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YE STORY PEHLE BHI UPLOAD KI JAA CHUKI HAI
Main is story ki recreate Karne ki kosish Kar Raha hu is story bahut sare changes hue hai
To chaliye shuru karte hai
Update-1
Veer aaj apni b.tech graduation complete krke wapas
apne ghar jane ki taiyari kar raha tha. Ye b.tech ke 4 saal
kaise beet gaye pata hi nahi chala.Veer in 4 saalo me ak
baar bhi ghar ki sakal nahi dekhi.. usko ghar ki to bahut
yaad aai thi. But uske dad ne usse bola tha ki tarun apni
graduation complete karke hi ghar wapas aa sakta hai. Veer
ghar ka eklota ladka tha.baki uski 4 bahne thi. Isliye ghar
me sab ka ladla tha.But uske dad education ko le kar bahut
strict the.. Abhi Veer apna saman pack karke hostel ke
bahar aa gaya.
Or apne dad ka wait krne laga. Wo aaj usse lene aane wale
the. Wo apne dad se pure 4 saal baad milne wala tha. Veer
apne dosto ko ghar jate hue dekh raha tha. Tabhi waha ak
black color ki scorpio aa kr ruki..
(Veer Ke Dad Ka Naam Rajiv Kapoor Hai)
unki age 49years
hai. but wo handsome lagte hai..Wo ak
bade bussnes men hai. Unki khud ki company hai. Veer ki
family bahut rich hai. Uske dad aksar tour pr bahar jate
rahte hai.)
Veer ne pachan liya.. ye uske dad ki gadi hai.. usme se
dad bahar aaye or Veer ja unke sine se lag gaya.. or gadi
me jhak kr dekhne laga. Usme koi nahi tha..
Veer – “ Dad, ghar se or koi nahi aaya.”
Dad – “ nahi beta, wo sab ghar pr tumhara wait kr rahe
hai.”
(Veer ka muh utr jata hai.. wo thoda sad hote hue.)
Veer – “ Mom bhi nahi aayi..?”
Dad - "nahi beta unko kuch kam tha, isliye wo nahi aa payi.
ab chalo jaldi se tumhara laguage gadi me rakho. phir hum
chalte hai."
Veer- "Ok"
( Veer apna saman gadi me rakhta hai.. or gadi ki front
seat pr aa kr baith jata hai.. uske dad bhi driving seat pr aa
kr baithe hai. ok tarun ki or dekhte hai.. wo abhi bhi sad
tha..)
Rajiv- ( apne bete ke sar pr hath ferte hue..) " dhukhi kyo
ho beta.. abhi dekho hum 3hour me ghar pahuch jayenge..
phir mil lena sab se. "
Veer kuch nahi bolta hai. or dad ki tarf ak smile kr deta
hai.. Rajiv bhi gadi ko drive krne lagte hai.. 3 hour ke baad
wo ghar pahuch jate hai.
( Unka ghar bahut bada hai..)
1.Veer ki family
Rajiv-Veer ke dad
2.Anu- Veer ki mom
Tarun ki mom ki age 45 Hai wo padhi likhi Hai jai office bhi jati Hai as a boss Kabhi kabhi. par jyada time Ghar par hi rehti Hai
3.Tannu
Ghar ki sabse badi beti. apni gradution complete
krke ghar hi rahti hai.. abhi koi job nahi karti. uski Age 27
hai. uska figur bahut mast hai wo bilkul apni maa pr gayi
hai gora rang.. bade bade boobs, or uski gaand ka to jawab
nahi.. ak jhalak hi kisi bhi ladke ka pani nikal de.. height
5'6''. or tannu apne chote bhai tarun se bahut jayada payar Karti hai .
5.Tina
Age 25
ghar ki dusri beti... tannu se choti. ye bahut hi
simple hai. abhi gradution kr rahi hai. simple suit salwar
me rahti hai tina bhi apne bhai tarun se bahut payar krti
hai. but kabhi dikha nahi pati.. kiyoki ye bahut kam bolti
hai. sara dhayan apni study pr rakhti hai. or study me
bahut achchi hai
6.Taniya
Age-23
ghar ki tisri beti. ye bahut ki morden hai..
Aur modern dresses pehnti hai
Aur lagbag tarun ke bara ki age ki hai. iski
tarun se kabhi nahi banti.. ye hamesha tarun se jhada karti
rahti hai.. or bahut jiddi hai. taniya ne abhi collage start hi
kiya hai.. but collage jati nahi hai.. or ladko ki bahut insult
karti hai.. uske abhi tak kafi boyfriend rah chuke hai. Par abhi Tak virgin hai bas kiss tak hi relationship chale Hai.
