!'

[Umm?]

'Thank you so much! Mene laparwahi ki par tumne fir bhi mujhe-'

[Yahi mera kaam hai Master. And didn't I tell you?]

'???'

[As long as I'm here. I won't let you die.]

Iss baar Veer ke honth halke se muskaan me fel gaye. Aur gaal se ek ashru ki boond fisal ke beh gayi. Kintu, aankhein ab bhi baalo se dhaki hui thi.

'Kyu kiya Ava ne mere saath aisa? Mission??'

[Ho sakta hai. Dusra case ye bhi ho sakta hai ki woh majboor ho. Lekin, fir bhi-! Mein usse maaf nahi karne wali.]

Veer ne koi jawaab na diya. Uske chehre par kya bhaav the ye koi nahi jaanta tha.

[Aur ek baat bataani hai Master.]

'What is it?'

Tabhi ek aur notification Veer ke mann me jhalka,

*Ding*

[Mission - 'Get to Ava as soon as possible' is failed.]

[2500 Points will be deducted.]

'Ah!!!'

[Aap puch rahe the na ki mission ki penalty sirf 5000 points kyu hai? Toh ye raha jawaab. Ava kabhi mushqil me thi hi nahi Master.]

'Aur uske baad bhi system bewakoof bann gaya?'

[Yes. Almost actually. Ava sirf acting kar rahi thi. Kahi na kahi system ne bhaanp liya tha ki kuch gadbad hai lekin pin-point nahi kar paaya. Isliye penalty me sirf 5000 points hi the.]

'Aur agar woh asliyat me mushqil me hoti toh?'

[Toh penalty points kam se kam 10,000 toh hote hi.]

'Ab mujhe sab samajh aa raha hai Pari.'

[Yes. Isliye mission fail hone par penalty sirf 2500 points ki lagi hai. System ne realise kar liya tha ki ye sab framing hai.]

'I see! Mere paas itne points toh nahi hai Pari. Kya zaroori hai abhi deduct hoye saare points?'

[Don't worry. System update ho chuka hai Master. Aap points collect karke fir penalty bhar sakte hai.]

Veer ne ye sunn ek raahat ki saans li.

'That's a relief.'

Veer ki nigaahein fir dur baithe Renshu par tik gayi.

[Master. Mujhe nahi lagta woh hamara dushman hai.]

'Hmm!'

Ab jaake Veer ko samajh aa raha tha. Ava ka yu singer hona. Usse ye bhi yaad aaya ki Suhana itna kyu pareshaan thi concert ke dauraan. Bachpan me kabhi Ava ne singing me koi ruchi nahi dikhayi thi. Toh achanak itne kam samay me itni safalta paana. Upar se aise darje ki singing.

Sab samajh aa gaya tha Veer ko.

[Kahi na kahi mene Renshu ki skills ka andaaza bhi laga liya hai. This guy must have some survival skills, medical skills and some identifying skills.]

Renshu itne me uth ke Veer ke nazdeek aaya aur uske shareer par jagah jagah bandhi pattiyo ko kholne laga.

Veer bas chup chaap uski harqato ka aaklan kar raha tha. Uske mann me abhi aneko sawaal ghoom rahe the.

Apni potli se nayi pattiya Renshu ne nikaali aur Veer ke badan par ghaav waali jagaho par baandh di.

Veer : Urgh!!! Why help me?

Renshu : Kyuki yahi mera kaam hai. Sansaar ke sanrakshan ke liye, tum jaiso ka zinda rehna zaroori hai.

Veer : Huh?

Renshu : It's my duty. I must protect those who can help in sustaining peace.

Veer (frowns) : Oh really? Toh meri jagah Crimson ko kyu nahi bachaya?

Renshu : Kya yahi naam hai uska?

Veer : Tumhe uska naam bhi nahi pata?

Renshu ne naa me sarr hila diya.

Renshu : Bilkul nahi! Mein uss se pehle kabhi nahi mila. Bhala mujhe kaise uska naam pata hoga. Ladke! Ek system dhaarak vyakti dusre system dhaarak vyakti ko check nahi kar sakta.

Veer : Ohh!

Veer ko ek aur nayi jankaari haath lagi. Matlab ek system owner dusre system owner ko check nahi kar sakta tha. Ava ko woh isliye check kar paaya tha kyuki Ava Camouflage skill rakhi hui thi. Ab sab kuch sense bana raha tha.

Veer : Agar aisa hai toh fir Crimson ko kaise mere baare me-?

Renshu : Baahri source bhi hote hai ladke.

Veer : Mera naam Veer hai.

Renshu (nods) : Hmm!

Veer : Tumne abhi bhi mere sawaal ka jawaab nahi diya. Agar, system owners ko bachaana hi tumhara kaam hai toh meri jagah Crimson ko kyu nahi bachaya?

Renshu : Mene tumse kaha na. Mein unhe bachata hu jo shaanti ke santulan ko banaaye rakhne ke yogya ho. Woh Crimson...! Mujhe uss se koi umeed nahi. You are the one who matters.

Veer : Bina matlab ke tumne meri madad nahi kari hogi. So tell me. What do you want from me?

Renshu : Samajhdar ho! Par abhi ye samay nahi. Sahi waqt pe tumhe pata chal jayega ki favour kab return karna hai. For now, just rest. And heal your wounds.

Veer shaant ho gaya. Kuch derr baad usne apni baat rakhi,

Veer : Tumhare paas phone hai? Mujhe ek call karna hai.

Renshu ne naa me gardan hilaayi.

Veer : Whattt??? Tumhare paas phone bhi nahi hai?

*Whistle*

Agle hi shan Renshu ne ek zordaar seeti maari. Aur kuch hi palo me waha ek kabootar apne pankh fadfadate hue gufa ke andar pravesh kiya.

[Ah! It's a pigeon.]

Kabootar andar aake seedha Renshu ke kandhe par baith gaya. Aur fir neeche utar Veer ko tak-taki laga ke dekhne laga.

Apne jhole me se Renshu ne ek kaagaz ka tukda nikaala aur syaahi waala ek pen. Kaagaz par kuch likha aur fir usse roll karte hue woh kabootar ke perr me baandhne laga.

Veer uski harr harqat ko padh raha tha.

'This guy seems a bit old-fashioned.'

[Old fashioned ho ya na ho. Lekin, uske paas pigeon ko tame karne ki bhi skill hai. I see.]

Jaha Veer nayi nayi jankaari praapt kar stabdh hota jaa raha tha toh wahi Pari pehle se 10 guna aur satark ho chuki thi. Woh apna poora dhyaan system owners ki skills aur cards ko identify karne me laga rahi thi.

Veer : Tumhe system ke baare me itni jankaari kaise hai?

Renshu kuch derr ke liye maun raha. Woh Veer ko taakta raha aur Veer usse. Fir ek gehri saans lete hue usna batana shuru kiya.

Renshu : Tumhe bataane me koi harz nahi hai. Toh suno.

Veer : Hmm?

Renshu : Sansaar me kul 30 System dhaaran karne waale log the.

Veer : 30???

Veer ko ek aur bada jhatka laga. Pari ne toh shuruaat me uss se kaha tha ki wahi ekmaatr hai. Fir ye sab?

Renshu : Aur ab sirf 18 bache hai.

Veer : You mean-!!!?

Renshu ne jaise hi haami bhari toh Veer ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi.

Veer : Baaki 12 logo ka kya hua?

Renshu : Woh marr gaye. Ya maar diye gaye.

Veer : A-Aur ab?

Renshu : Isliye mene tumhe bachaya hai. Santulan banaaye rakhne ke liye. Tumhara zinda rehna zaroori hai.

Veer (frowns) : Tumhe kaise pata chala ki mein aur Crimson aapas me bhidenge. Aur mera ye haal hoga?

Renshu (sighs) : Mujhe ek call aaya tha.

Veer : Huh?

Renshu : Sach kahu!!! Toh koi hai...! Koi hai jo shayad iss shatranj ke khel me hum sabko pyaade ki tarah istemaal kar raha hai. Aisa mera mann keh raha hai.

Veer : Phone se tumhara kya matlab hai?

Renshu : Uss phone call se hi mujhe pata laga ki tum jaisa naujavan yaha musibat me aane waala hai. Woh aadmi ye bhi jaanta tha ki mein tum jaise logo ko bachaane ke liye hi kaam karta hu.

[That's strange Master.]

Veer : Iska matlab Crimson par woh goli-

Renshu : Woh goli mene hi chalaayi thi. Mujhe laga tha tum usse shayad shikast dedo. Lekin, woh tum par haawi tha.

Veer : Kaun hai woh unknown?

Renshu : Abhi ke liye-

Veer : ??

Renshu : Mein usse 'X' keh ke bulaata hu. Koi toh hai, jo ham sab se zyada jaanta hai inn sab ke baare me.

Veer : X!!?

Renshu : Hmm! Sandesh bhej diya hai mene. Jald hi ek helicopter yaha aa jayega. Lekin 2 din lagenge. Tab tak hume yahi rukna hoga. Aur tum-!!! Ab zyada hiloge nahi.

Toh isliye shayad usne woh kabootar ke perr me sandesh baandh ke bheja tha. Ye saari information Veer ke liye bohut zyada thi. Apne mastishk ko araam dene ke liye Veer aankhein band kar araam karne laga.

Yaha se nikalne me abhi usse samay tha.

Dekhte hi dekhte kaafi waqt beet chuka tha. Renshu aur woh Paris aa chuke the. Aur yaha aate hi Veer ne sabse pehla jo kaam tha woh tha apne ghar waalo ko soochna dena.

Usse gaayab hue ab hafte ho chuke the. Paris aane me bhi usse zyada hi samay lag gaya tha. Uska shareer lagbhag 70% heal ho chuka tha.

Pichli ek raat full moon ki raat thi. Beowulf ke stat percentages full moon me double ho jaate the. Jaha usse normally 50% healing me baddhotri milti thi toh wahi full moon me ye 100% ho jaati thi. Matlab duguni.

Jis kaaran woh kaafi jaldi heal ho gaya. Jis vyatha me woh pehle tha, udhar se aane me warna usse mahine se upar lag jaata.

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3 hafte ho chuke the. Paris me Bhavna sang sabhi log ek hotel ke kamre me maujood the. Yaha ki sthiti dekh ke iss waqt unke andar ki bechaini ka varnan nahi kiya jaa sakta tha.

Ek Maa apne bete ki khabar paane ke liye tadap rahi thi. Behne apne bhai ke baare me jaan’ne ke liye vyaakul thi. Ek buzurg apne pote ke haal-chaal ke baare me jaan’ne ke liye icchuk the.

Magar koi khabar haath nahi lag rahi thi. Tej Paris ke hi logo ke social media par unke kuch open accounts me chhaan-been karne me lagi hui thi.

Bhavna : Kuch pata chala beta?

Tej : Dekh rahi hu Mom!

Woh abhi kuch accounts ko dekhi hi thi ki kisi ek ladke ke open account me usse woh dikh gaya jo usse bilkul nahi dikhna chaahiye tha.

Uske hi bagal se baithi Arohi bhi sab dekh rahi thi. Saamne dali post ko jaise hi usne padha. Arohi bechaari ke haath se uska mobile chhutak ke neeche gir gaya. Woh kisi murti ki tarah apni jagah par jamm gayi.

Paris me janta kitne virodh me thi ye sirf Paris hi nahi poora France jaanta tha. Achanak se kisi criminal ki photos harr platforms se hata di jaaye toh kya karegi janta aise me?

Vidroh! DGSI ke iss action se jaise aam janta aur gusse me aa padi. Bhale hi Veer ki photos daalne par karyavaahi honi thi. Magar, janta ne uska hal bhi dhoondh nikala tha.

Koi na koi, fake accounts bana ke Veer ki wahi news aur photos daalne me laga hua tha. Taaki, janta tak khabar barabar bani rahi ki yahi woh shaks hai jisne unke sheher me aatanki hamla kiya hai. Ye bach ke jaane na paaye.

Arohi aur Tej ke saamne wahi khabar thi jo hafto pehle news channels par release hui thi.

Bhavna ne jaise unke haav-bhaav padh liye,

Bhavna : K-Kya hua?

Par koi jawaab na mila. Tej ke haath ki ungliyaan laptop ke touch pad par rakhi hui kaanp rahi thi.

