Incest Bahan Ki nafarat Bhai ka Pyaar
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Khubsurati ek aesa word hai.jo Pura world change kar sakti ha. Is duniya me aapke Paas aage bande ne ke liye kuch chije chahiye usme jaise knowledge,ijazat,confident, duniadari ki samaj par uun sab se ek chij aati hai jo aapke janam ke sath aati hai wo hai Khubsurati aagar aap Khubsurat ho to aapke apne aap friends banne lagte hai agar aap Khubsurat hai to aapko apne aap I zar milne lagti hai agar aap Khubsurat ho to log aapko unke group me add Kar dete hai par kya ho agar koi Hadd se jyada Khubsurat ho to aur aesa hone se aapki family pe kya pressure hota hai.
Aesi hi ek Khubsurat ladki baat hai uska nama hai ahana isko life me kabhi mangne ki kuch jarurat nahi padi log iski help kar ne apne aap aage aajate hai ladke iske upar marte hai pure.fin iska insta.stalk karte hai ya fb kitne hi ladke chahte hai agar ye ek baar mil.jaye to fir jaan chali jaye to problem nahi hai aesi thi Ahana. Par aesi life jine se uske andar Hadd se jyada attitude aayaa hai jo.aapko story.me dikh jayega iski age abhi 21 hai padhai me bhi acchi hai ab government job ke liye tyaar kar rahi hai.
Isko lata tha ki ladke uske.liye marte hai par sidhe sabke samne kabhi dikhati nahi thi usko jaisa taisa koi ladka nahi chahiya tha usne socha tha uska bf uski.level ka hona chahiye isiliye ab iski baat ek.psi ke bete se suru huvi hai jo ab tak chat tak hi atki huvi hai ahana ne Pehle Bhi kuch ladke jo normal friends hai college ke unse baat hoti rehti hai par Pehli baar friends se Baskar koi ho aese ladke se baat kr rahi hai wo ladka jaise hai kya hai uska kya hoga wo stroy me pata chalega
Ab aate hai Nivan pe jo middle-class family se aata hai middle-class family se aata hai apni sister ki tarah jyada nahi par Kam handsome nahi hai ye dikhne me Accha dikhta hai normal fit body hai. Iski ek gf hai abhi age 22 hai par Kyada koi acche frridns nahi hai iske jo bhi the sale sab fake the sab bas ahana ki vajah se iske dost banna chahte hai isiliye isne ab koi friend hi nahi rakha bas akela rehta hai apni dunia me gum gf iski collage times hai sayad wo bhi ahana ki vajah se bani hogi aesa isko lagta hai abhi isko kuch dhayan nahi hai isko future plan ka bas din Kaat rah hai apni life ke kabhi kabhi bas apni se mil.leta hai papa.ki ek Kapdo ki shop hai kabhi kabhi waha bhi chala jata hai. Sab isko Nikkma samajhte hai padhai me kuch khas nahi hai Pehle ek time tha jab ye topper hua karta tha apni school.ka par college me aate hi iska padhai se dhayan uth gaya hai. Abhi ye college khatam hone ke Baad kuch nahi karta bas aese ghar pe rehta hai ahana se jyada baat nahi hoti iski kyun ke baat Yeh Hai ki. Baki logo.ki tarah iska bhi dil ahana par agaya hai bhale isko gf hai par din kiski sunta par sabse buri baat ye hai ki ye kuch kar nahi sakta aur ho sake inte ladko ko ye ahana se dur hi rakhta hai kyun jo iski nahi wo kisi aur ki nahi par ahana bhi kisko jyada apne Paas nahi aane deti uska vajah hai ki usko pata hai uska worth kitna hai.
Dhiraj ek Kapdo ki shop chalata hai choti si wife.school teacher hai isiliye dono bacche acche se padhe hai par Nivan ne college me aate hi apni padhai chod hindi thi jiski vajah se bahut kam marks se wo pass hua ab bas inko ahana pe bharosa tha jo padh kar ek government job le le aur uski Khubsurati ki hisab se uska rista kisi bhi bade ghar se aata hai aese to bahut.logo ne pucha bhi hai ahana ka rista par abhi wo uski shadi karna nahi chahte
Mamta school teacher hai sara din school menhi nikal.jata hai baki bacha wo ghar ke Kamo.me bit jata hai ahana bhk inka hath Bata deti hai par ye chahti hai wo apni padhai me jyada dhayan de aur ab Nivan ki inko bahut jyada hi Chintan hain wo lifeme kya karega inko kuch idea nahi hai ab wo ghat me jyada kiski se baat bhi nahi karta khas kar uske dad se dono me ke bich me kabhi bhi jhagda suru ho jata hai dono ke bich me
Aage dekhenge kya hota hai aahana aur Nivan ke Buch me kaha jayegi un dono ki life yaha se aur kaha pe rukegi
Update 1
Khubsurati ek aesa word hai.jo Pura world change kar sakti ha. Is duniya me aapke Paas aage bande ne ke liye kuch chije chahiye usme jaise knowledge,ijazat,confident, duniadari ki samaj par uun sab se ek chij aati hai jo aapke janam ke sath aati hai wo hai Khubsurati aagar aap Khubsurat ho to aapke apne aap friends banne lagte hai agar aap Khubsurat hai to aapko apne aap I zar milne lagti hai agar aap Khubsurat ho to log aapko unke group me add Kar dete hai par kya ho agar koi Hadd se jyada Khubsurat ho to aur aesa hone se aapki family pe kya pressure hota hai.
