Fantasy BRAHMAAND VEER AARAV

[Krishna2]

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[Krishna2]

Prologue​
Family introduction​

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[Krishna2]

PROLOGUE​

Hazaron saal pehle…

Brahmaand ke anant lokon mein ek aisa samay aaya jab andhera har jagah apna raaj jamane laga.

Asur lok ka raja…

Kaalasur.

Kaalasur ki shaktiyaan itni prabal thi ki devta bhi uska saamna karne se katrate the.

Uski sena anek lokon mein phail chuki thi, lekin Kaalasur sirf ek lok ka raja bankar khush nahi tha.

Uska sapna kuch aur tha…

Poore Brahmaand mein andhera ka raaj.

Usne kathor tapasya ki.

Sadiyon tak.

Ant mein Brahma ji prakat hue.

Brahma ji: “Maango Kaalasur… kya chahte ho tum?”

Kaalasur ki aankhon mein lalach ki chamak thi.

Kaalasur: “Mujhe aisa vardaan chahiye ki mujhe sirf wahi maar sake jiske paas Tridev ki shaktiyaan ho.”

Brahma ji kuch pal ke liye chup rahe… phir dhire se bole,

Brahma ji: “Tathastu.”

Kaalasur muskura diya.

Use pata tha…

Kalyug mein na devta prithvi par janm le sakte, aur na koi manushya Tridev ki shaktiyon ko dharan kar sakta hai.

Matlab…

woh amar ho chuka tha.

Lekin Kaalasur ek baat bhool gaya. Devta seedha prithvi par janm na le sakte, lekin Tridev apni shaktiyon ka ek ansh bhej kar ek rakshak ko janam de sakte hain.

Aur isi samay…

ek balak dharti par janma, jo abhi apni asli pehchaan se anjaan tha.

Ek aisa balak jisme teenon devtaon ki shaktiyaan samaayi hui thi…

Aur jaise hi suraj ki pehli kirne dharti ko chhoo rahi thi, ek nayi kismet ka sanket dharti par mehsoos hone laga…

 

[Krishna2]

RATHORE FAMILY INTRODUCTION​

Mumbai me rehte hain Rathore parivaar ke teen log:

1. Vikram Singh Rathore= Hero's father

Self-made aur inherited dono tarah ki legacy ko business empire me badalne wale sharp businessman. Calm, dignified, practical. Udaipur ke rajwade background se aane ke bawajood unhone pyar ke liye sab kuch chhod diya.

2. Meera Rathore= Hero's mother

Graceful, intelligent, warm-hearted. Udaipur ke ek equally influential business family se belong karti hain. Apne parivaar ke khilaaf jaakar Vikram se shaadi ki. Aarav ki emotional anchor.

3. Aarav Singh Rathore = Hero

Smart, handsome, rich, grounded, witty. Mumbai me college student. Apni family se deeply attached. Usse apne dadaji-nanaji ke parivaar ke baare me kuch nahi pata. Uske liye duniya simple hai — mom, dad, college, future.

Udaipur me, alag-alag haveliyon me, do toote hue parivaar apna-apna gussa sambhale baithe hain:

Rathore family-

Dadaji: Rudra Pratap Singh Rathore

Dadi: Rajeshwari Devi Rathore

Chacha: Amar Singh Rathore

Chachi: Kavya Rathore

Cousin sister: Aditi Rathore amar aur kavya ki beti.

Sisodia family-

Nanaji: Mahendra Singh Sisodia

Nani: Vasundhara Sisodia

Mama: Arjun Sisodia

Mami: Padmini Sisodia

Cousin: Avni Sisodia Arjun aur Padmini ki beti.

 

[kingkhankar]

Congratulations for this new story.

 

[king1969]

Congratulations on your new story

 

[Naik]

PROLOGUE​

Hazaron saal pehle…

Brahmaand ke anant lokon mein ek aisa samay aaya jab andhera dheere dheere har jagah apna asar dikhane laga.

Asur lok ka raja…
Kaalasur.

Ek aisa asur jiska naam sun kar hi devta bhi satark ho jaate the.
Uski shaktiyaan asadharan thi. Uski sena anek lokon mein phail chuki thi.

Lekin Kaalasur sirf ek lok ka raja bankar khush nahi tha.
Uska sapna kuch aur tha.
Poore Brahmaand par andhere ka raaj.
Usne kathor tapasya ki.
Sadiyon tak.

Ant mein Brahma ji prakat hue.

Brahma ji: “Maango Kaalasur… kya chahte ho tum?”

Kaalasur ki aankhon mein lalach chamak raha tha.

Kaalasur: “Mujhe aisa vardaan chahiye ki mujhe sirf wahi maar sake jiske paas Tridev ki shaktiyaan ho.”

Brahma ji kuch pal ke liye chup rahe.
Phir bole.

Brahma ji: “Tathastu.”

Kaalasur muskura diya.
Usse pata tha.
Kalyug mein na devta prithvi par janam lete hain… na koi manushya Tridev ki shaktiyon ko dharan kar sakta hai.

Matlab…

Woh amar ho chuka tha.
Lekin Kaalasur ek baat bhool gaya.
Devta seedha prithvi par janam na le sake…

Lekin Tridev apni shaktiyon ko ek saath mila kar ek rakshak ko janam de sakte hain.

Usi samay…

Tridev ne ek faisla liya.

Brahma ji, Vishnu ji aur Mahadev ki shaktiyon ka ek ansh prithvi par bheja gaya.

Ek aise balak ke roop mein…

Jo abhi apni asli pehchaan se anjaan tha.

Badhiya shaandar
KaalaSur ne wardan tow badhia manga or mil bhi gaya Amar hone ka uske hisab se lekin use kaha pata tha Brahma ji kuch soch kar hi aisa wardan dia hoga

 

[Naik]

RATHORE FAMILY INTRODUCTION​

Udaipur – Rajasthan

Rajasthan ke Udaipur shehar mein ek bahut purani aur shandaar haveli thi.
Log use kehte the…

Rathore Haveli.

Is haveli ke malik the —

Thakur Rudra Pratap Singh Rathore

56 gaon ke mukhiya.
Business empire ke malik.
India ki sabse powerful aur richest families mein se ek.

Unki wife —

Savitri Devi Rathore

Ghar ki maryada aur parampara ki rakshak.

Unka bada beta —

Vikram Singh Rathore

Smart, calm, intelligent.
Family ka future successor.

Lekin saalon pehle Vikram ne ek aisa decision liya jisne sab kuch badal diya.
Usne apni marzi se shaadi kar li.

Ek ladki se…

Ananya.

Jabki dono families ne uski shaadi kahin aur fix kar rakhi thi.

Result?

Rathore family ne Vikram se saare rishte tod diye.

Dusri taraf Ananya ki family ne bhi usse accept nahi kiya.

Dono ne sab kuch chhod diya.
Aur chale gaye Mumbai.

Wahi unke ghar ek beta paida hua.

Aarav.

Aarav Rathore.

Jo dono families ka eklauta waaris tha…

Lekin usse khud is baat ka bilkul pata nahi tha.

Tow Hero ke maa baap ne apne maa baap ki nafarmani karke shaadi ki or ghar se bedakhal kar deye gaye
Dekhte h kaise halat gujre Vikram or Anaya ke shaadi ke baad or ab kia halat h
Nice Introduction

 

[Abirend31]

Woow good starting

 

[Dark.King]

Nice