7.Ruhi
Age-18
ghar ki 4th beti.. tarun se choti ye abhi bahut sweet
hai.. face aisa hai jisse dekh kr hi payar aa jaye.. sabhi isse
ghar me bahut payar karte hai
8.Veer(Hero)
Ye Hai hamara hero ye
abhi sabhi behno se bahut payar karta hai
par bhai behno vala
par Tannu se ye bahut pyar karta hai Aur usse apni gf banana Chahta hai
Main is story ki recreate Karne ki kosish Kar Raha hu is story bahut sare changes hue hai
To chaliye shuru karte hai
Update-1
Veer aaj apni b.tech graduation complete krke wapas
apne ghar jane ki taiyari kar raha tha. Ye b.tech ke 4 saal
kaise beet gaye pata hi nahi chala.Veer in 4 saalo me ak
baar bhi ghar ki sakal nahi dekhi.. usko ghar ki to bahut
yaad aai thi. But uske dad ne usse bola tha ki tarun apni
graduation complete karke hi ghar wapas aa sakta hai. Veer
ghar ka eklota ladka tha.baki uski 4 bahne thi. Isliye ghar
me sab ka ladla tha.But uske dad education ko le kar bahut
strict the.. Abhi Veer apna saman pack karke hostel ke
bahar aa gaya.
Or apne dad ka wait krne laga. Wo aaj usse lene aane wale
the. Wo apne dad se pure 4 saal baad milne wala tha. Veer
apne dosto ko ghar jate hue dekh raha tha. Tabhi waha ak
black color ki scorpio aa kr ruki..
(Veer Ke Dad Ka Naam Rajiv Kapoor Hai)
unki age 49years
hai. but wo handsome lagte hai..Wo ak
bade bussnes men hai. Unki khud ki company hai. Veer ki
family bahut rich hai. Uske dad aksar tour pr bahar jate
rahte hai.)
Veer ne pachan liya.. ye uske dad ki gadi hai.. usme se
dad bahar aaye or Veer ja unke sine se lag gaya.. or gadi
me jhak kr dekhne laga. Usme koi nahi tha..
Veer – “ Dad, ghar se or koi nahi aaya.”
Dad – “ nahi beta, wo sab ghar pr tumhara wait kr rahe
hai.”
(Veer ka muh utr jata hai.. wo thoda sad hote hue.)
Veer – “ Mom bhi nahi aayi..?”
Dad - "nahi beta unko kuch kam tha, isliye wo nahi aa payi.
ab chalo jaldi se tumhara laguage gadi me rakho. phir hum
chalte hai."
Veer- "Ok"
( Veer apna saman gadi me rakhta hai.. or gadi ki front
seat pr aa kr baith jata hai.. uske dad bhi driving seat pr aa
kr baithe hai. ok tarun ki or dekhte hai.. wo abhi bhi sad
tha..)
Rajiv- ( apne bete ke sar pr hath ferte hue..) " dhukhi kyo
ho beta.. abhi dekho hum 3hour me ghar pahuch jayenge..
phir mil lena sab se. "
Veer kuch nahi bolta hai. or dad ki tarf ak smile kr deta
hai.. Rajiv bhi gadi ko drive krne lagte hai.. 3 hour ke baad
wo ghar pahuch jate hai.
( Unka ghar bahut bada hai..)
1.Veer ki family
Rajiv-Veer ke dad
2.Anu- Veer ki mom
Tarun ki mom ki age 45 Hai wo padhi likhi Hai jai office bhi jati Hai as a boss Kabhi kabhi. par jyada time Ghar par hi rehti Hai
3.Tannu
Ghar ki sabse badi beti. apni gradution complete
krke ghar hi rahti hai.. abhi koi job nahi karti. uski Age 27
hai. uska figur bahut mast hai wo bilkul apni maa pr gayi
hai gora rang.. bade bade boobs, or uski gaand ka to jawab
nahi.. ak jhalak hi kisi bhi ladke ka pani nikal de.. height
5'6''. or tannu apne chote bhai tarun se bahut jayada payar Karti hai .
5.Tina
Age 25
ghar ki dusri beti... tannu se choti. ye bahut hi
simple hai. abhi gradution kr rahi hai. simple suit salwar
me rahti hai tina bhi apne bhai tarun se bahut payar krti
hai. but kabhi dikha nahi pati.. kiyoki ye bahut kam bolti
hai. sara dhayan apni study pr rakhti hai. or study me
bahut achchi hai
6.Taniya
Age-23
ghar ki tisri beti. ye bahut ki morden hai..
Aur modern dresses pehnti hai
Aur lagbag tarun ke bara ki age ki hai. iski
tarun se kabhi nahi banti.. ye hamesha tarun se jhada karti
rahti hai.. or bahut jiddi hai. taniya ne abhi collage start hi
kiya hai.. but collage jati nahi hai.. or ladko ki bahut insult
karti hai.. uske abhi tak kafi boyfriend rah chuke hai. Par abhi Tak virgin hai bas kiss tak hi relationship chale Hai.
7.Ruhi
Age-18
ghar ki 4th beti.. tarun se choti ye abhi bahut sweet
hai.. face aisa hai jisse dekh kr hi payar aa jaye.. sabhi isse
ghar me bahut payar karte hai
8.Veer(Hero)
Ye Hai hamara hero ye
abhi sabhi behno se bahut payar karta hai
par bhai behno vala
par Tannu se ye bahut pyar karta hai Aur usse apni gf banana Chahta hai
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