Romance Barkarar Akankshay

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Maine yaha apni jindgi me pheli bar koi kahani prastut karne ja raha hoon, isse phela mera likhne ka koi anubhav nhi hai, maine dhang se koi essay (निबंध ) bhi nhi likha aaj tak, school me yadi essay writing me 10 me se 5 bhi mil jaya karta toh wo bhi bahut tha.

Iska sabse bada karan main, language subject ko school life me jyada importance na dene ko manta hoon, per language subject hi asal life ka bahut bada sastra hai, jiske pass bhasa vishya ka gyan adik hota hai woh kai kirtimaan rach jate hai...

Khair chhodiye hum log story me pahuche, usse phale main apne un mitra ka dhanyawad vyakt karna chahunga jisne me protshit huya aur yeh kahani likhne ki kosis kar raha hoon Samurai , Champ_AK_81

 

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Mom : Beta uth jaldi se, aaj tera college me first day hai, bad me mat bolna ki mummy aapne utha nhi..


Divya : Mummy 5 minute aur sone do plsss..


Mom : Thik hai phirr abhi, Akshay ka phone aya tha usse ne kaha 30 minute me tujhe pick karne ayega…


Divya, Akshay ka naam sun eke jhat phat bistar se uth kar khadi hogi..

Divya : Kya mummy aap mujhe phale kun nhi uthya…huh ab me late ho jaungi…ye kahte huye wo jladi se washroom me chali gyi..


Mom : yeh ladki bhi na kon samjh paye iski maya…phir wo kitchen me chali jaati hai breakfast ready karne ke liye..


Kuch der baad door bell bajti hai…. Divya ki Mom gate khulti hai toh saamne Akshay khada tha…

Akshay : Hii Aunty, moti(divya) ready hogi..

Mom : Hello beta, aa beta andar chal nasta karle jab tak wo ready ho rahi hai..

Akshay : ye moti bhi na humse late kara dati, hai patna nhi madam ko heroine banne ka bhoot kab jayega..

Divya (dinning room me aate huye) : kya bola be mote tu, main tujhe moti dikhti hoo aur mujhe heroine ka bhoot chhada hai…ruk tut oh gaya ab mote..aur wo Akshay ke pet me ghusoon ki barish shuru kar deti hai..

Akshay : bas kar bhais kahi ki.. lag rahi mujhe Aunty pls mujhe bachhalo is se..

Divya : Mummy aap humre bich me naa pado..

Mom : Divya chalo breakfast karo aur Akshay ko bhi karne do, phir jaldi se nikla aaj tum logo ka phela day college…

Phir Divya, Akshay ko chhod deti hai aur dono breatfast karne lagte hai..After Breakfast..

Divya ki mom dahi(Curd) shakar le ke aati hai aur Divya aur Akshay ko khilati hai…aur un dono ko best of luck, wish karti hai

Uske baad dono Divya Ki mom ko Thank you aur bye karke, Akshay ki Activa ke pass ajate hai..

(Divya aur Akshay dono ki bonding bahut purani hai bachpan se sath me school jaya karte the)

Divya : chal be mote key de mujhe…

Akshay : Ye le moti aur gira mat dena nhi toh college ki jagah hospital me admit hona pad jaye …

Divya : very funny joke but hansi nhi ayi chal jaldi baith mote

Phir wo nikal jate hai college ki aur

Kuch der me wo logo College Campus me enter karte hai.. aur scooty ko parking me laga ker jaise hi mudte hai toh unhe unke apne school friend mil jate hai..(Ankit aur Sonali yeh dono premi jode hai..)

Jaise hi yeh charo college lobby me ki aur nikalte hai toh waha ek car teji se aati hai aur parking me chali jati hai aur usme se ek ladki nikalti hai hot and gorgeous.. College ke sabhi ladko ke muh usko dekh ker khule ke khule reh gaye..

Akshay ko aisa taktaki laga us ladki, ko dekhna Divya ko pasand nhi (usse Akshay se love wali feeling thi par kabhi use bata nhi usne)

Divya : Chal be mote kya ankhe phaad ke use ghura raha hai aur yeh kahte huye peeth per ek jor se apni koni per ti hai…jisse Akshay wapas present me aajata hai..

Akshay : aaha moti itni jor se bhi koi marta hai kya..

Divya : haan main marti ho aur khana hai.. toh bata de..

Akshay : nhi nhi rahne de.. chalo be sab class phele pura capus dekh lete hai…

Phir wo log pura campus ghumte hai aur apni class dhund kar usme chal jate hai..

Class aaj first day hone ki wajah se puri bhari hui thi..yeh charo bich me jo row khali thi waha ja kar baith jate hai..

Kuch der baad period start hone ki ghanti baj ti hai…

 

[Champ_AK_81]

for your first story Sonu bhai and being a writer.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Nice Starting bhai.

Akshay aur Divya...Mote aur Moti

Pehle hi update me dono ka hansi majaak dikh gaya...Bahut accha bonding hai...Divya to pyar bhi karti hai Akshay se lekin Akshay ka feelings ke baare me abhi kuch pata nahi.

Dekhte hai kahani me aage kya hota hai.

 

[Swaraj]

Congrats your first story bro.
Till now going great.
Keep it up
And all the best

 

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Congrats your first story bro.
Till now going great.
Keep it up
And all the best

thank you

 

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Nice Starting bhai.

Akshay aur Divya...Mote aur Moti

Pehle hi update me dono ka hansi majaak dikh gaya...Bahut accha bonding hai...Divya to pyar bhi karti hai Akshay se lekin Akshay ka feelings ke baare me abhi kuch pata nahi.

Dekhte hai kahani me aage kya hota hai.

thank you Champ sir for your valueable review

 

[Jitu kumar]

for your first story bhai,
start aapne shandaar tarike se kiya hai,
divya aur akshay best friends hai lekin divya ke dil me akshay ke liye love wali feelings hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

 

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for your first story bhai,
start aapne shandaar tarike se kiya hai,
divya aur akshay best friends hai lekin divya ke dil me akshay ke liye love wali feelings hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update