Arohi aur woh, dono hi bhaybheet aankhein faade murti ki tarah wahi baithi hui thi.

Bhavna tezz qadmo ke saath unke paas aayi aur jaise hi usne screen par maujood khabar ko dekha. Pal bhar ke liye toh usse kuch samajh na aaya. Fir jaise bodh hua. Aur abhaas ka fir bada sa patthar jaise uske sarr ke upar aake gira.

Apne muh ko saree ke chhor se dhakte hue woh ladkhada ke wahi gir padi

“N-Nahi!!!”

Arohi ki aankhein apne aap hi bheeg gayi. Naino me aansu panapne lage. Veer ke akhiri shabd uske dimaag me goonjne lage.

“Arohi di!! Aap se mujhe kaam hai. Kya aap ghar aa jaogi? Teju di aur baaki sab aapko yaha sab samjha dengi. Aur Kavya ko bhi le aana. Warna baad me woh muh fula ke baith jayegi.”

Uske baad se uski baat Veer se nahi hui thi. Woh Paris jaa chuka tha. Aur ab ye khabar…!

Arohi ka dimaag jaise kaam karna band kar chuka tha. Tej ka haal aur bhi bura tha. Woh becchari wese hi baat karne ke liye kitne dino se tadap rahi thi. Kintu, uske saamne toh-

Uske bhai ki maut ki khabar jhalak rahi thi.

Ab sab dorr aapas me judti jaa rahi thi. Kyu phone nahi lag raha tha. Kyu usne Bhavna se ghar par rehne ke liye zidd ki thi. Sab kuch Bhavna ko samajh aa raha tha.

Manorath ye drishya dekh aage badhe. Unki kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha. Ye sab iss tarah se kyu pesh aa rahe the?

Par abhi woh aage badhi hi the ki Tej ka phone baj utha.

Ghanti bajti jaa rahi thi magar Tej ko jaise duniya ka ab koi shor sunaayi nahi de raha tha.

Arohi ka haath apne aap phone par gaya, usne call uthaaya aur phone apne kaan se laga liya. Aur tabhi, dusri orr se ek awaaz aayi,

“Teju dii!”

Pal bhar ke liye laga jaise Arohi kisi sapne me thi. Uske dil ne kayi dhadkane ek saath phaand li. Haath kaanpne lage.

Arohi : Veeeeeeeeerrrr????

Aur uske iss shor se Tej aur Bhavna dono hi hosh me aa gayi. Bhavna ne fauran hi Arohi se mobile chhina ke apne kaano me lagaaya.

Bhavna : H-Hellooo???

Toh fir ek awaaz waha se aayi,

“M-Maa?”

Aur bas! Bhavna ki tezz dhadkane aur tezz hui magar uss awaaz ko sunte hi uski saansein fir durust hone lagi. Aur aankhon se nirantar aansu behne lage. Ye awaaz sunn’ne ke liye uske kaan taras gaye the.

Bhavna : V-Veeeeeer? B-Beta???

Veer : Umm! Mein theek hu. Surakshit hu. Aap chinta mat kariye!

Bhavna jaise muh se shabd baahar hi nahi nikaal paa rahi thi. Tej ne phone lete hue apne kaan se lagaya aur boli,

Tej : V-Veeeeer????

Veer : Teju dii!

Aur Tej ka bhi yahi haal tha. Woh ro padi.

Tej : K-Kaha ho tum? Ye khabar! Y-Ye sab kya hai? Hum sab Paris me hai!!

Veer : Aap sab Paris me ho? Mene Maa se kaha tha na ki ghar se baahar mat nikalna, jab tak mein laut nahi aata then-

Tej : SHUT UP!!!

Veer : Huh?

Tej : Shut up! *sniff* Bolo kaha ho tum!! Jaldi!!!

Veer : Mein-

Tej : Don’t you fucking dare!! Tell me!!! *sniff*

Veer : Aap sab jaha par hai. Wahi rukiye. Mein kuch hi dino me aapke saamne hounga. Ghabrana nahi Teju di. Haan? Maa ko sambhaalna!

Tej : T-Tum kya keh rahe ho? Veeeeeer!!!

Veer : Mera aapke paas rehna abhi theek nahi. Jo khabar aapne padhi hai. Woh ek badi misunderstanding hai Teju di. You believe me na? Then trust me. Mere baare me koi bhi topic mat uthana public me. Mein sab samjha dunga baad me-

Tej : N-Nooooo!!

Veer : Abhi aapko bas wahi rehna hai. Don’t get out okay? Mein jald hi lautunga. Don’t worry!

Tej : N-Nahiiiiii! Veeeeeerrrrr!!

Par tab tak call cut chuka tha.

Idhar Veer ki nazre call cut karne ke baad uss saamne hotel ki building par tik gayi.

7th floor par, ek khubsoorat celebrity, aur singer khidki se lag ke khadi hui thi.

Veer ke baal raat me tezz hawao me lehra rahe the.

Theek uske peeche kuch duri par Renshu khada hua tha. Veer ka aura woh mehsoos kar paa raha tha.

‘The air has changed around him. It- It feels heavy.’

Renshu ki bauhe thode aashcharya me uthi hui thi.

Veer ki aankhon me koi bhaav nahi jhalak rahe the. Renshu ne usse kapde diye the. Iss samay woh ek white shirt pehna hua tha, jo tezz hawao me lehra rahi thi.

Pari ki awaaz tabhi uske mann me aayi,

[Uddyamen hi sidhyanti, kaaryaani na manorathe,
Na hi suptasya singhasya, pravishanti mukhe mragah.]

'!!!?'

[Yaani ki, koi bhi kaarya kadi mehnat ke bina poora nahi kiya jaa sakta Master. Sirf sochne bhar se kaarya poore nahi hote. Unke liye prayatn bhi karna padta hai. Kabhi bhi sote hue sher ke muh me hiran khud nahi aata. Usse shikaar karna padta hai.]

'Pariiiiii!!!!'

[Y-Yes!!!]

'Get ready!!! We're going on a hunt!!!'

Aur woh agle hi shan uss building se tezz raftaar me gaayab ho gaya.

Aur yaha dur hotel ki building me khadi Ava bas uss building ki khaali terrace ko dekhti reh gayi.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update consists of 5.5k words. Emergency ke chalte ye update late aaya hai. Length kaafi badi hai. Kul 5 updates aur baaki hai iss arc ke. Target is still the same. 150. Likes thokne ka revos rakhna ka. Agla update jald dene ki koshish rahegi. Since this one came late.
Dhanyavaad!

 

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Update - 146 ~ Break the Impasse (1)​

Ab tak...

'Pariiiiii!!!!'

[Y-Yes!!!]

'Get ready!!! We're going on a hunt!!!'

Aur woh agle hi shan uss building se tezz raftaar me gaayab ho gaya.

Aur yaha dur hotel ki building me khadi Ava bas uss building ki khaali terrace ko dekhti reh gayi.

Ab aage...

Investigation Department
Las Vegas~

Department ke samast jann aaj ek saath ekatrit the. Government ke liye kaam karne waale detectives se leke private detectives sabhi maujood the.

Private detectives me se toh kewal 2 hi the. Nik aur uski patni…! Divya!!

Department ke head, Nolan Nik ki investigation team ko badhaayi de rahe the. Nik ki team ne mil ke sheher me choriyo aur cocaine ki taskari ko anjaam de rahi ek gang ko pakadwaya tha.

Na sirf department balki police force ki taraf se bhi kaafi saraahna mil rahi thi usse. HOK ke baad ye bhi ek badi qamyaabi thi.

Kintu, Divya unn sab se alag khadi apni hi kisi soch me doobi hui thi.




Nolan Nik aur uske team members se vartalaap zaroor kar rahe the par samay samay par unki nigaahein Divya par jaa rahi thi. Woh jaante the ki Divya kis baare me pareshaan thi.

Veer!!!

Department ne apna kaam kar diya tha. Iss se zyada woh iss maamle me hastakshep nahi kar sakte the. Beshaq, thoda zabardasti kar sakte the France ke DGSI ko dhamkaane ke liye.

Magar uss se zyada kuch nahi. Balki, darrana dhamkana bhi akhiri upaay tha.

Divya Veer ko leke hi chintit thi jab uske theek peeche se ek jaani pehchaani awaaz aayi,

“Veer ke baare me soch rahi ho ma’am?”

Awaaz sunn, woh fauran hi palti. Uske saamne Mike tha.




Divya : Mike?

Mike : Aap, Veer ko leke tension me ho na?

Divya (nods) : Hmm!

Mike : I hope woh sahi salaamat ho. Humne ek kaam toh kar hi diya hai at least.

Divya : Hmm! Ab DGSI ke upar hai woh kaise handle karti hai iss case ko. If only we could do something more-

Mike : Right Ma’am! Lekin, mujhe nahi lagta ki Sir Nolan forcefully DGSI se baat karenge. This is it.

Divya (frowns) : Aur isliye Mike- Mein pareshaan hu. Veer se koi contact nahi hua hai ab tak.

Mike : I hope sab jaldi sort out ho jaaye. Mein aur dekhta hu ma’am. Shayad Veer ke liye aur kuch madad kar sake hum? I owe him after all.

Divya : Thank you Mike! He will surely appreciate it.

Mike (smiles) : That’s the least I can do.

Bolte hue woh waha se mud ke chala gaya. Aur Divya yaha usse bas jaate dekhti rahi. Parantu, dhyaan toh kahi aur hi tha uska.




‘Suhana!! Akhir kaha par ho tum? Mere call ka jawaab kyu nahi de rahi? Waha sab theek toh hai na!?’

***

Hotel Plaza Athenee, Paris
Night - 9 : 11 PM ~




Iss Aalishaan hotel ke ek kamre me wahi baithi hui thi, jisse Divya yaad kar rahi thi.

Suhana!

Uske haatho me ek shirt thi, jisse woh kass ke bheenche hue thi.




Aur mann me kuch ateet ki awaazo se ghiri hui thi woh.

‘Toh? Raat ka kya plan hai? Kahi aur ghoomna hai?’

‘Aaj aap dinner ki party kyu nahi deti!?’

‘Ab dinner party bhi mein hi du? Abhi itni shopping karwaayi mene!’

‘Toh dijiye! Wese bhi! Aapki dinner party sab ko naseeb kaha hoti hai? Look at Nat. Unhe bhi mauka nahi milne wala.’

‘Duh! No way! *smiles* ‘

‘Fine then! Dinner ki party meri taraf se.’

‘Yessssss!!!!!’




Usse ab jaise saare beete pal yaad aa rahe the.

Vegas me bitaaye gaye woh sunehre pal. Dukhad baat ye thi ki woh party dene waala shaks ab uski zindagi se jaa chuka tha.




Aur fir kuch aur bol uske dimaag me goonje,

‘Suhana!!!!! N-Nothing will happen to you!!! Tumhe kuch nahi hoega. Don't worry! Abhi... I'm taking you to hospital. Hold your strength!!!’

‘V-Veer!’

‘Haan?’

‘I-I don't think... I will make it.’

‘Don't talk nonsense! Shut up! You'll be fine!!!’

Ye wahi pal tha aur ye wahi shirt thi.

Jo Veer ne utaar ke uske khoon ko rokne ke liye usse baandhi thi. Na jaane kyu, par Suhana ne uss shirt ko sambhaal ke rakha hua tha.

Hospital waalo ne usse jyo ka tyo rakha tha, kintu hosh me aane ke baad hi Suhana ne dry clean karwa ke woh shirt apne paas rakh li thi.

Jis tann ko ye shirt dhaakti thi, uss tann ka hi ata-pata nahi tha ab.

Woh bejaan si baithi hui thi jab uske kamre ke baahar se Ashita ki awaaz aayi,

Ashita : Suhana! Divya ka call aa raha hai. Mene usse bata diya hai yaha ki situation ke baare me. Kya tum baat nahi karogi uss se?

Magar Suhana ka koi jawaab na aaya. Ashita sab samajh chuki thi ki maajra kya hai. Ek ladke ke na hone se Suhana ka ye haal tha. Woh ladka kitne maayne rakhta tha uske liye?

Iska andaaza woh bhali bhaati laga chuki thi. Lekin, usne khul ke abhi tak ye baat saamne nahi rakhi thi. Suhana ko uski privacy woh de rahi thi. Saath hi ye samay sahi nahi tha.