Aesi hi ek Khubsurat ladki baat hai uska nama hai ahana isko life me kabhi mangne ki kuch jarurat nahi padi log iski help kar ne apne aap aage aajate hai ladke iske upar marte hai pure.fin iska insta.stalk karte hai ya fb kitne hi ladke chahte hai agar ye ek baar mil.jaye to fir jaan chali jaye to problem nahi hai aesi thi Ahana. Par aesi life jine se uske andar Hadd se jyada attitude aayaa hai jo.aapko story.me dikh jayega iski age abhi 21 hai padhai me bhi acchi hai ab government job ke liye tyaar kar rahi hai.
Isko lata tha ki ladke uske.liye marte hai par sidhe sabke samne kabhi dikhati nahi thi usko jaisa taisa koi ladka nahi chahiya tha usne socha tha uska bf uski.level ka hona chahiye isiliye ab iski baat ek.psi ke bete se suru huvi hai jo ab tak chat tak hi atki huvi hai ahana ne Pehle Bhi kuch ladke jo normal friends hai college ke unse baat hoti rehti hai par Pehli baar friends se Baskar koi ho aese ladke se baat kr rahi hai wo ladka jaise hai kya hai uska kya hoga wo stroy me pata chalega
Ab aate hai Nivan pe jo middle-class family se aata hai middle-class family se aata hai apni sister ki tarah jyada nahi par Kam handsome nahi hai ye dikhne me Accha dikhta hai normal fit body hai. Iski ek gf hai abhi age 22 hai par Kyada koi acche frridns nahi hai iske jo bhi the sale sab fake the sab bas ahana ki vajah se iske dost banna chahte hai isiliye isne ab koi friend hi nahi rakha bas akela rehta hai apni dunia me gum gf iski collage times hai sayad wo bhi ahana ki vajah se bani hogi aesa isko lagta hai abhi isko kuch dhayan nahi hai isko future plan ka bas din Kaat rah hai apni life ke kabhi kabhi bas apni se mil.leta hai papa.ki ek Kapdo ki shop hai kabhi kabhi waha bhi chala jata hai. Sab isko Nikkma samajhte hai padhai me kuch khas nahi hai Pehle ek time tha jab ye topper hua karta tha apni school.ka par college me aate hi iska padhai se dhayan uth gaya hai. Abhi ye college khatam hone ke Baad kuch nahi karta bas aese ghar pe rehta hai ahana se jyada baat nahi hoti iski kyun ke baat Yeh Hai ki. Baki logo.ki tarah iska bhi dil ahana par agaya hai bhale isko gf hai par din kiski sunta par sabse buri baat ye hai ki ye kuch kar nahi sakta aur ho sake inte ladko ko ye ahana se dur hi rakhta hai kyun jo iski nahi wo kisi aur ki nahi par ahana bhi kisko jyada apne Paas nahi aane deti uska vajah hai ki usko pata hai uska worth kitna hai.
Dhiraj ek Kapdo ki shop chalata hai choti si wife.school teacher hai isiliye dono bacche acche se padhe hai par Nivan ne college me aate hi apni padhai chod hindi thi jiski vajah se bahut kam marks se wo pass hua ab bas inko ahana pe bharosa tha jo padh kar ek government job le le aur uski Khubsurati ki hisab se uska rista kisi bhi bade ghar se aata hai aese to bahut.logo ne pucha bhi hai ahana ka rista par abhi wo uski shadi karna nahi chahte
Mamta school teacher hai sara din school menhi nikal.jata hai baki bacha wo ghar ke Kamo.me bit jata hai ahana bhk inka hath Bata deti hai par ye chahti hai wo apni padhai me jyada dhayan de aur ab Nivan ki inko bahut jyada hi Chintan hain wo lifeme kya karega inko kuch idea nahi hai ab wo ghat me jyada kiski se baat bhi nahi karta khas kar uske dad se dono me ke bich me kabhi bhi jhagda suru ho jata hai dono ke bich me
Aage dekhenge kya hota hai aahana aur Nivan ke Buch me kaha jayegi un dono ki life yaha se aur kaha pe rukegi
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Update-1
Abhi Nivan subah apne room me soya hua achanak alarm baji mobile ki to wo uth gaya ahi 8 baj rahe the. Wo brush karke niche gaya waha table par breakfast rakha hua tha. Waha ahana bhi beth wo waha uske Paas Se nikla to usko gajab ki khushboo aagai wo ahana ki thi pata nahi kyun par uski body ki khooboo alag hi hai, par Nivan kuch bola nahi waha se sidha apne table par beth gaya waha ahana bhi kuch nahi boli, ek tarah se dekha jaye to dono bahut kam hi baat karte the.
Dono fir khana khatam karke apne pane raste chale gaye. Thoda Nivan ke bare me Bata deta hun wo Bachpan se hi hostel me chala gaya tha kabhi kabhi hi ghar pe hota tha abhi isi saal wo aaya hai Pehle college bhi wo kahi aur karta tha par usko pata nahi chala Kab wo aur ahana itne alag ho gaye ek tarah se dekha jaye to dono kabhi banti nahi thi bas usko bachapan ka Yaad hai jab dono sath me khela karte the par uske bina dono ki kabhi nai nahi.
Dono bas apni apni life me busy the ahana abhi govt job ke liye prepare kar rahi thi wo vaise topper hai institute me par Nivan ko waisa kuch pata nahi wo bas abhi ghar pe hi pada rehta tha aur kuch karta nahi tha usne kuch chije sochi ki usko kya karna hai par kuch kar nahi paya.
