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Romance DARD-E-DIL

Vibhupariharji

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Dard-E-Dil❤
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कहते है जब दिल बेचैन हो तो दुनिया बेगानी लगती है, सब कुछ पास होकर भी कुछ खोया खोया लगता है।
लेकिन अगर वही दिल टूट कर बिखर जाए तो जीवन समाप्त लगता है। व्यक्ति एक अजीब दोहराहे पर आ जाता है जहां दिल और दिमाग में द्वंद होना शुरू हो जाता है। दिल कहता है फिर से प्यार कर वही दिमाग कहता है दिल के सारे दरवाजे बंद कर दे और ऐसा कठोर हो जा की किसी को अंदर आने की जरूरत ही न हो।
यह कहानी इसी प्यार और नफरत के द्वंद को प्रदर्शित करेगी जहां एक ओर प्यार का समुंदर होगा वही उस प्यार के समुंदर से निकले नफरत रूपी ' विष ' से जीवन की बागडोर संभाली जायेगी।
मिलते है बहुत जल्द ...............................

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Vibhupariharji

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Pics-Art-06-26-01-09-32

Year:- 1999.......
("Uttarakhand ka dil..... Dehradun. Aaj bahut hi khoobsurat prateet ho raha hai. Snow se ladi iski jameen dil me Kashmir ke gulmerg ki yaad dilla rahi hai... Aur cheed ke lambe lambe ped suraj ko bhi dhak raha hai. Adhiktar jagah jungle hi jungle dikhayi de rahi hai...")

"Wahi jungle se sate Dehradun city me ek ghar hai jisme ek hasta khelta parivar rahta hai.... Ek chota Sa bachcha lagabhag 3/4 years ka ghar ke bahar khel raha hai tabhi usko koi mahila usko bultati hai "VIVAAN....." haa us balak ka naam VIVAAN hai . Aur jo mahila usko bula rahi hai wo VIVAAN ki "MAA" hai.... Uski ma uske paas aati hai aur bade pyaar se usko utha kar ghar ke undar le jati hai. Sham hui to VIVAAN ke papa jo ki ek police officer hai ... Aye aur VIVAAN ko bade pyaar se apni god me uthakar uske maathe par kis kiya . Aur usko lekar dinning table ki oor gaye .... VIVAAN ki maa usko bade pyaar se khana khila rahi thi . Ohh sorry! Maine aapko VIVAAN ke papa aur maa ka naam nahi bataya uske papa ka naam tha "SHAILESH MATHUR".. Aur maa ka naam tha "SHEETAL MATHUR" ..... Jub VIVAAN aur uske maa papa khana kha rahe the to suddenly uske papa ka phone baja... Aur wah khana chodakar ghar se bahar bahut hi tension me nikal gaye... VIVAAN ki maa ko bahut hi ghabrahat ho rahi thi...lekin wo kuchh nahi kar sakti thi kyoki VIVAAN ke papa ja chuke....
:-NEXT MORNING
Poori raat jub Vivaan ke papa ghar nahi laute to Vivaan ki ma ko bahut dar lagane laga tha... Tabhi achanak ek police van wahan akar rukti hai. Vivaan ki ma ko lagata hai ki Shailesh ghar vapas aa gaye. Wo jaldi se gate ki taraph jaati hai... Aur gate kholti hai to unhe ek police officer milta hai.. Aur wo Vivaan ki ma ko batata hai ki Shailesh mathur kal raat se lapata hai.... Unki car ek sunsaan ilake me payi gayi hai... Aur wo lapata hai.. Ye khabar sunte hi uski maa behosh ho jati hai.../////

Aur tabhi Vivaan neend se maa chilata hua jagata... Uska roommate uske paas aata hai aur kahta hai ki Vivaan aaj toone phir wahi sapna dekha chal uth ab college ka time ho chuka hai... Jaldi se taiyaar ho ja.... Vivaan apne chehra ka paseena pochhta hai aur fresh hone chala jata hai....( from boys hostel....)
 