Woh bina kuch aage kahe Suhana ko yu hi akela chhor chali gayi.




Aur idhar apne aap hi ek aasu ki boond Suhana ke gaal ko bhigo kar kab beh gayi usse pata hi na chala.

Kehte hai na ki uss insaan ki ahamiyat aapko tab pata chalti hai jab woh aapki zindagi se chala jaata hai. Suhana ko itni asahneeya peeda mehsoos hogi ye usne khud bhi kabhi nahi socha tha. Ye dard toh-! Peeth ko chhalni kar dene waali uss bandook ki goli se bhi kahi zyaada tha.

Sabka jaise yahi haal hoke reh gaya tha. Fir chaahe woh Suhana ho, Divya ya fir Ava.

Jo derr raat me akeli ek park me khadi hui thi.




Veer zinda tha. Ye khabar usse notification se pata chali thi.

Jo glaani ka bhaar tha, woh jaise halka ho chuka tha. Par azaad nahi hui thi abhi bhi woh iss bhaar se.

Lekin, Veer ke zinda hone ki khabar ne usse kahi na kahi ek raahat pohuchaayi thi.

‘Veer!!! T-Tum zinda ho-!! Th-This is my chance! Yes!’

Usne apna phone nikaala aur woh apne Twitter handle pe gayi. Kuch likha aur usne woh tweet kar diya.

Pal bhar me hi uske tweet par hazaro views, likes aur comments aane shuru ho gaye.

‘What is this tweet dear Natalia?’

‘As a fan, I still don’t get it. Natalia ye kya hai? Please hume batao.’

‘Natalia it’s okay. Jo hua bhul jao queen. You are safe and that's what matters. You don’t have to think hard on this.’

Ek ek karke comment ki line lag gayi aur uske fans apni apni raay rakhne lage. Kuch ko woh tweet samajh aa raha tha toh kuch ke sarr ke upar se jaa raha tha.

Par uska asli arth koi nahi jaanta tha.

Ava ne ek bhi comment na padha. Usko jo karna tha, woh kar chuki thi.

‘There’s one more thing I have to do. Veer! I hope you see this.'

***

Ye raat yu hi guzar gayi. Agli shaam, Paris se lage hue samundar ke theek upar ek helicopter hawa me mandra raha tha.

DGSI waale Crimson naamak vyakti ke baare me aur jankaari batorne me lag chuke the. Toh wahi aam janta Veer ki photos daalne me peeche nahi hatt rahi thi. Unka vidroh chaalu hi tha.

*Tocococococococo*

Aur yaha Helicopter hawa ko cheerte hue aage tezz gati me badhte jaa raha tha.

Veer uske darwaaze ke pas khada apni nazre neeche gehre samundar par gadaaye hue tha.

Tezz hawao me uske baal lehraate hue idhar-udhar ho rahe the. Iss baar woh yu hi nahi aaya tha. Apne kaam ko anjaam dene waala tha aaj woh. Poori taiyaari ke saath aaya hua tha.

[It's now do or die.]

Pari ki awaaz uske mann me goonji,

'Yeah!'

Saath hi usse Renshu ki kal ki baat yaad aayi,

'Ye mein tumhe de raha hu. Sirf emergency ke liye. Dhyaan rahe, istemaal karne ke baad tumhe isse lautana bhi hoga. Agar tum zinda bache toh. Kyuki, iss baar mein beech me nahi aaunga.'

Uski kahi gayi baat yaad aate hi Veer ka haath apne aap apni kamar pe chala gaya. Ek handgun uski jeans me khusi hui thi. Ye wahi handgun thi jis se Renshu ne Crimson par goli chalaayi thi.

'Agar Renshu mujhe bachana hi chaahta hai toh usne aisa kyu kaha ki ab woh beech me nahi aayega?'

[Master! I think woh chaahta hai ki hum ye mission apne bal boote par kare. Usse andaaza ho gaya hai shayad.]

'I see!'

Renshu ne Veer ki kam se kam 3 baar madad ki thi. Pehli baar jab woh IT building me Crimson dwara maar kha raha tha tab.

Dusri baar jab Ushant Island par Crimson par goli chali thi tab.

Aur teesri baar Veer ko gehre samundar me doobne se bachaate hue uski marham-patti kar kar.

Kahi na kahi jaise Renshu ne ye bhaanp liya tha ki Veer ko,

*Ding*

[Mission : Kill Crimson
Time Limit : 1 day.

Rewards : ???
Mission Failure Penalty : Death.
Location : On the ocean way to the Ushant Island.]

Mission mil chuka tha.

Shayad yahi kaaran tha jo Renshu iss baar beech me nahi kood raha tha.

Aur ye aaj pehli baar tha jo Veer ko mission penalty seedhe maut ki mili hui thi.

'Penalty Death hai, Pari!'

[Yes. Pehli baar hai ye. As I said, it's a do or die situation.]

'Yeah! Aur ek baat, Renshu ne kaha tha ki ek system owner dusre system owner ko check nahi kar sakta.'

[He is right, Master. Ava ko camouflage ki wajah se check kar paaye hum.]

'Lekin, abhi system ne toh mujhe Crimson ka seedhe naam likh ke mission de diya.'

[Yes. Because system ne Crimson ko huge threat ke roop me sweekaar kar liya hai. Basically, jitna do system owners ek dusre ke raaste me aayenge aur ek dusre ke liye adanga banenge, toh utna hi system unhe threat maanta jayega. Aur akhir me-]

'Mission de dega!'

[Yes. Aur uske zariye fir aap uss system owner ka naam jaan sakte ho. But only the name. Nothing else. Check toh aap tab bhi nahi kar paoge.]

'I see! Tumne mujhe ye pehle kyu nahi bataya?’

[Kyuki mujhe nahi pata tha Master ki mere alaawa bhi-]

‘I get it! Toh tumne bhi abhi realize kiya?’

[Yes! I’m still trying to find out some things.]

Veer ki nazar fir apne haath me liye mobile par chali gayi, jisme screen par saaf saaf ek tweet jhalak raha tha.

Aur ye tweet Ava ka hi tha. Jisme likhe tha~

On the way to the Ushant. I couldn’t remember anything.
I have got one more chance. Maybe, I’ll find my answer tomorrow!?

Tweet maamuli sa tha. Lekin sirf aam janta ke liye. Uska asli arth toh kuch aur hi tha. Ek secret message. Jise, Veer turant hi samajh gaya tha.

Ava ne usse Crimson ka pata diya tha.

[This sly woman…! What is she trying to achieve now? Kya chaahti hai ye akhir? Pehle khud hi fasaati hai aur ab khud hi Crimson ki location secretly tweet kar ke bata rahi hai? Master! Kahi ye firse hume fasaa toh nahi rahi-!?]

‘I don’t know, Pari! Magar tweet galat nahi hai. Mission me bhi yahi location aayi hai.’

[Lekin, aap uss par bharosa nahi kar sakte.]

‘Yeah!’

Helicopter Ushant Island ke ab kaafi nazdeek jaa raha tha jab Veer ko samundar me dur kuch roshni chamakti hui nazar aayi. Usne oonchi awaaz me fauran hi pilot ko nirdesh diya,




Veer : Woh raha!!! Helicopter uss orr le chalo! Quick!

Pilot ne haami bharte hue helicopter ke mukh ko uss disha me mod diya.

Dur se hi Veer ko pata lag gaya tha. Ye ek bada sa cruise tha. Cruise me kaun tha, ye bataane ki zaroorat nahi thi.




Shaam dhal chuki thi, cruise apni nirantar gati se Ushant ke Island ki orr badh raha tha. Cruise me sawaar log bhi wahi the. Mask pehne woh insaan ke bhesh me daanav jinhe logo ko marrte hue dekhne me param aanand milta tha.

Weird Fetishes ke gulaam.

Cruise me kam se kam inki sankhya 50 se 80 ke beech ki thi. Aur inme bade se bade millionaire athwa billionaire shaamil the. Yahi toh Crimson ke liye paiso ki thaili the.

Haatho me wine ka glasses liye sabhi madhur sangeet ko enjoy kar ek dusre ki pehchaan chhipaate hue ek dusre se baat karne me lage hue the.

“Aaj Crimson Festival ka akhiri din hai. Show must be grand. Haha!”

Ek aadmi ne apne bagal se khadi mahila se kaha. Dono ke chehro par masks the. Toh mahila ne hasste hue jawaab diya,

“Fufufu~ Oh yes! I wonder aaj kaun si macchli fassi hai. I want to see a young girl though.”

“Ohh! You are a vile one lady.”

“Fufu~ Aaj ki duniya me kaun bhola hai? Bholapann apne aap me paap hai. Let’s enjoy the festival now.”

Toh wahi Cruise ke grand suit me Crimson ek shower leke baahar aaya tha. Uske theek peeche Sweetie khadi hui thi.



Sweetie : Ab kya?

Crimson : Ab kya? Ab hi toh saara khel hona hai. Ek plan bigad chuka hai. Ye dusra nahi bigadna chahiye.

Sweetie : Tum karne kya waale ho ab? Tumne sabhi logo ko invite kiya hai lekin maut ke muh me dhakelne ke liye toh ek bhi insaan nahi hai festival me. Kise maarne waale ho akhir?

Crimson ek ajeeb si muskaan liye use dekha. Toh Sweetie bhaybheet hoke do qadam peeche ho gayi.

Sweetie : K-Kahi tum-?

Crimson : Ohhh! Darr gayi kya? Darro nahi my sweetie. Tumhe thodi maut ke ghaat utaarunga. You are my special one after all!!

Sweetie (frowns) : What’s your plan?

Crimson : Tumhe jaanane ki zaroorat nahi. Just do what I ask you to do.

Bina kuch kahe Sweetie waha se palat ke baahar nikal gayi. Woh khud Crimson ke plan se anjaan thi.

Kintu, Crimson khud ek baat se anjaan tha. Aur woh thi-

“Lower the rope!”

Veer ki awaaz sunn agle hi shan pilot ne rope neeche kar di. Raat lag chuki thi.




Aur Veer ne bina koi samay gawaate hue rope ka sahaara liya aur woh seedha Cruise ke upar kood gaya.

“CRIIIMSOOOOOONNNNN!!!”

Veer ki dahaad uss poore ilaake me fel gayi. Jaise jaise Veer upar se neeche gir raha tha, hawaao ki awaaz uske kaano me jaa rahi thi.

*BOOOOOOOOOMMMMM*

Uske Cruise pe girte hi flooring par poori kampan ki lehre daud gayi. Chehre par usne bhi ek kaala mask lagaaya hua tha. Aur uski peni nazar baaj ki tarah apne shikaar ko dhoondhne me lagi hui thi. Usne iss antraal me waha khade kuch logo ko bhi check kar liya tha.

Veer ke achanak iss tarah aate hi waha logo me shor mach gaya.

“Wh-What? Wh-Who is he?”

“Ahn! H-Hey who are you?”

“U-Upar dekho! Helicopter!”

“K-Kahi ye police ka toh nahi? Shit!”

Veer ki maujoodgi ne unhe chintan me daal diya. Aur udhar Grand suite ke andar Crimson ki aankhein woh awaaz sunn agle hi pal hairaani ke maare fel gayi.

[No running away this time. We are going loud and clear, Master.]

Pari poori tarah se focused thi. Usme bhi jaise ek ubaal macha hua tha.

*Ding*

[Mission location updated.]

[Location : Inside the Grand Suite.]

Veer aas-paas khade logo ko hawa ki tarah ignore karte hue apne lakshya ki orr aage badha. Uski raftaar itni tezz thi ki log bhaybheet hoke uss se dur hatt gaye.

*BAAAMMMMM*

Grand suite ka darwaaza chithdo me tootate hue udd gaya. Crimson ne palat ke dekha toh usne dastak di hui thi~

Veer!!!

Lekin, sirf Crimson hi hairaan nahi tha. Veer Crimson ko dekh utna hi stabdh tha.

Veer : Y-You!!!

[Th-That’s-]

Pari bhi bhauchakki thi. Crimson! Uska haath-!!!




Ekdum sahi tha. Veer ko jaise ek jhatka laga. Usne toh Crimson ka haath kaat diya tha par yaha toh-

[Ahnnnn!!!]

Pari ki ghabrahat bhari awaaz uske andar goonji.