Uski apne mom dad se bhi jyada nahi banti thi wo dono usko kuch kuch Kehte nahi the bhale wo Pura din kuch na kare bas ghar pe pada rahe fir bhi. Aur aese hi Nivan life chal rahi thi bina kisi Matlab ki par kuch dino se usko life me kuch karne ka man kar raha tha ek tarah se kuch mil gaya ho wo thi Ahana pata nahi kaise par wo ahana se bahut jyada hi attracted gaya tha usko bhi pata nahi kaise hua ye sab par jab bhi wo ahana ko dekhta tha uski heat beat bad jati thi usse raha nahi jaraha tha par kuch kar nahi sakta tha. Upar se ahana kabhi usko bhaav nahi deti thi wo subah chali jati thi Shaam ko aati thi. Isiliye jyada time nahi milta tha usko ahana ke sath Raat ko bhi wo apne room me chali jati thi bas khana khane aati thi subah bhi same hota tha.
Aese hi Shaam ho gai Nivan pure din kuch karha nahi bas apne mobile me aese kuch memes and video Dekhta raha fir usne socha usko gf ko call kare naina ko usne call uthaya aur usne bola wo abhi busy hai ghar pe kuch Kaam Hai nahi kia to mom dategi itna bolke usne call cut Kar diya.
Ab naina uski gf jab Nivan collage ke last year me tha tab bani thi wo ek din aese hi insta dekh raha tha tabhi uska insta pe msg ayaa dono ne thodi se chat ki fir dusre din thodi si chat ki bas aese hi dono close ho gaya upar se naina bhi same jagah se thi jaha se Nivan tha dono me acchi banti hai aese Nivan ko lagta hai abhi kuch jyada sexuel chije nahi ki bas ek don baar kiss ki hai wo Nivan ke Kitna bolne ke Baad fir Nivan socha kuch bhi force karna acchi baat nahi jab uska din karega to wo samne se bata degi par ab Tai aese kuch hua nahi, ye sab soch tha tha Nivan
Kuch time aese hi waste karne ke Baad Nivan socha chalo bike leke chalta hun kyun ki usme usko Accha feel hota tha Shaam ke time bike Nature ki Khubsurati me fir wo waha se nikal pada. Kuch time bike pe Shaam ko thandi thandi Hwa aati thi to wo khus ho jata tha abhi wo apni city se thoda dur agaya tha jaisa wo jab bhi bike leke aata hai tab itna dur aake thodi der ruk jata tha. Aese hi kuch time rukne ke Baad wo bapas city ki aur chal pada wo yaha waha dekh raha tha ki usko ek coffee shop ke aage naina dikh gai aur sath koi ladka bhi tha dono ne ek dusre ek hath pakde huve the Pehle to Nivan ne socha wo naina ke Paas jaye par jab dono ko hath pakda hua dekha to wo ruk gaya ek second ke liye usko ajjeb sa feel hua fir usko Yaad aaya ki naina to aaj busy thi Matlab wo usse juth bol rahi thi. Fir wo dono car me bethe aur waha se chal pade Nivan waha pe ruk gaya par uske dimag me pata nahi kya hua wo us car ka picha karte huve ruk nahi wo un dono ke piche chal pada.
Kuch der Baad Nivan ne dekha dono naina ki apartment ke yaha hi ja rahe hai kuch der Baad aage traffic agaya waha car kuch der aagaye ruk gai par Nivan pe bike thi usne piche li ahr dusri taraf ek gali se jate huve naina ke apartment ki parking lot me aagya Pehle to usne socha direct hi dono ka wait kare aur surprise de dono ko par usme usko kucb fayda nahi laga. Isiliye usne apni bike thoda ek car ke piche chupa di aur wait karne laga kuch der Baad unki car aagai parking lot me dono abhi aese bethe the kuch der Baad bate karne ke Baad naina car se bahar aane lagi par us ladke ne usko rok Lia dono kuch bate karne lage fir achanak us ladke ne naina ko kiss Kar diya kucb 5 second ke liye aage kuch karne jata usse Pehle naina ne usko rok Lia aur waha se lift me chali gai wo ladka thodi der aese hi betha raha fir car leke nikal gaya yaha Nivan ne jo dekha tha uske Baad wo kuch raha tha ki ye sab hua kya usko kuch ajib sa feel ho raha tha wo bhi waha se apni bike leke nikal gaya wo tej bike chala tha jo hau wo sab soch raha tha ki tabhi usko Yaad aaya ki us ladke ko usne kahi to dekha hai sab soch raha tha kaha dekha tabhi usko Yaad aaya ki uss ladke ko usne apne dad ki shop pe ek Baar dekha tha jab Nivan ek din waha gaya tha ye soch raha tha tabhi usko tej horn ki aavaj sunai di sune left me dekha to ek truck full speed me tha wo bhi usse takrane wala tha bas ek meter dur hoga wo kuch soch pata tabhi usko alarm ki aavaj sunai di wo jatke se utha dekha uske mobile se aavaj aarahi thi par abhi bhi uski body me goosebumps the usne socha ye sab sab a hai or dekha to 8 baj gaye hai
Abhi Nivan subah apne room me soya hua achanak alarm baji mobile ki to wo uth gaya ahi 8 baj rahe the. Wo brush karke niche gaya waha table par breakfast rakha hua tha. Waha ahana bhi beth wo waha uske Paas Se nikla to usko gajab ki khushboo aagai wo ahana ki thi pata nahi kyun par uski body ki khooboo alag hi hai, par Nivan kuch bola nahi waha se sidha apne table par beth gaya waha ahana bhi kuch nahi boli, ek tarah se dekha jaye to dono bahut kam hi baat karte the.
Dono fir khana khatam karke apne pane raste chale gaye. Thoda Nivan ke bare me Bata deta hun wo Bachpan se hi hostel me chala gaya tha kabhi kabhi hi ghar pe hota tha abhi isi saal wo aaya hai Pehle college bhi wo kahi aur karta tha par usko pata nahi chala Kab wo aur ahana itne alag ho gaye ek tarah se dekha jaye to dono kabhi banti nahi thi bas usko bachapan ka Yaad hai jab dono sath me khela karte the par uske bina dono ki kabhi nai nahi.