Hunter_King

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congratulations Vibhupariharji bhai for new story
pahle update se hi aapne ghatke de diye ha dekhte ha khani ka kya plot ha or aap kaise is khani ko develop karte ho
waise aapke writing skills bhut hi shandaar ha chota sa update diya ha per pure update main ek bhi spelling mistake nahi ha pahle story ke hissab se bahut hi ummda lekhni ha

keep it up bhai

waiting for next update
 

Vibhupariharji

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congratulations Vibhupariharji bhai for new story
pahle update se hi aapne ghatke de diye ha dekhte ha khani ka kya plot ha or aap kaise is khani ko develop karte ho
waise aapke writing skills bhut hi shandaar ha chota sa update diya ha per pure update main ek bhi spelling mistake nahi ha pahle story ke hissab se bahut hi ummda lekhni ha

keep it up bhai

waiting for next update
Dhanyawad Bhai 🙏 , bus kuchh din ke intjaar ke baad poori siddat se is par kaam krna hai. Shuruaat krni jaroori thi wo ho gyi. 🙏
 

Ristrcted

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:congrats: for new story thread
 

Rihanna

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Update -1

Pics-Art-06-26-01-09-32

Year:- 1999.......
("Uttarakhand ka dil..... Dehradun. Aaj bahut hi khoobsurat prateet ho raha hai. Snow se ladi iski jameen dil me Kashmir ke gulmerg ki yaad dilla rahi hai... Aur cheed ke lambe lambe ped suraj ko bhi dhak raha hai. Adhiktar jagah jungle hi jungle dikhayi de rahi hai...")

"Wahi jungle se sate Dehradun city me ek ghar hai jisme ek hasta khelta parivar rahta hai.... Ek chota Sa bachcha lagabhag 3/4 years ka ghar ke bahar khel raha hai tabhi usko koi mahila usko bultati hai "VIVAAN....." haa us balak ka naam VIVAAN hai . Aur jo mahila usko bula rahi hai wo VIVAAN ki "MAA" hai.... Uski ma uske paas aati hai aur bade pyaar se usko utha kar ghar ke undar le jati hai. Sham hui to VIVAAN ke papa jo ki ek police officer hai ... Aye aur VIVAAN ko bade pyaar se apni god me uthakar uske maathe par kis kiya . Aur usko lekar dinning table ki oor gaye .... VIVAAN ki maa usko bade pyaar se khana khila rahi thi . Ohh sorry! Maine aapko VIVAAN ke papa aur maa ka naam nahi bataya uske papa ka naam tha "SHAILESH MATHUR".. Aur maa ka naam tha "SHEETAL MATHUR" ..... Jub VIVAAN aur uske maa papa khana kha rahe the to suddenly uske papa ka phone baja... Aur wah khana chodakar ghar se bahar bahut hi tension me nikal gaye... VIVAAN ki maa ko bahut hi ghabrahat ho rahi thi...lekin wo kuchh nahi kar sakti thi kyoki VIVAAN ke papa ja chuke....
:-NEXT MORNING
Poori raat jub Vivaan ke papa ghar nahi laute to Vivaan ki ma ko bahut dar lagane laga tha... Tabhi achanak ek police van wahan akar rukti hai. Vivaan ki ma ko lagata hai ki Shailesh ghar vapas aa gaye. Wo jaldi se gate ki taraph jaati hai... Aur gate kholti hai to unhe ek police officer milta hai.. Aur wo Vivaan ki ma ko batata hai ki Shailesh mathur kal raat se lapata hai.... Unki car ek sunsaan ilake me payi gayi hai... Aur wo lapata hai.. Ye khabar sunte hi uski maa behosh ho jati hai.../////

Aur tabhi Vivaan neend se maa chilata hua jagata... Uska roommate uske paas aata hai aur kahta hai ki Vivaan aaj toone phir wahi sapna dekha chal uth ab college ka time ho chuka hai... Jaldi se taiyaar ho ja.... Vivaan apne chehra ka paseena pochhta hai aur fresh hone chala jata hai....( from boys hostel....)
Congratulations for the new story. 💫
I really like romance genres. They are one of my favourites. Par try karna ki aap updates ki length consistent rakhe. Ye pehla update kaafi short tha. Aur paragraph zyaada lamba na rakhe. Bade paragraph ko chote parts me kar ke likhna yadi ho sake to...
Yadi mujhe story pasand aayi, to main aapko support zaroor karungi...
Good Luck... 🤗
 
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