‘P-Pari!!!’

[M-Master-! H-He!]

Aur agle hi shan Pari ne apni kehne waali baat ko Veer ke mann me screen ke saamne prastut kar diya,

*Ding*




‘That can’t be-’

Veer ko ek bohut bada maansik dhakka laga. Limb Substitution!?

‘Y-Ye kaise possible hai?’

[This bastard-!! Isliye isne apna haath ka balidaan diya tha Master. He knew he could fix it later. Aur aisa karne ke liye isne zaroor-]

‘??’

[Kisi aur aadmi ka haath kaata.]

Veer ke badan me raungte khade ho gaye.

Limb Substitution! Ek aisa card jo shareer ke ango ko replace karne ki shamta rakhta tha.

Condition sirf yahi thi ki ukhade hue ang ko teen din ke andar lagana zaroori hota tha. Aur jis insaan se ukhda hua ang le rahe ho, uska gender samaan hona chahiye.

Crimson ne zaahir hai kisi aadmi ka haath ukhaad ke lagaaya tha. Baaki kaam Card ne apne aap kar diya tha.

Blood transfusion se leke, sensory nerves ka aapas me judna, naye ang ko Crimson ke puraane haath ke akaar me tabdeel karne me bas ek hi hafta lagna tha. Aur waapas se woh apne poore shape me aa chuka tha.

Limb Substitution! One of the strongest cards in the entire system. Beowulf’s Blessings ki tarah.

Veer apne shock se abhi baahar nahi aaya tha jab tabhi,

“Hahahahahahaha~”

Crimson ki zorr se hassne ki awaaz uske kaano me padi.

Crimson : Ohh Veer! Mein yaha tumhare marrne ke gham me dooba hua tha. Aur mera shikaar, ek baar fir chal ke mere paas khud-ba-khud hi aa gaya. Hahahahaha! Madness!! Pure madness! I love it!! Hahahahaha!

Veer (frowns) : I know everything now!! It was you!!

Crimson (smiles creepily) : Oh yes! Yes! It was me, all along!! I was there! The whole time!

Veer : This time-!! I’ll put an end to your existence.

Aur tabhi, Crimson jis notification ka intezaar kar raha tha use, woh mil hi gaya.

*Ding*

[Mission possibility has reached 100%]

[Mission : Kill Veer.
Time Limit : 1 Day.
Rewards : ???
Mission Failure Penalty : Death.]

Uske hontho par ek khaufnaak muskaan sajj gayi.

Veer ne ek jhatke me apni kamar me khusi hui handgun nikaali aur aim kiya hi tha ki,

*Whoosh*

Crimson bhayanak gati me uski orr lapka.

*Ding*

HAWKEYE!

*BANG*

Veer ki fire ki gayi bullet Crimson ki gardan ke bagal se nikli aur peeche wooden deewaar me jaake dhass gayi.

[HE DODGED IT AGAIN!!!]

Pari achanak cheenkhi. Woh sab kuch identify karti jaa rahi thi siwae Crimson ki uss dodging skills ke. Akhir, Crimson aisa kya istemaal kar raha tha?

Crimson ke chehre par ek haiwaano waali muskuraahat thi. Veer zinda tha. Uski khushi ka koi thikaana nahi tha.

Daudte hue asaadharan raftaar me woh Veer ke nazdeek aaya,

*Wh-tch*

Ek jhatke me uske haath me combat knife ungliyo me golaayi khaate hue pakad me aayi.

[Dodge!]

*Ding*

[Beowulf’s Blessings has been activated.]

Veer ki aankhon laal hui aur woh turant hi jhuka.

*Swoosh*

Crimson ki combat knife uske kuch baalo ko aadhe centimeter tak kaat ke nikli.

Veer ne agle hi shan neeche baithate hue laat se Crimson ko giraane ka prayatn kiya. Par Crimson hawa me kood chuka tha,

Aur uske koodate hi, Veer ke hontho par ek muskaan felti gayi.

Ye bilkul IT building me uss ladaayi ki tarah tha. Yahi tab bhi hua tha.

‘Not this time!’

Waqt jaise tham gaya tha. Veer ki daayi laat agle hi shan apni disha badli aur-

*BAAAAMMMMMMM*

Crimson ke seene me jaake lagi. Woh kisi kati patang ki tarah hawa me dur jaa ke kamre ke deewaar me bhid gaya.

Aur itni awaaz se saare cruise me maujood log ghabra uthe. Gunshot ki awaaz unn sab tak pohuch gayi thi. Veer aur Crimson ki choti si bhidant ne poore Cruise ko hila ke rakh diya tha.

Logo me afra-tafri mach gayi. Jo log dusri ki maut dekhne aate the. Aaj woh khud apni maut ke baare me sunn darr ke maare bheegi billi ki tarah bhaag rahe the.

Par kaha bhaagte akhir?

“C-Cruise me- Cruise me spare rescue boats nahi hai!!! Hum sab maare jayenge!!”

“Whaaaatttt? Where is the party host??? Hume yaha se baahar nikaalo abhi ke abhi!!”

“Hide!! Hide!!”

“Spare boats dhundho jaldi!! W-Warna hum sab maare jayenge.”

“Ahh! Cruise me koi ghuspaithiya aa gaya hai!! Captain ko khabar pohuchao!”

Woh nihatthe bhed bakriyo ki tarah apni jaan bachaane ke liye aatur the.

“VEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRR!!!”

Crimson aag baboola aur saath hi bhaari uttejna me hawa me kayi feet uchakte hue Veer par toot pada.

*BOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMM*

Grand Suite ki lakdi ki flooring toot ke bikhri aur dono neeche jaa gire.

Mukko aur laato ki barsaat jaari thi. Crimson ka ek punch jab Veer ki pasli me aane ke liye hua toh Veer ne na sirf usse deflect kiya balki apne haath se uske haath me golaayi fira ke aage le jaake seedhe uske gale ko jakad liya.

“Gwakh!!”

Aur agle hi pal,

“Haaaarrrrrgghhhh!!”

Crimson ka shareer hawa me utha aur usse zorr se floor par patak diya gaya. Ye ek chokeslam tha. Ek baar fir woh dono uss cabin ki flooring se gir ke neeche pohuch gaye.

[Hum lower decks me hai. This is the engine room, Master. Careful!]




Pari ne Veer ko sachet kiya. Veer ne apne aas-paas ka jayza liya.

[You can hear the sound. Engines bohut awaaz karte hai. Beowulf se aapke senses bohut zyada sensitive hai. Engine sound exceeds 173 decibels. Unhe nuksaan se bachaane ke liye, I’ll keep your hearing senses in control.]

‘Alright!’

Veer ne hearing senses ko Pari par chhor diya.

"You shouldn't turn your back towards your enemy, Veer!"

Ek khaufnaak awaaz theek Veer ke kandhe ke peeche se aayi. Chand second ke liye hi usne Crimson se apna dhyaan hataaya tha, apni environment ka jaayza lene ke liya parantu,

'Shit!'

Woh muda aur ek zordaar laat uske pait me aake padi. Iss baar Veer ka khud ka shareer hawa me udte hue engine room me jaa ghusa.




Engines ki teevr awaaz Veer ke kaano me padi, par Pari apna kaam pe lag chuki thi.

Aur fir shuru hui, ek aur ghamasaan ladaayi.

Crimson aur Veer, dono bina koi parvaah kiye ek dusre se ladd rahe the. Veer ke dimaag me kahi na kahi apne environment ka khayaal baitha hua tha.

"Mujhse bhidega tu?? Mujhse?? Haan!!? Tujhe pata nahi…!? VVeerrr?? Hhuhh?? Mein woh hu jis se qismat khud darrti- urrrghh!"

Ek upper cut aake seedhe uski thuddi par laga.

Veer pehle se kayi guna takatwar tha. Crimson hairaan zaroor tha par utna hi utsaahit bhi.

"You fucker-!!!"

Usne Veer ka haath jakda aur engine room me lagi ek machinery me itni zorr se ghuseda ki Veer ka haath machine ke metal ko cheerte hue andar ghuss gaya.

'Shit!!'

Crimson uspe agla waar karta ki Veer ne use kick se dur dhakel diya.

Veer ka haath buri tarah fass chuka tha.

[Maaaasttteeerrr-!!!]

Bina use abnormal angle me rotate kare woh itne kam samay me baahar nahi aane waala tha.

Par Veer toh aaj jaise apne aap par bhi kroor tha.

*Ding*

LIMBO!!

[Master you-!!!]

Pari bhauchakki reh gayi.

Veer ne Limbo apne hi upar istemaal kar li thi.

Uska haath ek ajeeb se angle me muda. Atyant hi dard uske poore haath me fela. Kintu, ye sirf kuch lamho ke liye tha.

Haath ko rotate karte hi haath araam se baahar aa gaya. Aur turant hi,

*Ding*

LIMBO

Usne punaah apne upar Limbo istemaal kar apna haath theek kar liya.

Pari surprised thi. Woh chaunki hui thi. Limbo ko apne hi upar iss prakaar se bhi istemaal kiya jaa sakta tha?

Veer ka dimaag kis raftaar me kaam kar raha tha ye woh jaanti thi. Sab kuch chand seconds me hua tha.

Udhar Crimson Veer ki kick se khud ki fall se utha tha aur idhar Veer ne apna haath nikaal liya tha.

Itni speed me hua tha sab kuch.

[Master!]

Andar hi andar Pari gadgad ho uthi. Apne Master pe use bada hi garv ho raha tha.

Crimson : Ohh! You've become powerful indeed. But not more than me-

Uski aankhon me jhaakte hi agle hi pal Veer ka santulan bigda,

[It's there! Vertigo!]

Crimson mauke ka fayda uthaate hue uski taraf bhaagte hue aaya,

Aur tabhi Veer ne khud ke shareer ko hawa me peeche ucchaal diya.

Crimson : !!!??

Vertigo! Disorientation fela ke qadmo me lad-khadahat paida karti thi.

Aur isliye Veer ne khud ko hawa me uchhaal diya tha. Jab qadam hi zameen par nahi rahenge toh ladkhada ke kaise gir payega woh?

Par Crimson bhi smart tha. Back hand spring maarte hue jaise hi Veer ka haath zameen par tika,

Vertigo!!!

Ek baar fir Crimson ne Vertigo istemaal kar dii-

Veer ka shareer disbalance hua aur iss baar woh kohni ke bal gira.

Crimson ko uska mauka mil chuka tha.

Punaah, woh ek dusre ke upar toot pade.

Dekhte hi dekhte unn dono ne poore engine room me itna destruction fela diya ki unn engines me se ek engine explode hone ki kagaar par aa chuka tha.

Aur woh samay bhi kuch hi seconds me aa gaya jab Crimson seedha Engine par jaa ke gira.

'Shit!'

Khud ko bachaane ke liye woh turant hi waha se hata.

Aur-

*Boooooooooooooooommm*

Ek itna tezz dhamaaka hua ki engine room ke andar sab ast vyast ho gaya.

Par ye toh kuch bhi nahi tha. Ek engine se hi baaki engines lage hue the.

Aag ki lapte jaise hi agle engine ko apne aaghosh me li,

Dhamaako ki ladi lag gayi. Ek ek karke saare engines dhamaake ke saath udne lage. Engine room ke hi poore pharchatte udd chuke the.

Upri deck par kohraam macha hua tha. Kuch toh bhay ke maare apne hosh kho chuke the.

Kya hota hai agar aap ek badi si chhadi ke beech me ek daraar paida kar de.

Woh kabhi na kabhi chatak jaati hai.

Theek wese hi, itne dhamaako ke baad cruise ke lower mid hisse me daraar fel gayi.

Aur itna bada cruise do tukdo me tootne laga.

Log jaanvaro ki tarah idhar udhar bhaagne lage. Veer aur Crimson dhamaake ke chalte engine room se baahar ki orr fik chuke the.

Baahri deck par aate hi unki ladaayi firse shuru ho chuki thi.

Aur iss baar, saari janta ke samaksh woh ek dusre ko ghaayal karne me lage hue the.

Aam janta ke hosh udd chuke the. Kyuki woh jo dekh rahe the, aisa drishya unn sabhi ne pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha.

Deck ke neeche hote hi samundar cruise ko apne me samaane laga.