Dono bas apni apni life me busy the ahana abhi govt job ke liye prepare kar rahi thi wo vaise topper hai institute me par Nivan ko waisa kuch pata nahi wo bas abhi ghar pe hi pada rehta tha aur kuch karta nahi tha usne kuch chije sochi ki usko kya karna hai par kuch kar nahi paya.
Uski apne mom dad se bhi jyada nahi banti thi wo dono usko kuch kuch Kehte nahi the bhale wo Pura din kuch na kare bas ghar pe pada rahe fir bhi. Aur aese hi Nivan life chal rahi thi bina kisi Matlab ki par kuch dino se usko life me kuch karne ka man kar raha tha ek tarah se kuch mil gaya ho wo thi Ahana pata nahi kaise par wo ahana se bahut jyada hi attracted gaya tha usko bhi pata nahi kaise hua ye sab par jab bhi wo ahana ko dekhta tha uski heat beat bad jati thi usse raha nahi jaraha tha par kuch kar nahi sakta tha. Upar se ahana kabhi usko bhaav nahi deti thi wo subah chali jati thi Shaam ko aati thi. Isiliye jyada time nahi milta tha usko ahana ke sath Raat ko bhi wo apne room me chali jati thi bas khana khane aati thi subah bhi same hota tha.
Aese hi Shaam ho gai Nivan pure din kuch karha nahi bas apne mobile me aese kuch memes and video Dekhta raha fir usne socha usko gf ko call kare naina ko usne call uthaya aur usne bola wo abhi busy hai ghar pe kuch Kaam Hai nahi kia to mom dategi itna bolke usne call cut Kar diya.
Ab naina uski gf jab Nivan collage ke last year me tha tab bani thi wo ek din aese hi insta dekh raha tha tabhi uska insta pe msg ayaa dono ne thodi se chat ki fir dusre din thodi si chat ki bas aese hi dono close ho gaya upar se naina bhi same jagah se thi jaha se Nivan tha dono me acchi banti hai aese Nivan ko lagta hai abhi kuch jyada sexuel chije nahi ki bas ek don baar kiss ki hai wo Nivan ke Kitna bolne ke Baad fir Nivan socha kuch bhi force karna acchi baat nahi jab uska din karega to wo samne se bata degi par ab Tai aese kuch hua nahi, ye sab soch tha tha Nivan
Kuch time aese hi waste karne ke Baad Nivan socha chalo bike leke chalta hun kyun ki usme usko Accha feel hota tha Shaam ke time bike Nature ki Khubsurati me fir wo waha se nikal pada. Kuch time bike pe Shaam ko thandi thandi Hwa aati thi to wo khus ho jata tha abhi wo apni city se thoda dur agaya tha jaisa wo jab bhi bike leke aata hai tab itna dur aake thodi der ruk jata tha. Aese hi kuch time rukne ke Baad wo bapas city ki aur chal pada wo yaha waha dekh raha tha ki usko ek coffee shop ke aage naina dikh gai aur sath koi ladka bhi tha dono ne ek dusre ek hath pakde huve the Pehle to Nivan ne socha wo naina ke Paas jaye par jab dono ko hath pakda hua dekha to wo ruk gaya ek second ke liye usko ajjeb sa feel hua fir usko Yaad aaya ki naina to aaj busy thi Matlab wo usse juth bol rahi thi. Fir wo dono car me bethe aur waha se chal pade Nivan waha pe ruk gaya par uske dimag me pata nahi kya hua wo us car ka picha karte huve ruk nahi wo un dono ke piche chal pada.
Kuch der Baad Nivan ne dekha dono naina ki apartment ke yaha hi ja rahe hai kuch der Baad aage traffic agaya waha car kuch der aagaye ruk gai par Nivan pe bike thi usne piche li ahr dusri taraf ek gali se jate huve naina ke apartment ki parking lot me aagya Pehle to usne socha direct hi dono ka wait kare aur surprise de dono ko par usme usko kucb fayda nahi laga. Isiliye usne apni bike thoda ek car ke piche chupa di aur wait karne laga kuch der Baad unki car aagai parking lot me dono abhi aese bethe the kuch der Baad bate karne ke Baad naina car se bahar aane lagi par us ladke ne usko rok Lia dono kuch bate karne lage fir achanak us ladke ne naina ko kiss Kar diya kucb 5 second ke liye aage kuch karne jata usse Pehle naina ne usko rok Lia aur waha se lift me chali gai wo ladka thodi der aese hi betha raha fir car leke nikal gaya yaha Nivan ne jo dekha tha uske Baad wo kuch raha tha ki ye sab hua kya usko kuch ajib sa feel ho raha tha wo bhi waha se apni bike leke nikal gaya wo tej bike chala tha jo hau wo sab soch raha tha ki tabhi usko Yaad aaya ki us ladke ko usne kahi to dekha hai sab soch raha tha kaha dekha tabhi usko Yaad aaya ki uss ladke ko usne apne dad ki shop pe ek Baar dekha tha jab Nivan ek din waha gaya tha ye soch raha tha tabhi usko tej horn ki aavaj sunai di sune left me dekha to ek truck full speed me tha wo bhi usse takrane wala tha bas ek meter dur hoga wo kuch soch pata tabhi usko alarm ki aavaj sunai di wo jatke se utha dekha uske mobile se aavaj aarahi thi par abhi bhi uski body me goosebumps the usne socha ye sab sab a hai or dekha to 8 baj gaye hai
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Abhi 8 baj rahe the Nivan uth ke brush karne chala gaya fir waha se niche breakfast karne waha niche gaya waha ahana aur uske papa bethe the nasta kar rahe the wo bhi wah jake nasta karne laga. Nasta karte karte ahana ne apne papa se kaha ki wo apne friends ke sath movie dekhne ja rahi hun
Ye sunke uske papa ne kuch nahi bola bas sar hila dia par bich me Nivan ne kaha ki kyun aaj classes nahi jana
Ye sunke ahana thoda gussa dabate hue Nivan ko boli ki aaj Sunday hai and vaise bhi meri marji me jo karna chahu
Ye sunke Nivan thoda sock ho gaya usne kuch bole bina apne phone me dekha to sachme Sunday tha par aesa kaise ho sakta hai usne socha kyun ki Sunday Kal tha aur wo apne friend ajit ke sath Kal Raat ko bahar gaya tha wo usko pakka pata tha ye Baat.
