Romance BE-INTEHA-ISHQ

[Maq]

Nice Zabardast ab kuch action k sath great

thanks bhai aise hi sath bane rahiye.

keep supporting..........

 

[Naina]

for new story...

thanks and welcome story kaisi lagi comment me zarur batana.

keep supporting.....
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Kal se revo

 

[Chinturocky]

Waiting for next update

 

[Rk1991]

Update

 

[Chinturocky]

Waiting

 

[Chinturocky]

thanks and welcome story kaisi lagi comment me zarur batana.

keep supporting.....

Kal se revo
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Ye kya bakaiti hai lekhak kahani ke liye shubhkamnaye de raha hai aur pathika usase kahani ke baare me ray puchh rahi hai. E Naa cholbe ???

 

[Naina]

Kal se revo

Ye kya bakaiti hai lekhak kahani ke liye shubhkamnaye de raha hai aur pathika usase kahani ke baare me ray puchh rahi hai. E Naa cholbe ???

are chintu the rocky... are chintu ka rocky (dhyan se dekho pichli posts & replies... gadbari maine nahi writer ne ki hai quote reply karne mein.. isme koi badi baat nahi.. ho jaati hai galtiya chhoti moti)

 

[Naina]

Kahani mein kaafi mod aaye joh kahani ko dilchasp banaye huye hai... ek achhe writer ke gun, lakshan yeh ki kahani ki jariye, kahani ke kirdaaro ke jariye kahani ke naam ko sarthak kar de.... jisme aap pure tarike se kamyab rahe...

Really badhte update ke sath sath kahani aur bhi zyada interesting hoti jaa rahin hai...
Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe hai..
romance ke sath sath thrill aur suspense ki bhi anokhi sangam hai kahani mein ... kuch cheejo se shayad dhire dhire raaz ka parda hatenge... aur kuch kirdaaro ki asli roop bhi samne aa rahe hai.. toh kayi naye kirdaar bhi dekhne ko mil rahi hai... joh apni bhumika sathik roop se nibha rahe hai kahani ki har ek pehlu mein....

yeh bhi ek sach hai ki aapki is kahani mein har ek kirdaar ki mahattva purn hai.. I mean to say ek kirdaar bhi hata diya jaye toh kahani adhuri hai...
Hum hamesha hero heroine pe hi zyada dhyaan Kendrit karte hain... lekin yeh yaad rakhna chahiye ki baaki kirdaaro bin mul kirdaar kuch bhi nahin.... aur aap kahani mein sabhi kirdaaro ke sath ek justify karte hain... Isliye aapki yeh kahani meri favorites kahaniyo mein se ek ho gayi hai....
aise hi likhte rahiye aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye

Brilliant update with awesome writing skills Maq ji

 

[Maq]

EID-UL-ADHA KI BOHAT BOHAT MUBARAK HO.

HAPPY BAKRA EID.

 

[Maq]

Update aaj sham tak ajayega.