Paani tezzi se poore deck me ghusne laga. Lower decks me jab paani ghusa toh Cruise me jagmag jagmag jalti hui lights achanak hi band hone lagi.




"Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!"

"H-Help!!!!"

"Run! Run! Search for the safety boat!!"

Sweetie jo inhi me se ek thi. Woh ghabra ke seedhe ek vault ki orr bhaagi. Ek safety boat waha maujood thi.

Aur idhar Veer-

[Maaaaassstttteerrrr!!!]

*Splash*

Uska shareer gehre samundar me jaa gira. Sateh par aate hi, uski nazre Crimson par tik gayi jo cruise se chhalaang maar khud paani me aa chuka tha.

Aur upar khule aasmaan me woh chamak raha tha.




'It's your unlucky day Crimson!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update consists of 4.6k words. Aane waale 4 updates me se koi ek mega update aa sakta hai. Mein ye dene nahi waala tha, but this update got late. So, take it as a compensation from my side. Also, ghar par thoda renovation chal raha hai ek room ka. I'll be busy. Likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target same hai. 150.
Dhanyavaad!

 

[Werewolf]

Awesome update

Awesome update. To ab 18 hi systemdhari bache hai. Unke bachane ke liye hi veer VEER Bana hai. Awesome again.

Best story guru ab aaya ga asli maza

Mera ek guess to sahi nikla ki wo planer veer ko marne nahi dega kisi na kisi ko veer ko bachane jarur bhejega....

Masaallah

Ding 18 system alive

Maza Aagaya bro sahi salamt veer ko dekh ke matlab ab renshu kuch alag skill aur training dega veer ko nice update bro late aaya lekin durust aaya matlab agle update se dubara dhamal hone wala hai
Apka story padhne ka yahi to maza hai sala her bar next update ki ichha bhyanak jag jati hai 3 din waiting bahut lambi lagne lag jati hai .....
But superrr yar you are awesome..................
...........thanks

Nice update janab

Superb update sir g

Yesss nice update
Veer hunt ke liye nikalega par family ke liye ye khatra ban sakta hai
OMG 30 system owners aur 18 bache hai ab, abhi tak toh sirf 6 ka hee pta laga hai. 12 bache hai na jaane kon-kon nikalega system owner.
Ye Renshu banda kaafi theek laga ab dekho kaise madat krta hai Veer ki shayad chinatown arc mei bhi iska hissa hoga
Aur ye caller jo bhi hai ye shayad galat insan nhi hai aur hai bhi toh poori tarah se galat nhi hai.

At last mujhe lagta hai Veer Crimson ko marega nhi, saza dega uske kaam ki, par shayad use apne sath mila le kyuki usne ne bewajah hee sab kiya tha uski koi dushmani nhi hai Veer se aur ye Crimson mujhe ek villain character nhi lagta kaam galat krta h par villain nhi.(ye sirf ek soch hai meri sochne ka kuch nhi lagta )

Kyaaa hi kehnaa iss update ke baare mein. Yeh system koi mamuli chizz nhi hai. Pure sansaar mein 30 logo ke paas system thaa jinme se sirf 18 bache hai. Baaki sab marr gaye yaa maar diye gaye. Agar aisa hi hai toh unhe kisne maara. Kyaa uss Mr. X ne maara yaa phir koi aur hi hai innsab ke peeche.

Idher uss Renshu ne bataya ke abhi bhi 18 jan hai jinke paas system hai. 4 se toh humlog waakif hai. Matlab abhi bhi 14 jan aur aise hai jinke paas system hai. Mujhe aisa kyaa lag raha hai jaise Veer inn sabhi logo se ek baar toh milegaa.


Ab dekhte hai Veer kyaa karta hai. Kyaa woh Ava ki majburi samjhega.

Mahol bna diya bhai maja hin agya ab sab smjh a raha hai death flag ka meaning bhi clear ho gya

Sandar update bhai jabadast veer jhinda he or koi he mastar maind jo sabke sath khel raha he lekin veer ab action mod me aagaya he lagta he gaddaro ki lagne vali he or bhai Eva se esa badla Lena he ki vo kabhi bhi bhul na paye

veer bapach aa gawa ab dusmano ki khair na hai Ava ko sabak sikhana hai tukra ke mera pyaar mera intkaam dekhegi

Ufff... outstanding update... what a concept... so many secrets unveiled...
Fight between life and death, Camouflage skill, Death Flag Skill, Stopping of heartbeats, 18 more systems, no system owner can know about other system, the main player (phone wala), Emotional scene of Veer's family, itna sab kuch ek hi update mein, hats off to you. Detail me baad me dunga.

behad hi romanchak update
kya ab veer ava se badla lega ya pehle crimson se?

Thoda time laga per must say wonderful update. Now keenly waiting for next

Awesome update

Excellent update

update padhkar inna khus hun mai ki turant dusra update mangne ko dil karta hai lekin ye mumkin nai hai janta hun..agle update ka siddat se intzaar hai

Der aya durst aya

Loved the update!!!

Super update bro

Awesome Update.

As Always Awesome Update
Waiting for Veer's Revenge
The Lion is going on a hunt
Can't wait for next update

bahut he mast update tha veer ke come back ka iss update main yeh to pata lag gaya ki veer kaise bacha, but kuch points hints bhi de diya aapne jaise koi unknown X hai jo yeh sab game khel raha hai aur veer ko bacha bhi raha hai(sayaed wo yeh chahata hai ki veer ko dhero points mile aur tab woh veer ko mare chinatown arc main i guess) ek aur points ki 18 aur hai system wale veer, crimson, Mr X, ava,jail se bhaga kaidi,renshu 6 toh pata chal gaya aage aur bhi aayenge! Veer ki mom bhavna ko veer ki chinta ho rahi the, but wo chinta veer ne call karke dur kar di aap ne har angle se update ko cover kiya hai, agle update main kai action scenes ki apekcha haieagarly waiting for next update

I do not have word for the praise it really exceed my expectations...matlab waowww.....
Bhai tusee Great Hooo...

बवाल अपडेट दिए हो भैय्याजी...अबतक जो सिस्टम की नॉलेज सीमित थी, वो इस एक अपडेट ने बहोत बढ़ाई है....
जितने ज्यादा सिस्टम धारी होंगे उतना ही ज्यादा भौकाल होगा....चायनाटाउन आर्क की नींव भी आपने रख दी....
मि.एक्स के बारे में अभी भी गहरा राज बना हुआ है...
शायद उसका मकसद दुनिया मे अकेला सिस्टमधारी बनने का हो सकता है...जब कोई सिस्टमधारी बचेगा ही नही तब वो बेखौफ दुनिया पे राज कर सकता है...या फिर उसे वीर की सिस्टम चाहिए होगी जो अपनेआप में unique होगी..परी की केअर और मास्टर के प्रति सम्पूर्ण समर्पण तो हम देख ही चुके हैं।
हम तो केवल अटकले ही लगा सकते है...हर एक कि अपनी फैन थिअरी होती है...आप ने कहानी में कोई भी लूपहोल्स नही छोड़े है , ये बात बड़ी ही क़ाबिले तारीफ है। मेरी नज़र में आप बेहतरीन लेखक हो आप को चेतन भगत की तरह थ्रिलर जोनरा में उपन्यास लिखने का प्रयास करना चाहिए...
इस बार तो अपडेट का इंतजार करते करते हमारी जान सुख गई थी...लेकिन अपडेट पढ़ने के बाद हमारी थोड़ी बहुत नाराजी रही होगी वो पल भर में धुँवा हो गई...अगले अपडेट की प्रतीक्षा रहेगी...

What a master piece planning Werewolf bhai.
Hat's off to you for such a marvelous update...

Wonderful update ....
The king is ready to Hunt ...........

Bro mind blowing updated bro aapke ₹3000 peg pura karne ki shubhkamnaen bro

Super update sir
Veer is back

Boss....you are great....Aaj ka update repeat m padne layak hai...itne sare secrets...Veer k sath sath hm v hang ho gaye......

Why Veer's system got an update and from where he got the points which was enough to cover 2500 negative ones. Also is the kaera mission completed and thus he recieved the points?

Kai bat nahi Bhai hota he kabhi kabhi Aap sirf update ese hi Badhiya Mast aur lajawab dete rahiye

Keep going and Keep enjoying us

Ek number update he bhai

Maza he aagaya update padh ke

Aur ek baar

Congratulations for completing 3k pages on this forum

Fantastic mind-blowing update

You've redefined the heights of Interconnection and planning! You've done it many times in the story, but this one has blown me away completely.

Keep going and Keep enjoying us

Shandar jandar update bhai......

To Chinese Man Ke anusar kul 30 log system Dhari Hain jinmen se 12 Logon Ki Maut ho chuki hai...

Ine bache 18 Logon mein vah mister X bhi hai jo ine Sabko direct kar raha hai as a master?

Mera bus ek anuman hai jaise ki Crimson Veer ko marne ke liye 100% ka vate kar raha tha...ta ki system ke dwara use mission mil sake Veer ko marne ke liye aur vah Khud Ko upgrade kar sake....
Theek ISI Tarah mister x vi Veer ko upgrade hota hua dekhna chahta hai Taki vah use bad Mein hunt kar sake Khud Ko upgrade karne ke liye Kyunki Dushman Jitna majbut hoga points utane hi jyada Milenge....may be

Incredible maja aa gya to is duniya me kul 30 system hai jinme 18 bache hain aur Veer ko ek system owner ne bachaya hai ise bhi us phone call wale ne lagaya hai ye ranshu kanhi Chinatown arc se related to nhi hai wating for next Update

Behtreen dhamakedar update

WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW
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THATA VERY AMAZING UPDATE BRO MANNA PDEGA BHOT KHOOB SUSPENSE LIKHA BRO
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VERY WELL BRO
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VERY WELL
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KEEP IT UP BRO
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STILL WAITING NEXT VEER REVENGE

अदभुत अंक

Mind blowing…superb…

Shaandaar

Very very good update now back ground run is complete and next update will be a super fighting update

Wonderful update bhai

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and awesome update....

Nice super update bhai
Aab bajega band crimson bhaiya ka. Aur veer mast pelega sabhi dekhne me aayega maza. Waiting bhai abhi se for your next update.....m

3000 pages poore hone par dher sari badhaiyan aur shubhkamanaye....

Zabardast update

Super bro ... Maza aagya

Bhot he Shaandaar update bhai maza aa gaeya.
Ab pata chaley ga Ava ko k kaisey shikari khud shikaar hota hai. Ab dekhna ye hai k hmara sher shikaar kesey krta hai ....... keep it up bro good luck .......

Super fantastic update bro
Congratulations for completing 3000 pages

Zakkaaaaaaaas..................
VEER is back " BADSAH " can never die. The good person should be saved by God.

super update bro

Sandar Jandar ek dum jhakas update
Baki to intjar hi hai agle update ka
Dekhte hai kab pura hoga aur age kya hota hai

Fabulous update apne hero hi mar jata to ye story ka kya hota
Abhi to use system ke bare me bahut kuch janna hai Abhi bahut kuch hai
Lage raho bhai ji update thora jaldi diya karo ..

Mast update Bhai ji maja a Gaya

Werewolf ....Nice update

1. Veer
2. Crimson
3. Ava
4. Renshu
5. Mr. X
6. Unknown Jail wala



12 system aana baki story mein ...

Zabardast update bhai

dost apki update ja jawab nae hota aesa twist laty ho ky maaza aa jata hye

Fantastic zabardast update

Kya baat hai mitr, Veer to bazigar nikla.

Mind-blowing awesome jabardast.....sabkuch pata chala kaise veer bacha...aur kitani system hai aur ye khel ka ek mastermind bhi hai Jo santulan bana ke rakhata hai....aage maza aayega thanks Werewolf

Update is excellent as always..
But aisa kese k ek system itna ingenious hone k bawajud bhi dosre system ko detect karna to door magar uski knowledge tak nahi k dosre systems bhi exist karte hain?

Superb update

Nice update

DING!!