Tabhi Nivan kuch bola nahi par chup chap nasta karke upar chala gya fir apne pc me kuch Kaam karne laga ase hi kuch time nikal gaya fir wo niche gaya hamesha ki tarah ghar pe aaj bhi koi nahi tha Ajj Sunday tha fir bhi uski mom bhi nahi thi ghar pe, wo jabse aaya hai collage khatam karke apne ghar pe tabse usne dekha hai usko sab ignore karte hai jaise wo exist hk nahi karta jab kuch usko Kaam hota hai ya khana khana hota hai tab hi wo ghar walo se baat karta hai varna kabhi nahi aur jyada baar usko daant bhi padti rehti hai khas kar uske dad se par unko wo kuch bol nahi sakta tha.
Kuch der ye sab sochne ki Baad wo apne room me bapas chala gaya kuch time Baad uske friend ajit ka usko call aaya aaj raat ko bahar milne ka ek club me par Nivan ne turant mana karke call cut Kar dia usne socha bhana hod ye kya sab kya chal raha ha kya ye deja u tha ya sachme Pura din firse chal raha hai.
Aese hi usne din nikal dia ab Shaam ho rahi thi jab wo apne window se bahar dekh raha tha Shaam ko tha tabhi usko naina Yaad aagai jo sab sapne me hua tha ya fir wo sab sahi me hua tha ab wo confuse tha.
Ab Raat time ho raha tha Nivan dinner karne niche gaya sab abhi ghar pe aagaye the par sab abhi tv dekh rahe the living room me and kuch bate kar rahe the. Par jaise Nivan unke Paas Se nikla wo chup ho gaye and baat change kar di jiska aehsas Nivan ko bhi ho gaya par wo kuch bola nahi and dinner karne laga thodi der Baad kuch sochne ke Baad wo bhi sofa pe chala gaya jaha sab bethe huve the.
Wo chup chaap bich wale soda pe beth gaya jaha ahana thi bilkul uske Paas me jake abhi tv me India ki match chal rahi thi and Rohit batting kar raha tha, fir Nivan ahana ki taraf dekhte hua pucha hai ke movie kaisi thi
Ye sunke ahana ne kaha acchi thi
Nivan- vaise konsi movie thi
Thoda gusse me hote huve ahana
Ahana- kyun tumhe kya karna hai janke
Ab itna guss me boli to Nivan se muh se jyada kucb nikla nahi bas usne kaha kuch nahi bas aese hi
Ahana kuch Kehne wali thi tabhi Nivan ki mom ne usko hath se kuch isara kar dia jisse ahana chup hoke tv dekhne lagi. Nivan bbi kucb nahi bola par Nivan ne mamta ki taraf dekha to unhone smile kardi pyari se samne Nivan ne bhi smile kia aur tv dekhne laga par abhi Nivan ko kuch ajib sa feel ho raha tha jaise puke karne wal ho uski vajah thi mamta ki fake smile jo Nivan dekh sakta tha par us smile ke piche wo sad nahi thi par ek tarah se gusse me thi jaise Nivan waha pe ahana ke Paas me betha isiliye par Nivan ko ab ye pakka karna tha isiliye usne dhire se apna per ko thoda ahana ke per se touch kia abhi ah a ne ghuton ke thoda niche tak shorts pehne huve the same Nivan ne bhi pehna hua tha fir Nivan ne tirchi najar se dekha to sachme mamta usko gusse me ghur rahi thi par usko para nahi tha kyun
Ye sab chal raha tha tabhi uske mamta boli beta tumhe nind nahi aarahi kya
Ye sune Nivan ne kaha ha sahi kaha aese bhi mujhe kuch Kaam Hai and India bhi jeet hi jayega 15 ya 20 runs se par k l rahul ke is over me out hote hi jata hun
Ye sunke ahana jo ab tak apne mobile dekh rahi thi wo boli Accha ye kaise bata sakte ho mujhe to lagta hai haar jayegi
Waha Nivan ke dad bhi apne phone me kuch kar rahe the wo bhi Nivan ki taraf thoda gusse dekh rahe the Nivan ne dekha jabse wo ayaa hai tabse usne dekha hai ki wo kabse apna phone leke kuch kar rahe hai Nivan ne socha Pehle ke kahi betting pe paisa to nahi laga rahe fir socha nahi aese to ho nahi sakta
Nivan ne ahana ki baat su ek kaha- bas aese hi I just have brain to calculate everything about match
Ahana- par mujhe jyada to nahi hoga brain tumhare Paas mene bhi sab calculate kia hai and India aaj haar jayegi
Ab ahana ka dimag next level pe tha wo to Nivan ko bhi pata tha usne dekha tha kitni baar usko sab Yaad rehta tha ek tarah se wo superhuman thi aesa lagta tha Nivan ko par Nivan ne socha ki jaisa pure din sab same hota hai aaya hai jaise koi deja vu ho fir ye bhi same hi hoga kyun ki wo club gaya tha to match nahi dekha tha par usne score dekha aaj ka to sab same hi hone wala tha.