Welcome to system multiverse

Bhai sab thik but the main female lead must be suhana she is the one who truly cares for veer and helps him supports him and she is really ....I don't have words but it's a request ki crimson arc khatam hone se pahele plzzz make veer realize that suhana should always be by his side

इस अपडेट के बाद सभी बातें क्लियर हो गईं, आखिर उस रात क्या क्या हुआ वीर के साथ..!! आखिर क्यों अवा के डेथ फ्लैग में लिख कर आया टारगेट इज डेड..!!
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एक नए सिस्टम की एंट्री हुई जिसने जान बचाई वीर की... और यही उसका कर्म है...!!!
अच्छे लोगों की या अच्छे सिस्टम की जान बचाना...!!!
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करेंट में टोटल 18 सिस्टम वर्क कर रहे...
हम कितनो को जानते हैं ???
1 वीर, 2 अवा, 3 क्रिमसन, 4 रेंशु, 5 कॉल करने वाला....!!!! ( कॉल करने वाले के बारे में हम ज्यादा कुछ नहीं जानते... नाम भी सिर्फ X, जो रेंशु ने दिया)

बाकी 13 सिस्टम और कौन कौन है उनके बारे में देखना होगा..!!!
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एक नई बात इस सिस्टम से पता लगी... सिस्टम धारी एक दूसरे की जानकारी प्राप्त नहीं कर सकते...!!!
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वीर की फैमिली को भी जानकारी मिल गई वीर के मरने की... और फिर जिंदा होने की भी.... थैंक गॉड वीर जिंदा है...

कुल मिला कर सारे डाउट क्लियर ही समझो...
पर अब 18 सिस्टम में से 13 सिस्टम के बारे में जानने की जल्दी है हमे...
क्या 2 सिस्टम की स्किल सेम भी हो सकती हैं ?
क्या अभी की स्किल अलग अलग होंगी..??
क्योंकि अभी तक किसी की स्किल सेम नही दिखी...!!!

वेटिंग फॉर नेक्स्ट

Mind blowing zabardast update diya aapne bhai. Dekhte hai aage veer kya karta hai

Nidhi and suhana should be the lead female protagonist

Mast yaar akhir veer apne jabardast form mai wapas aa gaya hai

bahut badhiya update hai..........to renshu ne veer ko bachaya tha........ or pari ne uske hearthbit ko rok ke ava ko wrong information diya hai.......or ab dekhte hai kaise veer revange leta hai....or sab ko veer jinda hai ye bat pata chal geyi ghar me.......or aage kya hota hai dekhte hai,,,,,,,,
bhaio like to 150 ke uper ho geya hai......update kab aara hai.....
waiting for next update

nice update .veer kaise bacha ye pata chal gaya ,renshu shayad wahi aadmi hai jo jail se bhaga tha ..aur usne hi madad ki veer ki .
pari ne sab samjha diya veer ko aur renshu ke system e baare me ..
paris me aaye huye logo se baat kar li veer ne aur bata diya ki wo safe hai .

Har bar ki trah bohot hi zabardast update...
Veer is back...... Usseey aana hi tha ..hero hai woh agar na aata toh itni mast kahani kidr jaati.... Veer ka aana or bhi bohot kuch laya hai sath mein ..or system ka sansar bhi.... Mr.X... kya eohi sabko chala raha hai.... Mr x ka shikar veer ..usne khud apne liya bachaya hai.... Ava ... Ava ko veer ke bachna ki khushi ja Darr.... ..abhi bohot Raita faila huya hai... Ik mast c update dekr sbb samet lo.... Dil gardan gardan ho jaata hai har update ke sath bhai.... Update ka intezar hai ki chalta rehta hai...

Very nice update Bhai

Nice update

Great update, kafi kuch clear ho gya hay

Congrats for 3000 pages

So first of all sorry itne dino baad comment karne ke liye kuch zarori kaamo ke karan time nhi mil raha tha but ab dubara se life track pe agai he to ab time to time reviews dunga,

To ab baat kar lete he update ki update 144 pe review nhi de saka to yahi pe us ka bhi review de deta hu,
To update 144 kamal tha har bar ki trha suhana ka ava se veer ke bare me pochna aur suhana ka veer ki maut ki khabar sun ke behosh hojana veer ki family bhi paris pohach gai he aisa na ho ke ab un ki jaan ko bhi khatra ho waha aane se,
Baqi sb se ziyada khushi veer ko zinda aur sahi dekh ke hui,
Ab aate he update 145 pe,
To bhai speechless kar diya he aapne kiya hi bole hum kuch aur soch ke bethe huye the aur aap ne us se bhi ziyada acha kar diya hum soch rahe the ke system ki koi skill ya pari use bachaye gi but system ne bachaya to but veer ke nhi kisi aur ke system ne,
Ye renshu naam ka banda kafi interesting lag rha he is ki skills aur experience bhi 1 alag level ki lag rahi he,
To finally hume pata chal gaya ke veer kese bacha aur kafi aur raaz bhi khul gaye he jese crimson pe goli chalne wala banda bhi renshu hi tha aur kuch batein unknown caller ke bare me bhi pata chali he ye bhi pata chala ke total 30 system the ab 18 bache he jis me se 6 to hume dekh gaye he baqi ke 12 kaha he kuch nhi pata,
Mujhe aisa kyu lag raha he ke aap ne ye sare system ki jankari di he to koi na koi to waja hogi is ke peche maybe hume aur system aage dekhne ko mile?
Baqi ab ava ko pata chal gaya he ke veer zinda he aur pari ne veer ko rasta bhi dekha diya he ke kiya karna he aur veer bhi nikal gaya he apne shikar pe,
Pari aur veer ki understanding aur bhi ziyada achi hoti ja rahi he 2no 1 dusre ki batein foran samjh rahe he pari ka intelligence aur focus aur bhi acha hogya he wo foran se har cheez ko process kar rahi he,
Ab aage dekhna ye he ke veer kese crimson ko harata he aur ava ko kiya saza deta he aur us unknown caller ka akhir kiya plan he sawal to buhat he abhi bhi but suspense me hi maza he,
Ab sath bana rahe ga aur agle update ka intezar rahe ga wese target pura hogya he 150 likes ka bro likhna shuru kar do
Baqi aap ki writing skills ke bare me to kiya hi kahe har bar ki trha amazing th specially starting ki wo lines to gazab thi bhaaya keep it up bro,
Lot's of love and respect

New updates padh kar yeh lag rha hai ki Veer ka system uski zyada care krta hai baaki sabse, jaise Veer usko treat krta hai achche se vaise hee Pari ka bhi Veer ke liye boht achcha svabhav hai aur uska Ava ke liye gussa ye darshata bhi hai..
Baaki Crimson ka system uske prati thoda rukha lagta hai.

Jalawab update

Lajawab update bhai ......

Veer zinda hai or pari bhi sath hai..
Khair veer ki halat abhi thik nahi hai par Beowulf ka use karke jaldi hi thik ho jayega..

Veer ki maa or behno ko news dikh hi gay thi or unki jaan halak me aa gay thi thik usi waqt veer ka call aa gaya sab thik ho gaya.

Superb update bhai

Interesting update

Protecter is op kese bachega veer ye soch ke dimag kharab tha lekin pari ne akhir me apni samaj dikha ke veer ko ava ki najaro se bachaya Or reyansu ne veer ki madad ki
To veer age jake system wale bando ka rakshak banega
Awesome bro i am always admire you

Hello Mr update aap ne 2 din let diya hai ab bataye next update kab Tak aayega? I hope next update time per aaye aur ha zabardast update hai yaar superb

इस अपडेट से काफी कुछ साफ हो गया की उस रात क्या हुआ कैसे हुआ था। जैसे जैसे arc अंतिम चरणों में है system से related बहुत कुछ साफ हो रहा है

अभी कुल 18 सिस्टम धारक है जिनमें से 6 अब तक इस कहानी ने entry ले चुके है प्रत्यक्ष या अप्रत्यक्ष रूप से
6(वीर,ava, crimson,mr.x, renshu और वो जेल वाला कैदी) इसमें से अभी तक के हिसाब से 3 सिस्टम से वीर को कोई खतरा नहीं है 1. उसका खुद का 2. Ava का 3. Renshu का,
although इस कहानी को अभी तक पढ़ने के बाद ये कह सकता हूं की first apperance से किसी की personality का अंदाजा नहीं लगाना चाहिए, क्या पता renshu भी आगे खतरा निकल जाए।

खैर अगला arc chinatown arc है और जिस हिसाब से renshu chinese में बात कर रहा था, कही ना कही ये हिंट दे गया की इस छोटे apperance में उसने अगले arc की नीव रख दी है। renshu के अहसान को पूरा करने के लिए वीर जरूर जायेगा, क्योंकि देखा जाए तो renshu ने उसकी एक नही 3 बार जान बचाई है एक बार dgci से, एक बार allay में गोली चला कर और एक बार crimson को करीब से गोली चला कर तो वीर को चाहे ये ही क्यों ना मालूम हो की फिर से धोखा हो सकता है, वो अहशान तो उतारने जरूर जायेगा because that's what real hero's do

Ava that bitch, though जब से इस बात का पता चला है की वो अपनी मां को बचाने के लिए ये सब कर रही थी तब से थोड़ा गुस्सा उसके लिए कम हुआ है लेकिन इतना ही भी कम नहीं हुआ की माफ कर दिया जाए, पूरे प्लान में वो crimson की बराबर की भागीदार थी। वो तब से उसे फास रही थी जब उसने पहली बार देखा था। यदि सिर्फ पेरिस आने के बाद ही मिली होती तो समझ आता लेकिन इतने दिन एक एक प्लान को इतने अच्छे से execute करना, अगर वीर को concert वाली रात ही सब कुछ बता दिया होता तो situation शायद कुछ और होती। वैसे personally मुझे अभी तक जिस system की जानकारी है उसमे ava का system सबसे कमजोर लगा है। खैर ava ने गलती नही की धोखा दिया गलती होती यदि उसे कुछ न मालूम होता तो इसकी सजा भी मिलनी चाहिए।

At least मैं तो ava के शरीर से उतना ही दर्द और खून निकलते देखना चाहूंगा जितना वीर के शरीर से उसकी वजह से निकला है। एक बात और की वीर की जिंदगी में बस वीर के पास ही सिस्टम हो तो ही अच्छा लगेगा, ava के पास सिस्टम हो और वो वीर के हरम में रहे तो ये थोड़ा awkward moment होगा so i hope कुछ ऐसा होगा की ava का system भी चला जाए और सिस्टम से रिलेटेड सारी यादें भी

Crimson..what an intelligent antagonist, कितनी चतुराई से उसने सब कुछ किया सारे प्लान को execute किया, जैसे शतरंज की बिसात हो, हर चीज को अच्छे से परख कर perfectly पूरा किया, वो jim slippery को जेल से निकालने का प्लान, night walker और पिचर को मोहरे की तरह इस्तेमाल करना, ava को ब्लैकमेल करके अपने साथ शामिल करना
Everything was perfect बस एक गलती हो गई jim the slippery को जेल से निकालते वक्त जिसका दुख भी आगे शायद वीर ही भोगेगा। कितना अच्छा प्लान बनाया था उसने लेकिन वीर ने उसका प्लान fail कर दिया। अगर वीर ने परी की बात सुनकर surrender कर दिया होता तो पक्का उसका प्लान successful हो जाता लेकिन वीर ने will दिखाई और बदले में उसे reward मिला
और इतना सब कुछ उसने क्यों किया सिर्फ इसलिए की MR.X का सीधा कुछ नही बिगाड़ सकता, अपनी फौज खड़ी की अपनी strength को बढ़ाया।

मुझे समझ नही आ रहा था की आखिर वीर से उसको इतना गुस्सा क्यों है जबकि वीर ने उसका कुछ नही बिगाड़ा था लेकिन अब समझ आया की वो गुस्सा नही वो खीच थी MR.X का कुछ बिगाड़ ना पाने का, जब भी वो वीर को देखता होगा उसे mr x को याद करके अपनी भड़ास निकालता होगा। But उसने वीर को understimate किया और नतीजा उसको एक हाथ गवाना पड़ा। वीर को मार कर जिस प्वाइंट को वो कमाना चाहता था वो तो नही मिला उल्टा एक हाथ चला गया और आगे शायद गान से भी हाथ धो बैठेगा।

खैर system के बारे कुछ कुछ मालूम चला है और बहुत कुछ जानना बाकी है, बाकी एक चीज तो clear है system का वजूद तभी तक है जब तक host में जान है, भले ही ava का system सुनने में थोड़ा केयरिंग लगा हो, crimson का थोड़ा arrogent और परी दोनो का mixture लेकिन एक बात clear है की सारे सिस्टम अपने host के प्रति एकदम devoted है, शायद इसलिए भी की क्योकी उन्हे मालूम है जब तक वो जिंदा है तभी तक वो है।

वैसे जेल वाले scene ने एक curiousity छोड़ दी है की एक system धारक को जेल में कैसे कैद किया गया, मतलब मिशन मिलते मिलते तो इतना ज्यादा powerful हो गया होगा की जेल वाले या एक आम इंसान का कुछ बिगाड़ पाना संभव नहीं होगा फिर उसे कैसे पकड़ा गया होगा और क्या intelligence agencies को सिस्टम के बारे में कुछ मालूम है?

खैर intelligence agencies से याद आया dgci वाले भड़वे किसी का नाम भी उठा के डाल देते बिना cross-check किए। Crimson को मारने से पहले तो उस andre, chrish,terashima और उनका वो कमिना हेड जेवियर को जान से मार देना चाहिए। मतलब वो हेड है लेकिन उसमें ढेला भर का दिमाग नही दिव्या और Las vegas की agencies के बोलने के बाद भी ये एक बार नही सोचा की वो inncoent होगा, they deserve a special treatment afterall वीर की सारी reputation मिट्टी में मिला दिए बिना पूरा सच जाने, और अब तो punishment और important हो जाता है आखिर बात घर तक जो पहुंच गई है।

भावना, आरोही और तेज के ऊपर क्या बीती होगी जब उन्होंने वीर की wanted वाली तस्वीर देखी होगी, एक तो वैसे भी तेज ने वीर के साथ इतना कम समय बिताया है, बेचारी का आधा जान तो इसी में निकल गया होगा की ले दे के एक भाई मिला था उसे भी ठीक से protect नही कर पा रही

सुहाना का पहले ही इतना तारीफ कर दिया है की और कुछ बोलने के लिए बचा नही है लेकिन फिर भी ये कहूंगा की वीर के लिए she is ahead of Trinity in every expect. फिर चाहे care हो, उसकी मदद करना हो उसे support provide करना हो, I'm eagerly waiting for a conversation between veer and her and i guess we will see some intimacy between them, खैर उसके होश में आने के बाद क्या हुआ है वो देखना है लेकिन ahsita को अब तक समझ में आ गया होगा की वीर कौन है और सुहाना के जीवन में क्या मायने रखता है और क्यों सुहाना के behaviour में इतनी जल्दी change आ रहा था।

पहली बार सोनिया ने barbie girl से हट कर और अपनी दीदी को बिना कुछ बताए कोई काम किया है। But kaira के secretary की बड़ी बहन को hire करना अभी तक समझ नही आया मुझे। खैर जो भी हो सोनिया और सुहाना के जीवन में सबसे बड़ा मोड़ तब आएगा जब सोनिया को पता चलेगा की पुष्कर की मौत के पीछे सोनिया का हाथ है। वीर के लिए लड़ाई होने के chances कम है दोनो एक दूसरे के लिए secrifice कर देंगी खुशी खुशी लेकिन kaira भी शांत नहीं बैठेगी

नया तो नही लेकिन अनोखा किरदार MR.X, Slogan से उसका contect, veer, crimson ava और बाकी सिस्टम के बारे में जितनी जानकारी है उस हिसाब से या तो 18 सिस्टम में सबसे ताकतवर system रखता है या फिर सारे system के world को create ही उसी ने किए है। जिस हिसाब से उसने ava और crimson को कॉल कर धमकाया है उस से तो लग रहा की वो ये सब सिर्फ fun के लिए कर रहा है और वो जब चाहे तब इनको चींटी की तरह मसल देगा, उसका confidence बिना कुछ कहे बहुत कुछ बोलता है।
जब इस बात से पर्दा उठेगा की बाकी के 12 सिस्टम कैसे मारे गए तब शायद इसी बारे में बहुत कुछ खुलेगा।

ऐसा लगता है की वीर जो अब तक इतना ताकतवर हुआ है उसके पीछे X ही था, जैसे वो चाहता था की वीर थोड़ा ताकतवर हो जाए तो फिर खेल को शुरू किया जाए, शायद जयेश के मरने के पीछे भी कुछ न कुछ राज होगा, जिसमें वो directly or indirectly involve होगा
उसे पढ़ के मुझे power rangers की याद आ गई उसमे भी ऐसे ही एक villen होता था जो हर बार ज्यादा ताकतवर प्यादे को लड़ने को भेजता था। लेकिन जिस हिसाब से उसका approach है उस हिसाब से लगा की जितना बड़ा खतरा वो वीर को देखता है उतना बड़ा खतरा वो ava या crimson को नही देखता i mean उसके ava और crimson को धमकाने से तो ऐसा ही feel आया

Kaira...that beautiful soul, उसने किसी का कुछ नही बिगाड़ा है पर फिर सबने मिल के उसकी लंका लगा दी है, just imagine की उसके पास system आ जाए तो क्या होगा। किशोर की गान टूटेगी, उसकी कंपनी का कोई compitator नहीं होगा और सबसे ज्यादा जरूरी वीर की हरम खोलने का ख्वाब.. ख्वाब ही रह जायेगा। अगर ava के जगह kaira के पास system होता तो शायद वो ज्यादा better use करती

खैर मेरे फिलहाल 2 question जिसका answer मुझे बिना लाग लपेट के सीधा सीधा चाहिए चाहे वो फिर spoiler ही क्यों ना हो
1. Suhana का ava के पेरिस जाने की बात सुन कर suprise होना, मुझे समझ नही आया अब तक
2. Kaira कब आयेगी यार, मेरी आंखे तरस गई है उसको देखने के लिए, बहुत उम्मीद है उसके अपडेट से, इतना late से उसका अपडेट आएगा तो i hope वो अपडेट भी उम्मीदों पर खरा उतरे

बाकी तो thanks for the wonderful update
And as always waiting for next update

Fantastic Fabulous Mazedaar update sir

Waiting for next update bhai

Waiting....

Waiting for the next update

Now its competition among 18
who remains will be the boss

Main aaj nahate hue ye hi soch raha tha ki jb humara saara data google aur Facebook jaisi companies ke pass hai to phir ye jo system hai uska bhi koi server to hoga aur server hoga to koi na koi Zuckerberg bhi hoga.
Jab pari ko sab kuch nahi pata to kahin to wo info store ho hi rahi hogi future mein dekhne ke liye software update ke baad, aur ye update padhke to sab clear ho gaya aur Renshu ki wo line to ekdum mere mu se shabd khinchne waale the ki koi hai jo kutputli ki tarah hume chala raha hai. Bs ye hi maza hai aapki writing mein ki humein sochne pe majboor karo aur phir agle episode mein doubt clear karke homework mein ek problem aur de jao

Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro

SUPERB AWESOME FANTASTIC EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Ab ayega Maza waiting for more updates

BEHAD SHAANDAAR LAJAWAAB JABARDAST EXCELLENT MIND BLOWING AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Incredibly outstanding update

waiting new update

लाजवाब समीक्षा पूरा विगत सम्पूर्ण रूप से समक्ष पेश करने के लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यावाद मित्र

Werewolf
वीर की विरासत को आगे बढ़ाने के लिए उसको पुनः जिवन मे एक पूरा मौका मिला है.. बहुत ही चतुराई से कहानी में पिरोया है...
कई नई जानकारियां प्राप्त हुई है, अब तो सिस्टम को भी सिस्टम्स से खतरा है और ये अब बराबरी का युद्ध है अपनी अस्तित्व को बचाने के लिए.

देखते हैं आने वाले समय में क्या लिखा है Werewolf द्वारा..
अगले अंक के प्रेक्षण के इंतजार में....

AMAZING AWESOME ABB VEER KO BHAUT JADA TAKATWAR HO BUDIMAN BANANA PEDEGA FIR CRIMON KO HARA SAKDA HA

Bhai update Aaj aayega ?

bhai next update kab ayega ???

Werewolf bro kya keara ke pass v system ho sakta hai and next update kab tak de sakte waiting brother

Waiting karna ab Muskil ho raha
Kripya kar ke bataye ki update kab tak aayega

Nice update

Werewolf bhai apne kaha tha last update late diya to yeh wala try kroge ke jaldi aye to phir jaldi dena ap
3 days ki 2 day pe

Gajab ka update bhai yane Kamal hi kar diye ho bhai yane itna umda update gajab bhai....

outstanding update.

JABARDUST FABULOUS EXCELLENT MARVELLOUS MIND BLOWING AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

So humne ek aisa banda bhi dekh loya jis se crimson ki bhi gand fat rahi thi. Sab yaha par baap hai aur fir unka baap aajata hai aur veer to dada ban kar batha hi hai special thanks to pari

Now according to you hum actual me ek new world me enter kar chuke hai aur bahut sari jankariya bhi mili hai aur unki vajah se kafi puzzled bhi ho rahe hai. Acha lag raha hai jaise jaise aap kuch chhije disclose kar rahe ho lekin completely kisi ke bare me nahi bata rahe. Readers ko hooked rakhna bahut ache se jante ho aap

Vaise kya mast plan banaya tha crimson ne nearly perfect. Pehle jim ko chudaya fir nightwalker aur pitcher se mil kar hok banaya and sabse important apni identity disclose nahi ki. Nice

Lekin sayad usne veer ko underestimate kar liya tha aur veer uski sari mahnat par moot bhi gaya by destroying hok mansion

Aap jis tarah se chhote chhote scene ko ek dusre se link kar rahe ho vo kabile tareef hai. Most of the time writer aise karte time bahut jada raita faila dete hai lekin aapne jis kadar likha sab kuch. Hats of to you for that

I’m very much interested about that jail wala banda. Kuch bahut bada role lag raha hai uska also usne bola tha you’re one of us aur kuch patient ke bare me bhi

To kya kisi tarah ka lab experiment karke system banaya gaya tha aur kuch logo par vo perform kiya gaya tha jisse patient bola gaya?

Us admi ki harkato se to vo psycho scientist hi lag raha tha jisne khud par hi sabse pehle test kiya hoga ye sab
Aapne bola bhi tha ki vo aadmi abhi nahi aayega lekin aapne abhi dikhaya matlab kuch to important jarur hai faltu ki chhije to kyu hi dikhaoge aap

Ava ne kya hi gand mari crimson ki bc maja hi aa gaya dham dham dham chutad faad diye usko and yes i dont hate her. Hum me se koe bhi uski jagah hota to yehi karte abhi chahe kitna bhi gyaan chhod le hum but uski condition me uske pass koe dusra option nahi tha plus who the fuck use hande photo for a negative character bhai? She must be a top tier character in this story

Sonia ko bhi dikha hi diya aapne. Thank you bhai kitna kuch karte ho aap hum logo ke liye. Although jada kuch tha nahi us conversations me except ki vo kaera ki secretary ki behan ko apni secretary banaye hue hai she is also having a back story sath me sonia bhi ab sabki information nikalne lag gaye hai. Maybe pehle se hi karte rahi ho lekin ab openly dikha diya hai aapne
Want more of sonia and arohi.

Also herosima ne bhi sab sach bata hi diya but why she is crying? I mean theek hai veer ne uski jaan bachae but abhi tak to prove hi nahi hua tha ki he is innocent or not aur vo ek agent hai jo apni feelings kam hi dikhate hai to kya veer ke pass ek aur ladki aane wali hai? Achi equation banaegi vaise dono ki agar aisa hua to

Suhaaannaa man i loved her too. Kya khusburat dhang se aapne uske emotions ko dikhaya just wow. We all know ki vo kis direction me ja rahi hai ab bas intezaar hai to sonia ka jab usse sab pata chalega. Sonia aur suhana ko ek sath kaise handle karenge bhai hum? Lekin raham bilkul mat karna hum par. Sath me suhana ka arrogant side me dikhate jana. Vo bhi important hai uski hi vajah se to ab soft side enjoy kar rahe hai


Veer ke ghar wale bhi stressed me hai aur unko hona bhi chahiye sath me vo bhi chal diye dundne veer ko but why veer didn’t contacted them?
Kya uski extreme intelligence ne usko es bare me bataya nahi ya fir kuch aur soch rakha hai usne? Sayad kuch aur hi soch rakha hai

To rensu ne bachaya veer ko lekin ab ye sala rensu kon hai? Eski bhi back story aaegi kya? Lag to raha hai ki jitne bhi system wale jinda hai sab ke sab ki back story aaegi aur humare dimag ke sath khilwad karegi

Ab mujhe ye lag raha hai jaise game of thrones ki tarah ye bhi us holly throne ke liye ladenge ki kon sabse best hai. Abhi ke liye to mr. X hi sabse bada dikh raha hai but main baki kisi ko bhi underestimate nahi kar sakta specially vo jail wale bande ko

Veer ki baat ho gaye uske ghar walo se to ab atleast vo thode chain ki saas le payenge but what will happen when veer will face tej? That moment gonna be classic
Vo baki sab ko to handle kar sakta hai lekin tej ko?
din ya raat jo bhi hogi us time bahut lambi hone wali hai but starting ek ache se hug se ho to kya hi kahna

Ab next update ke intezaar me aur dekhenge veer aur ava ki conversation. Tab tak ke liye stay healthy bhai and keep writing. Much love to you.