Ye sab chal raha thi ki kl rahul out ho gaya fir Nivan ne cgidane ke liye ahana ki taraf dekha aur uth ke apne room me chala gaya fir pc me apne kuch Kaam me lag gaya.
Niche ahana gusse laal thi waha usme dad ne bola - just ignore him par ab karna kya hai tumhari calculation 10 me se 8 baar sahi hoti hai aur ye abhi jitne paise lagaye hai wo kam nahi hai kuch hua to hamare mission ko nuksaan hoga hamara target bach jayega
Ahana ne kuch socha fir kaha - just do what he said and end of the day ye target ke Baad Nivan ka hi number hai
Ye baat usne gusse me kahi thi upar se wo Nivan ke room ki aur gusse me dekh rahi thi waha uske dad ne bhi usne kaha wo kar dia fir uski mom ne bola - tum abhi usko ignore karo bas Pura dhayan apne goal pe rakho I will handle him
Ye sunke ahana firse gusse me boli - no he's my target and vaise bhi naina apna Kaam kar rahi hai bas kuch time ki baat hai vaise bhi hame jo karna hai us hisab se ye choti moti chije matter nahi karti
Waha Nivan abhi so gaya tha kuch Kaam karke jab subah utha to waha ahana nasta kar rahi thi
Waha jake Nivan nasta karne laga ahana ke baju wali seat pe jake fir bola aur kon jeeta match
Ye sunke ahana chid gai ya gussa ho gai par kuch boli nahi waha Nivan jaldi se nasta karke ke khada hua aur usne ek najar rada to ahana abhi tak gusse me usko dekh rahi thi Nivan uske Paas jake uske gaal pe chutki Kaat ke khich Liya and kaha - choti tum gusse me acchi nahi lagti
Itna bol kar wo apne room me aagya waha ahana pure gusse me thi uski white skin home ki vajah se uske gaal gusse me laal hk gaye the upar se badi badi aankhe thi uski jiski vajah se wo gusse me bahut jyada sexy lagti thi par Nivan wo to bol nahi sakta tha
Ab Nivan apne room me tha usne socha Monday bhi ab tak aesa hi ja raha hai jaisa last time gaya tha fir uska matha kha ka and usne wo wale cafe me Jane ki sochi jaha pe naina aai thi fir kya aese time chala gaya wo time dekh ke cafe me bike leke chala gaya kuch 1 ghanta wait karne ke Baad waha naina aai us ladke ke sath jab dono andar aaye to samne Nivan betha tha Nivan ne unki taraf dekha aur naina ne uski taraf
Abhi 8 baj rahe the Nivan uth ke brush karne chala gaya fir waha se niche breakfast karne waha niche gaya waha ahana aur uske papa bethe the nasta kar rahe the wo bhi wah jake nasta karne laga. Nasta karte karte ahana ne apne papa se kaha ki wo apne friends ke sath movie dekhne ja rahi hun
Ye sunke uske papa ne kuch nahi bola bas sar hila dia par bich me Nivan ne kaha ki kyun aaj classes nahi jana
Ye sunke ahana thoda gussa dabate hue Nivan ko boli ki aaj Sunday hai and vaise bhi meri marji me jo karna chahu
Ye sunke Nivan thoda sock ho gaya usne kuch bole bina apne phone me dekha to sachme Sunday tha par aesa kaise ho sakta hai usne socha kyun ki Sunday Kal tha aur wo apne friend ajit ke sath Kal Raat ko bahar gaya tha wo usko pakka pata tha ye Baat.
Tabhi Nivan kuch bola nahi par chup chap nasta karke upar chala gya fir apne pc me kuch Kaam karne laga ase hi kuch time nikal gaya fir wo niche gaya hamesha ki tarah ghar pe aaj bhi koi nahi tha Ajj Sunday tha fir bhi uski mom bhi nahi thi ghar pe, wo jabse aaya hai collage khatam karke apne ghar pe tabse usne dekha hai usko sab ignore karte hai jaise wo exist hk nahi karta jab kuch usko Kaam hota hai ya khana khana hota hai tab hi wo ghar walo se baat karta hai varna kabhi nahi aur jyada baar usko daant bhi padti rehti hai khas kar uske dad se par unko wo kuch bol nahi sakta tha.
Kuch der ye sab sochne ki Baad wo apne room me bapas chala gaya kuch time Baad uske friend ajit ka usko call aaya aaj raat ko bahar milne ka ek club me par Nivan ne turant mana karke call cut Kar dia usne socha bhana hod ye kya sab kya chal raha ha kya ye deja u tha ya sachme Pura din firse chal raha hai.
Aese hi usne din nikal dia ab Shaam ho rahi thi jab wo apne window se bahar dekh raha tha Shaam ko tha tabhi usko naina Yaad aagai jo sab sapne me hua tha ya fir wo sab sahi me hua tha ab wo confuse tha.
Ab Raat time ho raha tha Nivan dinner karne niche gaya sab abhi ghar pe aagaye the par sab abhi tv dekh rahe the living room me and kuch bate kar rahe the. Par jaise Nivan unke Paas Se nikla wo chup ho gaye and baat change kar di jiska aehsas Nivan ko bhi ho gaya par wo kuch bola nahi and dinner karne laga thodi der Baad kuch sochne ke Baad wo bhi sofa pe chala gaya jaha sab bethe huve the.