Update bhai?

W8ing

nice1

sahi kaha

Waiting

Bhai next update kab milega???

bhai next update kab ayega ???

Bro weating too apdet

Bhai kaise krte ho tum how mtlb itna acha likhte ho sach bolu to kuch writer bahot hi khatarnak hai iss sites pe or usmai se ek aap ho kuch tips de do mujhe v and waiting for the new update

ok bhai waiting

इस अपडेट ने कुछ प्रश्नों का समुचित निदान तो किया पर फिर से कुछ नये प्रश्न भी ला खड़े किए।
सिस्टम से लैस कुल तीस व्यक्ति थे जिनमे बारह स्वर्ग सिधार गए और अठारह बचे हुए है।
सबसे बड़ा सवाल यह सिस्टम ही है। ऐसा सिस्टम जिसमे पोजिटिव और नेगेटिव दोनो ही तरह के किरदार है।
यह विकृत नेगेटिव किरदार खलनायक की नई परिभाषा लिख रहे है।
धार्मिक और किंवदंतियों कथाओं के नायक देव तो खलनायक राक्षस गण होते थे। ग्रामीण परिवेश की कहानी मे तानाशाह जमींदार और सूदखोर महाजन खलनायक के रूप मे प्रस्तुत किए गए तो शहरी परिवेश की कहानी मे लालची व्यक्ति या मिल मालिक को खलनायक की तरह प्रस्तुत किया गया। डाकू नेगेटिव और पोजिटिव दोनो रूप मे हुए।
आजादी के बाद समाजवादी समाज के आदर्श के कारण एक ऐसी आर्थिक नीति सामने आई जिसने भ्रष्टाचार को जंगल घास की तरह फैलने के अवसर दिए और अव्यवहारिक कंट्रोल के कारण तस्करी का स्वर्ण युग प्रारंभ हुआ। फिर नकली करंसी और ड्रग्स का वर्चस्व बना। पूँजीपति को खलनायक बनाया गया । राजनीति मे अपराधीकरण हुआ और पुलिस मे भी अपराध को खलनायक के तौर पर प्रस्तुत किया गया।

यह सब कहने का तात्पर्य कि कहानी का खलनायक बदलते दौर के साथ चेंज होता गया। । पर इस कहानी का खलनायक इन सब से जुदा और कुछ हटकर है।

क्रिम्पसन को विलेन के रूप मे स्वीकार किया हमने लेकिन उसका किरदार पारम्परिक खलनायक से अलग था।
दरअसल सिस्टम का होना ही अलौकिक है। एक ऐसा चमत्कार जिसे थोड़ा-बहुत अलाउद्दीन के जादुई चिराग के साथ तुलना किया जा सकता है।
वो कौन कौन लोग थे जिनके पास यह अलौकिक शक्ति थी ? बारह ऐसे शक्तियों से लैस व्यक्ति की मौत क्यों और कैसे हुई ? बचे हुए अठारह व्यक्ति कौन है ? इनमे कौन नेगेटिव किरदार मे है और कौन पोजिटिव किरदार मे ?

अब तक सात ऐसे लोग का पता चला है जो सिस्टम से लैस है-- वीर , एवा , क्रिम्पसन , रेंशू , फ्रांस के जेल मे कैद वह व्यक्ति जो अब फरार हो चुका है , एक वह व्यक्ति जिसने एवा को फोन किया था और मिस्टर एक्स ।
इसके अलावा एक व्यक्ति और भी है और वो व्यक्ति वह हो सकता है जिसने क्रिम्पसन को फोन पर निर्देश दिया था।
अगर यह व्यक्ति और मिस्टर एक्स एक ही नही है तो कुल मिलाकर आठ व्यक्ति होंगे।
अब भी दस व्यक्ति का नाम गुमनाम ही है।


वीर के बाद सिस्टम से लैस अगर कोई शख्स भले किरदार मे है तो वह है रेंशू। इनका कार्य और मकसद दोनो ही बेहतरीन है। और इन्ही के कारण वीर की जान भी बची।
लेकिन यह भी समझ मे नही आया कि मिस्टर एक्स ने इन्हे वीर को मदद करने के लिए क्यों कहा ?

रेंशू के अनुसार मिस्टर एक्स ही इन सिस्टम से लैस व्यक्तियों को अपने इच्छानुसार इस्तेमाल करने वाला व्यक्ति है। इस का अर्थ यह हुआ कि वह सबसे अधिक पावरफुल है। उसकी नजरों मे सभी लोग है। वह सब की खबर रख रहा है। लेकिन फिर वही सवाल कि क्यों ? वो चाहता क्या है और उसका मकसद क्या है ?

एवा मैडम ने मजबूरन क्रिम्पसन का साथ दिया था। इसके लिए थोड़ी हमदर्दी हो सकती है लेकिन जिस तरह से उन्होने अपने आंखो और उंगलियो के इशारे वीर को किए थे , वह बिल्कुल ही गलत था। मुस्कराहट के साथ किए गए यह इशारे वीर का उपहास करना मात्र था। और वह भी वीर की मौत के लिए । उस वीर की जो उनके सिर्फ एक ही बुलावे पर भारत से फ्रांस जा पहुंचा। उस वीर की जो उनकी ही मदद करने गया था।
आप मजबूर थी। मान लेता हूं। लेकिन आप ने तो उसकी मौत का उपहास उड़ाया। और यह बर्दाश्त करने लायक नही है।

भावना , तेज और आरोही को ऐन टाइम पर वीर का फोन कॉल आ गया वरना कुछ अनहोनी हो सकता था। शायद एकाध सेकेंड मे ही वीर का काॅल आ गया था।
बरसों बाद अपने पुत्र भाई से मिलने के बाद यदि यह खबर मिले कि आप का पुत्र या भाई अब जीवित ही नही है , तब कैसा हाल होता होगा , इसका विवरण नही किया जा सकता।

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट वोल्फी भाई।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड जगमग जगमग।

Werewolf bhai update Kab ayega apne kaha tha jaldi ayega ab to 3 din bhi hogaye
Ek din zyada bi kyuki last update late aya tha

Waiting

Werewolf bhai besak update kal mat diyo besak parso de diyo yeh uss ke next day par word quantity 5 k word ke niche mat rakhiyo nivedan hai

Waiting for next update

Check karna alag baat hai wo beshak na kar sakein.. magar ek dosre ki existence ka knowledge bhi na hona.. ye thora strange hai ek high-level system k liye
I hope is baat ka bhi answer mil hi jayega story mein.
Anyways, best of luck

Intresting comments n replies

Waiting for next mage update…..

Omg.... Ye to new twist aa gya... Renshu has a system too. Total 18 systems alive

par main review ni dungi crimson ki death k baad hi ab main bada review dungi. I can smell it. Hehehe a great fight is coming up ahead.

waiting for new new update. Keep writing

Wolfy bhai aaj kitne baje expec kar sakte hai?? Update ka zalzala??

Ye to rhyming ho gya bhaiya ji

bhai aaj update aayega kya ??

Congratulations to the master of masterpiece... The Architect!

congradulations bahi for winning the USC-2023

Many many congratulations bro
Ultimate story contest winner ban gaye aap, ye contest winner banna is baat ka prove he ke aap is forum ke best writer ho keep it up bro,
And once again congratulations

Congratulations Werewolf..... It is only possible due to ur hardwork and dedication

Nice

Congrats bro

bhai

For winning 1st prize USC contest Werewolf bhai....

Werewolf bro please accept my heartily congratulation on achieving 1st position in USC Contest

Congratulations dear

Congratulation bro

Bhai ji kya baat Jabardast update ekdum mast

Fantastic update

दादा, USC जितने की ढ़ेर सारी बधाई। ऐसे ही लिखते रहे और हम पढ़ते रहेंगे।

For winning 1st prize USC contest Werewolf bhai....

Koi baat nahi Bhai Aaj kitna bi dher ho hum sab wait karenge

Congratulations on winning USC Bhai

Jeet k liya badhai

Congrats for winning USC.

Waiting for next update

So jao guys..Hope ki next update comes by weekend..Am sure it will be very much acclaimed like this entire story from the beginning

Mind blowing update

Nice update bhaii bhit Awla Maza Aya gya par Kar ab new update Ka intazar ha

Congratulations to you sir for winning story contest

Congratulations for winning ultimate story

Congratulations

Congratulations for winning USC.
Congratulations for 3000 pages of the story.
And now come to the running story.
Every one is waiting for update.

Congratulations bhai

Congratulations on winning USC Bhai

Waiting

Congratulations for winning USC

Waiting for update

Waiting..

Werewolf bhai update?

Congress wolfi you are the winner

Mujhe to pehle se hi pata tha tum hi jitoge aakhir kya hi Thriller story pesh ki thi tumne sach main congratulation

Now you are the supreme member of the forum

Update

UPDATE BHAI ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Congratulations for winning ultimate story contest 2023

Waiting for the mind-blowing update

Bhai ji update ki koi khabar

Hi Dude where are you now took you long enough to upload new update...
Bro understand your Fans situation they eagerly waiting for what Upcoming next and you are not responding
Kuch toh bhejo don't make emotionally damage to your Fansss.....

Werewolf kitne saal baad dega update

Bhaya update dedo

बाकी सब तो ठीक है पर आपने भी अपनी term and condition इतने छोटे अक्षरों में लिखी हैं।..

Update kab aayega Werewolf bhai

जल्दी करो यार

Bhai jab Ana hoga a jay ga. It na he msla ha to na pro.

Bhai mere kuch swabal hai ,

1.ava ke pass agar system hai , to usne veer ko to zaroor check to Kiya hoga , to use to pata hi hoga ki veer ke pass bhi system ha

2. Mr.X ke bare mai Hume kon se arc mein pata chalega , baise mujhe lagta hai , Mr.X veer Kai koi apne mein se hi hai.

Bhai editing ka hi massage daldoo na

Itti kahe ki jaldi hai be, berozgar baithe ho ka

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Ekdam kamal ka or umda drishya the yaara....
Mazaaaa aa gaya bhai waah....

Update 146 has been posted.

 

[Werewolf]

Index has been updated.

 

[Werewolf]

Remaining comments ke replies samay milte hi diye jayenge.

Yaha kuch zaroori baat likh raha hu. Wese to mein personal info kam hi share karta hu par jankaari ke liye bata raha hu ki mere ghar me renovation ke kaam laga hua hai. (Basically, ek room aur washroom hai woh renovate ho rahe hai.) Inn dino, mein theek se time pe apne meals bhi nahi le paaya hu. Vyastata itni hai. Upar se fir usc ke results aur fir update. Padhne ke baad idea lag gaya hoga ki kitna kaam kiya gaya hai update pe.

Mene dherr saari images di hai isme. Just to give you all the general idea for your visualisation. Agle update me itni nahi hongi. My head is throbbing right now. Toh agar mein beemaar padta hu, then agla update late hi aayega. I cannot do anything about it. You'll have to deal with it.

 

[Aryan s.]

Superb update.....
Jis tarah se aapne Suhana ki feelings aur emotions ko dikhaya hai, woh mind-blowing tha, lag raha tha ki samne koi movie ka scene chal raha hai.....
Suhana ko Veer ki kami bohot jyada mehsoos ho rahi hai....
The action scenes was superbly described.....
Nice work.....
Keep it up....

 

[deep@]

Super excited update

 

[lovfrnd4u]

Superb update loaded with thrill and action