Wo chup chaap bich wale soda pe beth gaya jaha ahana thi bilkul uske Paas me jake abhi tv me India ki match chal rahi thi and Rohit batting kar raha tha, fir Nivan ahana ki taraf dekhte hua pucha hai ke movie kaisi thi
Ye sunke ahana ne kaha acchi thi
Nivan- vaise konsi movie thi
Thoda gusse me hote huve ahana
Ahana- kyun tumhe kya karna hai janke
Ab itna guss me boli to Nivan se muh se jyada kucb nikla nahi bas usne kaha kuch nahi bas aese hi
Ahana kuch Kehne wali thi tabhi Nivan ki mom ne usko hath se kuch isara kar dia jisse ahana chup hoke tv dekhne lagi. Nivan bbi kucb nahi bola par Nivan ne mamta ki taraf dekha to unhone smile kardi pyari se samne Nivan ne bhi smile kia aur tv dekhne laga par abhi Nivan ko kuch ajib sa feel ho raha tha jaise puke karne wal ho uski vajah thi mamta ki fake smile jo Nivan dekh sakta tha par us smile ke piche wo sad nahi thi par ek tarah se gusse me thi jaise Nivan waha pe ahana ke Paas me betha isiliye par Nivan ko ab ye pakka karna tha isiliye usne dhire se apna per ko thoda ahana ke per se touch kia abhi ah a ne ghuton ke thoda niche tak shorts pehne huve the same Nivan ne bhi pehna hua tha fir Nivan ne tirchi najar se dekha to sachme mamta usko gusse me ghur rahi thi par usko para nahi tha kyun
Ye sab chal raha tha tabhi uske mamta boli beta tumhe nind nahi aarahi kya
Ye sune Nivan ne kaha ha sahi kaha aese bhi mujhe kuch Kaam Hai and India bhi jeet hi jayega 15 ya 20 runs se par k l rahul ke is over me out hote hi jata hun
Ye sunke ahana jo ab tak apne mobile dekh rahi thi wo boli Accha ye kaise bata sakte ho mujhe to lagta hai haar jayegi
Waha Nivan ke dad bhi apne phone me kuch kar rahe the wo bhi Nivan ki taraf thoda gusse dekh rahe the Nivan ne dekha jabse wo ayaa hai tabse usne dekha hai ki wo kabse apna phone leke kuch kar rahe hai Nivan ne socha Pehle ke kahi betting pe paisa to nahi laga rahe fir socha nahi aese to ho nahi sakta
Nivan ne ahana ki baat su ek kaha- bas aese hi I just have brain to calculate everything about match
Ahana- par mujhe jyada to nahi hoga brain tumhare Paas mene bhi sab calculate kia hai and India aaj haar jayegi
Ab ahana ka dimag next level pe tha wo to Nivan ko bhi pata tha usne dekha tha kitni baar usko sab Yaad rehta tha ek tarah se wo superhuman thi aesa lagta tha Nivan ko par Nivan ne socha ki jaisa pure din sab same hota hai aaya hai jaise koi deja vu ho fir ye bhi same hi hoga kyun ki wo club gaya tha to match nahi dekha tha par usne score dekha aaj ka to sab same hi hone wala tha.
Ye sab chal raha thi ki kl rahul out ho gaya fir Nivan ne cgidane ke liye ahana ki taraf dekha aur uth ke apne room me chala gaya fir pc me apne kuch Kaam me lag gaya.
Niche ahana gusse laal thi waha usme dad ne bola - just ignore him par ab karna kya hai tumhari calculation 10 me se 8 baar sahi hoti hai aur ye abhi jitne paise lagaye hai wo kam nahi hai kuch hua to hamare mission ko nuksaan hoga hamara target bach jayega
Ahana ne kuch socha fir kaha - just do what he said and end of the day ye target ke Baad Nivan ka hi number hai
Ye baat usne gusse me kahi thi upar se wo Nivan ke room ki aur gusse me dekh rahi thi waha uske dad ne bhi usne kaha wo kar dia fir uski mom ne bola - tum abhi usko ignore karo bas Pura dhayan apne goal pe rakho I will handle him
Ye sunke ahana firse gusse me boli - no he's my target and vaise bhi naina apna Kaam kar rahi hai bas kuch time ki baat hai vaise bhi hame jo karna hai us hisab se ye choti moti chije matter nahi karti
Waha Nivan abhi so gaya tha kuch Kaam karke jab subah utha to waha ahana nasta kar rahi thi
Waha jake Nivan nasta karne laga ahana ke baju wali seat pe jake fir bola aur kon jeeta match
Ye sunke ahana chid gai ya gussa ho gai par kuch boli nahi waha Nivan jaldi se nasta karke ke khada hua aur usne ek najar rada to ahana abhi tak gusse me usko dekh rahi thi Nivan uske Paas jake uske gaal pe chutki Kaat ke khich Liya and kaha - choti tum gusse me acchi nahi lagti
Itna bol kar wo apne room me aagya waha ahana pure gusse me thi uski white skin home ki vajah se uske gaal gusse me laal hk gaye the upar se badi badi aankhe thi uski jiski vajah se wo gusse me bahut jyada sexy lagti thi par Nivan wo to bol nahi sakta tha
Ab Nivan apne room me tha usne socha Monday bhi ab tak aesa hi ja raha hai jaisa last time gaya tha fir uska matha kha ka and usne wo wale cafe me Jane ki sochi jaha pe naina aai thi fir kya aese time chala gaya wo time dekh ke cafe me bike leke chala gaya kuch 1 ghanta wait karne ke Baad waha naina aai us ladke ke sath jab dono andar aaye to samne Nivan betha tha Nivan ne unki taraf dekha aur naina ne uski taraf
bhai sabse phle toh welcome back
and second ye ki in 2 update main hi man mai kai swaal aarahe ha
suruat se start karte ha Nivan ne school aur college ghar se dur rahker ki school main to vo topper tha but aapne ye nahi btaya ki college main aaker aisa kya ho gya ki uski performance main itni giravat aa gai????? (shayed aage story me pta chalega)
ab baat aati ha family ki to maa papa ka ka naraj hona jayaz ha kuki javan ladka college ke baad gher betha to obvious se baat ha parents naraj honge hi but kya unhone ye jaanne ki koshis nahi ki unka beta unse itni saal tak dur rha school main topper tha per college main aaker Nivan ke sath esa kya hua ki uski studies main down aagaye i think unhe apne bete ko support dena chaiye tha aur nivan ki is situation ke piche ka reason kya ha????
ab baat kare Ahana ki too as u mentioned ki vo bahut khubsurat ha to obvious ha ki usse is baat ka ghamand haga
isi attitude ke chalte usne koi ladke ke saath dosti nahi ki per filhaal vo ek psi (mujhe nahi pta ki ye kya hota ha) ke bete se baat chating per aatki hui ha
ab baat kare Ahana or Nivan ke bich riste main duriyo ki to ye baat sahi bhi ha ki Nivan itna saal ghar se dur rha to unke bich bonding utni strong nahi rahi or ab Nivan ka ghar per pade rahna or NIVAN ke prati apne parents ke rawaiye se Ahana aur Nivan ke bich ke duriya or bhi bhadti hi gaye.
ab baat kare to Nivan ke dosto ki to vo shuru se boarding school main rha and college bhi gher se dur rahke hi ki to vha per uske dost honge hi per ab Nivan vha se aa gya ha to uska link tut kya hoga. aur use vapas aaye 1 saal hi hua ha to yha koi dost na hona normal ha. Naina jo ki Ahana ki dost ha or usi ki vjah se vo Nivan ki gf bani ha per ek baat smajh main nahi aaye ki Nivan ko ghar aaye 1 saal hi hua ha or uske maa baap and ahana bhi pasand nahi karte to Nivan Naina ko kaise pasand aagya?????
and second ye ki in 2 update main hi man mai kai swaal aarahe ha
suruat se start karte ha Nivan ne school aur college ghar se dur rahker ki school main to vo topper tha but aapne ye nahi btaya ki college main aaker aisa kya ho gya ki uski performance main itni giravat aa gai????? (shayed aage story me pta chalega)
ab baat aati ha family ki to maa papa ka ka naraj hona jayaz ha kuki javan ladka college ke baad gher betha to obvious se baat ha parents naraj honge hi but kya unhone ye jaanne ki koshis nahi ki unka beta unse itni saal tak dur rha school main topper tha per college main aaker Nivan ke sath esa kya hua ki uski studies main down aagaye i think unhe apne bete ko support dena chaiye tha aur nivan ki is situation ke piche ka reason kya ha????
ab baat kare Ahana ki too as u mentioned ki vo bahut khubsurat ha to obvious ha ki usse is baat ka ghamand haga
isi attitude ke chalte usne koi ladke ke saath dosti nahi ki per filhaal vo ek psi (mujhe nahi pta ki ye kya hota ha) ke bete se baat chating per aatki hui ha
ab baat kare Ahana or Nivan ke bich riste main duriyo ki to ye baat sahi bhi ha ki Nivan itna saal ghar se dur rha to unke bich bonding utni strong nahi rahi or ab Nivan ka ghar per pade rahna or NIVAN ke prati apne parents ke rawaiye se Ahana aur Nivan ke bich ke duriya or bhi bhadti hi gaye.
ab baat kare to Nivan ke dosto ki to vo shuru se boarding school main rha and college bhi gher se dur rahke hi ki to vha per uske dost honge hi per ab Nivan vha se aa gya ha to uska link tut kya hoga. aur use vapas aaye 1 saal hi hua ha to yha koi dost na hona normal ha. Naina jo ki Ahana ki dost ha or usi ki vjah se vo Nivan ki gf bani ha per ek baat smajh main nahi aaye ki Nivan ko ghar aaye 1 saal hi hua ha or uske maa baap and ahana bhi pasand nahi karte to Nivan Naina ko kaise pasand aagya?????
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Bahut si bare agle update me pata chalegi par aapne thik se update 2 padha hora to aapko pata chal gaya hoga ki family ka naraj home ke piche vajah Sirf uska college me Kam marks Lana nahi hai, vajah kuch aur hai.
Naina kuch Nivan ko pasand nahi karti agar aapne padha hota ki ahana ne kya kaha hai naina ke bare me to pata chal jata par koi baat nahi aage updates me sab pata chal jayega
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No doubt your story is a masterpiece Ms. Neko. I think Nivan have some supernatural powers, perhaps deja vu. and theme of the story is different from any other story on the forum. Naina is also sent to him by ahana or their dad. Don't know, you will clear it in future updates.
But there are a few things, I don't agree with, like people add you in a group if you are beautiful. Absolutely wrong Ms. Neko, people add you in their group due to your nature, your witt, not beauty. Beauty is an extra advantage but it stays for a short while. People will like you if you are intelligent not beautiful.
One more thing which I didn't like in your thread is that you do lots of mistakes Ms. Neko when writing updates. You skip words in almost every line. And there are lot of spelling mistakes also even in the name of Nivan. I think it should be Navin or Naveen instead of Nivan.
Please check all these things and correct it please. Otherwise I liked your story very much and eagerly waiting for the next update. Please don't mind that I have detected all these things.
But there are a few things, I don't agree with, like people add you in a group if you are beautiful. Absolutely wrong Ms. Neko, people add you in their group due to your nature, your witt, not beauty. Beauty is an extra advantage but it stays for a short while. People will like you if you are intelligent not beautiful.
One more thing which I didn't like in your thread is that you do lots of mistakes Ms. Neko when writing updates. You skip words in almost every line. And there are lot of spelling mistakes also even in the name of Nivan. I think it should be Navin or Naveen instead of Nivan.
Please check all these things and correct it please. Otherwise I liked your story very much and eagerly waiting for the next update. Please don't mind that I have detected all these things.